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Fatima

@-Fatima-

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Posted: 15 years ago

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hey sandy
wow it was sooo cute update.
prem-chahat part was soo sweet
prem heer was awesome.
aww the family is sooo adorable but seems u gonna ruin their happiness.
very bad u gonna make them sad 😭 😆
wait for the next
update asap
luv
fatima

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Sunshine

@SunShine_A

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

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i'll unreserve *promise*

*Unreserve*

Hey di

Yeahhh di i m back *patting my back*, aren't u proud me that i kept my promise😃. But I am gussa with you you wr wrkng on SS n u did'nt bother to tell ur sissie *fumng wth anger*😡 now don't talk to me, katti.....................n i m nt gng to gt calm down so easily .And the how the hell do you even thought of not posting this SS, hw can u even think tht it would not lykd by ppl...............goshh do i need to tell you that readers r carzy fr ur wrtng, can't u see through ur last ff responses, stupo di😆😆 but thankss atleast u informed mani n she persuaded to post it, otherwise we would hv missed such a beautiful story. The 1st chapter is so very beautiful i can imagine hw beautiful rest updates would be😊.

Anyways moving to ur updates

Beautiful, adorable, mind-boggling, mind-blasting Update, just luvd it. Your best update for me👍🏼, You know no writer can dared to impress me this much with just first update but u did, why not afterall you are my sis😆😆.

Very nyc concept of arranged marraige transforming into more stronger than luv marraiges n Thank god frm a business tycoon Prem Juneja & wife of such a big figure Heer Juneja, we get to see sumthng diffrnt, common men in their normal lifestyle to which we can definately relate as we get to see such peoples, relationships in our surrounding, from fantasy to reality...................Bravo👏👏. A day though most im portant day but celebrated lyk usually ppl do nt lyk fiction throwng parties with loads of ppl cmng thm n just to get glipmse of the couple. And thts the thing which attracted me nore as i was hell bopred reading bout rich, greek god Prem juneja so a refreshing phase😆😆.

Then the way u expressed father-daughter relationship was beautiful, the correct defination of luv of a father fr her daughter and u amazingly potray a luv of a man towards his family. The way Prem made chahat part of his surprise fr her mother fr their spl.day.

Then moving Heer Juneja, really happy to see not a perfect woman, nt another mahaan soul, ws really tired of seeing perfect Heer Juneja/ Maan but now a woman who you find around, getting happy on small matters n even with the thought of spending tym with family, spl. day only to be with her husband n baby no other needed in their happiness, not a best cook in comparison with her husband but luvs to eat food made by him and a wife who knows hw to balance between her romance wth husband n affection with daughter, shy to opn up her luv in front of her daughter, liv in norms of parenting though made their daughter aware of her parents luv but never to make her part of romance☺️.For whom her family matters most to her other than anything lyk a perfect married woman

Then really luvd the chemistry b/w them though their marriage ws arranged but over pd of 6 yrs their realtionship got this much strong tht now thy even can't imagine their lyk in absence of other.

Their simple yet romantic relationship, their way of spendng their most spl.day not any place outside but inside their house enjoyng ecah moment n cherishng moment of their toghtherness n thn Prem gift not so much precious lyk diamonds or sumthng but yet priceless. And then such a aromantic update, cute romantic, sealing moments wth beautiful kisses n thn Heer hugging frm back, haaye such a romantic wife.

Waiting fr their holidays n dare not to deparate them otherwise di u knw me well

Splendiferous👏👏

🤗 fr such a beautiful concept

Chalo i kept my promise now your turn

but i m still gussa😡😡

luv

Ashlesha/Aqsa😃

Edited by Ashlesha09 - 15 years ago

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anumol

@sweetanu2314

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

sandy dear.....are u going to make it a depressing ff..................by the name itself i should have guessed...........nice start though.....i don't want to read it if it is............i can't stand premeer separating..........

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stunninstar

@stunninstar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sweetanu2314
sandy dear.....are u going to make it a depressing ff..................by the name itself i should have guessed...........nice start though.....i don't want to read it if it is............i can't stand premeer separating..........

no sweetheart,,.. it definitely wont be a TRAGIC ending...i can guarantee yuh that... but then... its emotional..!😆

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stunninstar

@stunninstar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: nuptalie
Love yuh too.🤗 shud i say a love yuh three here??!!🤣..
Wowwwwwwwww wonderful...as if yuh dunno he story..!!😆..😆..neways thank yuh😊
I didnt expect such romantic in the 1st part of the ss from yuh..
Since u dont think that u are not a good romantic story writer😉😳
But sandy you are .......... trust me.......thanks ya.. but i stil dont think am that romantic.. but then.. yuh see..i cant write more serious romance..yuh are still a kid..😛..lol....
And wow......... what a family scene u have showed... Loved the father dotty relationship as well as the mom and dotty relationship...but for me prem and chahat scenes were great more that heer chahat...😆for me too man.. even i love prem chahat chemistry than heer-chahat.. but these creatives never give chahat any screen space..!..
And u realy showed how parents should interact and interacted in this..Loved that part how prem used to play with chahat..oh..did i?? thanks...
And heer prem scenes were simply awesome.. very real as a husband and wife behave in the society we live..lol.. i wil be that way with your jeeju in future 😉..
I love the way u have showed how heer gives the first place to her family , hubby more than any thing , work however that work is important to her..it should be that way right..i wish the HEEr in ths show is also like that..and stop prioritising taht jzoo people more than prem and chahat!!..
and its a very nice feeling when a hubby remembers their anniversary and bring a gift to his wife and surprise her even though they are parents and act as lovers...more than parents with each other..😳😃what did yuh mean to say towards the end???ha ha.. who doesnt like gifts..!! 😉.. yh are always welcome.. send me some.. sisters can also send gifts.😆..not necessary that it should always be your bf or husband!!
Plzzz continue soon......yh know man..how lazy am!!..
I wanna read the next one sooon...i know the reason..but manee.. i wont allow yuh to read if there s that scene coming up!! 😉..
Loved it ... awesome as usual...😛thanks sweetheart....
PS:actually i had no other job at this early that i thought of giving a long reply to yr comment!! lol..

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Maheen

@sweet_gurl93

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

awesome story,
really cute, totally luvd the anniversary and all,
do continue soon 😊
cnt wait
btw thnx fr the PM

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441240

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

awesomeeeeeeee update.................⭐️
usually i always look forward to a premeer honeymoon..........
but im dreading this one...........😕..........its gna turn their lives upside down........😲