Baawrey Naina...PH sagayi One shot...Part 5....Pg6 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg!superb..⭐️shot.. 😍

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ohh my god i just start reading it n i really liked it...
ur shots r just superb..!!
do continue soon...
waiting for u r nexr asap...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23
toooooooooooooo good yar continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx a tonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn all of u for sending in ur valuable comments..................😊
Here's a next short part...............😊
Its sometime late in the afternoon by the time Prem and heer finish shopping…………and Prem walks after the two of them to the parking lot………….there he stands by the driver seat and opens the door for Geet to get in (like a true gentleman!)…………Heer watcheces somehow feeling envious as she remembers how Prem had made her sit in the car the day she was getting drenched in the rain and dropped him home………… 👏 Geet smiles and sits n the car happily……….Prem closes the door………..there Heer herself sits inside and as geet stares lovingly at prem………..who inturn gazed at geet………….like the two were lost in their own world………….. 😆 Heer looks at them amazed…………..she says loudly trying to break the one sided spell kyunkii Prem toh was doing it on purpose---- GEET………..CHALEIN!?................. 😆 Geet looks away from Prem saying--- Haan?...........haan chalo……….she starts the car when prem says--- geet…………vo……….in case u don't mind kya main abhi shaam ko tumhey leney aa saktaa hoon…………kaheen leyjaana tha tumhey…………. Heer looks shocked at prem……………. Geet replies--- Haan theek hai………..pick me up at 5 I will be ready………….BYE! Prem waves his hand saying--- Bye Geet…………Bye………..Heer………… 😳 Heer looks up at prem and manages a slight smile………..and the two drive away as an excited prem makes his way to the Juneja house to tell everyone what had happened!..................

Kaisa laga?😊
Jaldi batao..............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25
nice part but short part
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz frnd update a big part with lots of premeer scenes
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz frnd
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26
it was sweet..
Prem has really become naughty he is teasing Heer so much...
but i really like this Prem......waiting for next part....
plz post it ASAP....


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome part...but was short...its ok...
update soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28
nice part spl.
PREMEER scenes😳
update it soon😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
nice part...wat is prem upto..wohoo
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Posted: 16 years ago
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THANX A TONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN once again to all of u for reading..............liking..............and replying..............😊
Here's the next part...............
Hope u enjoy this one too and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do send in ur valuable comments......................😊
Its evening.........Prem gets ready..........in a black suit...........looking............well..........handsome like always..........U see him going down the stairs..........ino the hall............where he hears Preet calling out--- Arrey Prem bhaiyaa kahaan chaley?.............
Prem stops midway...........turning around to see Preet and Gaytri looking at him..........Preet standing behind gaytri winks at him............
Prem gives him--TUJHEY TOH MAIN DEKH LOONGA LOOK...........as gaytri asks him--- Kahaan jaa raha hai itni jaldi mein prem?...........
Prem replies--- Woh maa.........Geet...........geet ko leney..........mainney sochaa aaj ussey kaheen ley jaaon..........aggar aap kahein toh...............
Preett replies--- Aggar aap kahein toh?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pehley toh bataaya nahiin aur abb jab maa ne rangey haathon pakad liyaa toh............MAA AAGAAR AAP KAHEIN TOH?!!!!!!!!!!!😆
Prem glares at Preet as gaytri says--- Kyun ched raha hai apney bhai ko?..........Prem betaa tu jaa............aaraam se ghoom kar aana..........theek hai.............😃
Prem nods ...........smiles and leaves from there as Preet stops as he sees gaytri go to his room..............whispering in hisear--- Ghoomney kaun kambakht jaa rahaa hai...........yahaan tooh koi kisi ko jalaaney jaa rahaa hai............kyun sahi kaha naa?............
Prem leaves saying--- Time hotaa toh tujhey bataataa..........tujhsey abb baujii hii nipatt leigey...............
Prem leaves from there all smiles...............
Prem picks up Geet from her hous who had told Heer she would be back at her place in an hour .............
There its sometime late in the evening............Heer was moving restlessly from one end of the room to the other............nearby Chahat was busy doing her homework..........she sees her mom restless isliye she says--- Mamma........... Chahat kab se dekh rahii hai...........aap iss kamrey ke itney saarey chakkar kaat chukii hain.............Kya hua aapko kisi kaa wait hai?.............😊
Heer says-- haan betaa..........aapki Geet maaci aaney waali hai naa...........mummy unheen kaa wait kar rahii hain.............
Heer calls up at Juneja house...........where evryone was expecting Heer to call.........and they all...........Preet...........Lalit...........Harman..........were seated arounf the phone table..........
Preet was telling Lalit an instant ago--- Yeh kya baujii bhabhi ka phone toh aaya hii nahiin!.............
Just then the phone rang and Lalit had looked triuphantly at preet who picked the phone--- hello.......kaun?
Heer says--- Woh........Preet.........main bol rahii hoon..........Heer..........
Preet says--- jii boliye kya hua...............
Heer was taken aback a little as she had expected Preet to say---haan boliye bhabhi kya hua?............
Heer hides her surprise saying--- Woh.........Geet...........Prem...........Geet ne kahaa tha thodi derr mein aa jaayegii..........abhi tak aayi nahiin...........Prem laut aaya?...........😳
Preet found it hard to curtail his happiness at the concern heer was showing for Prem and he says winking at lalit and harman--- Prem bhaiyaa toh Geet BHABHI ke saath gaye hai naa...........aa jaayeigey..........aap chintaa matt keejiye............😆
Preet keeps the phone down abruptly which surprises Heer.............slowly............Heer began to realise................sadly that after Prem's marriage with Geet she was going to loose.............all her relations in one go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Heer has tears in her eyes as she realises the hurting fact...............😕
Kaisa laga?😊
Jaldi batao...............😊
This one's not too long..............lekin the next par will be long pukka....................😊

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