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Posted: 15 years ago

Thankyouuuuuuuuuuu For all the comments guys 😳

Edited by xoHarshaxo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

ReCap

- Prem is annoyed by he never gets time alone with.

- Heer wants to make Prem happy so asks if they can go out tonight.

- Heer gets a letter from Veera.

- Veera tells Heer she only likes Prem because he has money.

- Prem finds out and is shocked.

Next Part ….

Prem turend Heer around shocked.

Prem – "Yeh kasa sawaal hai Heer … tumhien asa kyun lagta hai?"

Heer – "Nahi Prem … woh mera matlab thaa … kay …"

Prem – "Tumsey kisi ney kuch kaha?" Heer looked scared because if she told Prem he would be upset.

Heer – "Nahi janu woh mein movie deeak rahi thee tu mein bus wasay hii…" Prem shook his head.

Prem – "Yaar kasi movie thee." He said smiling which made Heer smile.

Suddenly his phone rang.

Prem – "ARrey yaar kabhi tu maaf kar diya karo." He said taking out his phone.

Heer smiled placing her head on his chest. Prem smiled placing his free hand on her cheek. As Prem talked on the phone Heer placed her hand on the hand he had on her cheek.

Prem – "Haan Raj … nahi meiney tu file tumhari office dee theee … haan … liken woh mr.Shrama sey sign karwa lena … no problem … bye." He smiled and hung up.

Heer kept rembering the letter and how it said she would make her and Prem's life hell. A tear formed in her eye just thinking about her being seprated from her janu.

One of her arms behind his back one on his hand.

Prem noticed she seemed kinda down the whole day today and now it seemed as if she was scared.

Prem – "Jaan kya hua?" Heer wiped her tear from her cheek by her thumb and put on a fake smile.

Heer – "Kuch nahi bus neead aa rahi thee." Prem smiled lifting her face her.

Prem – "Chalo ma'am soo jayo." He said kissing her forhead. Heer smiled and nodded.

Premeer walked to the bed. Heer layed down and Prem beside her, both of them spread the blanket on them.

Heer held his arm and stayed close to him. Prem cressed her cheek and forhead while the time she tried to sleep. SLwoly both of them drifted to sleep.

Around 3:00am Heer woke up from the thunder sound outside. She couldn't sleep after that so she kept watching Prem sleep.

Next Morning

Everyone was home today which pissed Prem off.

Prem – "Acha ma woh Raj ney mujhe or Heer ko ghar bulayay hai aaj." He said while Gaytari put oil in his hair.

G3 – "Acha … bohat achi baath hai Heer bii kafi dino sey nahi gayi chalay jana." Heer stood by the dresser folding her cloths. She tried to hide a smile while Prem winked at her. A light pink appered on her cheek which made Prem smiled.

G3 – "Kab ayo ghaay wapis?"

Prem – "Pata nahi … shayad kal woh Meher ki party hain a … Late NIGHT." Heer couldn't hold her laughter so she decided to act if she needed to get something.

Prem smiled as Heer stood in hall drinking water. When g3 wasn't looking he blew her kiss which Preet noticed from the window his room and shook his head.

G3 – Chal hoo gaya … ab shower karloo." She said wiping her hands with a cloth. Prem smiled and gaytari kissed his forhead.

Heer came back into the room looking all busy with her work.

Heer – "Ma bauji kay kapraday kahaan hain?"

G3 – "Kon sey?"

Heer – "Joo kal pehnay thaay meiney soocha laundary hho jayay." Gaytari smiled.

G3 – "Tu chord deay mein karloon ghee … jaa kay araam kar koi movie deaak … isko deko sara din dimaag kata hai." She said hitting his head.

Prem – "Ma karnay doo na kaam wasay bii bahu hai iss ghar kii kaam tu karna chiye … moti hoo rahi hai wasay bii." He said trying hard no to laugh.

Heer didn't bother looking at him, because she knew she probably crack up.

Gaytari hit head.

G3 – "chup kar … or jaa kay shower karo." She said getting up and putting everything away. Prem smiled at heer while getting up.

G3 – "Heer tu kaam chord or jaa kay arram kar mein kar lati hoon."

Heer – "Nahi ma app rahney dhain mein hoon na." She said pulling g3 to them and making her sit.

Heer – "Ap araam Karin mein kar lati hoon." She said getting back to work. Prem smiled seeing the love for g3 in Heer.

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Prem – "HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEER" he said yelling from his room.

G3 – "Jayo beta mein sambaal leti hoon." She said while Heer was folding up cloths.

Heer – "Jii ma." She said getting up and leaving.

As soon as she entered her room, Prem pulled her by the waist and locked the door.

His hand around her waist, her back towards him and hands on his hands.

Prem – "Hello jii." He said kissing her cheek bone.

Heer pushed him away acting angry.

Heer – "Woh kya bool rahay thaay?"

Prem – "Kab?"

Heer – "Maa kay paas … bohat moti hoo gayi hoon?" she said placing her arms on her hips. Prem smiled putting his arms therw the space between her arms and wasit.

PRem – "Mazak kar raha thaa jaan." He said kissing the tip of her nose.

Heer – "Shirt tu pehan loo." She said notcing he wasn't wearing a shirt.

Prem – "Kyun meri biwi hooo." Heer rolled her eyes.

Prem – "Acha 6:00pm ready ho jana."

Heer – "tum pagal tu nahi hoo agar ma ko pata chal gaya kay hum raj bhahia kay ghar nahi ghain tu pata hai kya hoo ghaaa."

Prem – "Tu? … bus kah dein ghaay hum dono quality time spend karany ghaay thaay … or wasay bii nahi pata chalay ghaa … 2 din mein hum dono Pairs jaa rahin hain tu sab kuch teak rahaay ghaa."

Heer – "Kitnay din?"

Prem – "2 din."

Heer – "2 … are you serious … Meher kii birthday hai 3 dino mein."

Prem – "Haan tu kitnay saloon sey manati hoo ek miss karo ghee tu kya hoo ghaa."

Heer – "Prem come on you know I cant."

Prem – "Meher samaj jayay ghee." He said kissing her thoart.

Heer gave a weak smile because she didn't wana make Prem unhappy, he had been exicted for this trip since the 3rd week of their marriage and she wasn't going to ruin it, Meher would understand and Prem was right she spent a lot of birthdays with Meher and now Her belonged to this house, whatever happened in this house was more important, and she knew her and Prem needed some time away from all of the fuss, they needed to catch up and re – live their wedding so they would actually feel they were married and were a official couple instead of just 2 people living in the same room.

Heer smiled as Prem's lips touched her cheek.

Prem – "Acha meri blue shirt kahaan hai." Heer smiled and went to the cupboard.

Heer – "Yeh lo." She said handing it to him.

Prem smiled and took.

Heer watched him from the cupboard.

He was standing in front of the mirror doing his buttons, his hair looking like he just stepped out of movie shooting, face like always looking like a greek god, smile enchanted and beautiful, eyes sparkly and light brown and most of all the way he was, it was perfect and everything she dreamt of, he was her prince charming and she was his cindrella.

Prem notiched Heer lost in thoughts.

Prem – "Jaan kya hua?" he said snapping his fingers in front of her.

Heer – "Haan .. woh … kuch nahi." She said coming back to reailty.

Prem – "ACha woh Raj ney office bulaya hai koi important kaam hai … mein bus ek hour mein aa jayoon ghaa." Heer smiled and nodded.

Prem – "Kya hua? …" he said taking her face in his hands.

Prem - "Mein kal seey deeak raha hoon tum kitni udaas or upset lag rahi hoo … kuch hua … kisi ney kuch kaha … agar meiney kuch kiya tu …." Before he could finish Heer covered his mouth,

Heer – "Prem kuch nahi hua or tumney kuch nahi …mein bilkul teak hoon." She said smiling and removing her hand.

PRem – "Sure?"

Heer – "Haan baba … ab jayo." She said laughing slightily.

Prem – "Heer paka kuch nahi hua?" Heer looked at the way Prem was staring at her,

Both of their eyes locked.

Prem looking sad because he knew Heer was upset and Heer looking at him with a sad look … he cared for her so much, her smallest things would make him upset, her happiness was his happiness and she wasn't going to ruin that by telling him about the stupid letter, he knew things about her she never knew, her likes/dislikes, her favourites, her mood, her type of people, and most of all he was the only one who could read her face. Heer knew Prem would be worring why she was staring at her like that, she managed to give a smile.

Heer – "Prem tumhein kya lagta hain mein jhoot buloon ghee." She said smiling.

Prem – "Nahi woh jab tum upset hoti hoo tu mujhe bohat bura kagta hai."

Heer smiled as she tried to hold back the tears.

Heer – "Mein upset nahi hoon janu, or agar hoti bii sabsey pehlay tumhein batti naa." Prem smiled by looking at Heer being all cute.

Prem – "Pata hai." He said kissing her forehead.

Heer – "Ab jayo warna Raj bhai." She said looking serious. Prem smiled and nodded.

Prem walked past her but stopped at the door.

He came back and pushed Heer against the cupboard trapping her in his arms.

Prem – "Ek or baath." He said moving into her.

He moved closer and closer until their lips met. He placed her hand in his hair and one behind he back.

Prem – "LATE NIGHT." He whispered as soon as their lips broke apart.

Heer pushed him away. He lughed a bit leaving.

Prem – "Loveyouu jaan." He said from the door.

Heer smiled.

Heer – "Loveyou too … Pagal." She said smiling and getting back to work.

*Do tell me if you like them calling eachother Jaan/janu if not do let me know and I wont do it again .

* Also I want Loooonggg Comments for this upate guys … my hands hurt from typing it.

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Okay That's all for today guys

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Love Harsha

Edited by xoHarshaxo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hai hai!1
kya baat hai!!
late night! ;)
i hope prem comes across chudail veera's letter and gives her a gud scolding!
omg! what if Heer says the same to veera? that Veera is after Nihaal's money and doesnt love him??
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Posted: 15 years ago
late night "ahem ahem" kya baat hai ayysha really lovely and romantic update keep it up :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wonderful update. Heer should tell Prem about Veera's letter or Prem should find the letter. Plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
ayysha.. it was a romantic update... heer is really very upset.. how sad...
eagerly waiting for the late night....😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
*reserved*


*unreesrved*


amazing part Ayysha



stupid veera had 2 create problems



she can luv nihaal


but heer cant love prem



anyways thanx 4 the pm


update soon


Kamal
Edited by Kamal_23 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
ayysha.. it was a romantic update... heer is really very upset.. how sad...

eagerly waiting for the late night....
i prefer prem from heer's mouth
because the name prem had the magic
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Posted: 15 years ago
hii ayysha
awesome update
late night..............
nice
very romanatic update
hope dat in next update iss veera ka kuch so sake
well update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh AYESHA it wad awesome update dear 👏
prem is so funny WAIESE BHI MOTI HO GYI HAI 😆 LOL.......................
n late nighht haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ☺️
i m eagerly waiting 😳

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