'pyaar ka doosra naam- kurbaan'(SS)Updated page 47 - Page 3

Originally posted by: lavuza99

itz gr8...........................thanks😊..

luved it.

anxiously w8in 4 second prt....................

plzzzzzz continue it sooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnoooonn

it waZ AWESUM.......................

cant w8.................

plz continue..................................yes sure..cos i had promised someone i wil update it soon!!..

it waz da bst....................................ever i read..................

thnx maneesha

u maked her write bcoz itz absoultely gr8...................................he he..manee..look..what yuh have done!..

Originally posted by: Additi...

Interesting i loved the first Part please continue sooon and PM me thank yuh..and yes..i wil pm yuh..

Originally posted by: amu142

awww...that was soooo sweet!!thanks amu....

honeymoon with a little dotty in tow!!

hahaha...so sweet family!!yea..sweet family..most importantly its a nuclear family..lol....

oh no!! u seem to hv planned disaster to strike the cute triotwists are needed in a stry ryt?..

continue soonyea....

Originally posted by: riks1

it was good..thanks..

do continue!yea sure😊..

Originally posted by: Gops94

awesome.. thanks....wonder what will happen next.. pls pm me when next updateyea sure..i wil infrm yuh....

Originally posted by: prempadmasujal

i dont control my tears ithna acha laga mujhe words nahi hai mere paas thanks darling..😊..

Originally posted by: stunninstar

Originally posted by: compiler

its awesome
so sweet thanks dear..😊..
continue soonyea sure..

Originally posted by: Kamal_23

awesome thanks dear..


wonder wat happens nextwait n watch..he he....


plz add me 2 ur pm listyea sure😊..


Kamal

Originally posted by: v_nikhita18

awesome ss.......loved the first part......thanks dear😊..the family scene was beautiful.....do continue asap! yea ..wil try to....

Originally posted by: aaminaman

hey that was really nikce yarthanks dear😊..

so waiting to know what happens in thier honeymoon he he..lets see what wil happen..continue soon yea sure..😊..

Originally posted by: -fsn-

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hey sandyhi sweetie..
wow it was sooo cute update.thanks buddy..
prem-chahat part was soo sweeti know..i love prem as a father!..
prem heer was awesome. they are..always..😉..
aww the family is sooo adorable but seems u gonna ruin their happiness.he he..no yaar..yuh wont blame me..i am sure of that!!..
very bad u gonna make them sad 😭 😆arre...who said am gonna make them sad??😆..
wait for the next
update asapyea sure..😊..
luv
fatima

Originally posted by: Ashlesha09

reserved

i'll unreserve *promise*

*Unreserve*

Hey di

Yeahhh di i m back *patting my back*, aren't u proud me that i kept my promise😃.of cource..am so proud of my li'l sissie..😊muaaaaaaaah..i love yuh....

But I am gussa with you you wr wrkng on SS n u did'nt bother to tell ur sissie *fumng wth anger*😡 now don't talk to me, katti.....................n i m nt gng to gt calm down so easily .didnt i pm yuh???😲..sorry..😃i know that yuh cant be khatti with me fr long!!😳

And the how the hell do you even thought of not posting this SS, hw can u even think tht it would not lykd by ppl...............goshh do i need to tell you that readers r carzy fr ur wrtng, can't u see through ur last ff responses, stupo di😆😆no yaar..i was lazy too..but thankss atleast u informed mani n she persuaded to post it, otherwise we would hv missed such a beautiful story.yea..manee was after me..!!😆.. The 1st chapter is so very beautiful i can imagine hw beautiful rest updates would be😊. but i cant imagine.. i am scarred now..i need to be careful to keep the standard na....

Anyways moving to ur updateshmmm..

Beautiful, adorable, mind-boggling, mind-blasting Update, just luvd it. Your best update for me👍🏼, You know no writer can dared to impress me this much with just first update but u did, why not afterall you are my sis😆😆.no duhling... there are many who are soo good..am just normal..!.. neways i love yuh..thanks a lot..😳

Very nyc concept of arranged marraige transforming into more stronger than luv marraiges ni dont believe in love marriages myself!!!.. Thank god frm a business tycoon Prem Juneja & wife of such a big figure Heer Juneja, we get to see sumthng diffrnt, common men in their normal lifestyle to which we can definately relate as we get to see such peoples, relationships in our surrounding, from fantasy to reality...................Bravo👏👏. i know..even i was tired of seeing prem as a business tycoon..infact al the heros in all the serials are business magnets.. except sushant in PR.. i want a story where ppl are more close to reality!!.. A day though most im portant day but celebrated lyk usually ppl do nt lyk fiction throwng parties with loads of ppl cmng thm n just to get glipmse of the couple. And thts the thing which attracted me nore as i was hell bopred reading bout rich, greek god Prem juneja so a refreshing phase😆😆.trust me..i hate parties!! i always preffered a silent celebration of things..just my family.. and all my birthdays i celebrate with ma family alone!.. its moms policy actually..😃

Then the way u expressed father-daughter relationship was beautiful, the correct defination of luv of a father fr her daughter and u amazingly potray a luv of a man towards his family. The way Prem made chahat part of his surprise fr her mother fr their spl.day.i want yr jeeeju to be like that!😃..

Then moving Heer Juneja, really happy to see not a perfect woman, nt another mahaan soul, again..i hate these perfect ladies in the shows..who only think abt others and ever ready to sacrifice fr others,..and always sacrifying their happiness!..

ws really tired of seeing perfect Heer Juneja/ Maan but now a woman who you find around, getting happy on small matters n even with the thought of spending tym with family, spl. day only to be with her husband n baby no other needed in their happiness, not a best cook in comparison with her husband but luvs to eat food made by himagain..its part of me..i dunno cooking!!he he.. and a wife who knows hw to balance between her romance wth husband n affection with daughter,thats the most important part right??!!😊.. shy to opn up her luv in front of her daughter, liv in norms of parenting though made their daughter aware of her parents luv but never to make her part of romance☺️.lol..i cant imagine a couple going all lovey dovey in front of their 5 year old!! in real life all parents wil be a li'l careful in front of children!..For whom her family matters most to her other than anything lyk a perfect married womani wish heer was also like that in serial..and just run away from jzoo with her family!..

Then really luvd the chemistry b/w them though their marriage ws arranged but over pd of 6 yrs their realtionship got this much strong tht now thy even can't imagine their lyk in absence of other.yea,.aage aage dekho kya kya hota hai!!😉..

Their simple yet romantic relationship, their way of spendng their most spl.day not any place outside but inside their house enjoyng ecah moment n cherishng moment of their toghtherness n thn Prem gift not so much precious lyk diamonds or sumthng but yet priceless.a middle class husband cant afford a diamond fr every anniversary!!!😆..

And then such a aromantic update, cute romantic, sealing moments wth beautiful kisses n thn Heer hugging frm back, haaye such a romantic wife.am bad in romantic scenes!i know that!..but i have tried here!

Waiting fr their holidays n dare not to deparate them otherwise di u knw me wellnow.. i cant guarantee anything!😳..

Splendiferous👏👏

🤗fr such a beautiful concept thanks sweetheart..

Chalo i kept my promise now your turnhaan..i have 4 hours and 31 minutes more to keep the promise!😃..

but i m still gussa😡😡i hope my long comment help in cooling yuh down!!😃..

luv

Ashlesha/Aqsa😃muaaaaaaaaah🤗..