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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: premeeristry

i know now its time for a tragic.aur yeh heer meher ko kyun bata rahi hai uskey paith mein kuch bhi nahi tikta 😆 😆 😆.on the whole utna mazza nahi aaya but still expecting next chapter soon.

love
saba

well ya heer meher i mean kashish ko kyun bata rahi hai uska pata baad mein chalega
i toodontlikedthe chapterthanks for ur critisism sweety wellnextchapterwilbea blast keep waiting
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: premeeristry

wow agar itni hi jaldi updates miltey rahengey na aishu then...................i will be very happy 😃.it was amazing.arjun n preet part was just 😆 😆 😆.aisi koi flirting waali baat ho aur prem chup baithai is it possible.......😕 no.. never........😆

haha ayeah i made it fast this time haha prem is really a flirt right kaash woh hamara bf hota
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sonia7

hey thanks for the pm

update was great i really enjoyes reading
now please dont kill prem
and update soon

thanks for loving and i hop eu l enjoy ur france tripp haah lets see the story plot ahead

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: prempadmasujal

awesome update

loved it
please unite prem and heer asap
thanks for the pm
pm me

i l try to untie but no promises u l come to know more in next update
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Suhana Ahmed

just read the two parts...
sorry for being late...
awesome as ever...
update asap....

love,
Suhana.

no sorries dear

thanks for reading
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Posted: 15 years ago
yeah i l pm u dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
Authors note : hey friends I know we all are so sad on the rumours about endoing of our show , well even I am also sad but well it's a part of life a good things have to end as well ,,, m even attached to u all so much and m frightened about the day when this forum will become nonactive and will be closed

So till this forum is onn my ffs are onn too aur KAL KISNE DEKHA HAI

SO TC AND HERE U GO

PART – 25



heer was happy to tell her heart out to kashish

The preparations were on for their marriage ceremony and that day heer was being applied mehendi

Arohi : heer straight baitho nahin to mehendi kharab ho jayegi
Heer: aur kitna straight baithu
Arohi : u were right mujhe khud nahi laga ke kisi ko bulwana chahiye tha
Heer: yeah I was telling the same thing

And then awkwardly in middle of the ceremony heers cell phone buzzed
Heer: kashish mera phone do na plz
Kashish : haha deti hun

Kashish went ahead and picked her cell and in the display saw the name prem calling
Kashish : hmm hmm heer tum mehendi appl karo phone main sambhal leti hun
HeeR: kaun hai
Kashish : tum hubby jo abhi tak poori tarah se download nahi huye hai
HeeR: prem
Kashish : kitne desperate ho tu m dono who I think abhi on the way hai anne ke liye aur thodi der ruk bhi nahi sakta hai
HeeR: kashish phone do chalo
Arohi : dekho heer mehendi jyada jaroori hai phone nahi
Heer: kashish plz

And then kashish handed her the phone
HeeR: hey
Prem : itni der kahan laga di
Heer: woh arohi was applying mehendi
Prem : kahan uske hair mein I didn't know arohi has white hair bechara arjun bura phasa
HeeR: prem comeon
Prem : ok ok jokes apart well mera naam likhwaya
HeeR: nahi abhi tak nahi
Prem : irada badal toh nahi gaya
Heer: hmm might be
Prem : lagta hai mujhe bhi koi aur dhoondni paregi
HeeR: prem well where ru now
Prem : on way driving I l be there in 2 hours
Heer: tum drive bhi kar rahe ho and u talking too yaar dekh ke chalao aur abhi phone rakho
Prem : well I was feeling a urge to talk to u I don't know why like it's a long time since I talked and like it will be long till I l hear u
Heer: oh come on just two hours and u l be inn
Prem : well hamara room un kamchoro ko thik se sajane bolna I mean lots of flowers and fresh roses and all
Heer: tum nahi sudhroge
Prem : ofcourse not .. well and I hope my little angel inside u is fine hmm tumne usse pareshaan to nahi kiya na
Heer: yeah I didn't disturbed her not at all
Prem : well ok I l talk later its too foggy and I too think I should concentrate on driving
HeeR: love u
Prem : same here

Arohi : romeo juliet ki baatein ho gayi ho to kaam kare
Heer: yeah


Arohi finished applying the mehendi in another 1 and half hours and it was already 8 o clock at night
Heer was being restless that prem didn't came yet
Time passed as ice melting to water and it was 10 o clock at night and still no prem at home
Heer called him several times but the number was always switched off

Heer was bored so she flickered on the television set to watch
She was surfing the channels when she got a shock
Her eyes got wide open and her jaws dropped

The news reporter was saying prems car number and about an accident near highway

Heer shouted : arjun ! preet
They all came runnig from their work and all were shocked to see the news
Heer was quiet and just staring at the
Kashish puts a consoling hand on heers shoulder

Preet : heer don't worry might be some misunderstanding , prem will be fine we l go and check

Heer: who bahot der se phone nahi utha raha tha , he said its foggy and his car number , preet prem thik toh hoga na bolo na preet

Arjun : sshh kuch nahi hoga usse lets go

They all went to the accident site where crowd was already there surrounding the hill side
Preet broke through the crowd and went ahead to the police standing there
The reporters when saw preet sharma and heer mann they broke out into many question but heer was deaf and dumb then she could not hear anyone she was only trying and wanted to hear his voice his angelic voice , she wanted to see him safe and sound , but their was nothing except flames coming from her surroundings
Th world seemed to be twirling for her and in few a minutes her life has taken an abrupt turn , her head was spinning but she held on her consciousness to atleast see his face once so that her heart could come into normal pace

Preet : whats going on ??
Police : iyahan ek bahot hi dangerous accident hua hai and no proofs ki kaun tha , kitne log the car mein and all
Preet : yahan jo car number ki news flash ho rahi thi who hamare dost prem juneja ki car hai
Police : well uss car ko backside se kisi truck ne hit kiya tha and the car khai mein jaake giri hai aur usme fire bhi catch ho gaya hai backside se hit hone ki wajah se car ka plate hume gira hua mila aur ye mobile jo tut chuka hai , even truck driver ki bhi spot death ho gayi hai , we doubt ki prem juneja jinda honge kyunki car poori jal chuki hai nothing is left there kuch nahi mila hume khoj ke

Preets expression was horror struck he doesn't knows what to say
Heer: preet kya hua kya keh rahe hai ye
Prete : heer calm down


Preet caught hold of heers arms and hugged her tightly

Heer: preet kya hua inse pooocho na prem kaha hai

Preet just nodded a no and that's it heer got shocked

Heer: preet kuch karo preet dekho usse kuch nahi hua hai , kaha hai uski body ha , ye police plz preet plz
And she started yelling for prem
Preet holded her tightly in his arms with his eyes moist
And arohi and arjun kept the press away from heer
Kashish was shocked too she doesn't knows what to do ? and she also knows that heer is preagnant and in the eyes of world she is preagnant and is not married

Heer was in tears each second was like her heart is breaking in to several pieces and she doesn't knows how to join them , she is waiting for his angel to come and say that he Is there for her alive
Suddenly her mind took over the matter and she cant feel her legs and everything blacked out



She found herself lying on the bed when she gained back her consciousness
And preet and everyone was sitting beside her
She with a sudden movement came to sitting position rather than sleeping

Preet : ru ok ?/

Preet tred to keep his voice calm fighting with all the feelings

HeeR: I think I saw a bad dream so , whereas prem its late now he must be inn

Preet : u werent dreaming heer

Heer: preet ! she gained back everything which she thought as a nightmare which she doesn't wants to remember … she remembered everything the call , the news reporters and at last preet nodding a no
A no which meant no hope in her life

Heer: where is prem ??

Preet : police tried but

And then heers self control gave up she holded her chest like it was stabbed , everything in her life is gone her hope , her happiness everything , she is even not that heer aanymore who made her life go on with work and frustrations , she cant caught hold of her life once more , everything is shattered

Kashish : heer don't cry its not good for u

Heer: prem she was yelling like mads and preet was supporting her arohi cant see her status and she too broke into tears




8 MONTHS LATER

heer was sitting on a bed in the hospital with a baby girl in her hand

prem : hey so my angel lastly came after giving so much pain to mumma

prem took her in his hand and kissed her on the forehead

prem : papa loves u so much

heer: mumma too

prem then went towards heer and took her hand and kissed her palm

prem : thanks for bringing my angel to this world

heer: ye hamari chahat hai iske liye kuch bhi

heer took his face in his falm and was a bout to kiss his forehead when her dream changed to reality
she opened her eyes and there was no prem only the bitter truth of the world she is alone

she looked near her in the crib and there she was sleeping silently
her angel and his angel

after having many conversations with preet about leading her life without a burden of being single mother she finally succeded to bring her to the world and lastly on her wishes her friends who was thinking about her welfare only but with mind not heart have agreed on heers point and they too were waiting anxiously for her angel

heer took her into her arms
heer: prem aur heer ki chahhat hamari chahhat

and she kissed her forehead with tears in her eyes and with the other hand she holded the chain which prem have gifted her on the day of their saat phere

she have to struggle , she have to live for her that's all she knows about her future
then she can hear many laughter on the door and there they are her family now prete arjun kashish arohi and subh { kashishs son a week older than her angel } they all came in and hugged her
all heer could manage was a small smile behind the tears


2 YEARS LATER ………………

that's all
love
aishwarya gayen


okk next update wil be a character sketch of new entries



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Posted: 15 years ago
Yeah first to comment!!!!!!

Mindblowing update aishu 👏 👏 ⭐️
gaining five stars from me is not a joke.that means u really did a good job.
this was abt ur work now abt your ff 😭 .you are very bad aishu this was even more saaaddd then preet and meher in kis desh.marney se pehley insaan uthpatang baatein kartaa hai yeh sach hi hai.even before dieing your prem is teasing arohi k ussey white hairs hai 😆 😆. you are succeeded in giving pain to heer 😆.but see how strong is my heer she stood up and did wad her prem wants to.on the whole hard touching update 👏 .no hopes left for kis desh but if it happens i expect you to complete false commitment and antaheen on account of our friendship. wad say.cant wait for next chapter update soon.

love
saba
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks
very nice
pls continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh... teri vamp wali aatma wapas aa gayi....
kyon kiya aisa tu ne...
Aishu i feel like beating you up.....

very well written part...

Prem ko jaldi wapas la....

love,
Suhana.

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