Heer forgives prem.......(my scene one short)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hiiiiiiiiiii this is y first ever one short so if i do any mistake then plz forgive me:P
after the shiv mandir scene
Prem was totally heart borken and heer's word's was running in his mind again and again
''kosti hoon us din ko jab mein tum se milly,kosti hoon apni aap k mein ne tum se pyar kiya''
(sorry bad hindi)
here in shiv mandir heer was crying holding the statue of shiv jee
''bhale he mujhe prem pe bharosa nahi per uski ankheen,uski ankheen kabhi jhoot nahi bol sakte
aaj uski ankhoon mein woh dard hai jo kabhi mere ankhoon mein tha uski ankheen kabhi dukha nahi de sakte per agar ye sab usne nahi kiya tu pher,per uske siva aur kon karsakta hai ye sab,kyun kar raha hai woh ye sab,aab aap hi mujhe raasta dekhayen kya jhoot hai aur kya sach''
here prem is walking in the road all premeer moment and shiv mandir scene was running in his mind he didnt hear the horn of the car and car hit him prem shouted
Heerr........................
in shiv manfir heer hear prem's voice and run towards the road
and saw prem is lying on the road and blood is comming all over from his head heer shouted
prem...........................
and run towards him she put prem's head in his lap
''prem tum theek tu ho prem ankheen kholo dekho tumhari heer tumhare pass hai prem ankheen kholo''
tears were commig from her eyes prem open's his eyes and saw heer infornt of him crying prem smilies and say's
''mujhey pata tha tum ayo gi heer,heer tum mujhe se pyaar karti hoo na karti hoo na''putting his hand
on heer's face
''haan pem mein tum se bhuhut pyaar karti hoon''
then prem fill's heer's mang with his blood heer was totally shocked
''mujhey maaf kardo heer mein tum se vaada karta hoon jo khalati mujhe se anjaney mein howi hai woh mein wapis kabhi nahi karo ga plz heer plz mujhe maaf kardo inn 6 saalo mein ek pal ek waqt asa nahi guzra jab mein ne tumharey barey mein nahi socha us raat k baarey nahi socha hamesha apni aap ko kosta raha ke mein ne tumhare zindagi barad kardi plz heer plzzzz muhey maaf kardo''
by saying this he closed his eyes
and when he open his eyes he was in hospital and saw heer holding his hand sitting beside him
''heer''
heer to prem
''prem tum theek tu ho na''
prem was about to say something heer put her hand on his mouth
''plzz prem kuch maat kaho ye sab mere waja se howa hai plzzzz mujhey maaf kardo mein ne tumhey tumharey anjaney mein kigaye ek ghalti ki saza 6 saal tak deti rahi aur tumharey beeti tumharey chahat se dur rakha plzz mujhey maaf kardo prem plzzzzzzzzzzz hum pher se apni naye zindagi shuro karey ge apni chahat k sath ''
prem heer hug each other a tight hug and both were crying
kis desh tittle song in the backround
and now heer prem trying to find out that woh sent them hat costody papper's then then some how gaya3's and ash's truth come out
X............................................X
hope u all like it my first ever short😃
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Innocent02 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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good one 👍🏼
Edited by Innocent02 - 16 years ago
fungrl thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice, I do want Heer and Prem to become Jassos and find out the truth😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i was just wondering Prem should actually pretend to commit suicide and tell Heer if you dont come i will kill myself and i'm sure Heer will come and say i love you and forgive him.. they hug and have emotional cry..
esha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hehehe..........nice one............👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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GOOOOODDD
you should do a sequel to this where Prem and Heer find out who sent the custody paper and while finding that out you should make ash's truth come out!!!! (JUst my thougt)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome yaar, very nice... good one.. i just love it...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey great job yaar👏

mere paas bool ne ka word nehi hain k kitna achaa banaya hain.muuaaaah.🤗

i really hope it happens 😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: hreeyaa

hey great job yaar👏

mere paas bool ne ka word nehi hain k kitna achaa banaya hain.muuaaaah.🤗

i really hope it happens 😍

thanks alot ria thanks alotttttttttttttt
it mean's alot to me😃😃

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