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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: premeeristry
Superb update aishuthank u meeshti
i said na i know the unrevealed person ........😕 HC..........😆haahah u know everythng
chahat is so small and cweet (in preet language).i too love her i dont get it y wud anyone dont want to read this ffthere are some ppl pming me and say that remove me from pm list one or two was there so i asked u all .am gonna cont it coz i know aishu will now fill the masti of HCahhhaa lets seee
hope so.and i know this rhidima is gonna die n will ask him to handle heer rytno way m not going to do anythng like this m not gonna kill ridhzi 🤔 .my guesses will destroy the suspence of ur ff 1 day 😆 till now most of them wer ryt 😎 i suppose.yeah tu ekin sab bigad ke chodegi well but not this time its gonnaq be different mere dimag mein bhto vamp wale plans hai well after this week toh sirf ur ffs are only saharas to thinkwell ya only ffs will be he sahara for our existence 😭premeer .update next part sooooooonn.

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#562

Originally posted by: heer193
oh yes st last our prem is back

dont be excited let meclear its prem or not

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#563

Originally posted by: newt2007
ho no harsahd is Prem. he forgot his Heer. 😭

he hugs riddhima.😡

plz update soon. don't say he forgot his Heer.

well who said harshads premmmmm anddd lets see

hahahailove riddhima just imagine riddhima ismehahaah

i l updt soon

well i wont say he forgot heer ahahah

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#564

Originally posted by: sweetanu2314
twist lagana tumhara hobby hai right??.......now how will heer prem be one when ridhimma is there?..............but good that they haven't developed any feelings for each other yet...............do continue soon........thanks for the pm............

yeah say twist say twist say twist hahahah
well who said it is prem let prem and ridzi be on plzzzz hahha

ohh like now i have to make u see their feelings hmm tough job

i l cont soon dear tc

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#565

Originally posted by: topsyturvy23

hey fabolous part

Thanks for pm

hey sanju thanks for ur comments

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#566

Authors note : hey frnds how r u hope that the surprise for the last time was good enough to hold ur attraction and now this one will be a heart attackhahaha

PART – 27

IN THE SCENE HEER WAS CRYING AND IN THE OTHER WAY
AM MAN WEARING ALL BLACK WAS STANDING ON THE AIRPORT MOVING HIS HANDS ON HIS HAIR
HE WAS WEARING A BLACK WOOLEN JACKET WITH BLACK TROUSERS AND A BLACK POLYNECK

HE MOVED TOWARDS AND HUGGED SOMEONE STANDING CLOSER TO HER

Riddhima : hey harshad finalyy u r back

Riddhima went ahead and gave a slight kiss on his cheek on harshads cheek on her fiancees cheek

Harshad : hey ! r u well mom said u wasn't well

Riddhima : m perfect

Harshad : well yeah yeah hearing the same line from two years sometimes on phone , on email and all

Riddhima : well we should go home u must be tired tomorrow u have to meet ur new business partner as well as my new friend

He put one hand on her shoulder and with another hand holded his rucksack and they both headed for home

NEXT MORNING
Chahat : mommy I vont weal theesee dlesses thesee all arr olldie I wannt new now

Heer: beta I have to leave for office plz we will go shopping tomorrow

Chahat : noo ! I vantt noww I nevel askk u anythng but I vantt todaye

Heer: chah tum bahot zidi hoti jaa rahi hoo

Chahat : mumma don't love chah naa

Heer: this is not fair u blackmailing me now tu kitni shaitaan hai apni umar dekh aur nani banti hai

Chahat : plz mommy

Heer: ok lets goo its already 11 I l be surely late today

She took chahat to the shopping mall for getting her a new dress from pantaloons and even called kashish to bring subh as she was already late so that kashish can take chah home from there and heer can go on her way to office

OTHER FRAME

Riddhima : plz harshad just 5 minutes I have given my jeans to be altered gimme just 5 minutes then we will go to your office plz

Harshad : u girls just mess guys like us I am already late be fast

Riddhima : thanks

Riddhima got out of her car and walked inside the mall

And harshad waited in his car

Chahat and heer too were in the same mall

Harshad was anxiously waiting for riddhima to come but she didn't returned after 15 minutes also so he decided to go in and check

Prem entered the mall and here chahat is busy buying her clothes with heer and kashish then heer remembers that her mobile battery was low so she said bye to chah and thanked kashish and went to take her battery ffrom the third floor of the mall so that she can directly leave from there

On the way heer got hitted by someones arm and got disbalanced but she managed to keep up and didn't fell

Oh ratiya tarse jiyaaa
Oh ratiyaaa tarsee jiya

When she got disbalanced she was standing near a showroom and she was facing the glass door and she saw a reflection on the glass it was the same face she loved it was the same face same eyes loking apologetically towards her

Man : sorry m in hurry

Oh ratiya mera tarse jiya
Kyun tu na aaye re
Nainan tarse pal pal barse
Tujhe bulaye re

O ratiya

Heer touched the glass door and then the reality clicked her she turned back to see him to tell him how much she missed him to hug him to show him her love but no ones was there he wasn't there

Preet ke mausam ye albele
Beet rahe hai kyun ye akele
Preet ke mausam ye albele
Beet rahe hai kyun ye akele

Heers eyes searched through the crowd but noone was there it was just her false feeling

Nainan jaagi saari rain
Udd gayi nindiya khoya chain
Nainan jaagi saari rain
Udd gayi nindiya khoya chain
Oh ratiya
Oh ratiya mere tarse jiya
Kyun tu na aaye re
Nainan tarse pal pal barse
Tujhe bulaye re

Heer was really confused tears were streaming down her eyes she never had this kinda hallucination how can this be possible she saw him but he cant be here he cant be there for her and if he was there why didn't he talked

reet ye kaisi kaun banaye
Sawan bitaa piya na aaye
Reet ye kaisi kaun banaye sawan beeta piya na aaye

Saaj bahe uss door gagan mein mann bhaage iss sune aangan mein
Saaj bahe uss door gagan mein mann bhaage iss sune aangan mein

A piece of her mind refused to believe he is back as he cant be but her heart still says he is there for her she can fill him and he cant go out of his commitment like this he has promised to be with her for eternity

Oh ratiya mera tarse jiya
Oh ratiya mere tarse jiya
Kyun tu na aaye re
Nainan tarse pal pal barse
Tujhe bulaye re

Oh jiya tarseeeee

Oh ratiyaaaa piya piya piya
Oh tarse jiya
Oh ratiya mere tarse jiya
Kyun tu na aaye re
Nainan tarse pal pal barse
Tujhe bulaye re more piya
Tarse jiya
Piya jiya

Heer composed herself and thinking that she was just draming her mind was giving her what she wanted and it was just a feeling she left for her office with a crying heart

Harshad : hey riddhima u r late come on tumhari wajah se mujhe itne crowd se aana pada tumhe dhoondte huye even a lady got hitted from me she must be thinking kya ladka hai ladki dekhi nahi and chalu I was in so hurry I cant even apologize to her properly

Riddhima : hmm yeah chalo ho gaya got some defects in jeans so was arguing hahaa

IN OFFICE

Secretary : mam mr. Chopra is in the office

Heer: well tell them to be in the board room I l be just there

Heer took the picture frame on her desk which contained a photo of prem

Heer: aaj ajeeb ehsaas ho raha hai prem lagta hai tum yahin ho pata nahi kyun sayad tumhare aaj itni yaad sata rahi hai ki tum hi tum dikh rahe ho
She placed a kiss on the frame and kept it back

Heer: just call preet sir okk

Heer instructed her secretary and headed towards the board room

She opened the board room and she saw a man standing with his backside to her and riddhima was standing beside her

Heer: u guys are late

Riddhima : maaf kar do so I said na ki I l introduce u to my fiancee and ur new business partner jo thoda crack hai here u go

Harshad was smiling to riddhimas childish behaviour he just rolled a hand through his hair and moved to face heer

Heer was smiling but when his face came to view she was shocked her mouth fell open her eyes were teary and wide with the shock
She watched him for a moment and the world seemed to have been back for her her life is back to her her love is back , she tremebled on her feet and then lump in her throat stopped her from saying but she moved ahead to touch him to see he is real
But she was stopped by riddhimas words her world shattered again

Riddhima : this is harshad my fiancee
And he wrapped a hand around her waist and moved his another hand infront of her for a handshake

Harshad : hello ms.mann

She was shocked to hear those words [he is harshad ]

Harshad was having a bit strange feeling towards her she was standing like a statue and watching him whats wrong with her and her gaze was making him feel uncomfortable

It wa s a voice from behind that broke heers gaze

Preet: heer

Preet was even shocked to see him but he was not prem he heard everybit conversation of riddhima and he was horrified to see heer standing like that
He knows heer after a long time has managed her life and now this storm can tear her up

Heer didn't said a word and ran out of the board room
Preet : riddhima u take care of pr …. Harshad I l just come
Preet saw her running out he also went after her

Harshad : ohh what happened they acted like they saw a ghost

Riddhima : I hae never seen heer behaving so strange okk lets wait for her to be back

Harshad was watching towards the way she left it was strange for him like someone he loved was in pain , he was even having a weird strange feeling after seeing ms.mann and her hideous personality and the way she left mad ehim more eager to see her

That's all

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Aishwarya gayen