||Ansoo Chura Loon||Oneshot Prem Heer & Chahat - Page 2

I demand a sequel! 😉 That was great! Loved it dear. the emotions were so raw and well portrayed to the readers. Great job. Hope to read more from you in the future.

its really nice........very well written..................love it

Originally posted by: fungrl

so heartbreaking, it made me sad poor Prem and Heer and now bicahri chahat had to suffer b/c of Gundi mom😭😭😭

Thank You so much! I know I hate Gayatri! Btw I like the nickname you gave her, gundi mom! Thank you for reading this!

Originally posted by: buttercup123

Awwwwww........................really I was literally crying😭 by all the emotions you described in your one-shot!Really,your one-shot was AWESOME!You're an excellent writer!

Thank you Jasmine!!! I m sorry i made you cry!!! Thank you for reading it!

Originally posted by: cute_bear

this is too gooddd

loved it

Thanks!

Originally posted by: crosby

that was realllii gud

full of emotion 😃

Thank you!!!

Originally posted by: *|Heena|*

Aww that was defintely a tear jerker...that was wonderful to read you should write some more

Thank You heena! I m glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

hey
nice one -shot
emotional

Thanks Pooji!!!

Originally posted by: angel82

wow beautifully written....it was heartwrenching but written very well....do write more....

Thank you! I m glad you liked it!!!! Thank you once again!!!

VERY BEAUTIFUL SHOT........................ u had wrtn very well, u clearly descirbes heer n chaht's luv towrds each othr n prem's luv towards his dear wife

Originally posted by: premeer928

hey
that was so emotional...poor chahat...😭 but it was amazingly written...loved how prem took chahat back to heer...awesome...👏




love
Afreen

Thank you afreen!!!!!I know! I love Prem! He cares for everyone he loves! even if that brings tears to his own eyes! Thank you for reading it!

Originally posted by: ash08

Very beautifully written. You have a way with words dear. I totally loved it.

You should write a sequel to it with Heer stopping Prem from going away.

Love,
Ash

Thank you ash!!! Sequel, I ll have to try that! I have never done that before! But I m glad you liked it!!! Thank you!!!

Originally posted by: amu142

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...............Mahrukh...did i tell u , that ur an amazing writer....all ur OS hv been amazing...this one was brilliant...keep up the good work

and oh yes/....a sequel please!!😉

Amu!!! Thank you!!!!!! I m soo happy you liked it!!!! Sequel? Lemme try? But i m not any good at it? So I ll try one sometime:) I so glad you liked it!! Thank you!!!

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

I demand a sequel! 😉 That was great! Loved it dear. the emotions were so raw and well portrayed to the readers. Great job. Hope to read more from you in the future.

Maddy

Hey Maddy!!!! Lol, I shall try to come up with a sequel!!! Thank you for liking it so much!!!! I I shall try and write more!! Thank you for reading it!!!!

Originally posted by: nuptalie

I love it.

Thanks!!! I m glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: -fsn-

its really nice........very well written..................love it

Thank you!! I m glad you liked it!!! Thank you!