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Posted: 16 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

its great plz do continue...................plz add me to ur pm list<br>



well thnk u so much...........n okie i will add u.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Momana

it's great plz continue <br>



thnks n i will.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13


Thank u once again...........n i will definately PM as soon as i updt..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
heyy Rheaa, wussupp 😃
againn thanx for the pm
hmmmm.....what an interestingg startt !!!!! i must sayy
so0o its Meher...and ...Sameer ..lolll
i was like whoaa, im guessin Rhea has somethin veryy good in store for uss 😉😆
buhh im glad dat Meher feels dat sumthn aint right 😃
hayeee rabba ab toh meinn bass Preet ka wait kari hoon ...lmao
cant wait till u havee the nextt updatee posted.....plzz hurryy !!!!! lol
luv Rumsha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was awesome jst loved it plzzz continue soon and add me yur pm list
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: karannandani

it was awesome jst loved it plzzz continue soon and add me yur pm list <br>



im glad tht u did......i will do it whenever i get tym........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: pRinc3ssRZxJT

heyy Rheaa, wussupphi rumsha everythings cool yaar... 😃

againn thanx for the pm
ur welcum😊
hmmmm.....what an interestingg startt !!!!! i must sayy,
well thank u
so0o its Meher...and ...Sameer ..lolll
😉
i was like whoaa, im guessin Rhea has somethin veryy good in store for uss 😉😆
i surely do😛😛😛
buhh im glad dat Meher feels dat sumthn aint right 😃

hayeee rabba ab toh meinn bass Preet ka wait kari hoon ...lmao
😆😆😆
cant wait till u havee the nextt updatee posted.....plzz hurryy !!!!! lol
i haven't written d nxt prt as yet,bt as soon as i do i'll PM u
luv Rumsha

thanks once again!!


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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
ooh that was really good- i loved the cliff hanger!!! continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: tadashi

ooh that was really good- i loved the cliff hanger!!! continue soon!



hey thnks yaar......i wil as soon as i get tym........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part- 2

Flashback:

It was about to get dark and she came out of the college building'wearing a white salwar kameez with a red dupatta, looking towards the sky, bringing her brows together turning her angelic face into a troubled one''

"Late hogai'. lagta hai baarish hone waali hai''oh no mere paas toh umbrella bhi nahi hai'..hey bhagwan mere hostel pahuchne tak barish rok lena please''.",she said to herself''..

The girls hostel was in the lane parallel to the college..about 10 min walk'.

Walking quickly towards her hostel, looking around anxiously, she looked serene and beautiful..

She had just reached the end of the road when a group of boys in a jeep started following her.


"Aur madam kahan jaa rahi hain itni raat ko akele akele'",said one of the boys

"Arre dekhiye naa baarish bhi hone wali hai'",said another boy

"Kaho toh hum aapko drop kardein?", said the first boy

"Dekho mera peechha karna bandh karo warna'..", she said

Another boy was sitting at the back seat smoking a cigarette totally lost and unaware of his surroundings'..


"Abey Vicky gaadi rok''",said the second boy

He stopped the car with a shriek''


"Haan toh kya keh rahi thi kya karengi", he said this taking a step towards her

"Mere'Mere paas mat aana tum'.",she said retreating backwards

"Achha"(taking another step towards her,and giving a devilish smile)

"Abey Raj chhod bahot darr gayi hain'''''",said Vicky grinning.

Suddenly it started pouring heavily and she took that moment and dodged him and made an attempt to run from there''..


"Oy Vicky,pakad usse''."exclaimed Raj

Panting she made her way towards the back of the car, bumping into what seemed like a very strong wall,or no wait was it a person''..

She had her eyes closed and did not dare to open them''..

The third guy, who had no clue about the world till this moment, stood there transfixed, staring at the lone figure in front of him ''

Gathering some courage she slowly opened her eyes'..Blinking a few times to clear her blurred vision she found herself staring at a pair of dark brown hazel eyes'''..


Present:

"Ab dulha-dulhan ek dusre ko var maala pehnaayenge'''.",said the priest

"Meher..Meher", said Heer,bringing her out of her trance''..

"Haan"

"Sameer ko yeh varmala pehnao", she said while handing her the garland of flowers''''''..

"Itni aasani se nahi bhabhi", said one of Sameer's friends while pulling Sameer backwards''.

"Haan,sameer naak mat katwana", yelled someone from the bottom of the stage''..

"Abey nahi yaar itni mushkil se toh shaadi ke liye maani hai kahi apna mind change na karle" , he said and bowed his head in front of her allowing her to put the maala around his neck'.

"Yeh hui na gentleman waali baat" , said Heer

"Tu,toh abhi se joru ka ghulam ban gaya,Sameer" , said Prem(Heer's husband)'''..

After exchanging the garlands they were being clicked''..

"Maam thoda smile,and thoda upar dekhiye" , said the photographer

Click


"Sir thoda madam ke kareeb aaye aur apna haath unke shoulder pe rakh dijiye"

Click

"Sir ab aap madam ko peeche de pakadye"

"Nahi sir thoda right ki taraf"

"Yeh theek hai", Sameer asked

"Haanji'Bas hold'chodiyega mat"

These words took her back to the same night that had changed her life''''

Flashback:


"Preet,usse chhodna mat", yelled Raj


P.S.:How was it??Do comment and let me know...........
Edited by Rhea_401 - 15 years ago

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