*reserved*....
see, arent you proud of me??😆, itni jaaldi unreserve kiya hai maine toh!! *pats myself on the back*.... aur haan, haan, i know a lot of people dont unreserve, but main unmese ek hi hoon na? ... it totally slipped out of my mind to unreserve HS and SD... but this time, i wont... promise... ... okie, so before is start, i wanted to say ke this update is the second best one to the little prem heer flashback walli update... i dunno why, but i read it 3 times before unreserving, just coz i really loved it, so i guess my comment will reflect that.... 😳
okie, so how cheesy and stupid this may sound, but i am trying to write as if i havent read the next parts, so u'll kinda see what i felt as the update goes along.... firstly, u will never believe what i am gonna write... dont faint ok? 🤣 but i dunno why.... i kinda felt, just somehow ke.... wait, i'll tell you later.... 🤣, just to keep the suspence, meri bhi haq banti hai, u are torturing us all by this darn suspence of yours, mine is thoda sa....😆.... so, so, so, preet mehta, seems like he doesnt have a great reputation amongst him employees and others around, does he? he is a man who lives by his own terms, has emotions, yet acts tough outside, feels pain but believes a man never cries... hmm, i think i know what preet is, and what he wants.... he has a heart, and soent show he does, he doesnt even believe he has one, or so i feel.... but inside he's an emotional guy.... i like him jaz.... i dunnno if that went as a surprise, but i do... i know i 'hate' (🤣) preet in HS, but i like him here... kinda... u'll know how less, or much soon enough *sespence music*.... 🤣
he is also a man bhar-bhar ke full of ego nah? he loves his stature, and his reputation... he belives in himself, and only himself.... no one is better, and even close to being so infront of him... hmmm.... his father.... seems like another maan man.... i hope he is somehow related to balraj, then heer would be preet's cousin no? 🤣.... okie, except for the surname... 🤣.... where was i? yeah, so i think he's a jerk, and whatever he did, i didint think it was really to have his name carried forward, it was more screwing his son and taking away his peace... and heer's as welll... sigh....
yes, preet is a jerk, but a clever one indeed.... and his father, oh-so-stupid to be even called blessed with brains... preet can marry a prostitute and divorce her to get the damn property... where is logic in that? just marying and getting away with everything, isnt that oh-so-easy for his vicious brained son? atleast preet dint go after his brainless dad.... but yea, i love his confidence... there's something about his words that makes me always feel he's a two-faced guy... someone who really is sure about what he's doing, yet has two thoughts about it... it's a very intriuging character indeed.... very interesting prospective to read, as far as i'm concerned... pure business he is, yet there's an element of emotions.... jaz, did i say you rock?? making me think hard as to how i take in his character.... it has me somewhat confused and yet i tend to like him somehow... but i am talking only as far as i have read.... 😉.... 🤣
also, this preet mehta- he has intuition doesnt he... how easily he figured someone's inside, and how a person thinks in real terms... i love that asset, and i dont have it, not even .0000001 %... i tend to beleive only what i see, but reality is that there is always more to what a person really is... and preet has it inhim to see that... somehow, made me feel he can see through heer to? through what she wants, her hapiness and what she lives for? just asuming jaz, just assuming... 🤣... oh my heavens....... balraj is such a bas***d.... i was swearing like hell when i read that..... he is an absolute mockery to human as a whole, he is sick, disgusting, absurd, a** h***..... i absolutely loathe such people, and he tops them all.... you know, i have read ek paal so many gazillion times, and you would never imagine how much i had hated manmeet there... much more that i hated him in the real show, let alone any other FF.... bu tthis.... this is the absolute limit to evil.... he is an absolute mockery to a god created animal.... he is plain disgusting... i am appauled at this... really, i wont be able to explain how much disguisted i felt reading all that he had to say.... uuff.... 😡......
manmeet never loved heer in EP... and even how much of a ------ he was there, at least he never appreciated her, loved her, or was even related to her, except for the sexual abuse that he had done to her... i know many wont agree, (and i dunno about you as well) but i really think balraj is much worse that manmeet could even think of becoming... here he is, ready to sell his daughter, who is a widow because of his darned self, and now ready to set her marriage with a person he knows would not only never accept her as his wife, but also who she'd never be happy with??? and for what?? for what is all this? for money? mere some damned peice of paper... he is ready to sell a part of him, his blood, his own daughter.... oh heavens he is just... 😡.... plus, he wants to get rid of her, not even a tiny bit of pang in the stone in his chest about the fact that if it wasnt for his meherbaani, his daughter would be out of his sight for more than 7 years by now?? if he despised her to such extent, then why did he kill prem in the first place? why didnt he just let her be with her love, happy, and away from his sight?? just so he could make a deal, sell her and dispatch her forever?? and how confidently he said she'd agree... and what if she doesnt? then what? he'd kill her like he killed her life 7 years ago?? my blood is boiling, and i am getting HBP... so, will stop talking about an animal, what can you expect, he's barbaric....
but preet getting shocked got me to think that he believes in relationships even if his life was so empty... i like him thinking sick of balraj, coz it shows he has no similar thoughts whatsoever.... and preet is so right... balraj for a few bucks would sell his soul, his family, his sons, his everything, so what is daughter?? there is just one thing he'd never offer, and that is his life... uugghh....😡.... and no comments on his smile while saying prem is dead, coz i swear, i'd blow up, if i comment on that... all i have to say is watch out, coz in no time, yor smile would turn into storm of tears.... wait till you see the 'dead prem' walk right in front of you... jaz, you'll prove me right wont you?? 😛.... 🤣.... i havent used any emo except angry one for a long time, just was so amazed with such a character... but your writing made me say all that i did...you are fab, really!!
so to sum up mr preet mehta, after all that i said, all my suspence khatam, and the verdict is.... *drums rolling*.... 🤣(you do a lot of that in KDC so thought why not copy??).... i love this preet for some darn reason... uuhhg, i dont want to, but i somehow do.... and you know what kind of absurd thought came into my brain, why cant they have this contract marriage and he help her find premu... or if there is no chance at all for prem to be back, i guess i can accept them together... i dunnno how i said that, and that's why i told you it would shock you to no extent, but after all this, i dunno why i feel you wont bring back my premu 😭, so.... but no, i have complete confidence in prem... coz like i said again and again, if heer is breathing, then prem's heart must be beating... and i am sure it is, and no preet mehta can come in between that, coz there is not a micro meter of gap in their hearts for him to sneak in.... ....haye, i am feeling fresh and confident, prem will be back... he's on his way... and no jaz, i am not expecting any kind of comment in this regard... 🤣....
ok so back to present.... oh my heavens jaz... u dunno how much i loved that whole flashback... that's why i said i love this update all too much, even if somebody didnt put a certain prem and heer FB... *hmph*.... but my gosh, i fainted... just reading it... was so sad and happy at the same time... haye, i will comment on the whole part in detail....
so firstly, 🤣... geez, how come we never get to see that type of reaction... scared and almost zombie like in the real show... i know prem must have looked absolutely hillarious, when veera made her presence felt... so miss veera is very much like her sister isnt she? adorable... that convo with prem regarding the 'aap' was just too much like heer when she was young... that's why she's so much like her sister right now... sweet, loving, caring... understanding... i wish veera was like that in the real show... i wouldve loved krystle to have a nice rol to play.... ... oh welll... kya karein? 😆
ooh saali huh? hmm, interesting how she liked him already... but on second thoughts, there is no one who wouldnt like prem nah? 😳... he's just that nice... "practice" 🤣..... she is too cute... how do you create such characters... haye, love her, sweetypie... yea, ab jeeju bulaya hai, jeeju ke saare farz bhi pure karne padenge!! oh my, she is just a gem, honestly, u wont believe how much i love veera... whatever she asked for, was just what type of person she'd turn into as she grew up.... the perfect sister... so young, yet so very mature... i love such kids... i was one myself, as long as i can remeber... but you know better than to trust me nah? 😉.... 🤣
ooh, i loved the fact that they both kept their secret uptill now... prem never told heer he knows veera, and vise-versa... even if they had such an adorable relationship, they never told the person responsible for it.. it's just the beauty of what they shared that even without the person in concern knowing they share such a good rapport.... and.... 🤣🤣, prem beta, kyun ziid kar rahe ho, she never broke her promise in more than 7 years, and she'd tell you what heer wrote in her diary?? koshish kar, maybe kjaz would be meherbaan on you!! as it is she apparently killed you!! 😡....and uff jaz... uff, how much i hate you for doing this... u'll never know *hmph*.... gosh, i am gonna bash u so bad if it wasnt for risking me seeing the next update, varna, 😡..... 🤣
maine socha, agar you dont go by some maska, and bribing, then maybe warning and dhamkiyaan will do, 🤣.... ok so back to where i was.... unn boys ki toh main 😡... i am gonna personally come slap those idiots... himmat kaise hui... prem ke saali ko taang karne ki?? uff... kiss?? teri muh ki toh main!!! okie, so i am getting kinda physical... atleast writing that way... 🤣.... ooh, but no worries when knight in shining armour is here.... sigh... he's so cute... 😍..... jaz, dont wanna comment on prem, u r just too nice... *hmph*... killing prem that way... even if he'll come back... 😆.... dont you pity us? dont you jaz? tell me? and i know u'd say no... 🤣.... i just hate you more now... *narrowing eyes* 😆
"Meri saali aaise roh rahi hai. Come on Chulbuli, main hoon naa. Jaab tak main hoon, tujhe kuch nahin hoga."... okie, so i said i wont comment on prem, but i had to in this dialogue... uff, jaz, all the water i have inside me drains in my eyes while reading tanhaii... i was literally sobbing when i read this... felt some pang in my heart.... especially the last line, jab tak main hoon... uff, why jaz? okie, i have asked this and it's getting annoying to read, i know... 😆, so wont go about that... but really, i felt so darn horrible... just the sinking feeling that as long as he's there nothing would happen to her, par now, that he's not, it feels as if she's more vulnerable to pain... atleast i felt that way... coz he is what a brother really means... caring and wiping away his sis's tears instead of giving her pain, like a certain three pack brothers... who i apparently am not that angry with...
🤣🤣🤣 aww, prem you are too cute... revelation? where did you brain vanish to all this time... and nahin, she is too old now.. she ought to have a boyfriend... your girlfreind was going out with you since she was 5... now veera is 12 ish... 🤣... spare her... and share her... 🤣... but i just love this random prem, he's just perfect, as a bro, a jeeju, son, boyfrind.. human,,.. love him... 😳...."shoot them" 🤣🤣, wah prem, what an idea!! you are too clever... but ek minute... jaz, just a sec.... so dont tell me those 3 got the same thought and apparently killed prem coz they felt the same way he felt for veera?? 😕... ok, so i will stop... 🤣... now i dont even make a tiny bit sense....
he is the best jeeju in the world, doing all that for veera, and that too without heer knowing a thing about it... he is the perfect jeeju anyone would wish for.... 😳, but that doenst mean i'll wish for one... i dont mind having one, but, i am expecting a pati like him, intead of jeeju... ☺️.... why will someone else be so lucky, when i'm not dead?? 🤣.... and i knew it, knew it, he'd buy that earings for veera.... even if he's so poor, he still would manage to buy her those..... killing an angel, gosh jaz, me will never forgive you.... ever... *hmph*....
no comments on the last flashback... feels horrid having to say 'was' all the time, so i am escaping this.... except for the kiss... it was too cute... haha, prem, dont press your luck... it'll turn into bad luck... 🤣
i knew she'd agree to exchange the jewelry... they were just sharing something they both loved so much... and at the same tiem sharing the memories they both love even more dearly... prem is always gonna be special for them in differnet ways, having memories of him all the time... it was always heer's pain that i always thought about.. now that i think of it, probably even veera felt very hurt, as she also apparently lost a very dear one... it's just that she never showed her pain... 😭
wah prem, apni saali ko aise badmaashi sikhake sharam nahin aati?? 🤣... aww, love all three of them soo much... they are perfect jaz, like so many other characters of yours... they too fit in that category...
O-M-G-O-M-G-O-M-G-O-M-G-O-M-G!!!!!!!!!!
i am still shocked that heer heard, what thay animal has planned for her... but what i dont get is, that how would he force her to come out and actually marry some random preet mehra, either knowing the deal or not?? coz either way, it's heer's loss altogether... if she marries him knowing about the deal, even if that would mean a permanent chutti from her darn father, it would also mean going by what her father actually wanted... if she doesnt know about the contract, then there would be no way she'd do it, coz she loves prem as much as she had always done, for her whole life!! so i dotn get how mr. balraj is planning to take things ahead... either way he is a ba***rd.... 😡
but all i can say for the brothers is, whatever they have done, 7 years ago would never be forgiven.. what they took away form their sister, 7 years from today, and 7 years later, her whole life... they all left not a hole, but they took her apart completely leaving her to live in the remainings of her broken self... i will never ever forgive them for that... ever... but at the end, now they are repenting... trying almost to save their sister from another flood of pain that is coming her way... without her having a clue... and what heer asked from them, was beautiful... simply marvellous... how i loved the way she said everything... now the men has to prove they really love her... and never did all that they did on purpose... now they have to show heer that they really want her to have if not a happy, then atleast a peaceful life... (obv untill prem is back 😉).... now they have to show that for heer, they'd stand and fight against their father.. the one who broke their family apart, and not feel a drop of pity because of it... it's going to be fun seeing them decide who to choose, but i have a feeling maybe, just maybe, preet would be the winner in all this... and maybe even balraj.... ....
where is mr knight in shining armour... and no, i am not talking about that mr. mehta.... 😆... he'd be back heer, he will!! he surely will!! and he'd take you away from all your pain, and bring you back to where you belong... in hapiness.... he will be back heer, to give you the love you had missed and deserved for the last 7 years... he'll be there when you need him most... there is no one who can take his place... not even preet mehta, and if anyone tries, he'd be back to fight for his rights!! 😆...... jaz, no, i am not expecting a comment here,... i wansnt talking to you... i was talking to heer...🤣.... tumse to baat karna hi bakaar hai.... 😡.... 🤣....... kidding yaar.... NOT!! 😆
achcha, toh i almost forgot (can you believe???) to update this last bit again!!! 🤣.... but see, me is here with the complete comment... 😆.... waiting for the next update... and since you are the DOTW, why not give us a little favour and update, umm... today?? *pretty please*.... ok, who said i dont ask for much? 🤣.... achcha, i will forgive you coz i am habing fun with the pouncing, lekin next week, it's due... *hmph*.... after this suspence, u need to give us a dose... 😆.... chalo, will c u in the next update here... hope it is soon - although i wouldnt mind you delaying it a day or 2, for a longer update... 😳.... ok, so enough of my unnessesary bak-bak... come back soon, varna!!!
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Edited by Cess- - 15 years ago
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