Premeer FF 'Love Hurts' part 3 pg 15 21/11 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Suhana Ahmed

its really good FAtima...

i loved the teaser...
continue soon and do add me to your pm list...
regards,
Suhana.


thanks suhana 😳
try to update soon
surely add u in pm list
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
please update sooon

add me to your pm list as welll
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
superb teaser..........................
can't wait 2 da first part.............................
do add me to ur pm list...............................

Yaz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Additi...

please update sooon

add me to your pm list as welll


try to update soon
surely add u in pm list
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: yasu09

superb teaser..........................
can't wait 2 da first part.............................
do add me to ur pm list...............................

Yaz
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thanks yaz
try to update soon
i'll add u pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
Hi guys how r u all doing?hope so great
I know i m late but i was lil busy & too much lazy
Note:this is written by me & my friend (s4september) just coz of her i m posting this coz she typed it
So without more bak bak here is the part hope u all like this


Part:1



He wake up and looked at the watch,which shows 7:00am.he gets up from his bed with a jerk.
Prem:OMG,i m late,Chahat is getting late for her school bus,(he talk to himself)

He ran towards Chahat's room.He start to wake up chahat and send her to bathroom.He goes straight to kitchen and saw Mahesh(servant) making breakfast.

Prem: Mahesh!Mahesh!
Mahesh: Yes Sir!
Prem: tum ne mujhe jaldi q nahi uthaya,ab chahat ko school se dair ho rahi hai,aur mai bhi office se late ho raha houn.
Mahesh: Sir,mai aya tha ap k room mai,magar ap so rahay thay,mai ne aik do baar apko awaz bhi di magar ap nahi jagay.Phir Ma'am ne mujhe bulaya,to mai masroof tha apko dubara jagana bhool gaya.

Prem: Hmmm....ok..ab chahat ko jaldi se tayyat kar k nashta karwao..aur mai apne room mai houn...............
Prem went to his room to get ready for the office...

Mahesh: Sir! breakfast....
Prem: Nahi mujhe nahi karna......

And he went to Chahat's room.....
Prem: Kiya meri Princess school k liyay ready hai?(he asked her,kissing her on cheeks)
Chahat: Yes papa.....hmm...
Prem: kiya howa meri princess ko?
Chahat: Papa! kal hamaray school mai Parents day hai(she told him with clear dissapointment on her face)
Prem: Mai apni Princess k school zaroor jaounga...
Chahat: Aur Mama?
Prem: Ummm.....Princess!apko pata hai na k apki Mama ki tabyyat theek nahi hai.(he know that she will surely refuse)
Chahat:papa mama kabhii nahii aati mere school(looks dissappointed)
Prem:you know she is always busy(he remembers when first time he asks her & at that time how much she shouts & she was soo much angry & chahat was so disturbed at that time he don't want all that again)
Prem:main pakka aounga ok(he goes towards heer's room thinking about maybe she agree this time)


i know its short soo sorry try next time to update long
b/w thanks again to my friend who tranlate this.
enjoy reading hope so
give me comments to improve this

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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
Heeey its reallly good please do continue soon and can you please add me to your PM lisst thankyou sooo much:D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
Good but tooo short

update sooooooooooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
hii
it was very nice
hope heer agrees
continue soon
next tym long part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50

hey what happened now to premeer??...........do continue n pm me on ur update............

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