FF*ll Meri Kahanill* part 4a(heer's POVupdatedPg11

alisha Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Kamal_23
Loved it great chapter its really nice how u put it in both heer and prem's POV
Update really soon

Kamal😃

thank you soo much for liking it!!!!

i'll try to update soon!!!

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stunninstar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

alisha...u r writin an ff??...n never bothered to tel me????????

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alisha Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: stunninstar
alisha...u r writin an ff??...n never bothered to tel me????????

umm sandy di.. its was juss for fun i wrote it... and its not really nice.... soo thts why 😊 well now yuh know it... read and comment eheh

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alisha Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: tadashi
can you addd some meet scenes?

ummmmmmm.. but i m writing this from prem's and heer's perspective.. i don't think i can add meet scenes... but i'll try!!!!!or i'll another one from theirs POV!!!

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Riya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

awesoem update

continue asap

can't wait to read more

please update asap

thanks for the pm

pm me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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alisha Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: curledup
mera!

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Liked the way prem said he was unsure why he said tasty apple cheek but still did!!.....Loved his whole POV!!
rocking update!!

-aashifa-

Thnxx aashifa for liking it 😊

Ya and he didn't know why he said why.. but it juss came out .. he felt that and couldn't control himself from spilling the beans 😉😆

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alisha Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: 9rpatel
awesoem update
continue asap

can't wait to read more

please update asap

thanks for the pm

pm me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hank you !!!! for liking.. i will update as soon as possbile

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Parisa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#68

Hey i liked it it was very GOOD

please pm next time whenever you update

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alisha Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#69

Heer's Pov part 4 (a) Precap :

I smiled at his statement and looked down ... he then put his fingers on my chin and brought my face up and said , " Tum meri jaan ho Heer!! .. Meri zindagi ho Jab tak mein zinda hoon... tumhe ghum.. dukh ki parchayi choo bhi nahi sakti.. tumhare liye mein iss jamane se lad jaaonga heer... lekin tumhe martey dum tak nahi chodoonga....

His this saying brought tears on mah eyes.. i didn't believe the guy i met just yesterday loves me soo much,"tum mujhse itna pyaar kartey ho prem..inta jyaada! kyun prem ... Inta pyaar kyun.. may karo itna pyaar .. I said this to him but i think i said something wrong , it brought tears in prem's eyes and wiped it and said,," mukjhse tumse pyaar karne se rokne ka matlab hain.. mujhe jeene se rokna.. mujhe saans lene se rokna,,,tum mujhe yesa karne sre toh nahi rok sakti naa.. toh tumse pyaar karne se kaise rok sakti ho ..

hey guyss me back... please say me how is the precap.....

thnxx