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Posted: 16 years ago
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It's good...Chahat is a handful :) I have a feeling that it's all Prem's plan .....I'm sure Heer's going to ask for help from him to pay for the ransom.

Pls continue.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
very good waiting for next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23
Wow great ff!
Please update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
part 1 was great.....eager to know what happens next & how Prem will help Heer.
please continue soon😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

my spot! 😛 wow...you are fast Gudiya...lol...fast in saving spots that is 😉😉

*edited*

Can I not believe you for once? 😛 I don't wanna think it's someone bad....😳 I'm gonna go with Shabzie, cus there's gotta be some reason you made Preet stay back! 😆 Anyways Chahat is sooo soo cute!! 😳 *pinches her cheeks* lol...so you are part of the denial crew too...let me tell you...and you know me...things are never what they seem in my stories...😛😛 haan preet rehgaya hai...lekin...that is for a whole other reason...you will see in part 2 😉

I can't wait to see how you continue this, so let's have it soon yes? yes! this has to be some record for me...i mean...i usually update one month later 😆😆...lekin dekh...im improving...😳😳

Love, love you too 😳

Meera😳
P.S. you see those short comments? ^ This is why I haven't emailed back yet...I havent been in a long comment mood and that part was such a part that NEEDS long comments!😉yes yes yes...i see...and im still waiting...*sigh*...but i shall continue to wait until you have time for a lamba comment 😆😆😆



Originally posted by: shabo24

You wrote something? Hang on - lemme read! lol...you are a spot saver too...kya karoon main tum saab ka 😛

*dances* It's Preet isn't it? It's Preet. I don't care if you say it is or it isn't it is PREET! Wow, what a creative way to get Premeer back together again! Ohh I loved this, specially Chahat's sly ways - she's so like Prem, but at the same time, so like Heer! I love how both of them are using Chahat to kinda remember each other! OH! I hope Chahat knows that it's just her Chachu, and he won't hurt her - she's going to be in for such a shock! nope...not preet...baba...main keh rahi hoon...its not preet...i can promise you that much...just think...if it was Preet why would he hit Chahat? he doesnt even know about chahat! 😆😆...if anyone it might have been Harman but he is on the plane with Prem...so he is out...aab aage aage dekho...what i do 😛😛😛

Continue soon! i am 😃

--shabz

p.s. btw, starting September, I already told you right, I'm going to be HIGHLY inactive so for your FF's unless you update on like holidays, very short or no comments, but I shall try to hit hte like button! :) yes...i remember...*sigh*...you wont come at all...😭😭...it just wont be the same without you...we will miss you...vaise...how long will this last...i hope not long...but yes...just the "like" button...on simple...two line comment...kuch bhi chalega 😳😳😳



Originally posted by: sweetness4eva

Superb Jaz!!!!!! THIS IS AWESOME!! Do continue soon!!! Ilove it!!! I want to see how Prem reacts when heer calls him up!!!!!

Mahrukh


thanks yaar...im glad that you liked it...next part is going to be posted asap 😃

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

hey
wow that was awesome
wonder who is the kidnapper?


thanks hun!! 😳😳...who is the kidnapper...isnt that the question everyone is asking...all will be revealed in good time 😉😉

JAZ

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: arpatel

awesome
please continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!


thanks for reading...next part up soon 😃


😆...lol...yaar...so funny...but chal...not your fault...im updating soon than i usually do 😉😉...but next comment...lambi honi chahiyeh 😛
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Originally posted by: cute_bear

oh jaz...thats so good.. i wonder who the kidnapper is....i hope chahats safe and i cant wait to see prems reaction...and i hope they come together...sorry for the short comment i might update it letter if i can be bothered u see im very lazy.... 😆


the kidnapper will be revealed in good time...and im glad that you liked it...and dont worry about updating the comment...you are talking to the queen of lazy land...i completely understand 😉😉😉

Originally posted by: reenasv

awesome.
pls continue.
i think the kidnapper is preet, thts why he stayed back instead of going with his brothers.😉


thanks for reading hun...i can assure that it is not preet...but nice guess 😆😆

JAZ

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Posted: 16 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: yoyojazzy

that was really good can u plz pm me the next part

ravina


thanks for reading and commenting...next part up soon 😳

Originally posted by: Lily Gurl

that was awesome waiting for next update love lily


thanks lily (love that name by the way 😊)...next part asap 😳

Originally posted by: blueocean_787

well written, please continue

esha


thanks...will do 😃

Originally posted by: purplestar22

That was awesome!!! I have a feeling that the guy is preet!!

Update soon!!


haila jaani...such a chota comment....😭😭 im just kidding...thanks for reading...next part up soon

JAZ

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Posted: 16 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: *Guli*

Kya jaani!! this is sooooo not fair... you start off with a bang....and then u leave off like this!!😡

okay now there is something else i need to do and bug u now at work and say please continue soon!!😃

u know what forget that..... shoot ur gonna tell me the story!!! why? Becuz u luv me na and u tell me everything!!!!
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babe...yeh tu keh rahi hai...u know me naa...you are the queen of ff's...im the queen of suspense cliffhangers 😆😆...vaise...ha ha..i didnt tell u anything...you have to read like the rest of them...😆😆 this is a first for us naa...usually you know everything...but im thinking...now im "exponding" my horizons 🤣...chal...me waiting for next comment 😛


Originally posted by: Anhdara13

I was just going to say it was Preet, now I'm thinking she's going to go to Preet to get Prem's help. Hence him staying back? Or something along those lines.

But this is such a brilliant idea, Jaz! Completely different, and yet, so believable a way to get those two to reunite. (Oh, kidnapper hired by Gayatri or Ashlesha? Maybe?)

Cannot wait for more!

Love,
Radz


you too radzzie!! its not preet 😆😆😆...you guys are in for a rude awakening 😉😉😉...nice guess though...very nice 👏👏👏....thanks for liking yaar...and as for now...me not saying nothing about W3 or Ash 🤢🤢🤢...dont wanna waste my breath 🤢🤢

Originally posted by: resham12345

awesome
COntinue quickly


thanks...next part up soon 😳

Originally posted by: Ayesha24

Ohhh my God ....👏
its superb....!!⭐️
I really really really really liked it...👏
plzz just PM me whn u update the next part ok...😳
n update it soon...😛
wht vil b prem's reaction to it...😳
ohh my god i cant wait...🤢
i KNOW i m going mad...
but plzz u can understand...😃


Ayesha😉


thanks for reading it and commenting...i really appreciate it...next part will be posted ver soon...ill PM you as soon as it is posted 😳

JAZ

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Posted: 16 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: -Ayushi-

Jaz that was superb,awesome,me loved it.

Update soon.


thanks yaar...glad u liked it 😃

Originally posted by: Suhana Ahmed

that was awesome...

plz continue soon...
will be looking forward...
regards,
Suhana.


thanks...next part will be posted shortly...just gotta finish responding to comments 😳

Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!

nice SS!!! waiting to read other parts..


thanks..next part up soon 😊

Originally posted by: sohail2additi

hey lovely amazing
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee


aww...first time someone called my work lovely...😳😳 thank u!

JAZ

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Posted: 16 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Dark Love

Darn I was hoping it was a family person :(

Loved the beginning, w/Prem, and then the Heer-Chahat scenes were adorable.

And then the kidnapping 😲...man I REALLY wanna see how Prem's heart "tarap's" for his daughter

Can't wait for the next part! ⭐️


😆 i think only you paid attention to my note at the end when i said it wasnt preet...thank u for that 😉😉...oh ya...Prem's reaction is coming...you just wait to see how he handles the fact that his baby has been kidnapped!! gonna be interesting 😛😛...next part up soon
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Originally posted by: crosby

wow thas was realii gud cant wait till the next part 😃


thanks hun...next part up soon 😃

Originally posted by: brainychild92

preet is gonna help connect them two right?? im thinking he may be rishab rampal..no? i mean other wise it seems that EVERYONE has forgotten that heer is MRS PREM JUNEJA..lol

continue soon


Preet isnt a huge part of the story but he is there...who it is will be revealed eventually...just hang in there 😉😉...next part is up soon 😃😃...yes...even heer seemed to forget she is Mrs. PJ 😳

Originally posted by: Magpie

It's good...Chahat is a handful :) I have a feeling that it's all Prem's plan .....I'm sure Heer's going to ask for help from him to pay for the ransom.

Pls continue.


yes...chahat is a handful...but the what child isnt 😆😆😆...its not prem's plan...thats for sure...and yes...she is going to go to prem...for sure 😛😛

JAZ

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