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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx prempadmasujal ...........Glad u found it cute dear.............next part asap.............😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow awesome.....👏 👏 👏
loved it..
plz post next part ASAP......
m desperately waiting to know wht r Prem plan😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Its a scene in the market...........

Prem is in the shop for more than an hour.........waiting for Heer to come............

He is talking to the shopkeeper telling him--- ap samajh gaye naa kya karnaa hai?.............

The shopkeeper nods his head in agreement..........whe Prem sees heer coming in the shop...........Kis desh title track plays as Prem keeps on gazing at heer in the green blue saree............with that naughty smile on his face...........😳

There outside just as Geet is about to park the car and go inside...........Preet stops her saying--- arrey bhabhi aap yahaan?...........Achcha hua aapp mil gayi............maa ne kaha tha aapko saariyon kii dukaan par lejaanaa hai............😊

Geet says-- lekin Prem mera intezaar kar raha hoga ............jweller ke paas...........(jisska Prem ko intezaar tha Ms. Geet woh wahaan pahonch gayi hai!)................

Preet says--- Arrey bhabhi bas thodi derr lagegi hum bhaiya ko phone kar deinge..........

Geet nods her head and Preet takes her to a shop across the road............👏

There inside..........u see Prem in the showroom turns around just as he sees heer coming in............

The shopkeeper says--- Sir..........maam aa gayi............

Prem is all smiles as he says turning around--- kitni derr lagaa dii Geet...........main kab sey...........(he stops midway and his smile vanishes! when he sees it was Heer!..........nautankii karwaa lo prem se!)............wait kar raha hoon!..............(he completes his sentence)..............😆

Heer steps forward ...........fumbling--- Woh prem...........Geet..........geet abhi aati hii hogii...........car park..............

Prem smiles and says--- Kuch nahiin hota...........(Prem's hone rings)...........haan bol preet?..........Kya?...........Arrey yaar tujhey pataa hai meri meeting hai..........main already late ho raha hoon............achcha theek hai jaldi aao.............😉

The shopkeeper asks him-- kya hua sir?...........

Prem replies-- woh actually............actually .............my brother has taken my would be to the shop next door.............ussey thodaa time lagegaa............aur............

Hearing prem calling geet badeyy hii pyaar se geet his WOULD BE............makes Heer stare at prem sternly............who turns around and notices his jaadu working on Heer (Prem's Spell!)..............😳

The shopkeeper says--- Jab tak woh aati hain aap kuch designs dekh leejiye..........

Prem nods his head and Prem and heer together start seeing the designs of rings...........Prem selects a beautiful diamon studded gold ring..........and sees it lovingly............

the shopkeeper says--- Sir this one is a new design...........aap..........aap inhein pehnaa kar dekh leejiye...........(he says indicating to heer)...............😊

Prem looks at heer............who stood stunned ..............

Prem brings forward his hand...........Heer didn't know what to say...........there were sooooooooooooo many people around..............what would they tihnk?.............

KISNA THEME plays in the background as heer..........move her hand upwards..........straight into Prem's hands...........and ...........well.............prem who gives his million dollar naughty smile............THIS IS WHAT I WANTED look...........puts the ring into the ring finger...............😳⭐️

The shopkeeper says--- PERFECT MATCH SIR!..............

Prem stares at the man thinking--- Yeh toh mainney nahiin sikhaaya tha?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆

There Geet enters in the shop too.............while Preet took her leave............Kyunkii prem had warned preet to do only that much jitnaa ussey kahaa gayaa tha............Prem knew heer would sense something fishy jab preet won't be able to control his smile..........his emotions...........his happiness in front of her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Geet walks upto where Prem and heer stood and looks at the ring as she sees Heer fiddlig to take it off...........as Prem looked on smiling knowingly............

Geet says-- Arrey rheney de naa Heer..........yeh teraa tohfaa ho gaya............

Heer says—lekin geet yeh teri sagaayi kii anghooti hai………..

Geet replies coolly—Arrey toh kya hua……….sagaayi hui toh nahiin hai naa…………aur abb tu yeh sab chod………..mere liye koi aur ring pasand kar………………

Heer then says angrily---Kitni derr lagaa dii............

Kis desh title track plays as u see prem all smiles............as he sees how Heer had made the ring PRICELESS by wearing it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx dear............Glad u liked it...........Next part is already up................😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
awesome......
very good....
waiting for next part........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
This is awesome😊
Keep updating.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
very nice update.. loved reading it..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
awesome
continue soon
pm me when u update!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
awesome,very good,
plzz update more cute and romantic scenes btwn premeer
update next part asap
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz frnd

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