|| Harsha's OneShots || Page90 {Feb 23rd 2010} - Page 18

awesome os......very sweet......loved it......

awesome waiting 4 the sequel

awesome loved it
can't wait for the sequel!!!!!!
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Excellent and I looooooooooooooooooooooooovvvveeeeeeeeeddddd it!!This one was the BEST one-shot I've ever read!Play!Like you totally rocked it!I mean the romatic scene and everything it was perfect!I will wait for the sequel!Anways,you an excellent writer and also I'm going to send you a PM right now,so please do reply!

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Hii Guys thankyou for all the comments on MY OS.

Glad you like them

I am working on the sequal trying to make it as good as I can but for now here is another OS.

*-* Premeer proposal *-*

As there lips broke apart from eachother and her face rested on his bare chest. Both of them curled up into eachothers arms. First time in years they felt like they belonged together.

Like they were made for eachother.

He smiled as Heer held him tighter kissing his cheek bone.

Prem closed his eyes and remeberd the time he porposed her and how they became one.

FlashBack

Everyone – "Happy Birthday to you …. Happy Birthday to you …. Happy birthday dear Prem … Happy birthday to you." Everyone sang as Prem cut the cake. He took a piece and fed his family. He fed Preet, Meher and Heer.

When he fed Heer she took the icing and placed it on his nose which made him smile.

Meher – "Happy birthday Prem." She said hugging him.

Preet – "HBD bro." he said joing his fist with his.

Heer – "Happy birthday." She said hugging him, while Preet gave him a wink.

Prem smiled.

All of his friends enjoyed the party as Prem tried to find a way to talk to Heer but she seemed busy with his family.

When he finally saw her alone at the table putting some food he decided to go for it.

Prem – "Heer idhir ayo." He said holing her hand and pulling her out of the room.

Heer – "Kya Prem?" she said trying to ask him but he didn't answer and just pulled her into the terrace.

Prem – "Kab sey tumhsey baath karni kii koishsih kar raha hoon or tum ho kaay …"

Heer – "Kya hua?" she said as Prem let go of her hand.

Prem – "Mujhe kuch poochna thaa?"

Heer – "Haan poocho." She said as Prem tried to find his words.

Prem – "Woh actually mein sooch raha thaa kay … tumney … woh … meiney …" he said searching for words but his tounge held him back.

Raj – "Prem idhir ayo naa." He said grabbing Prem.

Prem – "I'll be right back." He said as Raj pulled him out of the door.

************

Everyone standing downstairs enjoying the party when the lights went off. And the spotlight went on Prem. He took a deep breath and fixed hix tux walking towards Heer.

She looked kinda scared so looked around to see who he was looking at.

Prem came and stood infront of her grabbing her hand and pulling her into the light.

Heer – "Prem…" before she could finish he covered her mouth with his hand.

Prem – "Kuch mat kahna aaj meri baath suno." He said removing his hand.

Prem – "Pata hai jab sey tumsey mila hoon tab sey tumehin pyaar karnay laga hoon, tumhari har ek baath achi lagti hai, jab tum muskarti hoo tu mujhe sari kushiyan mil jati hain." He said placing a hang on her cheek.

Heer didn't know what was happing.

She looked at the guy infront of her. The way he was smiling, his eyes sparkling honey moist. The way his lips formed a smile looking at her. His hair smooth and he was looking like a prince. Could be her prince?

He moved his hand down her cheek, her arm, her waist and held her hand.

Slowly he started to bend and went on his knee.

Her hand in his hand, their eyes locked and world around them out of focus.

Before he could say anything a sound of laughter came from the back and everyone turned to look.

Raj and Preet laughing their head off.

Everyone yelled out APRIL FOOLS and Heer froze right there.

Prem's smile also fell because he didn't know ….

Preet – "Great acting Prem." He said patting his back.

Raj – "Heer your so gulabal." He said hugging her.

Prem looked away from her because he was too embrassed to meet her gaze.

Heer tried to hold her tears as everyone laughed out loud.

Preet and Raj got busy as everyone talked and laughed.

When Heer was about to walk out Prem grabbed her hand and slammed her right into him.

Prem – "Sawal tu meiney poocha nahi." He said. As soon as he said that everyone became silent.

Prem – "Romantic nahi hoon liken mein kissay pyaar karta hoon woh mujhe pata hai." He said as Heer's whole world faded away and everything focused on Prem.

Prem didn't go on his knees but took out a box from his pocket.

Prem – "Shaadi nahi karo ghee mujh sey." He said joining his forhead with hers.

Heer didn't know what to do or say her tounge didn't move.

So she just smiled which made Prem smile as he slid the ring into her finger. Everyone clapped as Premeer looked into eacothers eyes.

Present

Prem smiled looking at sleeping next to him. They got married yesterday and last night was suhaag raat.

Prem didn't know when the night started and when it faded but he knew Heer was his and always will be.

Okaii that's all guys

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Love Harsha

me second heyyyyyyyy i liked it it was really nice you are such a nice writer update your other ffs also eid mubarak

awesomeeeeeeeeeeee plz update ......

that was so cute and sweet...
awesome...