meet mini FF - 'let's make it sensational!' part 8 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: addiction

hi frds!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks for your responses, it's really motivating & encouraging.
i will definitely continue further......................
to rumsha ............ hey yaar, even i am addicted to this ff. so will write the next part really soon.
but write now i am focusing on chp 14 of my other meet ff ,"hum ko to milna hi tha" (tadashi thanks for reminding me about that ff. u can expect that update by tomorrow.)
i will update next part of this mini ff in a day or 2.
thanks once again for your responses.

You are a sweetheart! Thanks for doing that! I think I am going to update my ff and read yours and then go on a hiatus because of college apps. I love this forums and this show now so It will be hard but I am going to try! 😉 Anyways, I really love both your stories and you are totally awesome so take care!!!!and thank you for updating!!!! It means a lot!😳
<3 <3 <3!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
hi friends!!!! as i promised here's the update ...
it's a bit small (sorry holding ears, i could manage only this much but i promise next part will be a bigger one.) but i hope u all love it..............
here's part 5...................... enjoy.....................
part 5

Slowly preet dug his fingers in her silky hair pushing them back of her shoulder leaving her nape bare to his gaze; he placed kisses on her nape then on her bare shoulder making sure not even an inch of her is left unkissed. Sending shivers down her spine. Meher's hand as if not her's crept in his hair in response, leaving preet more aroused than ever.

As his cold lips touched her warm shoulders a moan escaped meher. She murmured'..

Meher ' you are so cold'

Preet ' but you are hot! Preet whispered in her ears vibrating her neck.

As preet moved his finger on her lower lip, they looked into each other's eyes. (Eye lock for 5 mins)meher wondered why preet could make such effect on her''

Meher was so close to preet that she could smell the scent of soap that preet had used. She was so lost into preet's eyes that she completely forgot that preet was no longer holding her.

Meher ' preet'. Preet ''..trying to control her racing heartbeat she said.

Preet pushed her on the bed & in no time he was on top of her covering her from head to toe; his weight had made meher sink in the soft mattress of the bed.

He brushed his lips gently against her lips; a raging fire sparked between them. Meher gave in completely. There was a realization that they loved each other''''''''''''..

The sound of people arguing pulled them from their passion-drugged stupor. meher gazed up at preet stunned. "There's somebody at the door, preet. Please, we need to hide."

you can guess what going to happen next.................. i know that many of u will be irritated at the disturbance as preet & meher are!

eagerly waiting for your responses.......... please do comment.....................

and yes you can give suggestion where preet & meher can hide.................................................


Edited by addiction - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
amazzzinnngggg............luved every bit of it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by Rhea_401 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg this fic got me grinning like CRAZY!...lol....quick question tho....are preet-meher just frnds?..or they are married in this fic?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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👏 your writing is great .. because of your ff i love MEET even more

already waiting for the next part of this and thx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66

LOVED IT!!!!

plz continue soon...
thnx for the pm!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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luvd it man.............ur too good......it ws awseome......................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thnks for he continuation !! It was so romantic, but just one doubt, are they married yet ? where can he hide ? is there any wardrobe there ? or he can simply go back to the bathroom :) and Mehr pretending that she came n the search of sthg ..
Yeah agree with Tadashi, plz update the other FF soon, can't wait to know how Mausam/Mehr fell in love with Preet ..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rhea_401

amazzzinnngggg............luved every bit of it!!!!!!!!!!!!!


hi!! thanks for commenting.
i will update soon.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

omg this fic got me grinning like CRAZY!...lol....quick question tho....are preet-meher just frnds?..or they are married in this fic?

hi!!!!!!
thanks for commenting.
i am glad that u liked my ff. i will update soon.....
& yes to answer your question. meet r not married in this ff. they were just friends till my part 4 in the part 5 they realized that they love each other.
i hope that u got an satisfying answer.

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