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@lovely_lady

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Posted: 15 years ago

#521

hey jaz =)

okay so, i read this update on dec 27..

but apparently i didnt comment??

sorry about that, here it is:

okay, so when heer woke up all alone, i was confused..

where was prem??

and then slowly as she remembered everything and raced down and saw prem, my heart stopped..

when she touched prem and everything, it was so beautiful!!!

i could imagine everything happening. *sigh*

and when the brotheres came and prem stopped them, i was like hai, prem cares so much about heer..

and well, i guess prem was wrong in talking to the brothers like that, but he didnt know the truth, so i guess he was justified..

and even now, a teeny-tiny part of me still blames those brothers for prem-heer seperation..

i mean they stabbed him, the last thing they could do was to call someone or something..

seriusly, the guy could've died..

but coming to saving prem, i love the singh family, well the ff wali, not the show wali..

the way they adopted prem and made sure he had everything he needed was really sweet..

and i loved the little tidbits u gave us about the relationship prem shared with manmeet and priya..

manmeet was exactly like preet =)

the shararat and everything..

RIP preet..

anyways, and then when prem remembered everything, i was like YES!

now he will come back to heer =)

speaking of which, i really like how she's more alive..

and wow, that was a really brilliant plan regarding preet mehta, lawls..

balraj got conned..

and wow, u mean teji was the one who had everything??

wow, balraj is a loser..

his own wife, who gave him everything, and he made his sons do something horrible, just to save her life..

disgusting man..

anyways, i loved the way teji blasted balraj..

a mother relly is strong..

anywways, waiting for the epilouge..

oh yea, GREAT UPDATE =)

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diana

@hooman

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Posted: 15 years ago

#522

Hey Jaz,

A-w-e-s-o-m-e update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved every part of it. My eyes were glued to the lappy screen!!

You did total justice to the story Jaz, every part was written and explained very well, especially this part. Good job! *Give yourself a pat on the shoulder*

I must say that Prem is very lucky to have met Mr and Mrs Singh who welcomed him into their family and treated him like their own son. Also very sporting of them to support Prem in his time of need and help him take revenge.

Another thing that I must highlight is Teji. You go woman!! I love the way she told her husband (good for nothing) off and told him to get out. He totally deserved it. Being away from his family, then only he'll realise their worth. Useless bugger!

Now to the happiest past in this chapter, Heer and Prem together at last. *sigh* They are so made for each other types that its totally wrong if they are separated. Another part that was my favourite was when Prem kissed Heer in front of the whole family. Cheers for that. Way to go Prem, well done!!

And now to the sad part, THE END!! What do you mean by that? Just when the story was at the climax point, THE END!! *Wiping my tears with my imaginary dupatta*

Well at least you mentioned that you are going to write an epilogue, so i'm waiting eagerly for that. Oh ya before I forget, I have a request. I want or rather request that the epilogue be filled with romance. In other words a totally MUSHED filled epilogue. I mean come on, Prem and Heer were separated and pining for each other for so many years..try and understand!! (I'm being totally shameless, but I guess you're used to it by now)

So till the epilogue,

Take care,

Nadia

P.S. Write the (mushy) epilogue real soon!

P.P.S. Happy New Year!

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Mehak

@--Mehak--

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#523

hey jazz,

I read whole of your ff...seriously you left me speechlesss⭐️⭐️⭐️

It is just mindblowing, fantabulous and the way you decribed everything is just outstanding!!

Keep up your work!! and your latest update was simply outstanding!!👏👏👏

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Maheen

@sweet_gurl93

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#524

hey
just finished reading the few chapters that i missed, and i must say fabulous job, really loved prem's entry in the whole scene, it was just wow!! lol, and i became extremely happy that heer got her prem back!!
the flashbacks were awesome, really loved the whole detail about how prem recovered and then started living with the Singh family, it was very nice, esp the brotherly and sisterly love that prem manmeet and priya shared, it was very cute... i am soo glad that balraj was finally shown his place by the end of the story, he totally deserved that, and im soo glad that his wife showed his place to him, that was totally in his face scene lol, im also happy that prem easily forgave heer's brothers, that was nice, the ending was totally touching but i think it would have been nicer...lol...if your willing to 😊
overall, awesome story, really loved the concept and all, very emotional
xx

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Dolly

@kptl

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#525

dotn end this ff😭 luvd it plz carry on..i wanna more and cant wait till next update so.. plz no epilogue wanna more prts...to it.....this is da first time i read ur update and after finishing first prt i couldnt stop my self from reading more and more and now i wanna more cant wait.....it was superb and awesome...it made me cry like i was experiencing.....⭐️

Edited by kptl - 15 years ago