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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: PremHeer_Chahat

Ayyesha!! How could u?? 😭
but excellent teaser!!
continue asap
thanks for the pm
pm me

AAAAAAwwwwwwwww Sorrrryyyyyyy😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnime



yeeyyyyy 😃☺️😳 .. Luv u Bhabhi !!

Love you too Devrani jii😳🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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the first and foremost, all the best to ayesha and ayysha for this ff👍🏼, ok it was very shocking indeed. We really cant believe our prem would ever leave his heer and chahat for ash. But if this has happened then I am dead sure that there is a reason behind it. may be prem wants to know ash's truth, that's why he thought that by staying with her, he can get the truth out of her. I hope he comes back soon and you two solve the mystery soon. Good teaser.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thankyouuuuu😳
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Okay guys since these Prem is acting so rudely with Heer, I decided to start this Part from Premeer's scence. This starts from the end of todays episode. This

Is only dedicated to Premeer and Heer's forigvness towards Prem.

Well here it goes ….

Part 1

Prem came home still thinking about Sneha and who's daughter she was. He couldn't take his mind off of her, why did she have to come in his life and take away his happiness again,

Why did Ash come back again runing his married life with Heer.

It had been barley a week since they had been married and Premeer were already separating since he couldn't foucs on anything but Sneha and who her father was.

He went straight to his room, it was around 10:00pm and everyone was already in their own rooms sleeping and talking, Prem went to his and Heer's room.

When he got their he saw Heer and Chahat sitting in the window, with Heer's back towards Prem and Chahat in her lap.

Chahat – "Mama Papa itnay udass kyun rahtay hain … meri birthday kay baad woh mujh sey baath bi nahi kartay mujh sey naraaz hain."

Heer – "Nahi beta bus kaam ki bohat tension hoti hai na."

Chahat – "Acha liken woh kal aap sey kyun naraaz thaay."

Heer – "Naraaz nahi thay beta bus takay huay theey or kuch nahi."

Chahat – "Liken mama jab papa ap ko daant thay hain na mujhe bohat guusa ata hai." Heer smiled.

Chahat – "Agar papa ney ap ko danta na tu mein unsey baath nahi karoon ghee."

Heer – "Asay nahi kahtay beta … kitnay saaloon baa dap ko apnay papa milay hain tu ap unsey kasay nahi baath karien ghee."

Chahat – "Liken papa ko warning deay dena." Heer laughed a bit.

Heer – "Acha meri princess." She said kissing her cheek and picked her up caring her to the bed.

Prem moved away from the door so Heer wouldn't see him.

Heer slowly put Chahat to sleep while humming her a lullyby and suddenly Prem came in.

Heer – "Arrey Prem itni deeaar koi lag dhee anay mein."

Prem – "Woh koi kaam thaa bus dearri ho gayi."

Heer – "Acha." She put a blanket over Chahat and gave Prem his cloths. He looked at Heer cleaning up and putting away his stuff in the right place, he smiled and went to the bathroom.

About 40 mins he came out and noticed sleeping next to Chahat with her arms wrapped around her and snuggled Chahat so she wouldn't get cold.

Prem put down he stuff and went to Sit on the bed beside Heer sleeping.

He cressed her forehead gently not waking her up.

Prem – "Heer I am sorry … mujhe nahi pata mein kya bool raha thaa please mujhe maaf kardo … ab mein puri kosish karoon ghee tumhein kush raknay ghee … I promise aaj sey hamray beech koi doori nahi ho ghee … mujhe tum kitnay saloon baad wapis mili hoo or mein tumhein duk nahi denna chata liken mein kya karron Heer … agar tumhein batyoon ghaa tu tum udaass ho jayoo ghee or shayad hamray beech koi or duri aa jayay jo mein nahi sah sakta … agar tum mujh sey door ho gayi na tu mein toot jayoon ghaa." He said with tears in his eyes.

Prem leaned down slowly kissing her forehead and Chahat's cheek.

Next Morning

Prem – "Heer meri tie bandna please." He said walking upto her while she was putting on sindoor.

Heer – "Haan do minute." She said fixing her earing and walking upto him.

Prem handed her tie, she smiled and moved closer to him putting her arms behind his neck to get the tie around. Prem watched her while she was tieing his tie.

Heer tied his tie.

Heer – "Hoo gayi." She said smiling and moving back.

Prem pulled her closer by her waist.

Prem – "Heer woh mein sooch raha thaa ka kitnay din ho gay hain humain kahin akelyay ghaay huay … aj raat ko hum dono kahin chalin ghaay."

Heer – "Acha tu ab tumhein yaad aya kal sey tu boss Prem ban kay meray upar chila rahay thaa or ab kahin jana … no thankyou." She said moving away and doing her work.

Prem smiled and walked behind her hugging her from the back.

Prem – "Sorry Ma'am ab nahi karoon ghaa Promise."

Heer turned around puchned his arm lightily.

Heer – "Tumhein pata hai mein kitna dar jati hoon jab tum asay kartay ho." Prem smiled and hugged her, which made Heer smiled so she just hugged him back.

Suddenly there was a knock on the door and Premeer broke apart.

Lalit – "Wah Wah Kya flmy scence hai." He said laughing and walking in. Premeer blushed and looked other ways.

Lalit – "Acha Heer tu aj Prem kay saath office jayay ghee." Premeer both looked at him shocked. Prem smiling a naughty smile and looking at Heer and her just looking at Lalit.

Heer – "Liken Bauji …"

Preet – "I am sorry Mr.Lalit Juneja isn't in right now please leave a message after then beep …. Beeeeeeeeep." Everyone laughed.

Lalit – "Chalo Heer ready ho jayo." He said leaving with Preet and Prem.

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Premeer both going to the hotel in a car.

Prem – "Heer time wapis nahi aa gaya."

Heer – "Matlab?"

Prem – "Tumhein pata hai hotel janay sey meray dil mein dak dak ho rahi asay lag raha hai jasay main koi exam denay jaa rahi hoon school wapis jaa rahi hoon." He said making a girly voice. Heer remeberd that first time she went to the hotel as Mrs.Prem Juneja.

Heer – "Ver funny." She said taking her hand away from his.

Prem – "Pata hai." He said kissing her cheek, while Heer pushed him away.

Heer – "Prem driver deaak raha hai." She said whispering,

Prem – "So meri biwi hai meray jo maan mein aaya ghaa mein woh karoon ghaa."

Heer rolled her eyes and pushed him away looking outside the window.

The car came to a stop and the driver got out. Prem put his hand around Heer's shoulder and made her face him.

Prem – "Heer yaad hai jab hum yahaam pehli baar ayay thaay … mein chata hoon kay hum pani purni yaadoon ko yaad Karin or jo bi pechlay dino mein hua ussey bhool jayin." Heer smiled and nodded. Prem kissed her forehead, which made Heer smile.

Prem – "Ab ma'am chalin." Heer pushed him away but his chest.

Heer – "Prem." She said laughing a bit.

Prem smiled.

Prem – "Mein door kolthaa hoon." He said getting out and going to Heer side.

Both of them went inside.

Okay guys that's it for part 1 … hope you liked it better then the show

*the recent track anyways* … I will update as soon as I can right now I am heading to KKKG.

Hope you like it Do comment :D

Edited by Premeerxoxo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
awesome

wat would cause prem leave his angelic wife and daughter chahat

and go 2 the devils ash and sneha

thanx 4 the pm

update soon

Kamal


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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
very good update Ayysha.. and very much better then the show....waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
gud job very sweet part hope this happens in the show especially liked the part where it was heer and chahats convo veerryyy cuttee <3
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Like your update
next udate soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
Nice part, liked it lot, I hope so too that something like this happens in the show too

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