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Posted: 15 years ago
hey really nice n long chapter n lovely too plz update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG!!! how can her dad...so sad.. and i ..yah as u can see, speechless..

i loved how veera shared that bond wih prem..its so cutee

and how she convinced heer to wear her set while she wears heers... that was so touching.."yeh sikhaya hai apni saali ko"lol

continue soon.. i wonder what preet mehta is going to do..

continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: *Guli*

Guess who is here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳 ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Finally!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Khush??? Now stop telling me on Msn!! me waitingI am here and i made it! and its like early in the morning and i am suppose to be doing my work but wat am i doing???? I am reading well actually finishing the rest of ur update!! I think am too lazy to go out on the floors right now!!πŸ˜† now look who is here πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...lol...im gonna update...just make sure u stay up until 10...lol...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Uff.... I hate the dad.... he's soo damn annoying and wat a selfish pig he is!! only thinking about himself and no one else!!!......... watever he can get... he will ruin other people's lives!!!... gosh wish i can strangle him one!!!😑 for a second i thought you said you hate dad? im like haila 😲 kaunsa...teri ya meri πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...my bad...lol...and yes...he is useless πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
haila wat an update that was!!!..... It was very cute!! Omg... the whole veera prem part was sooooooo cute!!!!..... gosh it reminds me of Dhaval and Payal!! I can so imagine him doing that!! And because everyone says that Payal is good lookin.... forget Dhaval sitting few rows behind he will be sitting right next to her and not leaving her!πŸ˜† she will be like Jiju leave me alone!!!!!! lmao... she will get tired of him doing that!!!........ lol...yeah...dhaval and payal...and dhaval and jaz...and dhaval and pachu...πŸ˜†...one jiju...kitne sare saliyaan!! he he...bechara πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›....
Haila....Heer is going to be hella pissed off now!! since the brothers were trying to get on her good side.... well they sorta ruined it!!! now lets see wat they do!!........ lol...do you even need to ask...lmao...saab toh jaante ho πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
Okay babe... I read... i commented and now you can now update!!!!!!!!!!! and u better do it soon... me dying to read the next part!!!........ and i know i have a feeling that before you read this message... u will surely tell me... to comment on ur FF!!!!!!....... did i tell you this time...maybe i did...i have a tendency to do that πŸ˜†πŸ˜† cant help it...you are so random i dont know when you update and stuff 😳😳😳
luv u babe!!😳 omg.. haila shopping is in 2 weeks!!!!!πŸ₯³πŸ‘πŸΌ let the spending begin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!πŸ˜† omg...one week!! and haila...tomorrow is D-day



Originally posted by: maha_k

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😑you r torturing us like ekta😭
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz no preet mehta in heer's life🀒🀒.we want our prem πŸ˜ƒabhi abhi abhiπŸ˜†πŸ˜† lmao...like ekta huh..come on...itni bhi buri nahin hoon πŸ˜‰
balraaj is such a sick man 🀬🀬 balraj is an a*s...simple as that 😑
preet mehta is just🀒 plz yar not this time we dont want heer-preet story plz plz plz plzzzzzzzz i hope that he is prem or prem is a friend of him and will come after sometime but still no preet-heer even just 2 minutes😑😑 lol...uff...aage aage dekho hota hai kya...keep some faith in jaz...dont loose it yet... πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...what if he turns into a valuable friend? πŸ˜‰
πŸ˜‰
but just loved prem and veera part cute one na😊
lovely bonding between veera and prem😊 i love jiju-saali bonding...i have the best jiju's ever...so i put that in my stories 😳😳😳
awsommmmmmmmm and lovely update with cute PH FBπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ thanks πŸ˜ƒ
update soon plz
thanks for pm



Originally posted by: indiandoll89

mine

I'm here! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³ *claps* More than a week though *groans* Sorry? 😳 Apni gudiya ko to maaf karogi na? 😳 yay!!! its ok...at least you came...that is what counts 😳😳😳

Should I like Preet? Is my main question really....cus this whole CONTRACT marriage thing....making me feel he's just as shady! *glares* And Balraj? Offering Heer's name like that? Ugh! I hate him! πŸ˜” Okay I'm happy that Preet knows part of the story, hopefully Heer or someone fills him in on the entire story! 😳 Then maybe he'll think twice about it! liking Preet or not is up to you...all i can say is that he is here for a while..so at least get used to him...and yes..Balraj is an a*s...you think this is bad...read the next update..phir paata chalega...what he really is πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Awwww Veera met Prem? 😲 That's adorable! πŸ˜ƒ And she remembers it all too! πŸ˜ƒ Cute! πŸ˜›

This is such a cute flashback! 😳 I love Veera and Prem's conversation! πŸ˜ƒ It's sooo cute! 😳 She already accepted him? and he's calling her Saali sahiba? Too cute! 😳 Awww I love what she asked for! that is soo sweet! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³they are cute naa...😳

In their second meeting, Prem sounds like superman! *giggles* Main kaun hoon isse koi farak nahin parta! 😳 *sighs* Prem! πŸ˜› I'm sooo glad he came to save her, those guys sound DISGUSTING! UGH! hormonal boys are disgusting...eeww!!! 🀒🀒🀒

I LOVE PREM!🀣🀣🀣 that was hilarious on his reaction to when Veera would get older! πŸ˜›πŸ˜† Wow Prem...shooting ppl! πŸ˜› stole that little bit from GH...i loved it when i heard it...its so funny!! πŸ˜†

I'm so glad Heer knew about Prem and Veera's special bond! πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ It makes it even nicer! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³

Loved it Jaz! thanks Gudiya...next part up soon πŸ˜ƒ

Update soon! πŸ˜ƒ

Meera😳



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: amu142

u make me dizzy gal!!! dont fall now πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

OMG!!!
PJ n Chulbuli had such a wonderful relationship!!! yup 😳
Balraj is such a scum!! slimy!! ^&$"*$%%E&**( yup 😑
ooh!! i am falling more n more in luv with this Prem of urs!"!!!! haila!! me too!! 😳😳
n who is Preet Mehta!! Pls dont make him marry Heer , if he is not Prem with a new identity!! I cant tolerate it!!
nyways, u hv a habit of pairing up Heer with Preet.....and leaving Prem alone...high n dry!!
ooh!! pls dun do it this time...that Prem was a jerk!! but this one is such a darling! well...Preet is Preet...what can i say about him...the update pretty much gave you his background...aage aage dekho...what this PM does πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
OMG!!!
and all the FB scenes are so damn adorable!! glad that you liked it πŸ˜ƒ
love it!!



Originally posted by: Anhdara13

my spot!

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So Preet is not Prem. *sigh* Oh well, he seems pretty awesome anyways. πŸ˜† He kinda reminds me of Milind from Kayamath. All uncaring about the world, only into his work. His work is his world. Methinks if he had a sister, or a sibling, it'd be family and work, but because he doesn't, then it's just work. πŸ˜† And he has Daddy issues. What is it with hot men and daddy issues? πŸ˜† Though, this makes for an interesting twist. (I saw this coming. πŸ˜› kinda. πŸ˜†) lol...sorry for bursting your bubble and shattering your dreams πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...im laughing but i am sorry πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...he he...ill be honest...Milind was my inspiration for Preet...i loved that show...until it too that stupid leap and stuff...all down hill from there ...hot men come with baggage...that baggage is what makes them more hottt!!! 😳😳😳

Balraj Mann is the most disgusting man on the planet! He sickens me. Money is everything for him, family means nothing? At all? He's ashamed of his widowed daughter? Ashamed despite the fact that his sons, and he! were the reason for her becoming a widow in the first place? He sickens me. He doesn't deserve such a wonderful daughter like Heer, or a wife like Teji, or a sweetheart baby girl like Veera. His sons, at least, have some decency in trying to stop him. Preet's assessment of Balraj is completely correct. He'd sell anything and everything for money. His self-respect, his soul, his daughter. Disgusting. you think this is bad...yaar...hold your horses...things only get worse...aage aage dekho ke yeh budha kya gul khilata hai πŸ˜›

I actually liked the brothers in this bit. They're going to try and save Heer I hope. Somehow, someway, they're going to do everything they possibly can to save her. Or I'm hoping for this anyways. Knowing them, they'll try talking to Balraj, and when he doesn't agree (which he won't) they shall sit on their hands and cry. Idiots. there is more to the brothers than meets the eyes...they are deeper character than most of the people in this ff...aside from Heer of course πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...watch what they do...or if they do anything to stop Balraj's tirade againse Heer πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Veera is such a sweetheart! She had such a darling relationship with her Jiju, she must have been as hurt when Prem died as Heer, though, obviously for a different reason. Veera lost her best friend, her brother, her confidante and her co-conspiritor, Heer lost her best friend, her lover, her soul-mate and her husband. But this bond, this just connects the two sisters even more. I love the way you've portrayed them. yes...they shared a special bond...an innocent and lovely bond...and now heer finally knows that veer too loved her prem...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Heer knows, thank God Heer knows! And she's skeptical about her brothers. I hope they do something to try and help her. It cannot change what they did, but at least they should try and redeem themselves, rather than just feeling 'guilty' and apologising. the brothers have a bigger part in all this...wait and watch πŸ˜›

Continue soon!

Love,
Radz



Originally posted by: Nitty2910

very nice update... you know everytime I read Tanhai updtes I have tears in my eyes and have to sit with a tissue paper in my hand... Prem and Heer's part is always very cute but everytime I remind myself that he is dead the tears comes automatically... Wondering abt this Preet Mehta.. for sure Heer is never gonna fall in love with him,, and Blaraj is so so bad, how can he even do this.... Wonder wat will happen now, since Heer has already rejected abt her marriage...

waiting for the next update..


thanks for reading and commenting...im glad that you enjoyed the update...next part up this weekend...stay tuned πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...dont cry yaar...mujhe aacha nahin lagta 😳😳😳...hope you didnt cry too much this time around...

JAZ


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjoyprithviraj

i am now confused. semms like preet is not prem

but still i think he is.

oh god i am so confused rite now.

update soon


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Originally posted by: stunninstar

jaz..

what did yuh do yaar...this was killing me...how can a dad be like Balraj.. he must have adopted heer.. otherwise why wud he do this..!!??πŸ˜” omg...dont die...kahani abhi baki hai mere dost πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...sorry...you are crying and im laughing...buri dost hoon mein 🀣

and preet mehta...he is what...i dunno..

dont want him marrying heer..at any cost...puhleez..

i want prem back... of course you do πŸ˜›

and ..

veera-prem angle was too good..loved it..

and i dont have any words here..i hope that the brothers do fr her someting this time atleast..

i dont want heer agree to this contract marriage at any cost..!!! even if some wonder happens..

the biggest wonder that can happen is preet is prem himself...now i know yuh are not ekta ...🀣..who will make such stupid twists.. lol...im surly not ekta...im not as crazy as her...but just stay tuned...watch the story unfold...and trust jaz πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

so that means..preet doesnt deserve to be heers hsband..not even fr name sake!!!

lol..i dont want Balraj to win this time...

get some other girl for preet...!and let him get hs dads property!!!i dont care..all i care is abt prem..i hope someone had saved him frm hat accident spot..!! lmao...give me another girl for preet and ill see what i can do...any suggestions...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

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love yuh...sandy...

PS: cant wait to read yr next update! soon...this weekend for sure...just watch for the PM... πŸ˜ƒ



Originally posted by: nuptalie

OMG BALraaaaaj is sick man😑
And preet such a yucky man,😑
Marriage as a deal,
Three brothers ar good for nothing, Hope they wont screw heer's life again.
Why can't they just leave her alone, they have done enough for her till now.. sigh....... yes...the main villan in all this is the stupid budha Balraj...he's worse than G3 in the show...nahin...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...

and the veera and heer talk with prem's memories made me so emotional and tears came to my eyes when i was reading those moments.
U have mentioned and captured those moments very beautifully.
And i never thought that veera knew about him and they had such a sweet and strong bond.
Seems like prem has taken over the maan's girl's hearts from the first sightπŸ˜† i love Jiju and Saali relationships...i have the best jijus in the world...so i try to add some of that in my stories...😳😳 cant help it...it just happens...and PJ and Chulbulli shared a good one...😳😳
Loved the whole update jazz,
I happy that u made balraaj and preet more evil so i wont be able to like preet and only love PH coupleπŸ˜‰.
And i cant still understand why Teji ji is not speaking any thing behalf of her daughter, why cant she taken her side for once?πŸ˜’ i dont even know why i have teji in the ff...she doesnt do anything...oh oh...wait...teji has an impprtant role...just wait for it to come out...it will be out soon...so fikar not...πŸ˜ƒ
I love heer so much, she is the perfect wife any body could have and a very strong minded woman, every time she respects Prem and their relationship more than anything.
Glad you show another twist in the story and hope prem comes back soon and free heer from that devil people and leave the house with her and this time for some place or another country that no one can disturb their romantic scenes and spoil their lives😳 even with Preet's entry you are holding out for prem...lage raho...im proud of your persistence πŸ‘
πŸ‘
great update once a gain jaz and thank for the pm lol.
Plz update soon , cant wait now



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: masin

aaappiiiiii!!!!!!!!! yaar my head's killing rite now..so i'm really sorry if i can't leave a long comment!! as for my window...of course i need jaz api's approval before a guy even wanders a mile within my house :D haila baacha 😲...are you feeling better..i hope so πŸ€—

this part was of course fab!!! i loved the flashback as always.....prem-veera!! i am left speechless!! and i loved prem's comment "i am simply going to have to shoot them!" and their small hug! and i liked how he wasn't hovering over veera and her friends at the mall..cuz im sure if it was one of veera's brothers..she would just end watching the previews because those three idiots would be too over protective!! i liked how prem was willing to fight veera's battles for her..but he also understood that she will grow up to be an independent young girl! whereas the three idiots would think tht veera would grow up to be...a little girl who is unaware of the world around her!!!!!!!!!! do u notice the consistency : the three idiots!!!!! i was worried if people would like the prem and veera fb cuz in this one there was no real Premeer fb...but im happy it went down well...πŸ˜ƒ
speaking of them..so much for their help! i mean honestly....i think its safe for heer to trust them, but pointless at the same time..cuz in they end, balraj never asked for their opinions! so clearly, no matter how much they'd wanna help heer, they wouldn't be able to, and tht wud just hurt heer all the more!!! "them" meaning the 3 idiots i take it...i love that title πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†....those idiots have more to them than what you see...hold judgment until the story is out πŸ˜‰
preet mehta!!!! well the guys is sounding hot! but i just wanna double check: u did clear up the fact tht there won't be a preet-heer-prem love triangle rite?? or is it just me hoping!!??? LOL! but balraj maan! are u for real!!!!!!??? i swear how did he ever become a father!! kk wrong question...don't answer tht......LOL 😳..but does he really deserve tht title?? wait no...wrong question again...does he really deserve the title of a living thing?? i mean even animals have feelings for their families! to call him disgusting would be praising this bald retard!!!!!!!!!! ughghghghghgh!!!!!!!!!!! 😑but back to preet....he has an interesting character..but he sounds like a guy with good morals and values..hopefully those kick in even more when it comes to him and heer!!!!!! Preet is HOT...beyond HOT...trust me πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ as for balraj...the less i say about him the better...i think i hate him more than i hated Manmeet in Ek Paal 🀬...he isnt fit to be called a human being 🀒...lanat hai uspar...he is just disgusting...😑😑😑
btw....i really hope heer doesn't get what she wants for rakha bandhan..kyun key jab prem wapas ayega to uss ghar mein heer ki shaadi ki baath tou uthegi na??? unless they move! πŸ˜› lol...i was shocked at first but the i saw you pull Prem into the discussions πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†... i was waiting for it πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
kk its getting late....me off to bed
thanks for the amazzingg update!!
love
Samra
P.S. do u still have the link to bani''s secret?...if so can u pm it to me please???
P.S. 2: OMGSSH!!!!!!! i forgot to talk about prem!!!!! well i loved him as alwayss.....verry cute i must say!!!!! (actually im still drooling over the prem in sau dard's recent installment! so kinda overwhelmed by prem here!!!) nonetheless...i loved how he said to veera "koshish zaroor karunga" i mean.....tht was so sweet and simple! he's obv. not nearly as financially stable as veera's family, but still he would try his level best to fulfill his saali's commands! i have a thing for saali-jiju relationships actually!! for instance, my jiju would never replace my brother..but i think most of the times, he's more affectionate toward me than my sister (in terms of complimenting my clothes, or my marks, or just having a general convo with me! or pampering me with food and chocolateeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!) as fr my sis..well she's a whole different story...she ignores my beautiful clothes, and gives me a lecture on how i'll worsen my acne by eating chocolate 🀒 LMAO newayss.........premeer definetely rocked this part..but i think prem-veera definitely stole the spotlight..and runner-up would actually be veera-heer near the endd!!!!! :D:D:D i was wondering what happened to your rant about Prem..i was like hmm...something is off...but yes...he is a darling is he not...perfect in all...ALL...relatioinships 😳
me out noww
hugss and kissesss
Your Sammy Bacha



Originally posted by: Sonalicious

I was really hoping Preet was actually Prem but I guess Prem really is gone :(

But great as usual...nice to see the Prem and Veera bond


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Originally posted by: Suhana_Ahmed

hey Jaz,
F-I-N-A-L-L-Y....
i was dying to read this FF... and that was very very cruel of you to keep me waiting like that.... sorry 😳

OH MY GOD!!! what an update... awesome FB... veera knew about Prem... sho shweet.... hai naa...😍

and chi... Balraj is disgusting... GOD!!! i never knew a father can sell her dughter... he is a big #$%@^... better i dont say that... otherwise i would be banned for abusing..... lets not talk about that a*s 😑😑😑

i think this time the brothers would stand by Heer... but whatever... this wouldnt lessen their crime... they will still be the same old monsters who killed their sisters husband... everyone pretty much had the same reaction πŸ˜†πŸ˜† they forgive just a bit but then they are back to hating πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

and now coming to Preet Mehta... smart guy... i must say... what a plan he devised to get away with his fathers stupid will... seriously whenever these parents bound their children with such stupid things... and the child had to some contract marriage type of thing to get away with it... i really dont blame the children... i feel the real responsiblity of all that lies on the parents... so for me... Preet really rocks... coz ahh... i can imagine him in that charecter... and trust he looks more than handsome with all that "give-it-a-damn" attitude... Preet is one of a kind...no one else is like him...he will turn out to be a good friend to heer...like one she hasnt had in years...even more so than Maya πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...but one this is for sure...he is HOT and he is sticking around the ff...so get used to him πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

i know Heer had to marry Preet... i know poeple would kill me for saying that but dont know why i am getting a kind of feeling that Heer would eventually end up marrying Preet Mehta... how are you dealing with the feeling...accepting aur nahin accepting πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

and seriuosly i dont mind that as far as it stays a contract marriage...
but you know my sixth sense is telling me that Preet is going to fall for her... and i strictly dont want that to happen... one thing i will tell you from experience...boy and girl can never remain just friends...at some point...one falls for the other...its inevitable 😳😳😳

and Jaz dear... its high time now... i think we should now get some cle about Prem... so please do that soon... coz i know that He is ALIVE... he cant die like that... aur kitna clear karoon...he was stabbed and cremated...what else can i do? πŸ˜•

πŸ˜•GOD!!! see how much i am involved into your FF... i am seriously going mad thinking about it...

please dont mind all that bak-bak of mine hun... when i get into something i just cant stop thinking and predicting about it... so please dear... bear with me... aare no minding at all...i LOVE it...keep up the great work πŸ˜‰

i think its enough... agar kuch aur likha to you will think me as a BIG-PAKAO... and i seriuosly dont want people to think like that about me...

and yes this rime PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!! otherwise you yourself will be responsible of the consequences... and the consequences could be as serious as 5 request PMs a day!!! update coming soon...really soon!! πŸ˜ƒ

ok dear...
thats it...

love ya,
Suhana.



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aati1429

HEY NICE UPDATE BUT WHY I FEEL HE IS PREET IS PREM ONLY... I WISH HE IS!!!

POOR HEER SHE HAS SEEN SO MUCH EVER SINCE PREM DIED OR SAY MISSING.. MAY BE PREETS FATHER SAVED HIM AND HE HAD N HEIR SO GAVE ALL PROPERTY TO HIM.. GUD MAY BE.. OH PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND WITH MORE ABT HEER'S PRESENT AS FLASHBACKS ARE VERY HURTFUL


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Originally posted by: bd670816

OMG!!!
PJ n Chulbuli had such a wonderful relationship!!!
you know everytime i read this ff i have tears in my eyes.
waiting for the next update.


thanks for reading and commenting...im glad that you enjoyed the update...next part up this weekend...stay tuned πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...chulbulli and PJ are a perfect jiju-saali duo...just awesome..glad that you liked that part 😳😳😳


Originally posted by: prempadmasujal

nice update
but plzzzzzzzzz preet aur heer ki jodi ko mein bardhash nahi karpongi


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fungrl

seriously preet is not Prem why

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you've done it Jazz, you smashed any hope of ever seeing Prem with Heer.....why I ask you why??? I mean Preet's character is Perfect if it were Prem................me don't want to fall in love with Preet, I love Prem, do not make me cheat you Jallad Jazz................. 🀣 apparently im the new big bad dream smasher...lol...however...its a title i wear proudly...along with the title of Kis Desh Tanhai FF ki Jallad πŸ˜‰

I cried while reading this update: first no Prem and second Heer's horrible taqdeer for being born into a Greedy, immoral family. Heer's brothers are big time sissies, wuss to be exact and her father is her pimp😑......Even though your story is a fabric of your imagination, it still made a appreciate my dad a heck of a lot more............I know monsters exist in all shapes and forms but the scariest of them are the family members b/c then you have no one to trust or to love you. yes yes...if nothign else...this ff will allow you to examine you relationships...although Balraj is a made up character...people like him exist in the world...i always count my blessings because i know that there are people out there who are worse off than i am

I just feel utterly and completely sad, I can't pinn for Prem and poor Heer is a goner...poor girl is sold as a livestock😭. dont count Heer to be down just yet...πŸ˜‰

Jazz you're a tragic queen...............me sadly but eagerly waiting for the next cry fest update.

btw..............I want a Husband like Prem...........and this new Preet sounds Hot....so I guess I shall make do with him...UNLESS he reunites Premeer.....holy cow I so see a shimmer of hope....may be I don't have to cheat...........😊 haila...😲😲😲...tragedy queen...😲😲...ok...ill wear that proudly as well πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...lol...kya karoon...im besharam like that πŸ˜›...and yes...Preet is hot!! maha hot!! πŸ˜‰
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Hasta Luego Senorita




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Originally posted by: --Sarah--

Amazing, Outstanding and Superb update Jaz
I read all your other ffs before reading this one..as i knew i should prepare myself for crying!!!
Gosh!! how you manage making us cry and get us to have heavy heart!!!!!!
Brilliant update Jaz and i loved it πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ thanks yaar...did you really cry this time too...it wasnt that sad was it...it was infuriating...but not sad...well maybe for you all it was πŸ˜†
Awee..Prem and Veera shared a beautiful bonding..gland to know this..that's why Veera share such a beautiful relationship with Heer...Jaz you beautifully portrayed Heer and Veera sis relationship!!!
Every time you take use to FB.. initially we feel all happy and 😳 😳 but as soon as the FB is over we feel to crying knowing Prem is no more 😭 😭 thanks for the compliments yaar...really appreciate it...im glad that you enjoyed the Prem-Veera and Veera-Heer bond that i showed in this update...😳😳😳
and preet..i like his character..i guess there are several reasons behind him behaving like this
What kind of father is Balraj? and i hope Heer's brothers will stand next to her this time
ummmm...is preet, prem with new identity....(Ekta..way πŸ˜‰) if not..then here is my request again
BRING PREM BACK BRING PREM BACKBRING PREM BACKBRING PREM BACK 🀣 i was wondering where your demands went...for a second i thought you finally accepted that Prem is dead πŸ˜†



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Additi...

UFfffffff,,,finally preet has arrived (thank GOD)

loved Prem and veera's bonding........and please dont make heer
marry preet.....we want prem back please............

will be waiting for you next update and thanks for PM


thanks for reading and commenting...im glad that you enjoyed the update...next part up this weekend...stay tuned πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...yes he is here and everyone knows it πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...

Originally posted by: PremHeer_Chahat

awesome update

continue asap
i hope preet turns out to be Prem
thanks for the pm
pm me


thanks for reading and commenting...im glad that you enjoyed the update...next part up this weekend...stay tuned πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ


Originally posted by: sweetanu2314

omg........balaraj..........i would have literally strangled him if he was anywhere near me......how could he??/ is he a father????now one question.........are u going to make preet heer jodi?i guess u will tell isn't it obvious........anyways do continue soon..........waiting for ur next update............


thanks for reading and commenting...im glad that you enjoyed the update...next part up this weekend...stay tuned πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...haila...😲 so many questions...lol...next update will explain more..watch for it πŸ˜†

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: coolgal270

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Oh! can i just strangle that lallu bhuddha...How cruel of him...and he calls himself a father?Yuck!..selling his own daughter for business🀒....rotten pig...and thank God, the 3 brothers were shocked by their father's lunatic mind.. he isnt lallu...he is Balraj...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...but i know what you mean...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰....
and preet mehta...still an enigma...hmm..eagerly waiting to see how the story unfolds...right now, heer is just a name, the ticket to his property...but me waiting for him to see heer and be blown away by her beauty and simplicity..If he is not prem that is.. Preet Mehta will surprise you...good or bad...ill let you tell me how you feel when the time comes πŸ˜ƒ

and jaz, that bit abt prem-veera was superb..Kudos to u to think of that...It brought tears to my eyes..
They shared such a beautiful relationship...and veera accepted prem as part of the family in one go..that was amazing...and prem teaching her the technique of saying "please"..oh that was incredible..just simply incredible..the whole Flash back thing was so heart warming and simultaneously heart breaking..*sniff sniff*..prem and veera had a great bond, brother-sister cum friends..and that is great...Oh..he was so loved..by everyone..heer, maaya and now veera too..only those 4 cruel maan males did not even bother to know him..Jerks..all 4.. thanks for liking the Prem and Veera track...i wasnt sure if it was gonna be liked cuz there really wasnt any Premeer in this update...but im glad that you liked...aab dont cry...varna main roh dungi 😭
esp that khadoos budhha...How i hope preet mehta teaches him some values.
and this is the chance for heer's brothers to do something for their sister...will wait to see how will they stop this marriage,,, Preet Mehta wont take any of Balraj's crap..trust me 😳😳

and that tradition of veera being fed by everyone in the house, that is so sweet...I want to ask Jaz, if that is actually a tradition somewhere or if u made that up?..Whatever be the case, I loved it..I m going to keep that on my wedding😳 it is so cute...all family members preparing a dish for the bride-to-be and then feeding her.. actually...that is something that my mom's family does and i believe my dad's does as well...all the rishtedars get together and feed the bride to be...they make a night of it...games, music, dancing...all that good stuff...its supposed to symbolize her last day as the daughter of that house...we call it Iboro Bhaat...or something like that...im glad that you liked it...i think its a great tradition πŸ˜ƒ




PM when u do the next update..eagerly waiting for that.. next part soon πŸ˜ƒ

love,sumi



Originally posted by: curledup

Oh my God awesome reaction 🀣

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the update was amazing none the less
but that was...that was that..seriously...was sick! how the heck can one man go so freekin darn low just to get more money that he really does not need Preets assumption is perfect about this man!...except he won't sell himself he will sell he close ones!...this bauji is sickening!....I mean c'mon that is just seriously pathetic more than pathetic it is disgraceful, disgusting unbelievable and he is the biggest sorry excuse of a father! ughhh!
Bauji the Ullu is just ...eww!! utterly disgusting...watch for what else he has planned πŸ˜‰

now now Preet is not the best of the guy is he..he got his image clear on that one!...he is a jerk! With a capital J! I like prem better in this one!...and I bet have of the readers are with me on this..right guys ill agree with you on that one...Prem is the better guy for sure...Preet is a Jerk...he too...like balraj is very money minded 😑😑😑

And one big big shocker..the brothers defended heer? *gasp* 😲 😲 are you serious? *woot*woot* akal tho teeka neh mai ayee! 🀣 well brothers will you keep heers rakhi promise or not?...if you don't then.... 😑 😑 there is more to the brothers...aage aage dekho...hota hai kya πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

veera and prems relationship is cho cute!......I love the whole PJ thing and If I was prem I would make sure I would have given him two three more slaps!!....prem is my hero! 😍 even though I don't have one! 😳 glad you enjoyed that bit...i loved it too 😳😳😳

I hope last minute.com kuch hojata hai!!

fantastic update Jaz
and update when you can thanks yaar for understanding my situation...appreciate it πŸ€—
-aashifa-

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