MiniFF: 8/11'Anjaan Rishta' LAST PART Pg 53

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Suhana Ahmed

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: cassie
nice ff....i really liked it....m waiting for the nxt prt...post it soon and also plz add me 2 ur PM list...thnxxx

thanx alot...

will try to update soon Inshallah!!!

ok i will add you...

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Suhana Ahmed

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: premeer4rever
hii suhana
it was awesome

suspence toh bohut jyaada hai and i'm warning you before itslef

jaldi jaldi update karo warna i'm going to fill your inbox with requests😉

do pm me when you update

lastly update soooooooooon

hi kavya,

thanx alot...

dont worry i wont keep you waiting for a long time...

will try to update asap....

ok i will pm you...

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Suhana Ahmed

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

thanx alot everybody who clicked the like icon...

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cute_1790

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

hey!!
i really like the suspense n looking forward to this ff...
plz update next part ASAP.....
n plz add me to ur PM list...

Deeksha

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Suhana Ahmed

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

hey guys,

here is the second part... although i dont usually update that soon but the part was ready as i have vacations these days... so please dont expect the same from me... coz i really am a bit lazy when it comes to writting... ok here goes the update... and btw i hate to edit so plz try to ignor grammatical errors and spellong mistakes...

PART 2

Then she took a step forward towards the edge of cliff. She wiped the tears rolling down her cheeks and gave a last and final glance to the beautiful city she belonged to. Then she tightly closed her eyes again and took another step towards the edge of the cliff. She felt the cool breeze blowing around her and inched closer to the edge. After few seconds she jumped down the cliff.

Her eyes were tightly closed; she could feel herself going down, cutting through the air. After few seconds she felt her back hitting the hard ground and her head landing on something sharp. She tried opening her eyes but pain didn't let her do that. She tried again but this time blood oozing out from her wound blurred her vision and she fell unconscious.

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He had been in Simla for about four months now. He was a handsome and intelligent young man of 26, an architect by profession, originally an Indian but born and brought up in USA. He worked with a reputed multinational organization. He has been sent to India for a project undertaken by his company. He was the chief architect of the project of a five-star hotel to be built in the beautiful valley of Simla.

When his name was announced for the project, he was reluctant to go to India. He thought it would be really difficult for him to go and work in a country, to which he had never been (although it was his own homeland). But after realizing the importance of this project for his career and much assurance given by his parents, he finally agreed to come here.

In the beginning he had stayed in Mumbai for two months for attending different meetings and seminars about his project and then he came to Simla, the original location of his project.

He had loved this beautiful place from the day he stepped in. And what he loved most about it was the amazing residential cottage he was allotted. It was an attractive looking, cozy cottage situated near a mountain cliff. This place was very near from the site of his project.

The scene outside the window of his room was so beautiful that he often lost sense of time while seeing that. It showed the edge of the cliff, with huge trees and clear blue sky ahead. Many people visited that place and now after spending four months, he had begin to recognize few regular visitors.

That day after finish making few maps, he came to the window for his favorite pass- time, looking and admiring the natural beauty. He saw a girl standing by the cliff. He instantly recognized her, she was a regular visitor. She often came here with her friends but this time she came after a long break of a whole one month. And also she was alone this time.

It wasn't like he remembered each and every visitor but that girl managed to grab his attention from the first time he saw her. He didn't know why but he couldn't get her off his mind. May be it was her innocence and simplicity that had attracted him.

He was looking at her and was thinking why he was not able to shake her off his mind and why he was feeling happy seeing her after quite few while. He was lost in his thoughts when suddenly the girl jumped off the cliff. As all of must have known by now, the girl was obviously Heer.

He never expected that, he instantly came out his cottage and ran towards the edge of cliff. He looked down and saw her lying unconscious on the ground, a few feet away. He didn't know how but he managed to go down to her, although the way was very difficult because of steepness of the cliff.

He had already asked for help from the care taker of his cottage. The care taker had tied a rope around a tree and had thrown the other end down for him to climb up. It was very hard to climb up the cliff with an unconscious girl in your arms, but he managed anyways.

He took Heer inside, and put her on the bed of the guest room. He gave her fist aid by wiping her wounds and tying a temporary bandage. Then he called for the doctor. The doctor had gone to attend another patient, so he was told to wait for an hour or so.

He was sitting on a couch placed near the bed. He didn't know why he was so restless and worried about a stranger. After about half an hour Heer slowly opened her eyes.

She was amazed to see herself in an unknown place. She tried to get u but failed due to weakness. He instantly reached by her side, held her from shoulders and put her back to her previous position. The girl was looking at him interrogatively:

"Hi, I am Prem Juneja ", he said.

She didn't said anything.

"I think you lost your balance and fell from the cliff", he tried to talk to her.

This time she spoke up. "Why did you save me?"

Although he knew from the moment he saw her falling down that she had tried to commit a suicide but still he was bit shocked at her question.

"I? I was? ", he didn't know what to say.

"I will never forgive you for doing this to me", she said and held her head with her both hands.

She was in pain. And Prem was wondering how someone could be so mad at you for saving her life. Then he realized the girl must have been going through something really very terrible that's why she took such a step.

"You give me your address or contact number so that I can inform your family about you", he again tried to speak to her.

"Aap ko kya lagta hai ke agar iss duniya mein koi aisa hota jo mujhe apna manta tou main itna bara kadam uthati?" she said sternly.

Before Prem could have said anything in reply, she uttered a cry. She was in much pain.

"Aap fikar naa karein main ne doctor ko bulaya hai? she would be here any minute", he told her.

"Mujhe kissi doctor ki zarorat nahin hai? jitna aap mere liye kar chuke hain wohi kafi hai? mujhe aur sympathy nahin chahiye?", she said very rudely.

And then she tried to get up from the bed but fell again due to weakness.

"See? you do need a doctor? ", Prem said giving her a smile.

Heer laid down on the bed again. She was feeling very helpless and was irritated on her present state. She was silently asking Bhagwan, why did the guy save her?

"mujhe jana hai? aap please mujhe jaane dijiye?", Heer said after few moments.

"theek hai? jane doon ga? per tabhi jab aap ke ghar se koi aa kar aap ko le jaye ga? aisi halat mein aap ka akele kahin jana theek nahin?", Prem replied.

Heer was pissed of hearing this from him. That's why she said in a louder voice:

"main ne kaha naa mera koi nahin hai iss duniya main", only she knew how much she hurt herself while saying that she had nobody.

thats it for now,

so what you think about it???

plz do leave you precious comments or atleast click on the like icon...

take care,

regards,

Suhana.

Edited by Suhana Ahmed - 16 years ago

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kavya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

yeah me first

first thanks for updating soooon

the update was awesome 👏👏

prem saved heer and she's shouting on him

something very bad must have hppnd with her.

yaar suspence still remained a suspense 😕

update soooooooooon

Edited by premeer4rever - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Amazing update!!! I really want to know wat has happened in heers life to make her try to commit suicide!!! Prem is such a hero!!! I hope he makes everything better for heer!! Plz continue soon! Thnxs for the pm.

Edited by Premeer_chahat - 16 years ago

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cute_1790

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

wow it was really nice...
now m really anxious to know wht happened in Heer life that she took such big step....but Prem saved her...he is our hero n he is already attracted to her thats gr8...
hopefully Prem brings all happiness back in her life n she would be happy again.....i ll be waiting for ur next part...plz PM me

Deeksha.

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Rhea_401

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

hey it ws awesome.....no Meet again???......do conitue asap!!!

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Suhana Ahmed

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Posted: 16 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: premeer4rever
yeah me first
first thanks for updating soooon

the update was awesome 👏👏

prem saved heer and she's shouting on him

something very bad must have hppnd with her.

yaar suspence still remained a suspense 😕

update soooooooooon

yes you are...

you are welcome yar...

yes there is something serious... i would be revealed soon...

suspense suspense... you dont know how much i love to keep that...

will try to update asap....

take care,

regards,

Suhana.