|| The 100th Shot || All 3 Parts Added!

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Before I start the one shot, I have a few things to say; firstly this shot would not have been ANYTHING without everyone who constantly helped me write and gave me ideas and feedback and all of those people better know who they are otherwise my danda's flying your way! 😉 Anyways I also want to quickly add in that I am really really sorry to some of the people who have been featured in here but haven't been given enough footage, me being the writer ate up most of it? 😳😳 Anyways enjoy! 😃 Also since the one shot is 28 pages on Word, I have to post it in two parts, so the next part will be in the next post! 😃



"Come on Rinki. Walk faster, we were supposed to be there like 20 minutes ago," Aradhna rolled her eyes at the girls trailing behind as she walked ahead, her arms linked with Bhavna and Nonee.


"Why does she pick me?" Rinki mumbled under her breath frowning at both Kiran and Shabo. "You two are both here too, walking SLOWER than me."


"Radz di just loves us more," Shabo preened as Rinki passed her a death glare.


Shifali winced as both Asma and Ravjot supported her on both sides. "I hate having a cast."


"At least your foot is heal-able?" Asma offered.


"Not helping," Ravs whispered to her as Shifali just looked at Asma with no expression on her face.


"Right," Asma whispered back as they both helped Shifali to a bench.


"When were the guys going to get here?" Maddy asked as she, Avi and Zahra finally approached the bench.


Zahra looked down at her watch. "About 15 minutes ago. You know the time we were supposed to be here?"


"I blame her." Avi glared at Ravjot.


"Me? What'd I do?" Ravjot frowned.


"You drive too slowly," Shabo stuck her tongue out before hiding behind Kimz.


Ravjot glanced behind all of them at the huge bus they had managed to park in the parking lot. "You really think it's my fault when it's my first time driving one of those?"


Radz shook her head before looking up at the large gates to the amusement park. "Should we go in? Or wait for them?"


"Obviously wait." Kimz answered.


"The guys have the tickets," Rinki added.


"Right," Radz nodded until she saw a limo pull into the large parking lot. She lowered her sunglasses to get a better view. "Did Chuck bring his limo to a theme park?"


Hearing Chuck's name got an instant glance from Nonee who strained to see over the shoulders of her friends.


Sure enough, a black stretch limo had entered the parking lot leaving Nonee gasping for air while Bhav silently handed her a water bottle to keep her from hyperventilating.


All the girls' eyes trained on the limo as the driver opened the door and all 12 boys stepped out into the scorching sun looking as dazzling as ever. Prem led the way out as he stepped out first, followed by Preet, Manav, Mayank, Farhan, Akki, Farid, Yug, Arjun, Alekh, Nate and finally the owner of the limo, Chuck.


All the girls had plastered smiles on their faces as they watched the boys walk towards the bench where they were gathered.


"Hey," Prem greeted all of them; but judging at the way he was smiling Zahra knew that smile was reserved for her. "Here are the tickets," He handed each person their admission ticket and kept both his and Zahra's with him. "I think some of us might want to do our separate things and so we'll all meet back here at precisely..." he glanced down at his Tag Heuer watch. "11pm? It's 11am for everyone else who can't read time. Preet," Prem winked before taking Zahra by the waist towards the entrance.


"What did he mean by that?" Preet narrowed his eyes as his brother walked through the gates.


"He meant you can't tell time," Farid patted him on the back before nodding at Rinki who shrugged and made a face. "What's with her?" He whispered to Akki who was standing next to him.


"Beats me," Akki grinned before holding his hand out for Kimz who took it happily as he led her away.


Slowly some of the couples went off in their own directions leaving Shifali, Shabo, and Nonee there while their respective others stood there as well.


"Why aren't you smiling at Arjun jiju?" Shabo whispered to Shifali while all three boys took out their cell phones and pretended to keep busy.


Shifali rolled her eyes in response. "We kind of had a fight,"


"About?" Nonee asked.


"Nothing important. Anyways, not gonna let that ruin our day." She cleared her throat. "Punjji, tumhe aaj bhi kaam hi yaad hain. Not your injured girlfriend?"


Arjun smirked as he looked up from his iPhone. "Yeh langdi meri girlfriend hain?"


Nonee grimaced as Shifali's eyes widened. Shifali grabbed at her crutches' and thrust them at Arjun's shoulder and he rolled his eyes as he easily pulled them away from her.


"Now what are you going to do?" He challenged as Shabo and Nonee both slowly got up and walked to the other side of the bench.


"I'm going to be the wounded party and let you help me around on your shoulder." Shifali whined.


"Good idea," He winked at her before handing her the crutches' again.


Shifali smiled slowly as Arjun put his arm around her shoulders as he walked at her pace towards the park.


"Well now that that's all over...." Shabo grabbed hold of Preet's arm. "Let's go!" She grinned as she pulled him along.


"So they're all gone," Chuck stated as he stepped closer to an already blushing Nonee.


"They are indeed." Her voice shook as she mentally tried to keep herself conscious even though his body was moving closer to hers.


"Did you want to come back to the limo with me?" Chuck asked, his breath caressing Nonee's cheeks as her bottom lip trembled. Seeing Nonee's blush darken Chuck smirked and took her hand in his as he led her towards the limo.


Nonee was confused. She loved being with Chuck but should she let things progress already? Who was she kidding? This was Chuck Bass, her mind screamed to her as she walked quicker to his limo.


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


"Harshad come on! All of them have been there for like 30 minutes already," Meera rolled her eyes as she pushed his face to the front.


"What? Can't help it." He quickly glanced at her and saw her shake her head at him.


"Wait! Stop the car right here," She said frantically as her eyes focused on something in the distance.


"This isn't really a parking spot Meera," Harshad pointed out.


"Thanks for the insight Harshad," She shook her head. "I think that's Nonee isn't it?" she points into the distance.


Harshad squinted his eyes in the direction she told him and nodded. "Definitely."


"And Chuck's with her?" Meera asked.


"Well obviously."


Meera didn't know what she was more annoyed with, Harshad's constant bantering or the fact that Nonee was leaning against the limo with both of Chuck's arms around her.


"She's a big girl Meera. Let it go,"


Meera fumed at him while he parked the car. "Can we at least walk past them to say hi?"


Harshad just shook his head in response as he took her hand and they walked towards the limo.


"Hey Nonee!" Meera smiled as Chuck and Nonee jumped apart from each other.


"Me...Meera? I thought you guys were already in the park?" Nonee smiled wearily.


"Oh no. We just got here. Aren't you guys coming in?" Meera asked.


Harshad shook his head and mouthed sorry to Chuck who smirked back and waved him off.


"We, uhh, need to get something from the limo," Chuck replied.


"Oh, should we wait with you?" Meera offered.


"No. We're going in. Let's go," Harshad took hold of Meera's waist and led her to the park while she muttered under her breath.


"What was that all about?" Chuck leaned his left side against the limo while Nonee leaned her back against it breathing deeply.


Nonee shrugged. "I have no idea. She's not usually so overprotective. I'm guessing it's your reputation,"


"Uh huh," Chuck leaned a bit closer as Nonee giggled until she stopped seeing the way his eyes were fixed on hers.


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


"Preet come on!" Shabo whined as they reached the entrance for the 'Screamin' Swing'.


"I'm not going on a kids' ride Shabo," Preet refused.


"It's not a kids' ride." She narrowed her eyes at him. "Besides you promised me we'd go on whatever rides I wanted to?"


Preet shook his head. He hated the way she'd stick out her bottom lip at him. It made him melt every time and right now was no different.


"What if someone sees me?"


"I'll say it was my idea." Shabo grinned up at him.


"Which it is," he corrected her.


"Uh huh. Ab chalo!" She smiled as Preet walked with her to the entrance of the ride. "I love how much you love me,"


"Sure," Preet smiled as he pulled her hand closer to his. "You love me too right?"


"I don't know Preet, do I?" she yanked her hand free and crossed her arms. "At times I just think we're together for the enjoyment."


"Right," Preet nodded. "Maybe I should find someone else then?"


"Go ahead Preet-I can always find MUCH better guys," Shabo smirked as she quickly put down her bag and ran to find a seat on the ride.


Preet smiled as he went and sat down next to her. "You know something?"


"What?" Shabo pulled the bar over her head.


"You'd never find anyone as good as me," Preet took her hand as he pulled the bar to his lap. "And you know it."


Shabo smiled as she shook her head. She could beat anyone else in arguing but when it came to Preet, she was speechless half the time. Her fingers tingled as he tightened his grip on her. Neither of them were very publicly affectionate with each other but whenever he did little things like this, Shabo could feel her heart soar.


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


"Hey Bhav do you want to go on that one?" Nate pointed to the highest roller coaster in the park and watched as Bhav's face went from a smile to look of sickness.


"I...uh, really?" Bhav muttered.


"Hey, what's wrong?" Nate put both his hands on her shoulders and a small smile crept onto her face. "Did I say something?"


Bhav shook her head and smiled wider. "You didn't do anything."


"Bhav's just a fatoo when it comes to roller coasters," Zahra adds as she and Prem come from behind.


"A fa--what?" Nate blinked a few times at Zahra until Prem took pity on him.


"It means a scaredy cat."


"I am not," Bhav crossed her arms and glared at Zahra.


"Except that your face did change color when I mentioned it," Nate commented earning himself a glare from Bhav.


"We've done enough damage Z, shall we?" Prem took Zahra's hand and led her down the path.


"Are you angry?" Nate asked in a soft tone, putting his hand on Bhav's shoulder again.


Bhav looked up into his eyes and could feel the anger slipping. "No," she finally smiled. "Can't be upset with you."


Nate's smile got wider as he took hold of her hand. "Do you want to go on the rowboats?"


Bhav nodded. "That'd be perfect,"


Nate led Bhav towards the row boat entrance. "Are you sure this is okay?"


"More than okay Nate," Bhav rolled her eyes. "I'm not totally afraid of rides. I've just had some bad aftershocks on them that I definitely wouldn't want to experience with you around."


"I won't ask," Nate smiled as he lowered himself in the boat.


"Good choice," Bhav commented as he held out his hand for her to take. She let him pull her into the boat and the minute she sat on the bench she giggled.


"Something funny?" Nate asked as he pulled out the oars. "Or is it something in Hindi that I obviously won't understand?"


"You'd understand this, I'll just say it after," Bhav smiled as she took in the surroundings around her. Nate started rowing the boat till they both realized they were going in circles. "Have you actually every rowed before?"


"Uhh...no. Is it obvious?"


"A bit," Bhav nodded as she leaned back in the boat.


Nate threw the oars down on the bottom of the boat and smiled. "So want to tell me the funny thing now?"


Bhav rolled her eyes. "You have no patience do you?"


"None," He grinned, hitching a side of his mouth up in what Bhav would call a sexy grin.


"Fine," she sighed. "You know that old Disney movie?"


"There have been thousands of Disney movies Bhav. Which one?" Nate replied.


"The little mermaid?" Bhav winced.


"What about it?" Nate asked.


He was not making this easier for her. She groaned to herself. "Okay do you remember after Ariel turned into a human, and she and Eric went on a boat ride?"


"Uh huh--what happened after?" Nate leaned his elbow on his right knee and leaned forward.


"The crab sang a song,"


"Sebastian," Nate added.


"Yes him." Bhav narrowed her eyes at him. Did he know where she was getting at and just refused to understand?


"What song did he sing Bhav?"


"'Kiss the girl,' it just reminded me of this situation. Happy?" She frowned and crossed her arms.


"Did you want to relive the magic moment?" He leaned closer and asked. Without waiting for Bhav's approval Nate leaned into her and kissed her softly, the light waves of the lake crashing around them.


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


"Why'd you do that Z?" Prem whispered into her ear as he pulled her close, leaving no space between them.


"I--what?" Zahra answered, finding it hard to breathe being so close to her fiance.


"You know," Prem smiled tucking a stray strand of her hair away from her face leaving her gasping.


"I uhh...Bhav made me say it? I don't know?" Zahra muttered.


Prem released her from his hold. "I love you, you know that?"


Zahra rolled her eyes. "That's why you enjoy annoying me, or making me nervous or causing this crazy redness--," she gestures to her face. "--that never goes away!"


"You're right," Prem winked at her. "I do love that stuff even more."


Zahra shook her head and looked around the park. "Oh Prem! Look! Let's go there!" She dragged him along to a games stall.


"Really Zahra? You want a stuffed teddy?"


"Please Prem," Zahra held onto Prem's forearm and made puppy dog eyes. "Mere liye?"


Prem sighed. He could never say no to those eyes. "Theek hain," He smiled at the game attendant. "How much?"


"6 tokens." The attendant told him and held out his hand.


Prem dropped the tokens in her hand before taking the rifle. "You're so lucky I love you,"


"I know." Zahra grinned and gave him a thumbs up.


Prem couldn't believe that he was going to play a midway game as an adult. He had to shoot the balloons, all of them, in order to win Zahra a nice teddy bear.


He closed his eyes before adjusting the rifle in his hand. He blinked and left one eye closed before aiming his rifle. He released the trigger and surprisingly shot down a balloon. Leaning back, he smiled goofily in triumph.


"You will need more than one balloon," the attendant told him.


"I know that," Prem muttered to himself as he took the rifle back in his hand. He quickly said his prayers before shooting numerous shots and laughed when he saw Zahra stand there with her eyes covered.


"Z, you can look,"


"Are you sure?" She asked.


Prem smiled to himself as he took the stuffed teddy bear from the attendant and held it snugly in his arms. She slowly opened her eyes and smiled at seeing Prem holding the cute teddy bear. She held out her arms and he handed it to her and nodded towards the game.


Zahra's mouth opened wide as she saw what the balloons spelled out.


"Isn't that nice? The rifle automatically shot the right balloons," Prem whispered as he lowered himself to her level. The balloons that Prem had left on the board spelled out 'Love U Z.'


Zahra turned around and hugged him tightly. She had never imagined someone loving her so much that he'd do anything for her happiness and that made her feel on top of the world.


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


"So Miss. Madhuri, kahan jaana chahengi aap?" Manav slowly linked his fingers with Maddy's.


"Wherever you'd like," She smiled in response.


Maddy couldn't believe how lucky she was to have Manav in her life. The love he showered on her was unimaginable. She always felt like he'd do everything to ensure her happiness and she wanted a chance to do that for him too.


"How about you tell me which ride you want to go on?" Maddy asked.


Manav looked down at her. "What do you mean?"


Maddy sighed. "Manav, I know that when you were growing up you never got to do these things but that's why I want you to have the best time possible."


Manav looked down at her and without thinking of her reactions he bent down and kissed her quickly on the cheeks before moving back to see her surprised reaction.


"Manav," she giggled as she pulled him with her. They stopped in front of the bumper cars. "How about this?"


"How do you ride this one?" Manav asked quietly, looking down at the ground.


"Hey Manav," Maddy smiled and pulled his face to look at hers. She kept her hands on his cheeks as she spoke. "I don't want you to feel bad. I am always here to help you okay?"


Manav smiled and looked up at her. "Thank you," he took her hand as they got on the ride.


Instead of taking two separate cars, Maddy sat down right next to Manav and giggled at how close they were.


"Now press the pedal over here," Maddy directed and Manav went zooming off. "And you control with this steering wheel,"


Manav finally got the hang of it as she went around from side to side bumping other cars and laughing the entire time. Maddy leaned to the side and just watched his smile grow wider and wider and felt a sense of happiness wave over her.


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


"No way!" Arjun glared at her furiously.


"What? Why? Arjun stop being so controlling." Shifali crossed her arms.


"Oh right because I can't care apparently can I?" He sat down in front of her. "Shifu, you know how much it hurt to see you in pain when you got this stupid fracture, and well," He ran his hand through his hair. "I don't want it to get worse just because you're so goddamn stubborn,"


"Going on ONE measly ride isn't going to make my leg any worse." Shifali argued. "Besides--do you see this godforsaken plaster over it?" She pointed to the hideous white cast on her left leg. "Nothing can hurt my leg!"


"How could I ever fall for someone like her?" Arjun muttered to himself as he tapped the keys on his iPhone.


"I heard that," Shifali grinned. "The answer is quite simple Punjji. Mere jaisi koi aur mil hi nahin sakhti tumhe. Now help me up and let's go on the ride."


Arjun sighed as he took her arm and wrapped it around his neck while supporting her from the waist and helped her up. "Which one?"


Shifali did a quick take of the park and smiled as she saw the tallest water splash ride. "That one,"


Arjun shook his head as they made their way to the ride. "You're crazy."


"Pata hai," Shifali smiled. "But it's a good thing. You're the same," She winked as she patted his cheek affectionately.


"Are you sure about this Shifz?" Arjun groaned as he looked up at the ride from up close.


"Postive, ab chalo!!" She pulled him along as they got in line.


"You know--water's not good for your plaster," Arjun told her.


"Right." Shifali rolled her eyes. "That's why I haven't been showering for the past 2 months."


"What? REALLY?" Arjun stepped back and assessed her.


"Ugh! You jerk! I was being sarcastic." She frowned and crossed her arms.


As always Arjun had managed to push her off the edge. He smiled to himself as he watched her facial expressions. She was frowning at one point till she looked at something else around them and a tiny smile would creep onto her face and then she'd notice him smiling at her and would frown again. It was something he had always noticed and loved about her. The anger never stayed long. He casually wrapped his arms around her waist and pulled her close. "Naraz ho?"


She shrugged him away and turned. "No, why should I be? Comments like this from you are always expected no?"


Okay so that hurt. He hated upsetting her but it was just too much fun to let it go. "Shifali--please?"


"What?" She glared.


"At least we're going on the ride?" He suggested.


Shifali scoffed. "Yeah, no thanks to you,"


Arjun rolled his eyes in response and just as he was about to apologize a ride attendant ushered them into the log that would take them through the ride.


"Are you sure you'll be able to ride miss?" He asked.


"Do you want to see my doctor's note or something?" she snapped before walking past him into the log.


Arjun suppressed a smile while walking to the log and sat down right in front of Shifali who glared before tightening her grip around his torso. "Do you want to stretch out your leg more?" He asked in a soft tone.


Shifali took a moment and saw the concern in his eyes and smiled right as their log plunged into the water.


Arjun groaned silently feeling his shirt completely drenched until a pair of hands clenched at the shirt tightly. Turning slightly he saw Shifali's eyes closed. "You're okay right?"


She nodded without opening her eyes. "Thank you for being with me."


"Wouldn't want to be anywhere else." He placed a hand over hers and kissed her lightly before getting ready for the next dip.


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Here's the continuation for the one shot! 😃


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


Radz' mouth dropped wide open. "Isn't that Shifali?"


Mayank lowered his sunglasses before looking in the direction Radz eyes were fixed in. "Looks like it. I'm surprised Arjun let her go,"


Radz just turned and looked at Mayank. "No one wins with her—remember?"


"Right." Mayank grinned before pushing his sunglasses back on his nose. "So what do you want to ride?"


Radz sighed. "I don't know. I'm not in a very 'rides' mood right now."


"Really?" Mayank smiled. "I might have a surprise for you then."


"Oh?" Radz giggled. "What's that?"


"Come with me," Mayank took her hand as he led her along the pathway.


"Where are we going?" Radz asked as she watched the rides and everything disappear from view.


"Are you scared?" He stopped walking and Radz looked deeply into his eyes.


"Of what?" Radz whispered afraid of the way he was inching closer with each breath.


"Being alone, away from everyone?"


"When I'm with you—nothing scares me," Radz replied breathlessly.


"Great," He grinned as he pulled her along. Finally he stopped in front of a log house and smiled happily. "What do you think?"


Radz looked from the house back to Mayank and raised her eyebrow. "What's this suppose to mean?"


Mayank looked at her with a crease between his eyebrows until he realized what Radz had thought. "Oh! No!" He laughed. "It's not what you're thinking of. Come see," He took her hand again and she frowned until he pointed at a sign that had her smiling.


"Of course! I knew about this place before!" Radz grinned. "Let's go!" she didn't bother waiting for Mayank as she hurried up the steps to reach the door and the moment she stepped inside she felt at home as the scent of fresh pages of books hit her nose. A bookstore.


Mayank watched her eyes closed and walked up the steps before placing a hand protectively at her waist. "Like it?" He bent down and whispered.


"What do you think?" she turned and smiled. "It's the perfect place for us."


He smiled in relief. That was just what he thought when he found out about the bookstore. Him and his girl were both bookworms and even though they were at an amusement park; one portion of the day had to be spent in a place like this. There was only one thing missing and he couldn't wait to see how long it took for her to realize it.


Right as he pulled a book out of the shelves he saw her reach up in an attempt to grab a cup when she frowned.


"Missing something Radz?" He mused.


"I—don't know?" Radz looked around and her eyes went wide as Mayank produced a small thermos from behind him. "What is that?"


"Called a thermos darling." He winked before signaling to the worker.


"Knew that. What is it doing HERE?" She put down the book she was reading and watched as a worker brought over two paper cups to him and he poured out a light brown colored liquid. "Is that what I think it is?"


Mayank nodded. "White Chocolate Mocha, just what you want whenever you're reading." He offered a cup to her and closed the thermos.


"I love how well you know me," Radz grinned.


Mayank smiled as he cuddled closer to her. "That's what makes us perfect,"


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


"What about that one?" Avi pointed happily to a roller coaster on the opposite side of the park. "Or oh look at this one?" she strained her neck as she saw the Drop Of Doom.


"You really like rides don't you?" Alekh shook his head.


"Love them!" Avi grinned. "Let's go!" she pulled him along until they stopped in front of the Drop Of Doom.


"Isn't that a free fall drop?" Alekh asked nervously.


"Yup. It's 200ft tall." Avi smiled until she looked at Alekh's face. "Are you scared?"


"Me?" Alekh changed his expression. "Never."


"Good, let's go."


They both got in line for the ride and Avi looked around happily at everything surrounding her while Alekh chose to focus his attention on her. He loved seeing her so happy; and for that—he'd go ahead and try to conquer his fear of heights.


There were two more people in line in front of them and Alekh could feel his heart rate accelerating as all the screams echoed around him. He'd join them very soon.

They both made their way up the steps when it was their turn and Alekh sat down quickly, pulling his safety vest over him and clutching it tightly.


"You're sure you're okay na?" Avi asked musing at the fact it should be the other way around with Alekh making sure SHE was okay.


"Don't worry about me," He smiled slowly at her. "Enjoy the ride,"


Avi certainly did that as she raised her arms up as the ride went soaring up and even more as it plummeted down. The exhilaration that you could feel through that ride was something she had never experienced. The fight with gravity was insane as she could feel herself being lifted off the seat.


Once the ride ended and the safety vests were lifted off she turned and saw a very weak looking Alekh sitting next to her.


"What's wrong?"


"No...Nothing at all," Alekh smiled grimly as he hopped off the seat and woozily walked down the stairs.


"Alekh?" Avi ran to his side and supported him as they walked to the nearest bench and she quickly grabbed the map of the park and fanned him. "I asked you numerous times if you were okay going on the ride!" She sighed. "Why didn't you say anything you idiot?"


"I wanted you happy." Alekh smiled. "You wanted to go on the ride right?"


Avi just stared at him before shaking her head. "You really are an idiot."


Alekh smiled again. "Thanks, I'm okay now."


"Sure?"


"Yes Avi. Let's go on something a little tamer this time though?"


She laughed. "Sure,"


She linked her hand with his as they both walked through the park—going on every ride that Alekh wasn't afraid of.


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


"Oh oh oh! Look!" Ravs pointed high into the sky. "Isn't the Ferris wheel pretty?"


"I've never heard of a ride being pretty Ravs," Yug commented as they stood in line at a food cart. "What do you want?" He asked as he took out his wallet.


"I don't know yet," Ravs smiled. "I wonder what they have."


Yug smiled and shook his head. She really gave the word random a new meaning. There would be one moment where she'd be really thoughtful and the next second she'd be distracted by something shiny and he loved that. Everything in life had seemed to be boring until he met her. The girl who managed to show him the little things in life that made him smile.


They approached the counter and Ravs' attention immediately returned to the cart. "Hmm oh do you have Popsicles?"


"Only grape." The attendant replied.


"Bleh, I don't like grape. Oh! Anything like iced coffee?" she asked.


"We're out of that miss." He informed her.


"Okay well then. Why don't you just tell me what you DO have?"


Yug smiled to himself as he sensed the patronizing part of her coming out. The poor attendant was dead.


The attendant took time in listing everything that he had left and Yug could see Ravs tapping her foot impatiently and when that didn't work she just interrupted him with her eyes shining. "Did you just say candy apples? I'll take that."


"Wait Ravs, your toothache."


"It's fine Yug. You worry too much," She smiled as she took the candy apple from the attendant and walked away leaving Yug staring after her.


She sat down comfortably on the bench and watched as Yug sighed and sat down next to her.


"What's wrong?"


"You." He replied.


"What?" she took the apple away from her mouth and widened her eyes. "What's wrong with me?"


"You don't take care of yourself," He shrugged. "I don't like it."


"My toothache was yesterday Yug. It's gone now." She smiled and opened her mouth wide. "See?"


"Yes, because I'm a dentist."


"You are?" Ravs mocked him and proceeded to eating her apple. Seeing his face still upset she slid her arm between his and leaned her head on his shoulder. "Yug, I'm touched that you care and worry so much, but sometimes—don't worry!"


"I don't worry," he argued. "I take caution. You should try it sometime."


Ravs smiled as she continued biting into her apple. Yug was the one person who could handle her sudden mood changes and could help her understand little things that she failed to grasp and that was what made them perfect halves of one full heart.


"Look at the lovebirds," Asma giggled as she stopped right in front of them. She and Farhan had been strolling though the park hand in hand when they had spotted the couple on the bench.


"Scram." Ravs glared.


Asma just laughed before taking Farhan's arm and walking towards the House Of Darkness & Mirrors.


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


"Did you see her face?" Asma laughed. "I love making her mad."


Farhan smiled watching Asma giggle over harassing her best friend. She had the cutest quirks that had him falling in love with her even more. "Are you sure you want to go in there?"


"Positive!" Asma grinned happily. "No one else will come; except Shabzie but she's probably a bit busy with Preet."


"You really enjoy teasing them all don't you?" Farhan asked as they walked towards the ride.


"They do it too," Asma argued. "Sometimes." She giggled as she slipped her hand into his while they walked.


Farhan stopped as something caught his eyes and he pulled Asma back.


"No Farhan, it's okay." She shook her head before he could say anything.


Asma watched as Farhan walked towards the flower cart and went to the other side disappearing from sight as she sighed and crossed her arms.


When he returned she saw his right arm hidden behind his back and she shook her head.


"What is it this time?"


"Guess?" He winked at her.


"Hmm doesn't smell like roses, or lilies." She sniffed as she stepped closer to him. "Is it jasmine?"


Farhan nodded happily as he brought his hand out in front and handed her a bouquet of jasmine.


"Oh wow Farhan!" Asma smiled as she took the bouquet from him and buried her nose into it.


"Like it?" He quickly paid the florist before slipping his arm around his girlfriend's waist.


He couldn't help but think about what could've been if they had never met that day at the florist shop, when he bumped into her and caused her to drop a vase on her foot. He had rushed her to the hospital and ever since then there was something that kept them connected.


Flowers were the best form of communication for people but with them it was more than that. It was the way they had met and so it held a special part in both their hearts.


"Farhan," She looked up into his brown eyes. "You know every time you give me flowers I love it. I get treated like a princess from you."


"You deserve every bit of it," He leaned down and lightly let his lips brush against hers. "So shall we?" He nodded up at the large building in front of them.


"Definitely." She gave him a smile before nodding. "Let's go."


Asma left her flowers at the entrance before tightening her grip in Farhan's hand as they walked into the dark house.


"Asma, tumhe to darr lagta hain na?" Farhan whispered as they slowly walked through the house.


"I want to conquer my fear," she replied in a timid voice.


Farhan shook his head, thankful that in the darkness she wouldn't be able to notice. "Are you sure you want to?"


"Tum ho na mere saath?" She all but pushed her nails in his hand.


"Yes." He pulled her around his back and proceeded to walk in front of her. "You'll be okay," he whispered back.


Asma looked down at his hand over hers and smiled. Her eyes adjusted to the darkness and she could see him searching for the exit. She hadn't realized when she had grown so dependent on him but she had and he knew that. That's why he was always there, whenever she needed him. A small sigh would escape her lips and he'd be there waiting for her next wish. She had seen things like this in movies but had never imagined it happening to her—but now that it had; she was in love.


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


"No, I don't want to go on the Ferris wheel," Meera whined. "Look at the pretty boats." She tried tugging Harshad in the opposite direction.


"You'll like it, I promise." Harshad smiled earnestly.


"I don't doubt it. I've just had bad experiences on them." Meera shrugged. "So I choose not to go,"


"Yeah Bhav told me about the time you felt sick." Harshad nodded as he slowly pulled her towards him.


"She what?" Meera narrowed her eyes. "She's dead,"


"Can you please come with me?" He pleaded. "Promise you'll enjoy it."


Meera rolled her eyes before reluctantly letting him lead her to the giant Ferris wheel. "Why are they so high?"


"So they give you a nice view?" Harshad added.


"Uh huh," She rolled her eyes as he ushered her into a small booth on the wheel. "Crap. Sit over there, otherwise it'll keep tilting. We need to keep it balanced."


Harshad smiled as he sat down across her and watched her with her hands clasped in her lap. "We're not going to die."


"And if we do?" She glared at him as the ride jerked before moving.


"Then at least we'll die together?" He shrugged.


"That's a good thing to you?" she shook her head. "You're crazy."


"I know." He leaned back comfortably as the wheel completed one full turn.


"How are you so calm?" She finally asked.


"Because it's just a ride? That workers test out for our safety before the park opens." Harshad explained.


"That doesn't make it 100% safe," she muttered to herself as she gazed around the park.


"Oh hey look at me," he called to her.


Her eyes darted back to his face. "What?"


"You have something here," he leaned closer while keeping his eyes locked with hers until the wheel stopped.


"What's going on? I told you something would go wrong! Tum kabhi sunte hi nahi ho!" She whimpered, covering her face with her hands while he hid back a smile.


"Ssh," He took away her hands from her face and tilted her chin to look down at the park. "Look at that,"


Meera peered in the direction Harshad pointed at and her eyes widened with her mouth dropping open in shock. "Are you insane?"


"You—don't want to?" She heard the hurt in his voice and rolled her eyes before facing him.


"I—don't know what to think." She finally sighed.


"It's a simple question," He held her hands in his.


She looked back in the direction he had told her to and smiled as she saw the flowers arranged in the open park writing out a question. "Marry Me?"


"I'm sorry if you think it's too much...I just didn't know anoth—"


"Tum bahot bolte ho," she covered his mouth and shook her head. "Can I answer?


"Please do," He smiled once she took away her hand.


"It's too...sudden Harshad." Meera sighed. "You know it's not that I don't like you but I'm not ready for such a huge step yet."


"I...understand." he took his hands back from her and patted his jacket pocket.


"No, you don't." She shook her head. "How about, we take a rain check?"


"A rain check?" he repeated with a smile coming to his face.


She nodded. "It's too soon. I mean I'm sure you just thought of this today and you probably don't have a ring, and..." she rambled on.


"What if I say I do?"


"You what?"


"Have a ring?'


"You do?" She repeated.


"I do," he nodded as he pulled a small blue box from his pocket.


Meera bit her lip as she watched him slowly open the box. "I know you already said no once but, will you marry me?" He tilted his head in the way she always found cute.


"Why?" she frowned. "Why do you always have to make everything so perfect?" She shoved his shoulder before smiling. "Yes."


"Yes?"


She nodded and he slowly took out the ring and looked deep into her eyes before placing it on her finger, its rightful place.


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


"Come on Akki! It's nearly 10pm anyways and we still have a few rides to check out." Kiran said in an excited tone.


"We've done them all Kimz. What's left?" Akki asked exhaustedly.


"The Merry-Go-Round!" Kims clapped.


"You....want to go on a merry go round?" Akki looked at her disbelievingly.


"Something wrong?" She narrowed her eyes at him causing him to shake his head.


"Nothing at all, let's go."


They both walked hand in hand towards the carousel and Kimz jumped on as the operator let them pass through.


"How about I just watch?" Akki suggested.


"You're going to make me go on a ride all by myself?" Kimz pouted. "That's not very nice."


He rolled his eyes. She always made him feel guilty for the stupidest things, this definitely included. He reluctantly stepped onto the carousel and watched as she lifted herself up to a horse.


"Come on! Ride with me." Kimz smiled.


"Can I just stand here and watch you instead?"


Kimz shook her head and turned the other way until the soft music filtered out of the speakers around the carousel. Akki moved closer to her horse and put his hand slowly on hers.


"You know, the carousel's always make me feel peaceful. I don't know if it's the music or the magic connected to it, but I always feel special when I'm on here."


"You're special all the time Kimzie," Akki bent down and let his lips lightly caress her cheek.


A light shade of red took over Kimz cheeks as she slowly touched Akki's face. "I'm so lucky to have met you."


"I feel the same way." Akki grinned.


The two of them held hands while the carousel continued making its rounds. Akki had never seen Kimz look so happy and it made him feel all warm inside. Having her happy was the only thing that ever mattered to him and now that she was grinning he felt that his goal was complete in a way.


The ride ended then and Akki took her hand and led her down the steps, not letting go.


"Where are we going?" She asked, her face lighting up.


"Somewhere special," He whispered to her, walking past the crowds of people.

Kimz' heart was racing as she and Akki ran through the crowds until they stopped behind an old building. "What is this place?"


He shrugged. "It's somewhere private so I could do what I wanted to do,"


Before letting her process his words, he took her face in his hands, cradling it before slowly dipping his face down and letting their lips connect; fireworks exploding all around them as Kimz slowly wound her arms around his neck, basking in the moment.


~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


"Seriously Rinkz, do you ever rest?" Farid put his hand to his forehead and stopped walking. "I know I'm the one who forced you to go on all the rides but that really doesn't mean we go on them like 4 times."


"Farid!" Rinki pouted. "You were the one who insisted I ride them to get a feel of the park. That's what I'm doing." She started walking, leaving him standing behind her.


"Your feel of the park is making me tired."


"Deal with it," She turned back and flipped her hair in a humorous manner before laughing as he caught up with her. "Knew you wouldn't leave me alone," she teased.


He shook his head before wrapping an arm around her waist, bringing her closer. "What's next?"


Rinki grinned before dragging him towards another ride.


Farid shook his head, cursing himself for what he did at the beginning of the day.


"Rubina," he chased after her.


"Don't say my name." She frowned.


"You've been upset with me all day. What's wrong?" Farid asked.


"You....you....I don't know," she exasperated.


"What?" He grinned.


"Wipe the smile off your face," She glared at him.


"Sorry," he put his hand over his mouth to keep the smile away while she talked.


"I just don't know...I want to enjoy this day with you but really, rides aren't my thing."


"Rides aren't your thing? Ms. Adventure herself?" Farid teased. "How about we give it a try?"


She shook her head. "I'll just feel sick after."


"Do you trust me?" He asked, grabbing hold of her hand.


Rinki slowly looked into his eyes and nodded.


"Good, then let's go." He winked before taking her towards the Swinging Ship; a ride that was like a pendulum going from one side to the other.


The minute they stepped off of the ride, Farid could see Rinki's eyes shining. "So how was that?"


"That was so much fun!" She jumped up and down. "We are so going again!"


"Rinkz...but..."


"No buts' let's go!" Rinki giggled as they stood back in line.


That was how Farid found himself visiting each ride at least 3 times. If anyone had made their day pass useful in the park it was them. He was just glad that the darkness was taking over the sky, signaling the day had come to an end.


"Do you think we should go meet them all now?" Farid asked as they started walking towards the Park exit.


Rinki slowly put her hand in his and interlocked their fingers. "I don't want to go home yet."


Farid stopped walking and held onto Rinki's hand. "Wait."


"What?"


"Hmmm," Farid sighed as he slowly tucked Rinki's hair behind her ears and held onto her face. "I've wanted to say something to you all day, but the timing just hasn't been right."


"What did you want to say?" Rinki asked.


He slowly lowered his lips to her right cheek and dropped a tiny kiss there. "I love you Rubina,"


Rinki's cheeks flared from the words Farid whispered into her ear and she put her arms around him. "I love you too,"


And now....it won't let me post the rest of it, so it'll be in another part! 😃

Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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My spot!
P.S. Madz why do you have a Chace thingie in your siggy? *death glare* 😆
Good God, M! Nonee is going to freak out SO MUCH! 🤣 I mean, she finally got her limo action with Chuck! 🤣🤣🤣
And ahhh Nate is just sho shweet! Oh who am I kidding? All the guys are so sweet! Ooh one thing: did you write my reaction to the roller coasters before or after I told you about it?
I loved the contrast between the totally insane girls and the more subdued guys. 😆 We're all a totally crazy bunch, aren't we?
What happened to Shifs' leg???
The Ravz and Yug scene was so cute!! 🤣 I love how flaky Ravz is! (Sorry, Ravz, but that's really just the only word I can think of!)
Ahh okay I'm all out of comments now. I'm way too high to think straight. 😛 I might be back, or I might not! 😆 But anyway you know some of my comments...😉
Love,
Bhav :D
Edited by sourpuss - 16 years ago
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ME! I got here all by myself this time. *preens*
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Here is the final part for the one shot! 😃

"Whoa! What's this we see here?" Kimz commented as she and Akki were walking by.


"I wouldn't be talking," Rinki retorted. "Isn't that your lip gloss on Akki's lips."


Akki glared at Rinki before turning to Kimz who wiped it off for him.


"Ahh we knew it must be you two," Shabo commented.


"What?" Rinki and Kimz both asked.


"You guys are really loud in case you haven't noticed." She pointed out.


"Uh huh, and you two aren't?" Rinki narrowed her eyes at both Shabo and Preet.


"We're just happy people," Preet defended them. "So we talk loud,"


"Happy people? Is this really how you talk?" Prem asked as he and Zahra came into view. "Have you learned nothing?"


"Stop it PB. Zahra Bhabhi, aap kuch kahiye na?" Preet pouted.


Zahra just shrugged. "Sorry Preet," she grinned as she leaned her head down on Prem's shoulder, glancing down at her engagement ring while Preet made a face and went to Shabo.


"It's okay Preet. I still love you," she patted his head before everyone standing around them just stared at her, including Preet. "What? What'd I do?"


Preet smirked before whispering to her. "You've never said you love me in front of ANYONE before."


Shabo bit her lip before looking at everyone watching them. "I'm an idiot," she mumbled.


"My idiot," He winked at her before wrapping his arms around her.


Shabo winced as everyone around them burst out laughing. "All of you should zip it!"


"Why should they zip it?" Ravz skipped into the group with Yug shaking his head at her.


"Because they're all being mean." Shabo pouted.


"But that's how you are to all of them," Asma grinned as she sniffed her flowers.


"Way to support me," Shabo frowned. "Just wait till Radz and Bhav get here."


"We're here," they sang together as Nate and Mayank just looked at each other and frowned.


"Where's Shifali? And Avi?" Shabo asked.


"Nice to forget about us!" Maddy growled as she Manav walked into the light that was shining near the entrance.


"We could never forget about you could we, Shabo?" Preet smiled cutely at Maddy who just glared back in response.


"Maddy," Manav whispered in her ear. Maddy immediately smiled and shook her head. "Never mind."


"Don't you just love the way Manav controls Maddy's feelings?" Radz giggled to Mayank.


"Same way Preet does for Shabo," Mayank added.


"Hey guys," Arjun waved as he and Shifali walked towards them. Or well in Shifali's case she limped over to them, clutching a teddy bear in her arms.


"Did Arjun win that for you?" Zahra grinned. "Prem won me this one." She held up her bear proudly.


"Yeah, no. I won it myself." Shifali giggled. "He wasn't so good at the water gun game."


"At least I offered to win it for you."


"Offering isn't good enough Punjji." Shifali laughed as she sat down on the bench.


"All that arguing has to be Shifz and Arjun," Avi giggled as she and Alekh wandered in.


"I think that's all of us right?" Bhav asked.


"Way to forget us!" Harshad frowned as he led a protesting Meera into the group.


"What's wrong with you?" Shifali asked directly at Meera. "And when did you guys even get here?"


"A little while after you guys did." Meera answered.


"Once again, repeating Shifz question, what's wrong with you?" Zahra asked.


"I'm fine. Really." Meera said quickly.


"She's more than fine," Nonee added as she and Chuck came into view.


"Nonee, why's your hair all over the place?" Bhav grinned.


"And same with Chuck's hair?" Radz teased. "Where were the two of you all day? We didn't see you at all."


Meera bit her lip to keep from laughing. "Yes Nonee—where were both of you?"


Nonee turned to face Meera. "You of all people should shush!" She felt her face get hot. "Wait a second. Has everyone heard the news?"


"What news?" Maddy asked as Meera quickly hid her left hand in her pocket.


"Yeah Nonee what news?" Shifali echoed.


Nonee smiled sweetly at Meera and held onto her left arm. "You should all see this."


"How did you know?" Meera gasped as Nonee showed everyone the ring.


"Who do you think he asked for help?" Nonee nodded towards Harshad while the rest of them all gaped at the fact that Meera had on an engagement ring.


"Whoa—that rock could kill someone." Shabo commented as she leaned down to examine in.


Meera rolled her eyes in response. "Can we stop looking at the ring? Besides don't we have dinner reservations to get too?"


"You're right," Prem agreed as he started giving out instructions. "Half the group will go in the bus that Ravs drove here and half in Chuck's limo. We'll meet at the restaurant okay?"


Everyone nodded as they split up into different directions, knowing that in a short time they'd all be together again and would have the time of their lives like they always did.


Hope everyone liked it! 😳 Once again...my part blame goes to Rinkz! 😳 (Who I love anyways! 😛) You all really have been SOOOO special to me and this is my way of saying thank you! 😳

Love,

Meera😳


Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Ah I'm here. Frm celly, so not gnna post a full comment. =)
But reserved. U alrdy know my feelings for more than half of it, and the rest that I read wit excitement was also just as amazing and wonderful. *grins* in case I forget, like last time, I love it. Srsly, its amazing. Everyone had their own enuff space and all. No one was left out. And course, so much fun and excitement made me grin like a fool. =)
So knw tht it was perfect, and yes yes. Blame me. I give u the cute ideas so hush missy. *snickers* bhai jaan proposed no? As if u didn't want tht. *smirks*
Oh and, idk when I can get online frm compie, my bro told me tht the ppl are coming to check it out tomz morning so hopefully tomorrow ill be on. If not, ill jst come whenever it does start wrking. =)
And I rlly thought I was angry at farid, *snickers* I see u used the fact tht I am nervous before rides and excited aftrwards perfectly. Muaha. Nd points to u for using my full name, since the prat doesn't use nicknames. *sighs* I swear....ahem, anyhoo. Ill come bak, remind me. I think. =)
Luv ya,
Rinki.
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Heard about this post and got to say that me is here!!!!!! COngrats!!!!!

I loved it! I loved how you included bits and pieces of everyone's personality! Kadoo's to you!!!!
Oh and I shall be back but until then, a question.
Can I dump this Aelekh please? Pretty please? Stupid idiot ruined the whole fun of going to the amusement park!!!!! Grrr....one of my pet peeves, I CANNOT go to the amusement park with scaredy cats..I cannot! LMAO. So can I dump him? Please? Please? Please????? I mean he was about to vomit wasn't he????? :O OMG!!!! Repeats the question a billion more times.
Nonee is going to freak!!!! And Bhav is probably smirking to herself! *giggles. Loved Shifali in here...and ohh I'll be back! *remind me if I forget k? Love you!!!!
-Avi
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Meeru. Srry, my yahoo's being crappy rite nw, wnt lemme sign on. So ill talk to ya whenever it let's me sign on. *mutters* damn thing. I'm jst gnna listen to music and write something, *sighs* if I can. Hehe.
Ill see ya later. And avii! Srsly? Poor alekh. *roflmao*
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Awww no probs Rinkz! *hugs* 😳

I'll reply to the other comments later! 😃
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@Rinkz: Yes, I have no respect for guys that can't take a simple ride. lol Oh my, I sound like a horrible huiman being! lmao...so me!

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