New SS: Tanhai Part 9 pg69 Dec 27 - Page 51

sorry for the caps..and the reserved spot once again...i will surely come back to this one..i am truly very sorry! don't worry i'll explain everything too! its just its almost 4 am and im super exhausted from the RIS conference! so how about i come back..i'll unreserve both comments..(i know sorry...im kaan-pakering like there's no 2moro! but i couldn't help it..i HAD to read this part! trust me u don't understand cuz ur the writer...like..its ur own pro skill.....i know how much i've been waiting and how badly i HAD to read this part!!!!!!!! sorry api )

i'll unreserve soon!

love

SB :D (PB, MB, SB!! wow...im in a clan of stars :D)

**edited**

oyee balle balle....dhol bajao, bhangra pao...SB is back to unreserve!! (well this should actually be ur line..but it's kk.....i'm sure i'm voicing ur opinion appropriately!)...kk so in case i haven't ranted enough....i shall start again....2moro i have to go to school to get exam marks for first semester (please pray!) and then thursday second semester starts, and then friday a crucial part of my life ends!...so all in all.....evereything's in worst timing than ketan wen he exposed the restaurant fiasco!!!! LOL....uff...the more i talk bout Desh the sadder i get (is sadder even a word??)

kk so i hope i can live up to my blab bout this maha lamba comment....!

hmmmm.....wht do i say....i feel like a moron! well of course for unreserving after a looooooonnnnnnnnnnngg time (i look back, and i honestly have no explanation as to why i procrastinated this for so long! i've lost track of time even!), but more so for this comment i left earlier where i was being all philosophical and saying how this ff is bout heer's tanhai....blah blah! at tht point i was nearly gonna give up my hopes on prem's return....and remember...nearly....not completely....but nearly 😃 pshhtt....LMAO at that.......heer's tanhai!! LOL! but still......for the most part, heer was tanha during this ff, with her prem's yaadein! but one thing i loved about this ff is how u described family relationships really well! heer hating on her brothers was completely justified, but so was her forgiveness! not only that, but i simply adored prem and his chutki's relationship! i'm a die-hard fan of saali-jiju relationships!!! i love my bro-in-law tonzz!!!! and i think i've mentioned before...but at times..the love he showers on me (i.e. gifts, money...😆) is far better than what my sister does for me! LOL!! i'm glad even maya and her chuha had a relationship...LOL!! that surely cracked me up!! it was nice to see tht heer's not alone in the family remembering her prem, other ppl also respected/respect her hubby and her feelings towards him 😳

what else was soo wonderful! ballu getting kicked out! (wait it was ballu right...or lallu.....i think it was ballu😕) so yea....ballu's departure was one i'll never miss......same as g3's departure from desh (i couldn't help laughing at how well the picnic went widout her! LMAO) honestly......i'm glad u showed this cruel side of relationships too! some ppl are pure evil without an explanation.....and i'd love to say tht i felt ballu was an exxagerated character......but then that'd be wrong...cuz i haven't seen the world enough to know whether ppl are truly like tht.......and i wouldn't be surprised if i hear about some filthy idiots such as ballu in the future! what kind of father is that! usney to g3 aur viren ko bhi pichey chod diya!.......wait no.....i think ballu and viren ki kaante ki takkar hai! 😆

moving on....hmm.....kk before i go on to premeer..or more like prem....since i think i already covered heer....i wanna do some bak bak on everyone else! so the singh family (wait did i really type tht! LMAO...omgsh...those morons are taking over my brain....nahiinnnnnnn **yells in full filmy ishtyle** (btw..i was gonna use the word scream instead of yell....but could u please clarify the difference b/w the two....i just feel like there is one....i know im weird like tht.....like is the sound of a yell more intense than the sound of a scream??? oh my questions....u'll grow to hate them eventually if u don't already 😛) so yea...back to the family.....ughgh...i don't even remember.....but im basically talking bout mannu's family...so let's call them the singhs for sanity's sake! well what a nice family! im glad prem found them.....or well.......well there wouldn't really be a second option now would there!? prem had to find them, cuz he had to come back! (btw....please tell me....did the confident of ur readers bout prem's return ever amaze u!? LOL) okay..so back on track...the singhs...kk wait..i don't have much to say bout them cuz another idea crossed my mind.....the medical info!!!! mere kaan taras gaye the.......or more like aankhein taras gayein thi to see/read bout some realistic medical info in stories....i don't mean to criticize other ffs....cuz i mean..i'm not so well-informed on medicines and medical treatments myself.....but i mainly mean to criticize BT and other tv shows....and so i would like to give u standing ovation, plus a hugee round of applause for making sure that ur medical info is correct and makes 100% sense! 👏👏👏 (hope tht's huge enough.....my mouse is low on battery..so i can't keep clicking on the emoticon cuz the mouse stops responding...😆) the fact tht prem's memory kicked in after he heard tht song from sweetie's iPod (wait..prem did call mannu's sis sweetie right??....haila meri yaaddash...i'm only 15!!) but yea....so all that stuff actually made sense! and how the whole family came together, and the dad dude did a check up on prem, i could actually imagine that! LOL it was superbly described 😃 and kk.....i think the mom had a few sweet dialogues towards prem too.....but since she's not as important right now....i'll settle with the fact tht i loved her too....which i genuinely did......but i don't wanna expand on her 😳

mannu!!!!! omgsh.......kk prem's next..i promise....but mannu!!!! how cute is that!!!!! LOL....and how he soon became mannu the lallu! hayye.......my jaanu right there! 😳 i loved how veera was super confident about chutki and chulbuli (o dear God! i think earlier i said i loved prem and chutki's relationship...sorryyy 😳 i meant chulbuli! i swear tht's been bugging me since! i would go back and fix tht...but then it won't be realistic...lol) so yea...back to veera...i love how she was confident bout her nicknames, while her hubby was super embarassed bout his! wen frankly i think mannu sounded cuter than chutki and chulbuli...lol! all in all, i enjoyed reading about prem and his new found siblings! it def. added a hilarious and light angle to the story 😊

moving on to........mr. prem juneja!!!!!!!! **drum rolls* (i know, i know....drum rolls usually come before..but c'mon.....it sounded better in my head that way😛) first of all.....i was right! heer ki shaadi ki baath uthe gi, cuz uska prem wapas aaye ga!!!!!! well......i wonder if they're gonna get remarried......don't think that's necessary technically speaking....and i actually don't want them to have a high profile shaadi with all the rasams...this premeer sound better without it 😳 but yes prem came back!!!!! (on that note....i'd love to unreserve my comment from part 8 too....but honestly speaking...i don't have another reaction to write about other than screaming.....cuz tht's all i had to say after i read preet=prem! 😆) i loved his re-entry tho!! how he whispered to maya bout the chuha moment, how he sneaked up behind veera (kkk i've said sneaked at least 10 times to myself..and it sounds maha awkward! please tell me sneaked is not the past tense of sneak!?) but most of all....i loved his encounter with preeti! yes prem ur right.....prem ka matlab preet (or did he say preet ka matlab prem?...no i think it was the first one..yaaddash abhi itni bhi buri nahin hai 😆) matlab prem aur preet tou ek hi hain!! i don't think i nailed the dialogue exactly....but my was it beautiful or what! waise to think of it.......ur dialogues have always been fab....from ek pal to tanhai (i had to mention ek pal...i was looking for an excuse to bring up one of my fave ffs! 😳) no joke...but i will happily volunteer u as a diaoluge writer/script head for BT....phir u can take ur SB with u to work as a token of gratitude, and then we can meet harshad, additi, sushant, and many more together 😉 kyun kya khayal hai?? i think i shud wrap up my rant on prem now....cuz im running out of ideas...uff....i'm so mad tht my other posts didn't go thru....im not sure if u read my pm msg with the kdc..but i've tried posting my comment at least 5 times before this..and it was an epic fail! i said much more about prem in the very first one than i am now! anyway, love prem all the way, and all the more in this ff! i loved how he didn't give a damn wen he kissed heer.....and mannu coughing......can it get any cuter......(wait maybe it can....the epilogue 😉) and heer's sari......"maa ki sari, tum par bohaut sundar lag rahi hai" haaiiiiiiiii....once again..sorry for screwing up the dialouge if i did.....but tht was such a sweet comment......i cud fully imagine that in my head! so all in all, prem before and after his entry was super duper hot, romantic, charming, hot, romantic, cute, jaanu, hot, romantic, handsome, gentleman-like, hot, romantic, funny, charismatic, did i mention hot and romantic?? 😆 the fact that he was always remembered by his heer was just beautiful beyond words can explain 😍......and omgsh i almost forgot......remember how prem didn't want heer to be in white clothes! "vidva nahin patni ho tum meri" hayeee!!!!!! yahi to hum sab kab sey chilla chilla key keh rahey the, par hamari jaz api....hamari awaaz ko unsuni kar diya 😒....that's what u get api....karma...we were right and u said no...well technically u never fully clarified 😳...but still....ha......told u so, told u so..na na na na boo boo (aawwwww.... i haven't said tht since.......FOREVER!) prem came back, and heer's not his vidva 😃

kk...lemme breath before i go on....**in............and outt........**

don't u love how most of ur comments (well im at least im assuming this..) revolve around prem's return.....LOL.....as if this was the main point of this ff.....what happened to heer's tanhai...and all ur efforts in sketching the other characters.....😆.......it all comes down to our prem babu (omgsh....im gonna miss hearing tht on SBS 😭)

hmmmm....i think i've pretty much covered everything now.....if not....well u know what i'm gonna say.....i loved each and every aspect of this ff.....this is next in my list after ek pal 😊 in fact, i even loved reading bout ballu's evilness.......gives me all the more reason to hate on him 😃 hhhmmmm....o yea......preet! lol....i was kinda hoping for a lil bit of preet side to this....since in one of the parts u mentioned how preet was drinking and as a reply to my comment u said tht preet has faced enough harships himself! haye bechara is what i thot at that point....and i still do cuz as hard as it was for heer to be prem's vidva, it was harder from to know he's fully capable of crashing his heer into a hug...but he cant! but i guess no preet......but no complaints there either......we always have preeti to cherish 😛 wait......so does tht mean prem used to drink.........aaaaawwwwwwwww.......😒

and now.....i think my maha lamba comment has come to an end.....it felt superb to blabber..trust me! but i just hope i didn't bore u too much! wait.....i also hope i complimented ur writing enuf! no seriously....no sarcasm or jokes here...but i know i usualyl get carried away reflecting on the update in my comments, instead of appreciating the writer's talent! which sucks!! so in case i didn't say it enough.....altho i know as well as u do that i can't say it enough..........BRILLIANT WORK!!!!! 👏👏👏 🤗 everything from the characters, to their emotions, to their interactions, to the setting was described wonderfully! i could honestly picture each and every part in my head! seriously! i really am gonna miss this ff!! but im glad sau dard isn't ending any time soon.........(its not right??) and nor is heer secret.....i still need to catch up on a few parts in between with tht ff......but its just hard for me to keep reading when the writer is so adamant on the preet-heer love story! gosh! LOL...but i hope meher's outburst does wonders....prem finding out about aarav will definitely be a treat to read about! 😃

alright api....me off to bed, more like folding laundry, putting new bedsheets, straightening the frizzy bush on my head..aka my hair!, and then drifting to sleep while phrooling 😉.......it was great doing business with u 😆 (sorry...dialogue maarney ka mann kar raha tha!) i will def. miss this ff looooaaaddddzzzzzzzz!!!!! so i hope the epilogue is super lamba!! with bachey, romance, and a tonne of family moments!!!! and i mean a tonne....i want a full "mannu the lallu" comic strip going on! i hope this comment made up for the last two parts...and once again.....extremely sorry for not unreserving! i know its not fair to the other readers, and esp. the writers......to be honest..i was gonna leave this off for 2moro....but i knew there was no way in hell i'd get to it then! and i kinda wanted to get to it before friday!!!!!! uff......the nostalgia is kicking in.....ughgh.....star plus ki mauth mere haathon likhi hai! sachi....mujhe ek khoon maaf ho..and watch!!! 😡

so api..me off

good nightt, sweet dreamss

and thanks once again for all the pms, and such a wonderful ff!

loveee uuuu loaaadzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

ur Sammy Bacha 😊🤗

P.S...now that Kis Desh is ending, so is Tanhai, and KDC will also be off air soon...u won't forget ur SB will u??

P.S. 2: i forgot to mention.....i loved the whole con in the indian business industry and tht whole dialogue! LOL!!! it was hilariouss!!!!! and just soo clever and HOT!!!! prem's mastermind never ceases to amaze me!

P.S. 3: i wonder how it'll work out with two brothers marrying two sisters...LOL.....actually..have u heard any stories on how tht works out in real life?? im sure it'll be a blast from Premeer and Mannu-Chulbuli...but realistically speaking....i wonder if that's as much fun as it seems 😕 ....lol....yea i dunno why im ending on a thoughtful note.....so let me just end on a 😆...wait no...🤣 (i like this one better! it reminds me of wen teji said shut up to ballu! LMAO!!!!!!)