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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#821

Originally posted by: newt2007
how long you can run. i'm behind you.
update fast otherwise................................

huh m tired so i l stop and updttt huhhh huhuhuhuh

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#822

yeah khajju m on typing last few linesss

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#823

Hey frnds I just got up from the heap of tomatoes u throwed towards me so m late I mean I know took a month but u know me nowadays how big kamchor I have become this days so no blah blah and here u go
I appreciate all u r love and eagerness thanks for being so lovely

part-33

Heer stormed out from there and harshad looked towards her back
He excused himself and came out with her

Heer was moving towards her car speedily , even it was raining outside and she was drenched but she didn't stopped to give a look back or search for preet , she just needed to get out of here
But a strong hand grabbing her wrist stopped her
Heer got pulled by the sudden force and got unbalanced when another strong hand holded her from her arms
Heer just moved her head upward and saw the person standing there
Those same pair of chocolate brown warm eye , the same light red coloured wet lips , the same hair falling on his forehead and above all the same smell , its him it has to be him ,but as the realization drown into her she shook off all her feelings which was making her weak and jerked off his hand from her arm and got straightened \but still he was holding on her wrist
Harshad: where the hell do u think u r going in this rain

Heer: mind ur business ok its non of ur concern

Harshad: its surely mine concern we didn't signed the project yet

Heer: god damn hell with ur project I gave a lot of time I didn't came here for some recreation u know that so its over m leaving

Harshad: whoa whoa r u insane u and ur mood swings my god huh will u tell me whats my crime that u r shouting on me like this

Heer: u know what its just rediculous to talk to someone like u

Saying this heer turned to leave but this time he grabbed her wrist more strongly and pulled her closer to himself by making her hit his chest
Heer clenched on his shirt and looked into his eyes which reflected anger this time

Harshad: u fascinate me u know that and why is it rediculous to talk to me did I do something wrong or were u jealous that u cant get me huh ?

Heer: r u out of ur mind just let me go u need a good psychiatrist that's it

Harshad :u know what, I am so cool tempered with everyone but ur those words prick me and I don't understand why the hell do u have that attitude huh ?

Heer: u r hurting me just let me go

Harshad: oh really m hurting u
Saying this he made his grip tightened on her hand
U know what ms.heer mann u r good for nothing these attitudes and rudeness and self estabilishment dramas that u show its all is just a mask u know what u didn't got anything from life that's why u r so tired of urself and u let out that frustration on others I enquired about u , u run the juneja empire but u r not mrs.juneja , u don't have that mrs before ur name u r just ms.heer mann and still u r a mother , a single mother I know everything about u

That's it tears rolled down her eyes this is what fate was planning for her she loves him , loves him from all her strenghth but she cant prof how much he loved her
The patience . strength to get tortured, to die day to day , to fight , the mask everything felt like tearing inside her and she cant hold her and outburst

Heer: u don't know anything about me nothing if u would have then u would not have said this yes u r right ys m not mrs. Prem juneja m not par isse mere prem ki ardhangini hone ka hak koi nahi chin sakta na wo ishvar na tum aur na khud prem yup u r right m a single mother yes I am but she is my love , she is a part of my love and m happy to be a single mother u know I could have easily aborted her but she is mine and above all his , his the only thing I have as a memory of our love , our togetherness and our marriage which u don't thnk is a marriage right ? getting a kid is just pleasure for u right u thnk sex just it but u cant feel the togetherness of two souls and u know what I was quiet that doesn't means m weak m not but u make me weak yes u r right I go weak on my knees seeing u but its not because f u mr.harshad chopra its because u torture me every moment , ur eyes , ur face everything u resemble him and I am going mad in solving this riddle in my heart everyday u look like him , u do look like him but u r not him u r not u cant be u r not that person u can never be

Harshad was listening to each and every word of her which she blabbered in all her frustration

Harshad: u might be kidding me huh I look like him I look like prem juneja huh good joke

Heer: joke yes joke everything looks like a joke a dream a horrible nightmare like I l wake up and all this will end but its not going to end its not

Saying this she ran away with all her strength towards her car without even glancing back once leaving a confused harshad behind ,who just stared at her
He just ruffled his hair through his hand when a strong force pulled his shoulder making him turn towards the person standing behind him
And there he was preet standing there raging with anger , he holded of harshads collar and yelled at top of his lungs
Preet : how dare u talk to her like that u jerk

Saying that he punched him hard on his face making him fall down on the ground
Harshad hitted hard on the ground and then he felt blood ozzing out form his mouth he turned and stood up

Preet : u r the main culprit I thought u r prem but u r not u never can be , u hurted her so much saying this he tried to punch him again but this time his hand got caught by harshad mid air

Harshad: r u both out of ur mind huh she spat out all that shit which I didn't understood and now u r bugging me to hell whats on will anyone tell me ??

Preet : u wanted to know really then listen u mr.harshad chopra is the biggest reason for her change in attitude u know why because u look like her love , my friend prem juneja seeing u whoever knows prem will think u r prem but but but u r not u can never be u r such a moron

It felt to him like the world is revolving around him a thunder fell into his heart and he was confused as well as he cant believe what he heard , he thought this ppl might have gone insane

Harshad: u guys r mad what are u talking r u trying to make some hindi movie over here

Prete : huh this is what I expected from u , u know that this is it its really a joke , u don't believe me right u don't need to okk but if u ever hurt her u gonna pay u know that

Saying this he left

Harshad was sstill standing in the rain all drenched trying to make head and tail of what happened , he still doesn't knows how to react it felt like he can feel the pain but not react , everything he said came rushing to his mind and a new wave of frustration hitted him he has to confront her ask her whats this, he has to ………..

That's it
Love
Aishwarya gayen

I know I know it's a hanger but this time will updt fast if u l be good readers and gimme a 4 pages of comment atleast hmm next thing is harshad confronting her aksing her and the truth infront of his eyes

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mandy60

@mandy60

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#824

awesome update

plz next update soon

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Khadija

@khajju

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#825

finally u updated....awesme update.......heer harshad scenes wer awesme......dialogue wer fabulous......so heer told him everything and he is not believing.....recaps seems interesting.......thanks 4 pm.......update soon dear

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#826

hey...luved it....awsum update....
continue soon...plz....
plzzzz.prem cum bck...

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meeshti jain

@meeshti.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#827

hey aishoooo !!!!!!

shorrie for late unreserving my coment !!!

hope u dont mind !!!

well coming to the update !!!

awesome update!!!

loved premeer argue in the rain !!!

even god was crying for separating them .............

seee!!!!

heer's dialogues were awesome!!!!!

it reflects her pain soorow and grief !!

ab toh taras kha le aishu !!!!!

this harshad is emotionless !!!!

he said soo pinching talks to heer !!!!

he should have some decncy !!!

heer is rite he cant be prem !!!

loved preet's concern for heer !!

why this harshad is confuse now.................

hope that he willl apologise to heer !!

update sson

Edited by meeshti. - 15 years ago

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Anisha Jayakumar

@anishajk99

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#828

Superb update......wat heer said was so touching.......loved preet's care for heer......so now harshad is in a dilemma.......cant wait for ur next update......nd u noe wat,i saw a dream in which heer nd harshad wer arguing(started with the end of ur last update).........i think a lot abt ur FF nd now started dreaming also 🤣 ..........pls dont make us wait sooo long dear......hope ul cont sooon.......