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@Heerbeauty

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Posted: 15 years ago

#541

Sorry for late
actually i was busy for two days
nice C S
who is neena's son?
oh poor chahat!
she misses her dad!
hope prem will come back soon
update soon

Paddo

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#542

Originally posted by: Heerbeauty
Sorry for late
actually i was busy for two days
nice C S
who is neena's son?
oh poor chahat!
she misses her dad!
hope prem will come back soon
update soon

Paddo

hey paddo dont be sorry dear i dont like my frnds aplogising without any important reason

thanks forliking andulknow morenext time
lets see prem bees back or not and m updating

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#543

Authors note : there u go new season of my ff
A different flow of story with suspenses and changed attraction
A heart breaking season for someone
A confusion or someone
A decision to be taken by someone

Tune in guyssss

PART – 26

2 YEARS LATER OF CHAHATS BIRTH

{{{{prem : main hamesha tumhare saath rahunga aankh khologi to mujhe hi paogi aur band karogi bhi to main hi milunga}}}}}

heer suddenly opened her eyes , she was sweating and was upset that he disaapeared from his views now she have to go through another day to see him again in her dreams
nights are restless for her these days nor she can sleep properly , days are longer for her but she have to live , she have to live for her angel her chahat who was sleeping peacefully near her inside her blanket .

heer got up from her bed and moved to chahats side and placed a sweet morning kiss on her forehead slightly
then she went to get fresh up without disturbing her two yrs old sleeping angel anymore

she got back to her room after getting freshed wearing a light white coloured saree with pinkish glow
she put off two small earings and the pendent she wored usually which was gift from her life which is no longer with her and there she was dressed in simplicity without any make up to go to the office

she slightly shaked chahats arms so that she wakes up
and there she is

chahhat : gguuddie moourninggg muummmo '

heer: guud morning dear

chahat : leady fol officheee

heer: yeas now be fast

she hurried up chhahat from bed and took her to the bathroom and after bathing her which wasn't a hard job as chhahat is a shy lil girl whi is not at all naughty she brought her back to room making her wrapped in a baby pink towel
she opened her closet and took a small skirt and a read highneck and made chhahat wear it

then she hurried to the car with her and drove to preets house

standing near preets house she just pressed the calling bell and kashish opened the door

kashish : hey heer hey lil chhahat

heer: hi wheres preet is he ready ??/

chahact : hi aunty

kashish : yeah having breakfast u two come in and have the breakfast

then came subh running from inside and started showing his attitude

subh : chahh u l laatee

chah : mummo didntt woolke me aap

subh : hmm

chah : soolly bhaiyaaa

subh : u llookk pale letss have bleakfast

chah : hmm

subh and chah are like real brothers and sisters they cared for each other they fought then were even sorry for their acts
heer left chah everyday at kashish before work and preet and heer went to office
and when she returned at evening she took chahat back

chahat was small for nursery so she was admitted in a kindergarden school but she and subh occassionally attended the school as it was not so important they use to play with kashish all the day and piissed her off but kashish loved the kids more than anything and chahat was her lil doll

preet now handled his and heers business which they started together in canada and heer use to manage prems business

they all did breakfast together with mostly chahat subh and kashish talking , heer lost in her thoughts and preet watching heer

then they rode to the office

IN THE CAR

Heer: so all files ready for the merger with chopras neena ji aaj aayngi

Preet : yeahh all is done

Heer: hmm

Preet : u should come over now heer I saw u on breakfast table u were even lost today

Heer: cant we drop this conversation we have it everyday

Preet : and everyday u don't answer me

THEN PREET DIDN'T SAID ANYTHING FURTHER AND THEY DROVE TO OFFICE SILENTLY

Preet left heer and went to construction site whereas heer went inn

WHEN SHE ENTERED THERE WERE MANY CONVERSATIONS ONN IN THE OFFICE

A new employee : well I watch mam everyday why she always wear these pale colourless sarees or salwar is she a widow ??

Secretary : no she is not a widow she never speak about her past well everyone says she had an affair with mr.prem juneja and he died and now she is a single mother

A new employee : lolz she is kinda bold hmm

Secretary : keep ur mouth close oor u l be out in ur first week of the office

AND THEN HEER ENTERED AND EVERYONE GREETED HER

SHE WAS MOVING TOWARDS HER CABIN WHEN SHE BUMPED INTO SOMEONE

Heer: watch and walk yaar

And she just moved her head to see who she bumped into and then a small smile played on her lips

Heer: hey riddhima u r already here ?

Riddhima : yeah aunty is waiting for u … u r late

Herr: ohh yeah lets go in we l talk later

HEER ENTERED HER CABIN AND NEENA CHOPRA WAS ALREADY THERE

Neena : hello heer

Heer: hello mam

Neena : hmm chahat is becoming naughty nowadays I hope so u r late ?

Heer: no its not like that I feel good watching her sleep

Neena : so I came to say u a good bye for a few days

Heer: so u have made a full proof plan of ur retirement

Neena : yes and tomorrow my son will be here after his business trip of europe is done he will be ur new partner and he will handle all my work

Heer" so riddhima must be very happy her fiancee is coming and hone wali sashuma is leaving

Neena : I am glad that riddhima got a good friend like u here in so small time u r good frnds now

Riddhima : heer and good friend nooo she knows everything about me but I don't know anythng except she is my friend hahah

Heer: blank books don't have anything to tell

Riddhima again felt the pain which heer is feeling for 2 years she knows heer has some tragedies in her life which she doesn't likes to say but all she wants is to make heer happy as she knows she is a really kind hearted person

Even heer find all her tension gone with neena and riddhima as they are really cooperating with her

Heer: so may I know the name of my new business partner and my friends fiancee or u l keep it a secret

Riddhima : harshad chopra

Neena : so harshad will be ur new partner and I am leaving for india tonight he l be upp here by tomorrow morning and be cautious when he is around u he is going to get u pissed . a good business man what he is when it comes to work but in his leisue time he irritates a lot .

Riddhima : yeah yeah I know but heer is going to handle him properly ok then I l leave I have shopping to do bbye

Heer: bye

RIDDHIMA LEFT LEAVING HEER AND NEENA TOGETHER

Neena : heer I hope u l be fine with his way of work I l miss u as we are having a different bond since two years and I think and wish u be happy in ur life

Heer didnt said anything she was silent as heer found neena like a motherly figure and she is leaving now

Neena : and one more request take care of ridhdima if u can as she was really happy with u but m tensed we met heart specialist last night and he thinks riddhima is having some problems again and m really worried

Heer: don't worry aunty I l be with her

Neena : so now the business woman heer changed back to her loving form mam se aunty
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heer: I always be so when time for work I work and then the next thing I think about u is a motherly figure who supported me

neena : hmm even harshad is back after long and u havent met him I am in a little worry about the business too but I know my son is expert in it but still

heer: I l amanage

neena : u l manage everything but not ur life hmm

heer: I am trying

neena : chahat needs a father too heer and m saying it bcz I want u to be happy

heer: chahat doesn't need anyone except me I know my daughter

neena : u always answer the same heer

heer: and u don't get restless aksing the same

neena : noo

they talked for a while and then neena left

EVENING

Heer took chah from kashishs home and came back to her house

Her house was a place where heer felt warm and cosy as she can feel evrything about prem there each of her wall was fixed with bif picture frames of his and hers

But heer was even anxious about chah she never asked her about her father and even don't questions about the pictures

But heer didn't said her anything as she feared that what will she answer her as she doesn't wants to break the heart of the lil kid by telling that her father was no more which heer cant accept till now

Heer laid chah on her bed and then moved downstairs to do her work

When heer left chah went ot her study table and took out a story book which contained a picture

Chah : papa maine aaj god she phil kaha ki preet uncle aur subh bhaiya ki talah aap aul main bhi ek saath khelenge aur mumma ko tease kalenge aap jaldi aaoge na

Chahat knows that talking about her fathe rinfront of heer brings tears in heers eyes so she never hurts her mother but chah always talks to her fathers picture when she was alone

Downstairs heer was standing near the frame of prem
ek patni hone ka har dharam nibhaungi tumhari har cheez, har amanat sambhal ke rakhungi yhai kaha tha maine tumse aur kiya bhi chah ko hamesha khush rakha par prem kyun tumne apna vada nahi nibhaya aaj bahot akeli ho gayi hun main naa kisi ke samne roo sakti hun aur na hi hass sakti hun
zindagi jeene ka bhi oi matlab nahi sirf uss nanhi si jaank ebaare mein sochke main jinda hun

tumne kaha tha na : saansoein ki dorr ki tarah tumhare saath rahunga main maut bhi alag nahi kar sakti hum dono ko

phir kyun chale gaye bolo kyun chale gaye

IN THE SCENE HEER WAS CRYING AND IN THE OTHER WAY
AM MAN WEARING ALL BLACK WAS STANDING ON THE AIRPORT MOVING HIS HANDS ON HIS HAIR
HE WAS WEARING A BLACK WOOLEN JACKET WITH BLACK TROUSERS AND A BLACK POLYNECK

HE MOVED TOWARDS AND HUGGED SOMEONE STANDING CLOSER TO HER

Riddhima : hey harshad finalyy u r back

THAT'S ALL

Love
Aishwarya gayen

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Riya

@PrincessPatel77

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Posted: 15 years ago

#544

awesome update
continue asap
please tell me harshad chopra is who i am thinking he is!!!!!
thanks for the pm
pm me

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Whypadhu

@Whypadhu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#545

oh no harshad
our prem is backkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
iam so happy
thanks for a beautiful update
iam dying to read for next part
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz for my sake update the nesxt part asap
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additi10

@additi10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#546

OMG prem is backkkkkkkkkkkkkk yupiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
thata wesome aweosme updateeee
and chahat is so cuteeeeeeeeeeeee
cant wait for the next part plz update soonnnnnnnnnn

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Paddo

@Heerbeauty

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#547

Harshad Chopra=Prem Juneja?
Prem Juneja=Harshad Chopra??
Harshad Chopra=Prem Juneja???
Prem Juneja=Harshad Chopra????
Harshad Chopra=Prem Juneja?????
Prem Juneja=Harshad Chopra??????!!!!!!!!!

Ihhhhhhhhhh.I can't think more.Mere brain garam hone ja rahe hai!!!!!
I can't wait anymore!!!!!!!
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!

Paddo