New SS: Tanhai Part 9 pg69 Dec 27 - Page 40

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd

Hi jaz HI!! 🤗

With this update you unfolded you biggest scandals of the century. They totally shock me in and out. Thank you jaz for this update as many confusions were cleared with it.😊 lmao...when i saw your first line...i swear...it sounded like a promo for one of Dan Browns books...lmao...😆😆...scandal...nice word...and thank you...im glad that you liked it... 😳

For first time, I didn't start your reading your update with tears in my eyes.

I smiled when you described heer's feelings for veera. I loved their cousins plan for the baratiis, bechaare🤣. Waah meher kya idea hai, chalo maan bhai kuch toh kaam aaye😆. So veera forgot everything when she looked at manmeet, great going girl👍🏼. OMG everyone is afraid that if kulraj starts crying then it would take hrs to pacify her🤣, loved it. i thought i'd change it up a bit...wanted to give some happy moments before all the DRAMA unfolded 😉😉...vaise i LOVE weddings and all the masti and fun that goes along with it...as for Kulraj...im dealing with a hormonal bhabi at the moment...i know first hanbd 😆😆😆

Ok but it was not long before when I started shedding tears again, when heer remembered her wedding with prem. We miss you too Prem. Heer is not living her life, just breathing with no purpose in her life. But she would not even end it because with it her prem would stop to exist. I loved this thoughts jaz, it was so moving and tragic. i couldnt give you guys a complete break from the tears 😈...i know...i'm evil and i LOVE It 😆😆😆...i think that scene was a bit Romeo Juliet-esq...nahin? 😉

You have ended the mystery today, have not you jaz?. Today all are hopes are crushed that prem is dead and he can never come back. I could not stop myself from crying when you described the scene what happened to heer when she came to know about prem's death. It was like seeing it happening in front of my eyes. The scene was very touching and tragic😭. At that moment my hatred for mann men reached its peak.😡 haila yaar...why itna rona suddenly..from part 1 you knew Prem was dead naa...did i even give false hope...but i do commend you holding out for SOOO long!! 👏👏👏 a true Premeer dewaani! 😳😳😳 im glad that you could picture it all...thats the best part about reading...😳

Everybody had tears in eyes except balraaj, why am I not surprised? Obviously he does not have heart and emotions within him, rather its money that makes him jump with joy. Such a cheap and disgusting person he is. I really pity heer for having such a father and brothers in her life. Balraj...Balraj ke baare mein main kya kahoon...im sure your read the rest...ill wait to see wht u have to say 😆

I totally hated her brothers from core of my heart, for what they did to heer and prem. I felt that no matter what they do now, or how much do they try to justify themselves, nothing can change my hatred for them. I found it a totally disgusting, truly inhuman act. I thought they must be very happy now by seeing what have they reduced heer to? This is what they wished for their sister right? You were right when you said I could never think of forgiving them. im laughing...im truly laughing....because even before reading the entire comment...i KNOW what comes next 😛😛

But all these feelings changed with just this one update. You really know how to play with our thoughts and change our feelings. I wouldn't say that you completely erased my hatred for them, but it was lessened out a lot. they did think about heer's feelings, they did care for her love. They didn't care if prem was not rich, all mattered to them that heer will be happy with him. instead this all was done by balraj.😡 Kya vo paise ke pichce itna pagal hai, ki usse apni khud ki beti nahi dekhayi deti? Now I feel that all those words that I used for him were quite less and ya jaz everything I said for heer's brothers plz all those were actually meant for him. 🤢 He is horrible creature rather I would like to use more such words🤬 for him. what can i say yaar...i love twists...give me a story with a good twist and i can get so lost i wont drop the book until i finish 😃😃😃...but i'm surprise...why is the hatred still alive...be it minimal...its still there nahin? kyun...most people have already forgiven them 100% 😳😳😳...i know the feeling...lets keep the words at a minimum...dont want our warning levels raised

Ok now I have stopped crying. Great update jaz. You are an awesome writer and love your SS. ⭐️ Now I want balraj to be punished for his deed. Make him suffer in the way he made everyone suffer around him. he made their lives living hell, make him realize how has he ruined everything. I wanted prem give him the much awaited lesson in his life but if that is not the case then I want preet to take that revenge for heer. Involve her brothers too in it. I really feel in end everyone should leave him in end to enjoy his hell😈. im still thinking about Balraj...what can i do that will make him suffer...i think even death is too easy...if you have any good ideas...pass them on...lol...as for Preet...and revenge...you are on the right track...😉😉😉...aage aage dekho...hota hai kya! 😛😛

It is high time that heer gets back her happiness. Why didn't preet come in the wedding too, has her brothers have something to do with it? plz end this mystery now, I want to know that will preet be the man in her life or no? Preet will definitely be THE man in her life...no doubt about it...you just gotta see how that works out...😉😉😉

Outstanding and lovely update jaz.👏 So you wanted a long reply na, so here it is for you. I hope you like it. Waiting eagerly for next awesome reply!! now that you have set the bar...ill be waiting for similar comments...LOVE reading it...truly enjoyed it!! 🤗

Love
Sia

Originally posted by: Palkhi_08

U never fail to bring tears in my eyes......

It was just marvelous!!.....i can't believe she tried to commit suicide! :o.... yayyy she got her brothers back!!! her dad is sooo cruel as is he's made out of granite!!...

update soon......me waiting!!

Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93

that was so touching,
really loved the last part, it made me cry 😭
amazing, it just left me speechless

do continue soon

Originally posted by: yasu09

omg that was such an emotional chapter...........................
i actually got a bit teary in the end and that never happens to me..................
glad heer got her brothers back.............
and i know i already said this once but balraj is a....... 🤬
so no one actually saw the dead body............so that means there is a chance that prem myt be alive right?????????????

Originally posted by: masin

alrighteey api...here it is 😃

wait..i must warn u...i mite forget stuff because the update was super duper long (no complains there tho😛) and i had a lot of different comments to make while i was reading it :) ill take what i can get...i ALWAYS love your comments 😳😳😳

kk so veera's shaadi: u know now tht i think about it..time really does fly...well i mean i've always thot tht...not like i realized it just now..but in terms of ur ff...it literally feels like yesterday when u wrote about heer hearing her brothers mention veera's marriage the same way they mentioned her's (the day of teji's bday) and now look...veera ki shaadi ho bhi gaye!!! lol...but i like how u described her wedding! personally i hated manmeet in kis desh..but i hate him all the more eversince ek pal! still..it was nice to read a lil something about him and veera..it gave tht cute feel to their story and their wedding 😳 and her bidaai...uff!! i remember when my sis got married 😭 but on a happier note...im glad she's happy..and moreover away from balraaj (see i was gonna type "away from her father" but for obvious reasons..i didn't wanna connect the word father to balraj 😡!) i also loved how everyone got dressed up..and the men dressing up the kids! LOL..i can see where the worry comes in!! and kulraj's crying!!! i love how she's the bakri of the story these days!! 😆 i know what you mean...time is flying in this ff...it feels like yesterday i was writin about the family seeing Heer in her white saree and now its Veera's wedding...haila...so much has happened...lol...im glad that you enjoyed the wedding part...as for bidaai's...omg...even if i dont really know the person that is getting married...i cry! 😭😭 im an emotional fool!!

haila!! 2 flashbackss!!! api..aaj koi special din..ya phir koi special weekend tou nahin hain na??? w/e it is.....im happy we got an update that too extra long!!!! may u keep writing long parts, and keep updating weekly 😆 what you do mean special din!? every update has 2 flashbacks...you never noticed 😲...ha ha...to busy thinking about ways to bring Prem back from the dead!? ha ha...

moving on to the maan men: well before reading the update.. i was reading ur reply to my comment....and i was like kk...so u keep mentioning how the brothers have more to them than what meets they eye..so mayb they're not so bad after all! and mayb its balraaj who's the troublemaker! and guess what! i was right!!! but then again...u gave a lot of hints..LOL warna tou i wud've kept hating on the brothers! i guess u pointed out to a life lesson here too..(or mayb u didn't and i'm just being really deep 😕) but even if i were in heer's shoes..i wud never suspect my father! simply because he's my father...he will always want what's right for me, he will neveer hurt me, etc. and i think everyone would do the same..and instead blame their brothers or a third person other than their father! but of course..that's where we go wrong..not tht we should ever blame our parents...but we should hear the whole story before judging..(lol....do those lines sound familiar..😆) good...iim so glad that my Sammy baacha figured it out!! special jadoo ki jaapi for you!! 🤗...Balraj is the root of all evils (as my dad likes to say about my brother 😆😆) ...i completely agree with you...fathers dont do things like that...sure they may disown their daughter in the heat of the moment...but then...as they say, time heals all wounds...lekin yeh balraj...he is in a category all on his own 😡😡😡

anyways.....I HATE BALRAAJ! 😡😡😡 hope i made that clear 😃 btw...api, aap tou ekta ki bhi maa nikli...please take this as a compliment tho..lol..my point it is tht..even tho we hate ekta for giving us Gmom..i personally still admire her ability to make us truly hate the villian..cuz tht's the whole point of a negative character! and u've done the same in an even more brilliant way! i mean i never thot i could hate anyone so much! balraaj key aagay tou gayatri is an angel! at least Gmom was nice at some point in her life and the turn of events in her life caused her character to change! but balraaj! i think his parents beat him a lot when he was little, or they simply abandoned him...which is why he's so cruel now!!!! and it's a general cliche to hate daughters...at least from what i've seen in daily soaps! but to see the hatred described to such extent!! uff!! boj! how dare he call us daughters boj! if it wasn't fr teji (who mind u but was also a daughter at some point) he wouldn't have had a "wedding night" nor wud he have had 5 kids! three of them his sons, who help him in his business!!!!!!!! so if it wasn't for someone's daughter..he would simply be a hobo rotting under a cave!!!!!!!!! 😡😡😡 can't even explain how much i hate him right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UGHGHGGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u know what..i don't even wanna talk about him...so...SWIFTLY MOVING ON................... speaking of G3...omg...are you as shocked as i was about her instant transformation 😲😲😲...i was like...wtf!? no way this is happening...even Maya turned over a new leaf...never thought i'd see the day...eeks!!! thanks for the Ekta compliment...im glad that you enjoyed my little twist...😆...and as for balraj...he has no traumatic childhoon or anything...he's just one of those people who are born evil...🤢🤢🤢

well kk i am now kaan pakering and sorrying for bashing on the maan brothers...guess they're not so bad after all eh! hehe!!!! 😳 ha ha...i knew you would 😛

kk here's my general overview on this ff now: well the title is tanhai..so that's clearly heer living in tanhai! but seeing as the ff is going..and how u've mentioned at least a gazillion times tht prem is dead (not tht i'm 100% sure on tht one 😉) i think this ff is just gonna be about heer's tanhai.period. her life with prem's memories, with her brothers, hopefully taking revenge on balraaj even (sorry had to mention his name there!)..i remember u said tht this ff is premeer all the way (or mayb u said tht in HS and SD..lol) but still....i think its premeer all the way in terms of their flashbacks..... good catch!! loved the analysis of the title to the story plot...nicely put! couldnt have said it better myself...you are right...its all about her tanhai...every flashback makes her relive a moment of her life that she treasures...yet when forced back to reality...the emptiness of her life hits her like a ton of bricks 😭😭😭

as for the future storyline..what if heer began bonding with preet (surprise much!) well i actually do want some preet-heer bonding! because u mentioned tht preet has a sad past..or mayb i just assumed tht...but regardless..what if preet is prem's brother, cuzin, best friend, or someone related to prem!!!! oh wait....i just remembered....preet was up for some contract marriage with heer!!!! awww man!!!!!!! 🤢🤢 saari museebat ki jad hai balraaj....please api....give me one change.....forgive me one murder and i promise..one is all i need!!!!! just one!! one stab right at his heart!! that's it..balraaj finishedd **makes an evil grin** dont know if i mentioned Preet's past...maybe i did...but you are right...he has had a troubled life as well...he's just as tanha as Heer is...aage aage dekho hota hai kya...speaking of contracct marriage...you just gave me another idea for another ff...hmm....gotta start working on that once this is finished 😡😡😡

btw..don't think for one second tht i'm willing to believe tht prem isn't coming back...i was just.....giving a side comment so to speak..LOL ha ha...duly noted 😃

kk api i gotta rush now..i've been fevering around 102-103 degress since thursday (and yes tht is farenheit for my american api 😆) and i need to watch thurs and fridays kis desh epis..and then i shall email u a dissappointment 😃 o and also....fab job with the comic reliefs...i'll def. check out the parent one soon! omg!!! 😲 fever phir bhi you did such an awesome comment...props to you girl...thank you so much!! love you for doing it!! 🤗 how goes the health now...

lots of loveee

Samra

P.S. sorryy....i don't really have a p.s. this time..but i felt tht the post was incomplete without it....😆.lovely PS...and eys...it would feel incomplete without it...so thank u! 😃

Originally posted by: purplestar22

Reserved....

Originally posted by: shabo24

Hello. 😉 shabbo...tu! 😲😲...hello shello ji! 🤗

So I got time to kill, and I just read three updates in a row. w.o.w. God woman, you are absolutely amazing at this. The way you are spinning the story, you think it's going to go one way, but really it starts going another and than BAM something new hits you in the face. There are so many different aspects of the story right now, I don't know where to start... im glad that you had tiem to kill...and wow...3 updates in a row...that must have taken a while...my updates seem to get longer and longer as the story progresses 😡😡😡...but im glad that you liked them all!!

Let's keep Manmeet decent please? I don't think I could take more surprises. Anywho, Balraaj is disgusting and evil enough for one story. I can't even tell you how much repulse I'm feeling towards the character right now - how can a father do that?? Oh my god.... dont you worry about Manmeet...he is a good guy...nothing like he was on the show...or in my Ek Paal FF...he's good...promise 😃...

I adore the relationship Heer has with her sister-in-laws and now hopefully her brothers. It's so open, so trusting and so freakishy entertaining. (Listening to you sister in laws talk about their wedding night? 😳 Poor Heer.) And all her "sisterly" moments with Veera, I LOVED how Veera knows exactly how to wrap Heer around her finger. i love my bhabi's too...but when they get a little...chatty...about my bhaias...i make sure i STAY AWAY...its not something i need to be hearing 🤢

Preet Mehta....I actually like him. I really do. He technically isn't doing anything wrong - he wants to make sure Heer will be aware of the "situation" no false dreams, and he hates Balraaj. 😆 What more can you ask for? I like him. If Heer doesn't agree......*trails off* yay! chalo...at least one person truly likes Preet...his story line will unfold very soon 😳

And now Prem. SIGH. You wove thier love story so simply, but with this touch of pleasantness in it as well. It's beyond beautiful and I find myself like an inch away from the computer screen while I read the flashbacks - not necessarily with Prem and Heer, but with Prem and how he shows his love, his connection with Veera, how he's such a honest guy. I swear he walked out of a storybook, he's too good to be true. And he's alive. Princes never die. 😉 im glad that you like the flashbacks...i figured i had to give you all some doses of Premeer...you know...since he is dead...😆😆😆...i've had all the flashbacks planned out before i even began writing the story...😳😳

AWESOME, AWESOME, AWESOME STORY! I've told you before, I'm telling you again - if the Med School thing doesn't work out, you got a career in writing di. I'm sure of it. 😳 thanks shabbo!! once everything with my career settles down...im seriously thinking about doing the writing thing on the side...dekhte hai...aage aage hota hai kya 😳😳😳

I won't say continue soon, because god knows when I'll comment. :) ....ahh what the heck? CONTINUE SOON DI! lol...you know why there was a delay 😳

Love you and miss you tons, me too!! khabi khabi...hi shye kiya karo 😉😉...vaise...facebook hai...if you do...look me up... 😃

--shabz

EDIT*

Congrats on 50 pages! *hugs* thank you! 😳

Originally posted by: sweetanu2314

how can a father be soooooooo urgh.......thanks for the pm...........actually i don't have words to describe ur update..........it was long and the fact that the three brothers are not the evil ones was good...........i hate hate balraj..........they should all team up against their father and throw him out.....😡...i want preet to be prem.....u know plastic surgery or amnesia whatever...........i don't want preet heer jodi......please do something about that......please............😭 do continue soon.....

Originally posted by: angel82

Jaz, beautiful as usual....

you're such a wonderful writer, i swear....ur creativity , ur imagination and ur ability to put them in words are outstanding...i know i keep doing tareef pe tareef , but what to do , u leave me amazed after every update...bus ab bohot hogaya tareef... aww...thank you so much...you are making me blush...😳😳😳

Prem ke lash 😭😭😭 i refuse to believe...😆 so what if that body had the same scar that prem had😆 i just know he will be back 😆 or how about heer joining him in heaven later on 😃 every time someone talks about Prem coming back...i picture Micheal Jackson from the thriller video 😆😆😆

OMG the entire heer's reaction to the incident that lead to prem's death 😭 you seriously made me cry buckets while reading...excellently written..i'm sure if AG gets to enact this, she would rock !!.... i kept the scene in mind when Heer was crying for Prem after he "died" on the show...i wanted the same emotions but a bit less screaming 😳😳

oh the part where she remembers prem during veera's wedding 😭😭😭 poor thing...

Jaz , i had asked in my previous comment how heer managed to live without prem and you answered my that question in this chap soo beautifully, soo emotionally , so touchingly and so genuinly....she tried to take her life but then maya stopped her from even thinking about it...and then how could she when she was the only testament to what kind of a person prem was 👏 how could she stop her heart from beating when prem lived in her heart👏 two beautiful lines... wow...i wrote that...😲...even i forgot what i wrote...lol...glad that i answered the question for you...😳😳

OMG ur making me like Rishab...oh he is such a loving and caring brother in real....

Balraaaaaaaaaaajjjjjjjjjjjjjjj🤬

now i'm really looking forward to Preet giving him a tough time....the old fellow should rot in hell....

oh n thats a beautiful song u selected....

eagerly waiting to read ahead... thanks for commenting...LOVED IT!! next part up soon! 😳😳😳

luv

angie

Originally posted by: *I Heena I*

How can i father be soo heartless to do that to his own family...Jaz have to say that was a mindblowing update ..im glad Heer's brothers are the innocent ones and tried to help her in this situation ..now shes got them...im hoping Prems out there somewere aswell ...cannot wait for the next update x

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey

Emotional,Touching,Awesome update

Balraj😡

Originally posted by: ..kashish..

hey di! wow! just read the whole story again! wow wow wow! so mcuh pain, so much hurt! so mcuh anger and hate! the entire thing...again 😲 saachi...wow! thats crazy...but im glad that you enjoyed it..😳😳

love the way ur penning the story! cant wait to see what will happen enxt..wondering if preet is prem or if he is thelink that will take her to prem! cant wait to ssee what the brothrs wil do! lvoe the relationship between prem n heer!

heern maya

and esp the chuha story! made me crackup! this story is built on the relationships that heer has with her family...if she didnt have them...she wouldnt be alive today...next part will be up soon...wait for it 😆😆

hope u continue soon!!!

Originally posted by: xoHarshaxo

WOW Jaz awesommeeeee Updateeee :D

Your such an awesome writer you should totally win a prize for your writing

hunni your an awesome writer ... Well this update was awesome every bit of it was too goodd

Love it all the way :) aww...thank you so much yaar...i really appreciate the kind words...😳😳😳

Please updateee other FF's too and keep me posted =)

I am sorry for such a lame comment but dont have the words to describe your talents Superb jod Jaz DI . will PM when i post the next part...thanks for the comment 😃😃

Love - Ayysha

Originally posted by: lovely_lady

wow, alot happened in this update..

first of all, veera's wedding was really sweet..

all the happiness..

and LOL at the three bhabis talking about their consumation..

anyways, aw, i never knew heer's brother were under so much pressure.

i always hated them b/c they wre resposnible for prem's death..

but it wasnt there fault at all..

it was all bauji!!!

wow, that man is cheap and shameless..

i feel bad for the family for having him as their father..

and poor heer..she's basically a living corpse w/t prem..

i wish prem was alive..

hey, is there a chance prem is still alive?

ff's dont ALWAYS have to bre realistic ;)

anyways, LOL at my long comment..

anyways, awesome updae jaz..

im glad u updated..

and this story is really unique..

i cant wait to see what happens next..

but for sure, bauji should be punished..

that man is beyond evil..

Originally posted by: PremLeoManav

WOW............Loved it..........waitng for the next one.............😊

Originally posted by: blueocean_787

well written Jaz, as usual your FF is awesome, superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: nadia.s

Hey Jaz, hola! 😛

Awesome update😛 thank u! 😳

That was one long update and I loved every bit of it.

I think the best part of the update (besides the wedding) is about Heer's brothers! I'm so glad that they had a reasonable reason for their behaviour and actions. I hope they stand up for themselves and go against the beast (their dad, his new name). ya...i realized after i finished writing that it was a bit too long...but couldnt help it..so much was going on 😳😳😳

Now about the wedding. The part where Veera was staring at Manmeet and Heer's comment was so cute. Heer's right, she's got her whole life to stare at Manmeet. Lol! It was really sad though when Heer was remembering her wedding with Prem, really touching. thats all Heer has left...memories 😭😭

Whatever happened to Heer is just so heartbreaking. She even tried to commit suicide. However I think that no matter what, Heer is a strong person because she managed to overcome the feeling of killing herself. I hope no one has to go through what Heer has gone through in life. same here yaar...even though this isnt real...other do have to deal with the loss of their soulmates..i'd never wish that on anyone...😭😭😭

Now coming to the beast. No comments. I give up on him.

I have a suggestion though, instead of just killing him, can you like set him on fire but don't let him die. Let him suffer with third degree burns!😡 ya...the killing thing seems too easy...he has to suffer after what he did 😡

Nadia

P.S. Sorry for the late comment, was really busy. aare yaar...no sorry business..im just glad you commented...😃

P.P.S. Get well real soon yaar, take care of yourself and have lots of rest. And drink lots of water! eww...water...i dont drink that if i can help it...lol...i should though...thanks 😳

P.P.P.S. I'm in my Maths class now. I'm kinda lost, so decided to comment before I forget! lol...me and my friends used to watch funny youtube videos in our stats 400 class 😆😆

Originally posted by: sanyoprithviraj

do get well soon. our wishes are with you. take your time. thanks for understanding yaar 😳

regarding the update.it was exceptionally good. thank you 😳

finally it clears that the actual villian is that stupid balraj and hheer's brothers still with heer.

heer should now take revenge from her father.
her father does all these things on the basis of his wealth na so heer shud do something to snatch the control of the company from him and in her and her brothers hands. im still working on how to show the revenge...he deserves to be punished for all that he did...but what to do???

you are certainly cretaing confusions dear.kabhi lagta hai ki prem mar gaya hai par phir kuch aisa samne aata hai jisse phir doubt hone lagta hai ki wo zinda hai.from the update its clear that no one has seen prem's face when he was cremated.(at least no one who knew prem).they just cremated a body that had the same cut on his face.

so still hope for his survival
fingers crossed. 😆😆😆 lage raho...i think there is about 3 of you guys how are still holding out hope for Prem...i have to say...you guys are maha determined 😆😆😆

again get well soon.

Originally posted by: Cess-

*reserved*....

*hiding muh, until i unreserve this*....

ooh, but on second thoughts, i never forget tanhai... will be back... like always... 🤣 you seem to forget Heer's Secret and Sau Dard...why is that? 😉😉

so, roll the red carpets, the queen, ooh, rather the princess is here.... 🤣.... okie, so i am hyper today?? dont worry jazu, i wont be by the end of the comment... there are 2 possible reasons... one you obv know, that i am gonna blow up anytime... or two, i wont be so hyper coz the end of the comment would be written about a week from now!! 🤣... ok, so i wil stop... it can get annoying... .... now let me tell you this update was pretty good, but i was more angry that anything.... that you expected no? 😆... ooh, and i know u still love me even if havent updates my SD and HS for 2 updates in a row!! you are so nice nah?? so meherbaan?? 😳...... 🤣 did you have candy or what...maybe it was cake...oh oh...speaking of cake....i want some pie...pumpkin pie...my fav!! 😆😆 that was random...just thought i'd join you high...he he...btw...planning on updating SD and HS anytime soon? 😕

so starting with the update, i think it is just a rasam to have saaliyan and jeeju stuff... it is just too adorable... 😳... i love the jokes shared and all that kind of stuff, makes me feel mushy inside... dont have a jeeju nah!! 😭... aah well, agar meri nahin, toh kisi aur ki sahi... gonna invite me when u find ur prem nah? warna main tumhe.... 😡.... 😆... u better, i need to pull his leg, and shoes maybe?? 😆... oye yaar?? who is getting married? the three women, or veera? dont have time to get the kids dressed, they want to look for a new raj kumar kya?? 🤣aur *hmph*... men are soo useless when it comes to these things... honsetly, apne hi bachon ko tayaar nahin kar paye!! uff.... omg..no jiju...they are the best...i've got tons (14 + one on the way) and love them all...definitely have my share of nok-jhok with them 😆😆😆...they are like my brothers...sometimes i like them more than my brothers 😉😉😉...aare yaar...of course...my wedding will be IF central!! everyone is invited 😃😃😃...forget aapne baache..sometimes men cant even dress themselves!!

🤣.... veera beta, jab tumhari shaadi hogi, tab u will run away from him rather than stare at him all night long... i mean day... night pe toh.... ☺️... oh my, dont kick me out of the forum... 🤣..... aww, but the sad parts were very touching... it happens to every girl i guess, lekin phir bhi, when it's your turn, then all comes out and i heard a lot of people say: why are there even something called leaving home... gradually though, u realise that the one you're going to is actually your real home.... sigh.... ok, so now i sound like a loser... but it's true.... *innocent muh*.... tauba...night pe...eeks! did you just say that...besharam...of course...who am i to talk 😆😆😆...i know exactly what happens...that is why...after my cousins got married...i set up alarms in their rooms, which were hidden...lol...kept going off all night 😆

i loved the wedding scene... was too cute.... 😳.... the staring of manmeet, and the rituals... kinda felt like it was a possibility even in the show.... of course, that's just you writer's trick!! 😆.... but then you had to kill it didnnt you?? it was a have to for you jaz, wasnt it??.... gosh, heer, dont worry, you wont miss him for long... he'd be back very soon, even before you know it, he'd take away all your pain.... and not even jaz can stop that *hmph*.... (even if she's the writer!! 🤣)... jaz, i am trying to comment as per how i read... assume i dont know what will happen.... ok?? 😆....... it ok heer, he'll be back... and he'd do all of what manmeet had dont to veera in the mandap... right in front of the world he'd marry you, and make you his.... even if you already are!! you pati will be back..... i guarrantee that!! (and no jaz, i dont expect any comment, like always, i know you too well.... 🤣) what 😲...maine kay kiya...aab main banati hoon...*innocent face* 😆😆😆...😉😉...lol....ok...i pretend like you are commenting as you read...ha ha...lets see how well you do with the expressions and feelings 😛😛😛...and about Prem...you know me so well...NO COMMENT 😆

now for the real part of the comment.... 😆.... ok so initially, i was like what?? what happened to her hand? i thought i had forgotten something that had happened in tanhai!! ooh, i love that line, living or simply existing!! you know i always thought about why heer would even want to exist when her heart soul and mind is not even present in where she is... it is with someone else... and she must live thinking that that someone would never be bac, to be with her, and protect her.... she is living a useless, and meaningless life... like even her existence was a burden, not only to her, but her prem as well, who if is in heaven, cannot be with her, and if in the world, still away from her.... (and no, i am eyes closed, on what u have to say on this whole paragraph 🤣).... then i read what she had thought for so long... 7 years to be presice... she wanted to live because prem sees the world through her eyes, breathes through her lungs, and lives through her heart!! but the fact is, her heart is not hers but actually prem's.... she has his heart, and he has hers nah? so if he is waiting for her to come back to him oneday, she need to be alive to do so... that's my thoughts, but she doesnt believe he's alive... so even if she doesnt want him to die, in the same time she is killing herself a million deaths per moment... and would prem want that!! oh really, poor heer, she's doing all this for prem, and he wants to take away all her pain.... sigh!! but no worries, he'll be back heer... then you wont only be existing, but living!! your heart will start beating again.... lol...eyes open yet...lol...it took me a while to pen down Heer's feelings...only because i wanted it to be good and genuine..im glad that you liked it...and what you said is absolutely right...about Premeer...their feelings...completely true...as for raise of the dead Prem...ha ha...nice try!! 😆

before i comment on the FB, just wanted to mention, i almost thought her 'wedding night' was sleeping with prem before their wedding!! 🤣.... dont look at me that way... i am an innocent bachcha!! sachi!! 😳..... 🤣.... 😲😲 how could you think something like that...itna hi bharosa hai Prem pe!? tauba...chi chi chi...*shakes head* 😆😆😆

ok, so u know what my reactions to this would be, dont you jaz?? 😃..... "Neha keh rahi thi ke'woh'Prem ka lash mila hai."...... ooh, my first reaction was to 🤣.... then get myself some icecream.... with nuts on it... mmm... love that.... 😆... when i came back, i stared at the screen and started 🤣 again... i swear i am serious!! you'd have expected many to lose hope, but that just made me rolf... prem is alive!! and no one can convince me other wise!! not even when this FF is done and he still hasnt rose up... i would then belive ther'd be a sequel!!! 🤣.... trust me jaz, it's so difficult to convince me about something, even i find it difficult to convince myself!! 🤣..... i was like, either neha is blind, ya toh usse prem se pyaar hogaya, and she wants him for herself, or that she has turned insane, and many more possibilities.... but prem dead?? *shakes head disapprovingly*.... kabhi nahin!! omg...forget the nuts on your ice cream...you are nuts yourself...😲😲😲...a sequel...are you out of your mind!! you are gonna be waiting forever...ha ha...what i can say is...dont knwo why you are laughing because Prem is dead 😃😃😃

Rahul aur Dev ke pouchne ke baad hi Prem ka antim-sanskar hua." .... you got me thinking a little there... 😆.... main toh like, how are u gonna turn that around?? but you are brilliant no? kuch toh socha hi hoga!! heer obv, it's not your prem... it was some guna who died, and you wasted 7 years of your life living a widow when you couldve looked for him?? kya yaar!! but anyhoo, it's 7 not 70!! 🤣... you'll get much more years to enjoy life.... 😉.... omg...tujhe main kya kahoon? ...you have left me speechless 😆😆😆

Jaise tumne kahaa tha ke Prem ke gaal pe chot hai, tik vaisa hi chot uss lash pe mila.... ok, so after this line, i am more than certain.... now i am even more convinced!! like i could be more!! warna why would she say so? interesting, who must've died?? hmm, i need to investigate... 🤣 there is just no winning with you is there?

when she said, she'd change, i thought she had gone bonkers.... i was like, kya? instead of doing something real drastic, ur gonna change into white clothes, and accepting he is no more?? heavens, that breaking the glass totally made me really sad... poor girl, really... it just hurts... it's as simple a theory as that... it hurts to see someone you love go so far there is no way to reach him... it's so painful to see someone who means the world to you leave the world without you... to feel the pain, and to say 'i know what she must be going through' is just saying 'i know how it feels to ski' without actually doing it... what she felt was her, and only her pain.. no one could ever feel what she had felt when prem 'died'... no one could sympathize enough, because no matter how much of that is done, for heer, he is no more.. just gone... forever... and she doesnt even know how to meet him again... coz many belive there is an afterlife, but no one has proved it!! i am a huge believer in god!! i think everyone is, but when such things happen, even that faith is shatered, and we wonder if what we have believed life time long is actually true?? it just hurts, in simple words.... more than anyone can explain, more than how much anyone else would feel.... you are calling Heer bonkers...really...you!? lmao...speaking of Bonkers..i loved that cartoon! 😆😆😆...and i love how you put died in quotes!! lmao...you would do something like that...ha ha...😆😆😆...and welll said...it is a simple fact...when you cant be the one that you love...the pain you feel is so immense..that you feel not being alive is better 😭

but the suicide attempt was just what i had known of heer to do... it was what anyone would do... Heer ka khoon.... this was totally beautiful written,... i love the play on words here.... it was of so much intensity... these three words just summed up the situation... like from now on, she is a zombie... she will live, breathe, talk, walk, but her soul and heart wouldnt be alive anymore... it's more like u said jaz.... just existing!! thank you 😳

"Oh God!".... ok, so this had my eyes kinda wet... not yet crying, but wet already... it was so painful jaz... *pouts*... why did u make it sound so real... like is actually happening right infornt of my naked eyes!!! i know no one ever asked u that question (probably) but i felt like doing so.... 😆... i felt a png in my chest... and i literally mean it... it's always the case, but when i read this, i felt the pang harder than usual... it feel so bad to have someone so sweet having to suffer so much pain... i know a lot of people in real life do as well... i do too!! but atleast i know he's safe and happy even if not with me, but heer... she has to see herself in so much pain, and knows deep inside he feels the same pain, whereever he is... that is exactly what hurts most.... and it's not easy to overcome that feeling... 7 years is never enough... 7 lives isnt too!! ill admit...when i was writing it...the emotions that i was feelin for Heer...they were powerful...even i felt like i was going to cry...just reliving that day gets me emotionsl....😭😭😭...i can totally picture Heer doing it too...that is what makes it so REAL...answer your question 😊😊..

"Kaise jiyungi main uske bina?".... that is what kills no? that question kills a billion and one people.... love is that emotion... kills and gives birth to people ever new moment... oh jaz, me is getting a little emotional here... honestly, i just cant fantom to think of my reaction when something happens to someone i love... really, i prefer someone leaving me in pain for the rest of mylife.... at least i have a cane of support which says he is happy somewhere in the corner of the world... unlike having to lose him knowing the love we share, and never get to see him again... it just... hurts, to no extent... no boundary!! 😭...your sentiments reminded me of the confession scene between Premeer...remember...when he tells her...that as long as she is happy...he can live...but if she is sad or hurt...he wont be able to bare that...😭😭 OMG...im so gonna watch that scene once i reply to your comment!! classic kis desh rocks!! 👏

ok, abhi i will stop, warna it wont be fun reading this comment of fine... (like it's ever fun, with all my rantings!! 🤣)..... ooh, jazu, just got a perfect song for this situation... 'what hurts the most'... ur fav.... ooh my, now i feel like listening to it, lekin will not, warna will get even more emotional!! I LOVE that song!! im gonna go listen to it now as i reply to the rest of your comment...part 2 of your comment that is 😆

Kissi ne mujhe usse akhri baar milne nahin diya.... me no likey this line... this was the time heer actually accepted her prem was no more... intead she should have waited... but it's ok heer, he'll be back soon... dont worry... and preeti... it's so obvious why she loves her so much... i think she's the one person prem actually was waiting for... heer knew this... prem loved preeti even before she was born, maybe that's why there is that connection why is undeniable...i'll say one thing...the connection between Prem and Preeti...is undeniable!! 😉😉

She didn't know if she should cry because she was leaving, or if she should kill her sister for calling her 'Chutki' in front of Manmeet - ok, this is a real good one...🤣.... it's a great comic relief... loved this one.. veera can be so immature.. she is absolutely perfect.... 😳.... so the climax - i knew there was something big going to happen after i read the brothers going to the library, and the giraffe on her bed... but i had never see this comming... i mean never!!! i had some inkling that maybe the 3 are not to be blamed, as they have been this whole time.... u kept saying so, but this was out of question... i have to really admire your story jazu... it really is so good!! i mean u write so well, undoubtedly, but the story is so good that it gets even a bad writer good recognition.... you toh is a great writer and ever story writer... it was just a blur for me... all of it... couldnt believe what i was reading... so here goes...isse kehte hai..kahani mein TWIST!! (ooooh...reminds me to the song from love aaj kaal!) ...lol...

firstly, i am so happy they had trusted heer's taste and the fact that she was well matured to take desicions for her own life... it's good to see them do that... and they really do know what happiness and love is all about... that sometimes money isnt what matters most... sometimes money never even matters... so it's great to see them consider that even if PJ is not rich and whealthy like all of them as long as he loves heer, they can support him... prem is intelligent, a great guy, and a good human being... that is enough to be successful.... yes...money isnt everything...as long as he can support Heer and keep her happy...thats all that matters...you dont need a mansion...all you NEED is a roof over you head...kyun!? and if you have love...and you are happy...things will follow...😃😃😃

ok, so when that %#$% threw that file, i thought it was a huge business proposal, and that their company would be ruined if it doesnt happen! but my was i in for a shock... he is really shameless, really... i am left with no words to describe him... he is an idiotic ba****d who has nothing but to care about some green paper, one of which he owns million of... and for that, i thought he's sell his soul, and his daughter! but i was wrong, this guy would sell god for money.... soul and daughters are nothing in comparison... he is ready to give away the life of his own life partner, just to get some money... i am beyond shocked at such animal behaviour... he is disgusting and that too, to just no limit... he is made up of all the devils in hell... he is even worse than those... he is someone who was born in hell, sent by the devils... he is beyond words... really!! the less i say about Balraj the 🤬 the better...dont wanna get banned from IF 😆...i think i hate him more than any villan in any of my other stories!! 😡 lekin...twist aacha tha na 😉😉😉

i loved how the boys tried real hard, they said they'd collect enough money for their mother, and for their sister's life... the confidence and independence is really admirable... how they were ready to sacrifice and work in so much extremes as to just save their sister from all the pain!! it was so admirable really!! but what i read after that... if i had no words to react to only what he has planned to do to his wife, jaz, i have no reaction left to what he has planned out for his own blood... he's one of a kind thats fro sure!! 😡😡😡...🤢🤢🤢

jaz, u think i can react to this? is it enough for me to not say anything at all? pls? coz i am trying real hard not to use anything abusive, but he is really something isnt he? how clever he is!! 😆... such a full-proof plan? wow!! he knows there would be no choice except to give in... he has left no alternative... wow... what a clever man!! what is he doing in business?? why didnt he choose politics?? bas***d!!! what an a****le!!! i cannot believe all this crapp!!! honestly, there just has to be somewhere he's actually draw a line and say, ok, this is my limit of kaminapaan, after this line, there is nothing on the other side.... but apparently, there is a lot more whenever he draws one no? like he sees more money evertime he realises he's about to cross the line, and never the less just steps another leap further? or he never drew a line in the first place?? he doesnt mind, that his money would be so much as to buying a whole country and he'd want the world!! enough to buy the world and he'd want the universe? how far? how far can he get? i hope he ends up killing his body coz of money... coz he never had a soul to kill!! he is a new one to me... i mean gabbar is bad... i mean really bad!! 😆, but he is of different class!! he is way apart, and way worse!! jaz, u need to stop medical and join EK!!! 🤣 his kaminapaan knows no bounds...its infinitely long...all i can say..is that karma..is a b*tch!! what goes around comes around...so he better watch out...asmaan toot padega uss par 😈...lmao...join EK...now why would i do that...but then again..i coudl be fun...torturing an international audience of a bigger scale 😛
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and this hatred for girls makes me wanna say he is soo damn 🤪 😡.... such a pain he is to humanity!! what a brainless chicken/coward he is.. just look at him trying to wash off his hands from his responsibilities... he was never a father, that is a given, but he was never a son kya? then how can he even be in the world he is in, earning crappy tree made paper?? what an idiot he is... he doesnt even realise the person who brought him to be such a ba***rd that he is is actually a woman who is apparently called his mother!! of all the hell combined, he is worse than every single one living on it!! seriously jaz, sometimes i just tend to believe there can also be people like this in real life!! 😕 bhagwaan kare no, lekin if there is, oh heavens, i hope no one ever encounter any, coz if my father was like him, i would have prefered to have my mother not ever tell me who made me what i am today.... he is just.... %^$&#^&^%^# many fathers think less of their daughters...especially the very traditional people...not to say that they woudl do what Balraj did...but they give more importance and power to their sons...no matter what the age...however...when it comes down to it...in times of need,...ghaar ki betiyaan hi saab kuch luta deti hai aapne parivaar ke liyeh...chahe woh mayaaka ho ya phir sasural! 👏 GIRLS RULE!!!

but yea, i guess the bros had just no choice but to actually just confide heer and tell her ke she ,must do as their damn boss in the house wants coz if not she may have lost her family, and ever member of it! i do hope that the 3 could've told heer coz atleast what happened couldve been prevented! coz honestly, i am so sure heer wouldve been much more happier if she knew that prem wouldve still been alive (not saying he isnt 😉)... he wouldnt be happy, but alleast she couldve acted like she was happy would rajveer and that would content him... it' just the way of love i guess, all one cares about is the other being happy... everything else is not even a worry... *sigh*.... i miss prem.... 😔... not only here but in the show as well.... true...if they only had one chance to tell heer...all of this tanhai could have been avoided...lekin kya karein...Prem bangaya Balraj ki lalach ki shikar! 🤢

i do understand the fled... it would be so scary to have killed someone especially when you never intend to do so, that too when he is the mere life of your very own sis!! it's really sad, but i wish they'd have thought sensibly then and there and called the police or someone to help poor prem... it's just sad... to have their sister suffer 7 years, wasting the most precious time she had.... and without intention.... poor boys... even if prem will be back, the 7 years wont! and i know it isnt even their fault... atleast now they wont be blamed for it, and that can give them little peace... when prem comes, i am sure they would feel the relief they had longed 7 years for! "WHEN" prem comes back...dont you mean "IF" 😆...you too are not letting this idea of zombie Prem go...uff...kya hoga tum saab ka?! 😕😕😕

Aapni choti behen ki kushiyaan humne aapne hatoon se khatam kaar diya hai. Humare saath aur kya hosakta hai?"... this made me cry.,.. really... how can they blame themselves?? i know it was their fault technically, but they never intended anything.... mistakes happen... and this is a mistake not a sin... their so called father is all to blame, and i dont even want to start on that... but poor boys.... they not only lost their sister, but also their family in the whole process... lost the trust and love they once had, suffering and paying for someone else.... 😭 sometimes...everything depends on a technicality...kya karein...the guilty they feel wont disappear...ever...😭

"But that still didn't change the fact that Prem had died. It didn't change the fact that Heer would have to spend the rest of her life without him. " - oh this line is so true from her prospective (only hers though!! 🤣) even if she knew her bros were not to blame, would it change the fact that for her he's no more... blast who is supposed to be the reason,.. in reality all that matters is she is alone, and no one can fill the void created by him.. she is still crying every night, she still remembers him every moment of her life, she still feels the emptiness wherever she goes, his memories still haunts her, and breaks her into a million pieces!! even if she finds out prem himself suicided, those facts are always going to stay.. forever... (not really, well i guess some more days! 🤔.... 😉..... 🤣) yes...even if she forgives her brothers...makes peace with all the mess...at the end of the day...when everyone else is off with their loved ones...she is by herself...NOTHING can change that...not eve me! 😉😉😉

but the hug was so emotional i had to wipe off tears from my eyes... like i am not even kidding... u must have read this line a million times from me, but no kidding, i mean it... it was so emotional.... i am just happy heer and her brothers are reunited!! coz even if it wont take away pain from all of them, it would just take some part of it off, as atleast they got a very important relationship back... honey...this isnt even my best emotional stuff...just you wait to see what i have stored for you all in SD...ha ha...*evil laugh*...cant wait...even today if i read the old updates on Kasam Se...i get teary...😭

She was no longer Daddy's Little Girl. Apparently, she never had been. - lastly, omg!! O-M-G... how do you do that.... how?? i know it's not even ur best lines (u have so much better!! ) but this one just had me so hooked into tanhai!! omg, i just loved this one so much!! she had never been... the realisation drowned on her, and she just shooked herself to reality at this point... and no matter what kind of $#%%^@% that guy is, he is her father... apparently... and obv, she will feel the pain that she once loved him so dearly and he never reciprocated her love, when she thought otherwise!! it's just painful.... but i am happy she found out reality!! she deserves to know the truth, and the 3 deserves to get justice... but sadly, u are not interested in giving prem the justice he deserves!! 🤔.... 😔 leave it to you to connect this line of Heer's to the nainsafi i have committed against heer...😆...lol...but yes...i feel for her...i speak from experience...nothign like what Heer went through...but still...the pain is there...😭😭😭

so, how have u been doing jazu?? hows the 'injuries'.... i have no symathy for u!! *hmph*... yeh kya hai?? you dont even take care of yourself!! i am really mad at you!!! abhi see what u've done? holding up all our updates?? 🤣.... u know i'm kidding yaar... dont even think of updating until you are great and running, warna i will be more khafa than this.... 😲😲😲 why did you put injuries in quotes...whats up with that...not cool...not cool at all *hmph*...the wrist is better...but it acts up every now that then...still have scars on my arm...they seem permanent...some skin discoloration too...😭...but still..i thank God...it could have been much worse...
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take good care of our writer ok? 🤣.... but on a serious note, jaz, take care ok? it's not a good thing to stress urself, especially after an accident! i can tell u r back to being busy in ur work or studies!! rest for a while before returning or u'll be weak! then what's the use of that... u'll be back to bed in no time.... i am not giving u boring lectures, or being a mom 😆.... i think i can trust u enough to take care of your own self nah? 😆.... oh, but i can't trust you in anything else!! .... 🤣..... lol...yes amma-ji...im all rested up and back in action! 😃😃😃

ok, abhi me is off... take care of ur car as welll.... because of u the poor thing is also injured... 😆.... enjoy ur holidays, aur will be waiting for the next one... hopefully soon, coz u are running and heathy soon!!! 😉 😆... AWESOME COMMENT!!! (best one so far!! ⭐️) and you should be proud of me...finished it before i went off to lunch...😳

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