New SS: Tanhai Part 9 pg69 Dec 27

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Angie

@angel82

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

wow jaz , a new one.....am soo happy......love reading ur stories....

as usual , interesting prologue and very well written ....I loved how you describe the intensity of their love from childhood to adulthood....

I am sure its prem and heer ......it has to be ....those lines of how he protected her from other school boys, those dialogues, it has to be Prem...😃 and if it is prem then the girl will surely be his heer...isnt it?

eagerly waiting for the next part to know....

oh but the last line was indicatiing misery and sorrow ....but i'm sure they will live it together...

Do continue soon

luv

angie

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topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

hey nice start i do want u to continue...plz add me to ur pm list

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Svetalana Singh

@-svetalana-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

can't wait for next update..so u will be updating next week only...good start as usual

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

So ominous that end. I cannot wait for the next bit.

You know, the first thing I thought when I read the prologue, what with the three elder brothers, and middle class elder boyfriend was that the pair are Veera and Nihaal. *raises eyebrow* If it is, it'd be damn interesting to see how you write them, that's for sure.

Cannot wait for more!

Love,
Radz

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sonia

@cute_bear

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

omg another ff....and u have to continue..and who is this couple...im thinkin nihaaal and veer coz veers only gt 3 brothers....but forget that u have to update soooonnnn

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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Hell ya continue it. :)

Ohh now I think it's Nihaal and Veera as well. And than they go home and than...something. Don't look at me like that, you are the writer, you tell me what's going to happen. 😆

Awesomly written, loved how he stopped everyone from bullying her but my fae part was the description of the girl as a bride, it was awesome, and the idea of her walking down a dark street dressed in bright red is so eerie. Loved it!

--shabz

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

whats ss stand for..secret shaadi..lol

im really liking it.. have no idea who the couple are tho... but seems intereesting.. plz let m eknow when u continue *NOTICE: i said when and not if !!*lol