Premeer FF 'Love Hurts' part 3 pg 15 21/11

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi everyone *waves*
Umm i m soo confused i m writing first time anything besides my school projects

 Teaser


A  man standing besides his room window watching the moon & thinking abt his life which was great 5 years ago he leads an ideal life which any person can imagine he has all the things whatever he wants in his life his love.And now for the world he leads a perfect life.in his life he has his love who is now his wife & he also has 4 years beautiful daughter all the things r just perfect but just for the world his wife whom he love like crazy who also love him more then he loves her but not anymore now she hates him from the core of her heart but he know this is coz of his one mistake which he done 5 years ago & now he cant change anything he is guilty feels ashamed but its useless now.the reality is that she hates him but he know one day she'll forgive him & comes back in his life when he dont know he is waiting for that time but he believe that'll happen one day when he was lost in his thinking he heard someone cry he turns around & see angel of his life his wife is now awake & shivering coz of horror & he is sure she again had that nightmare which is the bitter reality of their lives he goes to her & slides his hand on her shoulder to comfort her but she jerks his hand "dont you dare to touch me Prem"said shivering Heer but now in anger .


so how was that
good,bad or worst please tell me honestly
wait for urs reply *bitting nails* i know its bad habit but can't control
this is mine & my friend first time so bear my mistakes of english & yeah my grammer is very weak 😳 so sorry for any mistake
Happy reading *hope so*

luv
Fatima

Index
Chapter one : pg 6
Chapter two : pg 12



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Posted: 16 years ago
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i loved it! continue soon=)!
Edited by Princess92 - 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Princess92

i loved it! continue soon=)!


thanks try to continue soon

luv
fatima
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Posted: 16 years ago
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my genie sis
my god i loved it i m so happy to see a FF from u
sound really intresting now now post post next part sooon i m loving it
fab work post asap
luv ur
Genie
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hiiii
it is an awesome teaser
hope you're not going to make us wait for long
post the next part sooooooooooooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shruti11

my genie sis

my god i loved it i m so happy to see a FF from u
sound really intresting now now post post next part sooon i m loving it
fab work post asap
luv ur
Genie


u liked this gosh😳
try to update next part asap
thanks genie sis
luv
genie kis sis (fatima)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: premeer4rever

hiiii

it is an awesome teaser
hope you're not going to make us wait for long
post the next part sooooooooooooon


kavya u too 😳
i 'll try to post next part soon but i already took 2 hrs for writing this 😳
thanks anyways
luv
Fatima
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: -fsn-


u liked this gosh😳
try to update next part asap
thanks genie sis
luv
genie kis sis (fatima)

i really loved it seriously it is fab teaser
lots of luv
genie
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Posted: 16 years ago
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fatimaaaaaaaaaaa
you start FF and mujhy nhi btaya😭
great start dear really nice coninuee plzzzzzzzzzz👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: maha_k

fatimaaaaaaaaaaa

you start FF and mujhy nhi btaya😭
great start dear really nice coninuee plzzzzzzzzzz👍🏼


sorry ayesha *holding ears*
this idea poped in my mind Y'day & i wrote this so can't get time to tell anyone
thanks 😳
try to update soon
luv
Fatima

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