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MeraCheekuVirat thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey..aishu u told dat u wil update at night but didn't noe i m surely cumin wid a sword yar.....ek month hone aaya...abhi to update kar........kya ek month hua aaj yar......plz today is 25th........
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Posted: 15 years ago
hello friends sorry i promisd last night to update but after whatever is going on in the forum ididnt felt like writing even like i want a pause see if the forum closes between a weekk then it will be shifted to fanfiction forum and i really dont wanna write there but no oprions but still its kind of mess i feel like discontinuing all my writing pieces bcz i write for premeer and premeer fans and when we dont have our premeer forum left its disgusting to go on

i l wait few days and see what it turns into as even i was like opening a new thread for false commitment so its all messed

as time passes will go on with a decision so waitt plzzz



luv
aishu

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Posted: 15 years ago
i can understand your feeling. but this is not good. we have requested Kushi not to close this forum.
hope for the best. don't give up. at this age you should learn to be calm with confidence.
so come on cheer up .
when we get negative answer from others we are broken. so we should not repeat the same to others to broke their heart.
Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: newt2007

i can understand your feeling. but this is not good. we have requested Kushi not to close this forum.

hope for the best. don't give up. at this age you should learn to be calm with confidence.
so come on cheer up .
when we get negative answer from others we are broken. so we should not repeat the same to others to broke their heart.

yeah i too saw tht our requests to khushi di well it feels like leaving few of us everyone is like in the mood of fghting i dont understand why ??? u know after tht archieved thread there is surity they l close the forum go see the thread my goddd so much fght

m not i never give up but m like freaking todayyy

yeah i understand ur feeling selvy dont worry not discontinuing but m waiting for a decision

u know last night i sat to write the last two paragraphs and i was like so stressed whole night i thought abt this as m addcited to ths forum i dont go anywhere ele rather thn being here
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Posted: 15 years ago
aree yaar plzzzz update sooon...its again a month since u updated....ohh to har mahine ek update milegi.... 😕 .....sooo plzzzz update soon...waitingggg
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Posted: 15 years ago
ohh godd yeahh dear hihih a monthh merii aaadat ho gayi hai naaaa hnmmm dont worry tonight nnor tomorrow pukka promise godd m lamingggg ab tp updt karna parega warna sab marogee
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Posted: 15 years ago
Whats this yaar Aishu. Please update soooooooon. Jaldi se update karna dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
i m updting a part kavita now

Edited by aishwaryagayen - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Authors note: hey friends I think this will be the last update in this thread lets see , as well as m going through a phase of taking a descision as its said tht this things will be move to fanfiction section so lets see till then u enjoy

PART-34


Harshad was sstill standing in the rain all drenched trying to make head and tail of what happened , he still doesn't knows how to react it felt like he can feel the pain but not react , everything he said came rushing to his mind and a new wave of frustration hitted him he has to confront her ask her what's this, he has to……
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Heers mind took over the matter returning back home the first thing she did was rushing to the shower , even she didn't cared to get undressed , she stood there for long , it was hard to understand what was flowing down her was the water or her tears , she wanted to get distracted but the silence wasn't helping her everything was on and on flashing in her mind , the touch she felt when prem use to touch her brought shivers down her spine , and the coldness she saw today in the same brown eyes which demanded to be his prem but his soul isnt the sould she loved , it can never , prem can never hurt her…

Getting out of the cold water which was now unbearable to her , she changed and dried herself and came downstairs to stand infront of the pictures of prem, walking down the memory lane another sharp pain hitted her , she was like numb and was weak to stand on her feet anymore , tired , and frustrated,when a strong knock on her door distracted her

She came out of her world rubbed her tears from the back of her hand and went ahead to open it

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harshad was standing outside her house thinking he should knock or not but after so much of thinking he came to the conclusion that he has to confront her , to know the truth
he was in a dilemma still he knocked on her door and she opened the door
he could see her eyes red with continuous crying or raged as she looked her he cant decide
harshad cant see in her eyes anymore so he lowered his gaze and then he saw that she was about to close the door
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heer opened the door and a sudden wave of anger flowed through her seeing him
heer was about to close the door as she didn't want another angry conversation over here when harshad didn't let her close the door he holded on of the sides of the door

" heer mujhe kuch baat karni hai"

" u better leave nor I will call up the police , how dare u r here after saying so much things to me , m up with this m not gonna take it anymore"

" I wanna know who prem juneja is"


heer just stared at him for a minute and then she moved forward and caught holded his arm and dragged him in with all her force she was left with

and harshad didn't protested he letted her drag him inside and then the shock hitted him
the hall was filled with photos hanging on the wall
his photos , no it was of someone who looked like him, no no it have to be a nightmare , this doesn't happens
this was what going through the mind of harshad

he can see numerous photos of prem and heer hugging , romancing , teasing etc etc and he felt like its all a dream which have to vanish , it doesn't happens in reality

he was just staring when another sudden jerk which made him turn towards heer , getting face to face brought him in reality

heer- this is what u wanted to see na u saw tht huh and still u don't believe and now u l accuse me getting some proxy photography and all wont u , then I must warn u I am not going to take it anymore

harshad: I didn't know I mean

heer: damn it u don't understand anything . anytime whats the new thing in that ?

harshad: I am so sorry I ..

heer: m not interested to hear ur apologies the door is that way , just leave

saying this she turned her back on him

harshad again shifted her eyes to the room taking a glance and then silently left without a word

heer just like closed the door on his face in all her anger and frustration

harshad came out in the rain and ihe was feeling numb , his mind looked like got a hault on a nightmare, and now he was ashamed of all the stuff he did , his head was paining continuously like some thumping sound was going on in there,takiing another glancee of the house he left….




Okk
That's all
Luv
Aishu

My mind isnt working have some family affairs lol busy so here u go
Diva dear I promised I l right another paragraph and all but I cant u know
And I l try premeer not romance but sharing feelings in next one
Which will be soon I hope





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Posted: 15 years ago
at u update aishu....so it was a gr8 update luved it hope prem n heer wil be soon together plz bring them bck,,,,,,,make harshad remember evrythin...

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