|| J.T.O.D || Pg.145 {The.End} Feb.23.2010 - Page 5

Hey awesome update
Ur ff is really cute
waiting for the next part

Recap - Heer wore Veera's cloths for the night and Veera showed her the room she was going to stay in for the 3 months. When Heer went to her room and was about to close the door she Prem down stairs laughing with Preet. Heer's thoughts "He has a cute laugh." With that she closed the door and layed on her bed thinking of idea's to avoid him. Suddenly she heard a knock on the door, it was Veera. She didn't come in she looked like she was in a hurry.

Veera – " Heer about an hour later can you come to my room I have to show you something … okay byee." Heer smiled and layed on her bed again.

Chapter 4

Veera – " Oh!! Woh Ek Pani KA Glass Be Ley Aanaa." She yelled going to to her room. Heer just closed her eyes and try to relax for the time she was Bandar. After like 59 mins she got up and went to the kitchen to grab a glass of water. The house was so big and it was hard to find Veera's room so she decided to check every room.

The first one she opened was a guest room. She opened a lot of rooms but couldn't find Veera's finally their was the last room which had to be Veera's. She slowly opened it. It was dark so it was really hard to see. She put the glass on a table and tried to look for some lights. When she bumped into something or someone.

Heer – "AHHHHH BOOOTTTHHHH" the person standing if front of her covered her mouth.

Prem – "Would you bequite …. I already have a head ache …. Seesch give me a break." He moved his hand away and turned on the lights. Heer was so angry to see who it was.

Heer – " What the hell are you doing here." She said in anger. Prem shocked to hear what she just said. This was his room why wouldn't he be here.

Prem – "You know what Ms.Flower you're the first person on earth to talk to me in such a rude way…. Oh wait I forgot that was a hobby of yours." Heer glared at him.

Heer – "Stop taking my word and don't call me Ms.Flower… I hate that name I like Heer." Prem raised her eyebrows.

Prem – "Ya yaa what ever anyways why do you follow me ….Bohat maza ata hay na mujhe follow karaney kaa …. Phelay Shop, Phir mera gharr or abb for god sakes my room what do you want from me Ms.Flower."

Heer- "Look you Bandar I am not stalking you…. And consider your self lucky I even talk to you." She said putting her arms across her chest.

Prem – " Ya lucky for having Ms.Flower following me every where."

Heer – " Wou know what Mr.Kismat …. Actually forget it talking to you is a waist of my good and prefect life." she said giving him a smile. Prem just raised his eyebrow.

Prem – " anyways what are you doing in my room."

Heer – " I was trying to find a bhoot and I succeeded …. Don't you think." Prem gave her a fake smile.

Prem – "By the way Heer is a really nice name… and it doesn't suit you." Heer got angry.

Heer – " I know it's a nice name why do you think I got it and …. Like I care about your decision." Prem just laughed and fell back on his bed taking a deep breath. Heer frowned and left the room.

Prem – "Arrey Ms.FLowe…. I mean Heer Meri baath suno." Heer stopped. Prem walked behind her and asked her to turn around. She turned around after having Prem plead her. When she truned around ….. Prem on purpose bumped into her and dropped the glass of water all of her cloths. Heer fumed in anger while Prem gave her a sorry smile."

Heer – "okay look here you Bandar …. I am gonna make you pay for this no matter what … and don't think just because your Veera's PB… I am gonna be all nice to you…. No every time you do something mean to me I will get payback you get that Mr. PREM JUNEJA OR SHOULD I SAY ….. NVM giving you nick names is just a waste of my time." With that she stomped out of his room. Prem smiled he had never seen a girl like her. Prem's thoughts " SO ms.Flower your staying here for 3 months… this is gonna be a fun vaction." He smiled and went to the bathroom.

Heer on the other hand found Veera's room.

Heer – "Your house is so damn large you should name the hall ways so nobody gets lost." Veera smiled and told her to sit down.

Veera – "Did you take a shower in your cloths or something?" she said handing her a towel.

Heer – "Nahi!! …. Liken wwoh jo tuhmara Bandar hain na us nay yeh sab kiya." Veera surprised.

Veera – " Kyun?? Tum dono ka abhi sey hi jagra ho gaya."

Heer – "Jagra to bohat door ki baath hai … uske kamray mein to war shure honay wali the." Veera smiled and took out something from her cupboard.

Veera – "Yeh Heer woh ma or PB tumharay liye Canada say lay kar aya thay." Veera handed heer a really nice sari. Heer totally shocked at hearing Prem brought this.

Heer – "Uff … gosh you have so much money you cant even afford a shirt … how sick go put on a shirt." Prem crossed his arms on his chest.

Prem – "first of all this Is my room and I can do anything I want in here… second who are you to come to my room and call me sick." Heer went inside his room without permission and threw a shirt at him. Prem put it on and faced her.

Prem – "Okay was there some more threatening left before you let me sleep. Heer gave a fake smile.

Heer – "Look I came here to be polite … so please don't get on my bad side."

Prem – "Heer has a bad side too …. Interesting." Heer glared at him.

Heer – "You know what I am just gonna ignore those comments from now on and try to enjoy my stay here."

Prem – "You know how to ignore people … interesting fact." Heer glared at him.

Heer – "Before I loose my self control I came to say … Th….Tha….Tha…Thanks." she finally blurted out. Prem smiled.

Prem – "Your welcome… for what exactally are you thanking me for."

Heer – "The sari…. And plus sorry for being mean to you." Prem smiled and walked close to her. Heer looked at him shocked. She could feel his breath on her face which made her a bit dizzy.

Prem – "See this is why they named you Heer …. This personality suites Heer… don't you think." Heer gave a fake smile.

Heer – "Don't get use to it …. This is the first and last time you'll see this side of me okay Mr.Prem….goodnight……Horrible dreams." She said and walked away. Prem smiling. He turned of the light off and layed in his bed thinking of Ms.Flower. Slowly the night drifted away.

Next Morning

Everyone was sitting on the dinning table enjoying their breakfast. Lalit was really impressed with Heer.

Lalit – "Prem to maray saath office jaa raha hai … Mumbai baad mein dek lena."

Preet – "Oh come on my chaand let PB have a break he always works … and gets chassed by girl let him be free today and dance the day away." Prem slapped him behind his head.

Prem –"Ya I can live my whole life with out (DANCING THE DAY AWAY)." Everyone laughed except for heer. Preet noticed that.

Preet – "Heer DI ….. Umm kya mein app ko Di bula sakta hoon."Heer smiled and nodded.

Preet – "Why don't you show us Mumbai … you probably know it well." Prem shot a look at Heer who had a fake smile on her face.

Gayatari – "Haan Beta tu Prem or Preet kay chaly jana …. Veera ko be lay jana or Veera bol rahi thee aj tum dono nay collage bi nahi jana." Heer wanted to rum out of this house right at this moment she couldn't spend a day with someone who is the last person she will ever have fun with. But she knew she couldn't refuse so she just nodded and looked down at her plate. Prem smiled and thought about the fun he was gonna have today. He looked at heer who met his. Her eyes could tell she was angry which made Prem smile.

Veera – "I am sorry ma main nahi jaa sakti … wooh actually kya hai na mujhe aj sapna kay saath … todi shopping karni hai… Heer ki to iske Bhai dheli sey kar kay aa rahay hain so she can go with PB and PReet bhai." Heer wanted to stab Veera right now how was she gonna spen a whole day with these two alone. Preet she didn't mind but Prem. She shivered just thinking about what was gonna happen today.

Here are the outfits

Heer's Outfit (actually Veera because heer has none)

Prem's Outfit

Thats all the outfits i care about :D

* if you want me to show everybody else please let me know:)

That's it for Today everyone…hope you enjoy it and Please do comment or press the like button if you Had fun reading this.

Thankyou

Love - Ayysha

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very nice

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Hi ayysha
amazing update.love the way how premeer talk with each other.
aww & their nicks r soo sweet.
wait 4 the next update asap.
luv
Fatima

mera!

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a-w-s-o-m-e.....great loving prem and heer's tiny tiny arguements after all that is what will bring them together eh? 😆

and now heer is stuck with showing him around town!

great update do very so continue soon

-aashifa-

nice update
can't wait to read more...
prem preet nd heer all day
plzz update soon nd pm me

Hey,

*speechless*
continue asap
loved premeer scenes!!!!!
please pm me when u update

Thankyou Everyone I will try to continue but i am really sick so i'll see when i can next update