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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi everyone!Recently everyone was ending me PMs' to start a new FF on a new concept!Well,this idea was in my mind for a while and I decided to give it!I hope this idea will be good!

Chapter 1
"Good morning L.A.!Today we have new scoops and buzzs about the famous teen singer Heer Maan!Oh yes!I do hear the screaming,but wait Heer you have done it again!Last night,Heer Maan was spotted slapping HER own boyfriend!Yikes!Heer has done it again!Heer when will you learn?"The newsreporter said."AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"Mr.Maan said screaming out loud.CRASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Everyone in the office shaked as they saw the windows breaking in the office and shattering down as Mr.Maan stood there in anger with his face dark deep red."Mr.Maan relax,"Mary his assistant said."RELAX!You know what Heer has done?!She has ruined her reputation!She has slapped her multi-billionare boyfriend,Mark!And you know by slapping him she could ruin her carrer since Mark basically knows everyone in the music industry!God!Please help me?!"Mr.Maan said as he slammed his fist on his desk."WHERE IS HEER?!"Mr.Maan said loudly.Everyone looked at him and looked down.Mr.Maan turned and glared at them as he walked towards them and stood there in anger with his fists clenched together."Tell me,"Mr.Maan said."NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"Mr.Maan said loudly."She's sleeping,"Everyone said."Really?!And where?!"Mr.Maan said."Maybe in her beach house today since yesterday.........Heer...........went...........to............a.........club,"Mary said slowly."GOD!WHAT?!HEER'S GOING TO BE GROUNDED RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!Mary call the driver!"Mr.Maan said and she nodded and quickly dialed the number while Mr.Maan slammed his office door and walked out.
Heer's Point Of View***********************************************
The wind flew in softly as the curtains flew inside of the beachouse and revelead a round blakc sheeted bed while ran in light and the sound of the beach.This is the life of Heer Maan........................................................
Heer's Dream*****************************************************
"Life full of fame,and everything I need.I'm seventeen and a perfect girl!A bad and good girl!It's me and who I am!I.............Heer Maan!"I said."Of course your soooooooooooooooo beautiful,"Drake,the famous teen pop sensation said smiling and I smiled."Of course it's Heer!THE Heer!"Alice said and I smiled."Of course,why wouldn't I be the famous teen pop singer!"I said."Well, of course,you are!"Bill said and I smiled and nodded as everyone stood in front of me praising me.
"HEER WAKE UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"Dad said screaming out loud,but I ignored him and turned around in my bed smiling."HEER!"Dad said loudly I pulled my sheets up."HEER MAAN!"Dad siad loudly and I ignored him,but suddenly I felt a splash of cold water right on my beautiful angelic face!"AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!What the fudge are you doing?!"I said jumping up and looking at dad and all my bodyguards who stood in front of me.The bodyguards glared at me and walked away while dad stood there corssing his arms and looking at me."Well,Princess!What were you doing last night?!"Dad said looking at me."Partying for new relase hit album which sold about one million albums!Duh!"I said looking at him."Then what about this?!"Dad said and he threw a magazine right into my face."Don't you dare do that again!"I said looking at him."And why,"Dad said."Well,first of all I pay you as my manager!"I said looking at him."I'm your dad too!"Dad said looking at me."Well,that's what I regret!I never wanted you as my father!It was my mom's mistake!And remember I pay you and I can fire you any time!"I siad looking at him."Heer mind your language!"Dad said looking at me."Some day I will maybe...........old man,"I siad mumbling and he glared at me as I took the magazine and looked there only seeing me slapping my boyfriend sorry EX-BOYFRIEND Mark!"So,it's just me slapping Mark.That's what all fot his was about?!That's why my sleep was ruined!"I siad looking at him."You think this is normal!Well,Heer Maan your reputation will go in the trash because this is NOT normal!You slapped a mutli-billionare!"Dad said looking at me."That's it!Dad I'm a multi-millionare!I have everything I need!From a little piece of pure wool carpet to a new diamond necklace!I have everything!I don't care if I break up with this Mark!And what's his last name!Oh!I forgot anyways he's my ex and now he's gone bye bye!Bye bye birdie!Anyways,now getting to the present!I'm going to look for a new boyfriend!Again!You know get into publicity!Anyways,Mr.Maan also remember YOU ARE ORGANIZING MY world tour again becuase the fans want me to do tour!Duh!And remember I need a hot new band and hot singers with me on tour,so I could let people hear to others!Choose anyone you want even if the hot new singer will be an enemy to me!I don't care!Now GO!"I said looking at him while dad stood there shocked."GO!"I siad again and he stood there glaring at me."GO!NOW!"I siad and he glared and me a walked away stomping while I threw the magazine into my personal paper shredder."Goodbye Mark!"I said and smiled as I walked into the shower.
"Well,my heart is going faster then ever because just in half an hour!The famous teen male singer Mr..............."The newsreporter said and she sotpped as the million of corwds of girls screamed out his name."WHO?!!!!!!!!!!!!!"The newreporter said and they all scremaed out his name."Well,you all have heard it!He has won thirty awards in his three year carrer and is going smooth with all of his albums as a hit!Come on boy!Today here in HHH news we want to rock out!"The newreporter said and he walked out.And the crowd screamed."PREM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
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Jasmine457 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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More parts will come tomorrow!My promise!I have to go now to sleep!So,good night!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey jasmine it was awesome

cant wait 2 find out wat happens

the beginning is just soooooooooooo amazing

add me 2 ur pm list

update soon

Kamal
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awssssssssssoooooomeeeeeeeeee Jasmin i love it ssssssoooooo much :D
Please PM me when you update thankyouuuuuu:D
Okaii sorry before i was in a hurry so here is my thought
I love the begning it is awosme😃
I love Mr.Maan's anger lol. Love how your FF is always different and always stands out.
Your a awosme writer and love every bit of your FF's😃.
I am totally in love with FF's you write😃.
Keep up the good work and if you dont PM me i will be mad lol
And keep rocking :D
P.S. Jemi video was crazy😉
Love - Ayysha
Edited by Premeerxoxo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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another ff of urs. WOW!!! waiting to read more.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hiiiiiiiiiiiiiii jasmine its a awesome concept plz do continue as i alwayz say u r the best writer plz update soon and add me in ur pm list thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesommmmm yar totally different story line amazing one yar👏👏👏
heer is so much different here and premmmmm like always the best😳
waitingg for other parts😊
Edited by maha_k - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome... i totally loved the first part
plzzzz continue soon
and add me to ur PMing list
thankss
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Posted: 15 years ago
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like u every other ff...this too is great
but when r u going to update ur other ff's
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey jasmine

Great start. Loved it completely. Want to see totally different heer in this. waiting eagerly for your next update. Do pm me

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