|| J.T.O.D || Pg.145 {The.End} Feb.23.2010 - Page 72

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Posted: 15 years ago
I also waiting for the next part☺️
so romantic
tum itne acche ff likhteho kaise..................👏
update soon
Paddo
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Posted: 15 years ago
very romantic update.
🥳loved every bit of your writing.
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Posted: 15 years ago
whao................lovely ayesha it was gr8 awesome very romantic..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
Haye haye
I love when they callling them jaanu and jaan..
I missed in that in the serial too...
So cute..and caring

And let them go whereever they want and have a eaceful time plz..
When ever these couples get married they become busy and no quality time to spend with their partner.. Dont do this to them ...
Nice update and update the next part soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG Dii
loved it
awesome update
love the chemistry between them
and i love how u express their feelings!!!
and please make Heer tell prem the truth i don't want them seprating
thanks for the pm
pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
another great update.................⭐️...........👏..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
great update,
cnt wait fr the LATE NIGHT lol, 😉
bt i feel sry fr heer, shes so sad, i hope she tells prem bout the letter soon, or else........
lol, neways hope u continue soon
nd i prefer them calling prem and heer it sounds better, bt then thts my opinion, nd this is ur choice
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome loved it jst so romantic continue asap thanks for the pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful update........loved every premeer scene......really hope prem finds veera's letter and gives her a good telling off......update the next part soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey Guys

Thankyouu Soo much for all your comments really appricate them ... i am sorry i dont quote but i hate making a mess on this Topic it just pisses me off ... and plus i am kinda busy so never get time. Again as you know i am leaving and for all of The FF writers that i asked to PM please keep doing them and i will comment when i get back. Thankyouuu
Before i left i decided to do one more part so you wouldnt have to wait for the romance 😳.
Next Part
Prem - "Heeeeer" he said coming into his room and throwing the coat on the bed. Heer came out of the bathroom looking wet. Her hands had soap on them and her hair in a lose braid which kept bugging her.
Heer - "Haan? kya chila rahay hoo." she said seeming anoyed.
Prem - "Tum abhi tak ...." he didnt finish and just shook his head walking upto her. Prem hugged her from the back. Placing his hands around her wrist and walking towards the bathroom. He helped Heer wach her hands while he kept his hands around her wrist.
Prem - "Heer meiney kaha thaa na 6 bajay tayaar hoo jana."
Heer - "Prem pata hai kaam kitna thaa." she siad wiping her hands.
Prem - "Tu? ... yaar kitnay dino baad itna acha plan banya or tum hoo kaay...." he said shaking his head while he let go of her.
Both of them came out of the bathoom.
Heer - "Sorry Prem ... mein abhi ready hoo jati hoon." she said smiling.
Prem - "Jaldi karo yaar." he said sitting on the bed..
Heer picked a silver anarkali and matching jewellary going to the bathroom.
Prem waited for her to come out.

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Prem and Heer had left around 7:00pm. Gaytari was happy to see them spending time with eachother altought she felt like laughing at Prem's stupid plan.
Both of them went to a fancy resturant that Prem had booked for them.
Heer - "Prem chodo." she siad trying to get out of his grip as he hugged her from the back on the beach. Some girls and guys walked passed them giggling at their romance.
Girl - "Arrey bhai shab apni biwi kay saath romance akelay mein bii hoo sakta hai ... deko bechaari kasay sharma rahi hai." she said to Prem as He kissed Heer's cheek.
Heer turned bright pink hearing what the girl said.
Prem - "Haan liken iss taran zayada maza ata hai." he said yelling back. Heer hit him in the gut and pulled him to walk away. The group of teens laughed out loud.
Heer - "Prem sharam kiya karo." she said blushing madly.
Prem smiled pulling her by the waist to his side.
Prem - "Kyun kahnay doo joo kahna hai ... meri biwi hoo mujhe kuch nahi faraq pardta." He said kissing the side of her head.
Heer smiled putting her arms around Prem as both of them headed towards a ice cream stand,
Heer - "Prem ice cream ice cream." she said jumping up and down like a kid. Prem stared at her in shock.
She ate more then him at the resturat and she was still hungry. He frowned at her appitiate,.
Prem - "Chalo." he said walking towards the ice cream person.
Heer orderd a cookie dough while Prem ordered carmal vanilla.
Prem - "Heer araam sey kayo yaar." he said looking at the way she was eating.
Heer - "Prem ice cream kitni achi hoti hai na." she said smiling. Prem watched her eat with a cute smile and laughed a bit.
Prem - "Bohat achi." he said eating his ice cream.
Heer - "Prem bohat neead aa rahi hai chalin." she said yawing as they walked side by side on the beach.
Prem - "NEEAD? ... itni jaldi?"
Heer - "Haan ... chalo naa please." she said in a begging voice.
Prem - "Haan chalo." he said staring at her in a weird way.
As they drove Heer looked out the window and Prem still in thoughts, today after which felt like years they were alone and she was Sleepy ... how strange.
Prem didnt go home but instead the log house in Dheli.
Heer was surprised but didnt say anythign since it Was Prem ... thats what she could expect,
Prem already had her night cloths in the house, so she changed very fast. Prem also changed into a blue kurta.
When Prem was fixing the bed Heer watched him threw the mirror on the dresser and rememberd how she promised to make him happy and spend as much time with him as possible, and just because she was sleepy didnt mean she was going to ruin his mood.
She put down the comb and went to the bed, sitting down.
Prem - "Neead aa rahi thee naa ... sleep." he said looking sad.
Heer - "Ab neead nahi aa rahi."
Prem - "Haan sara mood karab karkay neead nahi aa rahi." he said closing the window since it was cold.
Heer got up and went to Prem putting her arms around him, He smiled and put his hands on her waist.
Heer - "Prem mood kasay karab hoo gaya tumney to kaha thaa hum ek saath time spend karin ghaay ... QUAILTY time." she said in a annoyed voice. Prem smiled and pulled heer to the bed.
Prem - "Heer mujhe pata hai tumhein neead aa rahi hai tum soo jayo ... mera mood karab nahi hua yaar .... tum soo jayo." he said making her sit on the bed.
Heer - "Prem mujhe neead nahi aa rahi."
Prem - "Heer tumhein jhoot nahi bolna ata ... ab soo jayo."
Heer - "Teeak hai." she said laying down and pulling him on the bed.
Heer - "Agar mein nahi awake rah sakti tu tum bii nahi." Prem smiled pulling her off the bed.
Prem - "Acha teeak hai ... agar sona nahi hai tu phir tumhien kya karna hai."
Heer - "Plan mera nahi tumhara thaa ... tum batyoo."
Prem - "Teek hai ... chalo baatein kartay hain." he said pulling her out of the room.

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Prem - "Nahi woh tu Preet ney kaha thaa." he said as Heer hit his chest.
both of them sitting on the swing outside. Prem laying down with his head in Heer's lap and her hands in his hair.
Heer - "Jhootay Preet ney mujhe batya thaa." she said pulling his hair.
Prem - "Acha joo bii ... mujhe ek baath batyoo ... poochon?"
Heer - "Kya?"
Prem - "Acha mein sooch raha thaa .... jab hamray bachay hoon ghaay hum unkay naam kya rakay ghain."
Heer - "Prem kuch dhoor kii nahi sooch rahay tum."
Prem - "Dhoor hoo yaa kareeb planing tu karni chiye,"
Heer - "Planning kay liye bohat time Papa jii." she said laughing.
Prem - "Heer i am serious."
Heer - "Prem come on, abhi kya planning karni hai ... abhi nahi bachay chiye yaar,"
Prem - "Kyun?" he said in shock.
Heer - "Prem abhi tu hamari shaadi hui hai abhi sey bachay."
Prem - "Abhi? matlab tumharay saath ek din pora saal lagta hai." he said trying not to laugh.
Heer - "Very funny." she said in a annoyance voice.
Prem - "Acha batyoo naa Heer ... tumhien kitnay bachay chiye?"
Heer - "three."
Prem - "BAS? itnay kam ... three yaar thats it?"
Heer - "Pagal tu nahi hoo ghay tum?"
Prem - "Tumharay saath rah kay ahi result milna thaa." Heer pulled his hair and hit his chest again.
Prem - "Heeeeeer."
Heer - "Preeeeeem." she said coping his voice.
Prem - "Acha Heer agar hamar beti hui tu uska naam kya hoo ghaa?"
Heer - "Prem mujhe iss baray mein baath nahi karni."
Prem - "Mujhe karni hai ... Heer hamary bachay hamray rishtay koo or strong karin ghaay ... tumhein bachay kyun nahi chiye?"
Heer - "Prem chiye naa ... liken abhi nahi ... 1 - 2 years atleast."
Prem - "Heer tum pagal tu nahi hoo kya?"
Heer - "Prem mujhe abhi nahi chiye yaar ... wasay bii jaldi kya hai."
Prem - "Mujhe ko papa nahi bulta iss baath ki jaldi hai."
Heer - "Teeak hai aj sey mein tumhein papa bulaya karroon ghee ... kush."
Prem - "Kyun meri biwi mujhe papa kyun bulay ... meray bachay honey chiye."
Heer - "Prem hoon ghaay patince."
Prem - "Whatever."
Heer - "Chalo ab mujhe bohat neead aa rahi hai." she said lifiting his head off of her lap.
Prem - "Chalo." he said seeming a bit upset after the talk they just had.
Both of them went inside and layed down.
Heer layed down first as Prem layed the blanket on top of her.
He went to the bathroom and when he came back Heer was already asleep.
He smiled getting on the bed and laying beside her, Prem kissed her forhead and hugged her wiast putting his head on her stomach.
Prem - "Heer hamary bachay zaroor hoon ghaay or dekna tumhein kkitni kushi hoti jab tumhein pata chalay ghaa tum maa banay wali hoo." he said kissing her cheekbone and slowly drifting to sleep, with his head on her stomach.

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Thats all guys =)
Edited by xoHarshaxo - 15 years ago

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