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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: additi10

awesomeee update aish heer will say yes rite:P

yes yes it will be a yes
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Posted: 15 years ago

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hey awesome update loved the premeer scenes as usual thanks for pm

well more of premeer in next update
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Posted: 15 years ago
Authors note: well guys u all keep complaining that I don't give happy updates so here it goes today all is well
The story is going towards a major twist so this update for all those who love only khushi as next updates will be ghum

So keep tuning and I hope I told u last time ki no prem from now as prem nai koi aur sahi kyunki prem is going to visit somewhere with me only he and me

So guys don't kill me as I l like u to be made up for next ones as there are so many drmaas in kdmhmd now so I too thought of

But I promise entertainment ki koi kami nahi hogi
And no hamshakal for sure

U l know jst tune up tune up and tune up kyunki mian prem ke beena jee nahi sakti

Ok enough nautanki lets get back to update as I know m updating after a long time but aftre this I l be consistent as I have to take up the story forward soon


PART 22





Nurse : she is not at all well s u guys let her rest

Arjun : ya hume chalna chahiye

Preet: bye tc we r there outside if u need any kinda help call us

Arohi : wais ebhi prem will be staying aur kya chahiye

Prem : m too outside she need to rest

All of them went outside giving heer a blink


IT WAS 5 DAYS SHE IS IN HOSPITAL AND THAT DAY WAS HER DISCHARGE

Prem : so miss aapne to poora plan banaya tha mujhe chhodke jaane ka

Heer: well mujhe kab yaha se le jaoge m not feeling good in here

Prem : arre wait for a few hours evening tak tum discharge ho jaogi

Heer: I cant wait to go out with you

Arjun : ha ab prem mil gaya hai na hamari kisko yaad aati hai

Heer: no emotional atyachhar nahi to abhi nurse ko bulaungi who tumhe bahar fenk aayengi

Arjun : ha meri kisiko jarurat nahi ek kehti hai freezer mein daal dungi aur ek kehti hai bahar fenk dungi

Arohi : arre sahi to kaha heer ne tumhe freezer mein daala to jam jaoge usiliye who bahar fenkengi tumhe aur tum jam gaye to mere shopping bags kaun uthayega shadi ke baad , mere kapde kaun dhoyega aur ghar kaun saaf karega

Arjun : main kya tumhara pati banunga ya servant

Arohi : pehle pati hi ban jao yaar ab ye shaadi kab hogi main thak gayi hun iske saath ghum ghum ke ab mujhe shaadi jaldi aur honeymoon chahiye

Preet : honey moon oh honey tumhe moon ki bahot chinta hai


Arohi : I mean aaram karne ke liye

Arjun : arohi m proud to know ki tum mere baare mein bhi sochti ho I mean u and I

Kashish : hmm hmm aaplogo ka ho gaya

Preet : waise heer ek baat batani thi mujhe who actually main sort of daddy banne wala hun

Heer: kya

Prem : sort of ??


Kashish : preet tum bhi na

She says this and hides her face with her palm
Preet goes back to her and holds her by her waist

Preet: who I mean m going to be daddy hume kal hi pata chala

Heer: bloody hell tum ye baat aise bata rahe ho

Prem : to aur kaise batau ???

Prem : I mean kuch meetha seetha ho jaye

Nurse: sir mam ke discharge papers ban gaye hai u can collect them and take her home

Prem : ya I l collect them

Prem went outside and here heer and arohi started teasing preet

They collected the papers and was standing outside the hospital


OUTSIDE THE HOSPITAL

Prem : preet: tum aur kashish jao aur hamare liye party ki tayyariyan karo I mean we need a party u know

Arohi : I l help u preet

Arjun : tum jaha main wahi arohi , I l help u too

Kashish : main prem ke saath heer ko ghar chhod aati hun , she looks tired

Prem: kashish u rest I l take her

Preet : koi itne bahane kyun bana raha hai seedha seedhi kahe na ki hum kabab se haddiyo ko nikanlna hai I mean kisi ko spare akele mein quality time chahiye

Prem : tu aaj pitega

Arjun : shai kaha preet aajkal sacchai ki kisi ko value hi nahi hai

Arohi : tum ab apna rona leke suru mat ho jao

Kashish : let them be together we l go and have some plans for tomorrow

They all splitted out for their ways

PREMEER IN THEIR CAR ON THE WAY

Heer: hum ghar to nahi jaa rahe its not the way

Prem : sahi kaha we r not going home sweet home

Heer: toh phir

Prem : hum pehle jayenge mandir and then I got a new house for both of us so we l go there

Heer: really !!! par abhi mandir kyun yaar shaam ho chuki hai

Prem : sshhh ! mujh pe bharosha hai na

Heer: apne aap se bhi jyada

Prem : so soldier follow me

HeeR: prem tum bhi na

Prem took his one hand up from steering and placed it on heers shoulder

They reached the mandir

It seemed like prem had planned something up there

There was no one and it was even raining slowly

There was a fireplace burning their

Prem caught hold of heers hand and took her up there

Heer: prem whats all this ??

Prem bent on his knee and took his hand forward

Prem : kya tum heer mann aaj in hawaoein , in feezaon , bhagwan , is agni , mujhe sakshi mann kar meri banogi
Kya aaj tum poore riti riwazoein ke saath meri ardhangini banogi

Kya aaj tum sirf mere saath iss pal ko jeeogi

Main reeti riwaz acche se to nahi janta par ye jaroor janta hun ki ye dil sirf tumhare liye dhadakta hai

3 saal juda raha tumse ab ye judaai bardasht nahi hoti

duniya ki nazro hum pati patni baad mien banenge par kya tum aaj mujhe apna mann dogi

ye zindagi mian tumhare namm karta hun

prem juneja aaj se tumhara

he then closes his eyes

aaj jaan bhi mangogi to hazir hai


heer by now had tears in her eyes

heer: haan main heer maan in hawaoein fizaoein bhagwan agni , tumhe aur iss dil ko sakshi mann kar mann se heer juneja banne ke liye tayyar hun

par ek shart hai

waada karo ki tum mujhe chhod ke jaane ki baat kabhi nahi karoge

prem : he took her hand in his hand
and then he took out a gold chain from his pocket and moved back to heer

he made her wear that chain

he took some sindoor from the feet of god and applied it to her maang

and then they holded each others hand

and started to move around the fire

they moved a round { guys see this all as they r going to be a clue of incidents in future }
prem : main hamesha tumhare saath rahunga aankh khologi to mujhe hi paogi aur band karogi bhi to main hi milunga

they took second round

heer: jab jaha jaise bulaoge aur jo mangoge sab kuch tumhara

they took another round
prem : har musibat mein tumhara saath dunga kabhi akela nahi chhodunga

they took fourth round

heer: tumhari khushiyan mere liye sabse badi hongi usse badkar kuch nahi

they took their fifth round
prem : saansoein ki dorr ki tarah tumhare saath rahunga main maut bhi alag nahi kar sakti hum dono ko

they took their sixth round
heer: ek patni hone ka har dharam nibhaungi tumhari har cheez, har amanat sambhal ke rakhungi

they took their last turn and stopped
prem : ye haath aur saath kabhi nahi chootega

prem placed a soft kiss on her head and they took the ashirwaad of god and went back to their car an drove back to home

prem carried her in his arms to their new house

they saw the whole house
prem : and this is our bedroom

heer: its beautiful

prem just holded her by her waist

prem : heer

heer:
Sshh don't talk jst put ur hands around me hold me
It started slowly a velvet touching and strokking and feeling ,caressing and gentle exploring of the senses .and it began to build and swell in a frenzied , frantic rhythm until it became a bacchanal , an orgy of pleasure ,,wild and savage .. She was at the centre of a rainbow .she felt herself being swept up on a tidal wave that lifted her higher and higher and there was a sudden molten explosion within her and her whole body began to shudder .gradually the temptest subsided .she closed her eyes she felt his lips moving down her body and she was caught up in another fierce wave of blissful sensation .
She pulled him and held him close feeling her heart againt his
It was like a fountain spilling over with unbearble pleasure
All through the night they made love and talked abt everythng and nothng and it was though some long locked floodgates had opened for both of them .at dawn as the canals began to sparkle with the beginning day , They belong to each other and prem was a part of heers long tomorrows



IN THE MORNING

Prem : well I have applied to the marriage registrer office and the papers will be made up in a weekk or so and then u r legally mine

Heer: as if now m not

Prem : well so get ready we r going to tell bout our sdecret wedding to all

Heer: no not now that's just for us a memorable day , when we will get married publically then only they should know everyone should not know our privacy

Prem : arjun sunega to ucchlega

Heer: usse batayega kaun

Prem : hmm naughty girl

And he ran after heer

Heer: prem no not now we r already late aaj arjuhi ki shadi ke plaans decide karne hai kal shadi hai we have lots of work aaur aaj shaam ko preet ki party bhi hai so lets go plz

Prem : offo ye tumhare dost

Heer: waise bhi main tumhari legally to hun nahi so u better stay away

Prem : accha achha batau main

Heer: chalo

THEY CAME TO PREETS HOUSE WHERE THE PARTY WAS ARRANGED AT NIGHT

At evening

Preet : yaar meri khushi ek kashish kam thi ab ek aur aayegi and I am sure aayegi hi aayega nahi who bhi bolegi mujhe ye lado who karo ye karo , kahegi papa aapne ye nahi kiya to marungi

Prem : dekh preet tune bahot pe li hai hum baad mein baat karenge kashish sun legi to tere saath saath meri solid waat lagegi

Preet: main bolunga meri biwi bahot acchi hai u know she is so sweet who raat ko bhi bahot achi lagti hai

Prem : bhai ye baatein apne tak hi rakh mujhe kyun bata raha hai lekin baat sahi hai biwiya raat ko hi sundar lagti hai subah chudail lagti hai

Heer: kya kaha prem ???

Prem : wohwowwohow I mean arre tum meri biwi thodi na ho heer my unlegally wedded wife

Pret: unlegally ??

Prem : tu kyun bol raha hai tu pee

Heer: tum milo mujhse baad mein

Prem : hey heer hey heer



So he starts singing

Aj din chadeya
Tere rang warda{
preet sees uoside and comes towards prem
Preet: abhi subha nahi hai
Prem : let me sing }


Aaj din chadeya
Tere rang warda

Phool sa hai khila
Aaj din

Rabba mere din ye na dhale { he started holding his heart and roundind around heer}
Who jo mujhe khwaab mein dikhe

Usse laga lu ab gale { and he hugged her and everyone wa swatching so heer pushed him }
Tainu dil da wasta

Raabe aaya dil ke deedar we
Saara jaann chood chad ke
Tere spane sawar ke
Tenu dil da wasta

Aaj din chadeya
Tere rang warda



Baksha gunhaoein ko sunke duaon ko { he kneels down and holds his ear saying sorry }
Rabba pyaar hai tune sabko de diya

Meri bhi aahon ko sunle duhaon ko { he looks ahead like having a convo with god and then again ran after heer }
Mujho wo dena maine jisko hai dil diya


Assma aasma usko bhi itna bata
Who jo mujhe dekh ke hase { he blocked heers way he is going right then he too and if left then he too }
Paana chhau raat din jisse
Raaba mere naam kar use
Tainu dil da wasta

Aaj din chadeya
Tere rang warda


Manga jo mer ahia
Jaata kya atera hai
Maine kaun se tujhse jannat maang li

Kaisa khuda hia tua

Bas naam ka hai tu
Raaba jab teri itni si bhi na chali
Chahiye jo mujhe karde tu mujhko ada

Jeeti rahe shaltanat meri
Jeeti rahi aahsqui meri { he caught holded of her dupatta and pulled her back and holded her waist and tingled her the he kissed he on her ear }
Dede mujhe jindagi meri
Tenu dil da wasta Rabba mere din ye na dhale
Who jo mujhe khwaab mein dikhe

Usse laga lu ba gale
Tainu dil da wasta

Raabe aaya dil ke deedar we
Saara jaann chood chad ke
Tere spane sawar ke
Tenu dil da wasta

Aaj din chadeya
Tere rang warda { he then starts dowind up and downs }

Prem : heer maaf kardo I was kidding

Heer: prem tum bhi na bekar mein itna bada gaana gaa ke pakaya main tumse naraz ho sakti hun kya

Prem : u mean I did this all in vain

Heer: yes

Prem : ab mujhe reward chahiye

Heer: kya ?

Prem : ek kiss plz

HeeR: no

Prem : cheak pe

Heer: no

Prem : jao main baat nahi karta

HeeR: prem

Prme made his cheak forward and heer slowly kissd him

Prem : I love u

Heer: me too


Arjun : guys hsadi hamari hai so centre of attraction hum hain so …. Abhi to thoda romance kam karo

Prem : jal mat samjha

Arjun : jalu nahi to ky akaru ek ladki mili hai who bhi panaoti

Arohi : ha ha main to panauti hoon shadi kyun kar rha hai

Arjun : karna pad raha hai socha iss garam dimag ladki ko koi apnayega nahi to … u know m so kindhearted

Arohi : heer ye pehla dulha hai jo shadi ki raat hi dulhan ke haato mara jayega

Arjun : chudail mujhe khane ki baat kar rahi hai

Arohi : tu ruk

Kashish : ye log waise prem preet ko dekh kya




Prem : who who wohwwwwwoohhhhh


Kashish : woooh wooh kya kar rahe ho


Preet :
Love me { he is crowded with girls from all around and all were moving on beats with him }
Love me
Love me love me love me ur mumma says u love me my aba says u love me
Lov e me love me love me my ama say u love me Ur papa says u love me
Tere sang jindagi beteane ka irada hai love me love me love me stop { he went to a girl and says this and kashishs mouth is just wide open }
Thodi nahi poori nibhane ka ye vaada hai { he tooks his glass and see that his ine is less so he says this and kashish understands that he is drunk }
Tu meri justujoo tu meri aarzoo
Tu lele meri jaan Love me love me love me ur mumma says u love me my aba says u love me
Lov e me love me love me my ama say u love me Ur papa says u love me{ he come4s to kashish and holds her hand }

Aagaz ko anjaam do
Tere bina mujhe koi jachta nahi
Meri mehraba ter kehkasha
Tere bin dil kahi lagta nahi { he twirls kashish and then went forward to heer to dance but prem took heer aside }
Tere siva naam koi socha nahi
Tere bina khwab koi deh anahi
Love me love me love me ur mumma says u love me my aba says u love me
Lov e me love me love me my ama say u love me Ur papa says u love me
Love me love me love me ur mumma says u love me my aba says u love me
Lov e me love me love me my ama say u love me Ur papa says u love me

Mere rehguzar janejigar {arohi went ot arjun but passes on to preet seeing him and then danced with preet }
Jindagi mein ashiki kamal kar gayi
Mere bakhabar sach hai magar jindagi ko ashki nihar kar gayi
Are dil pe bas koi chalta hai soch ke bhi pyaar koi karta nahi { she says this line and goes to prem and says sochti to iss arjun se pyaar thodi na karti bandar kahi ka }


Love me love me love me ur mumma says u love me my aba says u love me
Lov e me love me love me my ama say u love me Ur papa says u love me STOP { arjun says stop }

Arjun : main bandar haan

Arohi : yes


Arjun : okk really then u l be my wife ms . bandariya

So lets dance together

Guys watch out bandar ka tamasha

Mann ko ati bhave saiyaan kare tata thaiyaan mann gaye re haye re haye re hayre
Hum priyatam hridaye basaiya pagal ho gaiya
Jo maari nain kankariya
To chalki prem gagariya
Aur bhegi prem nagariya
Sab nritya kare sang sang
Are ban lage nas nas mein
Nahi pran rahe ab bas mein
Man dobba prem ke ras mein
Hue prem magan ab mann

They all started dancing with all their happiness as tomorrow was arohis marriage and this was last day of arjuns enjoyment as a bachelor



Oh oh bebe bebe sau bar ujko tan mann
Man ko ati bhave
Hay e Mann ko ati bhave saiyaan kare tata thaiyaan mann gaye re haye re haye re hayre
Hum priyatam hridaye basaiya pagal ho gaiya
Jo maari nain kankariya
To chalki prem gagariya
Aur bhegi prem nagariya
Sab nritya kare sang sang Oh oh bebe bebe sau bar ujko tan mann
Man ko ati bhave

Prem went ahead and pinched heers waist and heer looked at him with shock he then went ahead and rolled her in his arms holding her waist tightly
Prem : so
Heer: what u pinched me
Prem : I love u
Heer: its nothng to do with it
Orm : yes it is agar pinch nahi karta to tum shcok nahi hoti aur rukti nahi aur main paad nahi pata aur ye nahi kar pata
Heer" kya nahi kar pata
Prem : kiss and he kissed her



Are ban lage nas nas mein
Nahi pran rahe ab bas mein
Man dobba prem ke ras mein
Hue prem magan ab mann

Oh oh bebe bebe sau bar ujko tan mann
Man ko ati bhave

Preeet holded on kashish and picked he rin his arms and took a twirl and then kisse dher forehead



Mann ko ati bhave saiyaan kare tata thaiyaan mann gaye re haye re haye re hayre
Hum priyatam hridaye basaiya pagal ho gaiya
Kya uthal puthal bawra ye man
Are sanson pe sargam ka tyohar hai
Banke main pawan chum lu main gagan o rituoein pe ab mera adhikaar hai
Sanket diya bhagwan ne
Aadesh diya mann ne
Sab waar diya tab humne
Hus safal mera jiwan
Khatraon se muskaye
kaya se jo muskayi
Dil mohra banke layi
Sarthak hua jivan
Main hun murakh gan

Arjun and arohi were holding hand in hand and were the couple who was dancing the most as others were busy romancing




Mann ko ati bhave saiyaan kare tata thaiyaan mann gaye re haye re haye re hayre
Hum priyatam hridaye basaiya pagal ho gaiya

Hum priyatam hridaye basaiya pagal ho gaiya

Ho khushboo cha gaye khilkhila gaye
Mujhe sa manata hia sara gagan

Chandrama jhuka suraj bhi ruka
Dishayein sab kar rahi hai mujhe naman
Tune jo thami baiyaan
Sabne meri li balaiyaan
Sudh busdh meri kho gayiya]
Hoa rom rom upwan
Jab peet badar lehrai dharti ne li angrai
Or milan badaraiyan chai
Khulke barsha sawan

O be be obebeb
Sab hua tere karan
Mann ko ati bhave saiyaan kare tata thaiyaan mann gaye re haye re haye re hayre
Hum priyatam hridaye basaiya pagal ho gaiya
Jo maari nain kankariya
To chalki prem gagariya
Aur bhegi prem nagariya
Sab nritya kare sang sang


Are ban lage nas nas mein
Nahi pran rahe ab bas mein
Man dobba prem ke ras mein
Hue prem magan ab mann

Oh oh bebe bebe sau bar ujko tan mann
Man ko ati bhave
Hay e Mann ko ati bhave saiyaan kare tata thaiyaan mann gaye re haye re haye re hayre
Hum priyatam hridaye basaiya pagal ho gaiya

The music stopped and all of them started to yell to show their hapiness

THE NEXT DAY PASSED IN PREPARATIONS AND ALL




That's all guys
Wait for my next part and my next shararat and see this time I posted too much so I need the comemmets to much if u guys don't post big and more comments then I wont continue u know



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Posted: 15 years ago

awesome i loved it

please update soon
thanks for the pm
Edited by sonia7 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
great part !
enjoyed it !
update soon !
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome updateeeeeeee wow premeer scene was awesomee too goodddddddddddddd
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome i loved it
please update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update aishu yakeen nahi hora yeh sab false commitmnt mein ho raha hai 🥳.cant believe evry1 is singing and dancing .yeah ur ryt zyada happy updates tujhey suit nahi kartey 😆.i loved the saath pherais of premeer and i also know some among them will turn in coming updates. prem is going to visit somewhere with me only he and me 😳 akeyley akeyley.ohh i guess u hav taken the hill climbing thing seriously 😆 😆 😆.on the whole enjoyed reading it
update next part as soon as u can.


love
saba

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Posted: 15 years ago
fab update.....................⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome loved it thank god you united premeer and i guess you are right you are ekta # 2 i will have to agree to that anyways excellent continue asap thanks for the pm me

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