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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anhdara13

YOU POSTED IT! *cracks up*and it's all your fault! *mumbles darkly.

N's probably going to DIE, despite already having read it. And same with Bhav, 'cept she won't die, just giggle and blush and ramble like mad.Don't think so. They already read it, genious!๐Ÿ˜† The surprise and tendacy to die is not there anymore. ๐Ÿ˜† Unfortunately...haha jk jk. But it would be amusing wouldn't it?

But I'm so glad you posted it, because this is freaking hilarious (and so them it's scary. Remind me never to go on a hiking expedition with them. For coffee is fine, because then I'll be all hyper too!)For real? I thought it was really cheesy? But then again, cheesy is sometimes funny๐Ÿ˜•. Ok, just remind me to remind you and I'll remind you k?๐Ÿ˜† You know you love me! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Love,I don't! After this, I don't! *pouts....grrr....๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I didn't know about this Avi!!!!!! Why wasn't I told? Why? Why? I should've known!!!!!*pouts*

Oh! you know how much I LOVED this one Avi. I have it copied onto my laptop and I used to read it in between studying and it always made me feel so good! Thanks Avi! You are an out and out darling. And I love you*hugs*

Well, at least something good happened with Simone spamming onto your thread....She's so zonked by the whole thing, she's scared out of her wits, poor thing.๐Ÿ˜† I'll tell her this and she'll be glad. Glad that you're posting stuff. remember what I said๐Ÿ˜Š

I've already told you how much I loved this. Since it is the Pacific that laps at your city shoreline, 35 something thousand feet of hugs for you.....may you never be without a hug lurking about somewhere to pounce and hug you....and make you smile... ๐Ÿค—

This has to be one of the sweetest things ever...Avi.....I was so stressed out with exams and reading this made me smile throughout...I loved it SO much. You have such an amusing, witty and quirky way of saying things, I already have a smile on my face when I see your name next to something.....in anticipation:)

Now getting to the shot.....Be back...

i is back!!!!
part 1
Somewhere beyond the sea: How cool! Did I tell you that once, sometime back, when we were out sailing with my Uncle and Dad, My Dad actually sang this song (he can't keep a tune to save his life)๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.....and it was such an awesome time....This just transported me back....*hugs*

Awww! B and I are so cute...How I wish this was actually happening!!!!!Sigh! I wish so much.....

I'm scared of a bunny...๐Ÿ˜† That is so cute...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† And the next line cracked me up: "You never know, it could have been an extraterrestrial, overly dangerous alien on a mission to destroy the world in the disguise of..." ๐Ÿคฃ I would so say that Avi......Awesome!!!!!
Oh! I adore most animals.....just last evening, I saw these cute little hares...playing in the park near my Oma's house. They are so adorable and they are not scared you know....of us....guess they are so used to it. But you should see how they turn tail and vanish into the bushes and hedges when they see a dog coming....It's so cute ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Random rambling.....but, returning to the topic, okay, I'm scared of a bunny rabbit....yay!!!!!

Yay, the big "hot" wolf is here....You know the first time I read this and came to this line, i giggled when I read this....Yay! jacob's here.....Lucky B!

Part 2: B's enchanted by the big brown eyes of the wolf! And I am not surprised! It's Jacob after all.....

And that was so funny "We're gonna be a dead dinner"!!!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† I loved it!!!

And then I faint (loved it! I should try that some day....and time it so I'll just faint away into the right person's arms coughPreetcough OR coughChuckcough OR....coughArthurcough.....๐Ÿ˜†

And I love how Bhav is all set to save us from the adorable (ummm..scary๐Ÿ˜†) wolf!!!!!!!

Yikes!!!!!!!!!! Preet picked me up....*into his arms* I love his arms, they are so swoonable, Oh! how much I'm dreamed of this moment*sigh*.....(No, No, let him take advantage!!!!!I DON'T mind...*Sigh*) *takes a moment to dream, faint and recover*

And OMEG! Preet pats my silky hair *swoons* and my head is resting on his chest *swoons again* Avi......I nearly lost consciousness for some moments right in the middle of studying......Hmmmmm......luckily, my exams went off very well, everything considered!!!!! *big hugs for Avi*

And he is waiting for me to open my eyes and say something to him!!! Awwwww...how adorable is Preet. Can I please keep him forever.....(and Chuck as well!!!! Surely, I can have both....!!!!I should be allowed to, anyway!)๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

"Hmm...is that you God? Have I finally reached heaven?..."Nonee mumbled, enchanted by the handsome face that was so close to her own. Avi, do you know how much I laughed when I read this.....I doubled over, laughing like an idiot until Mum came up to see what I was doing!!!!! Surely, no one laughed so much while they were studying*wink*wink*

Part 3:
I can't believe I said "Did you just push him?"๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ to B! *rethinks....Or maybe I could say that!!!!๐Ÿ˜† It's Preet after all...๐Ÿ˜†

"If you'd 'turn' already you wouldn't need to look like an idiot talking to yourself." Jacob said back casually from about 30 miles away yet Preet could hear him perfectly. This was written so well, I could see the smirk on Jake's face....oooh! B's in for a treat!๐Ÿ˜†

OMEG! Preet is a werewolf as well! OMEG! *swoons* Super hot described them pretty much correctly *swoons*

Ahem.....'bare' sounds delightfully sinful when used with Jacob (taylor) *resists a wild impulse to wolf whistle, pardon the pun*

Not commenting on the "another pair of jeans" *giggles crazily* boy it IS hot in here all of a sudden *fans herself, pure thoughts Nonee, pure thoughts....besides jacob is B's. remember the rules!!!!!)

"Those weird noises were them singing!" {LOL]๐Ÿ˜† That was so funny!!!!! Preet*sigh* I'd sing for him any day....*sigh*

I love the way Jacob's fallen for B! And the way Preet describes her to J as perfect for him*Sigh* So well written Avi!

Hmmmm, B wants jacob to drive her home!!!!! Imagine that glorious chest B! Imagine snuggling up to him!!!!!Whoa!!!!! I'm just saying...how nice for B! And yes, I know I love Preet! (and Chuck!) but I'm not dead to the rest of the world! I have eyes!!!!!!!!!

Oh! Avi, I loved loved LOVED and loved this one. It's adorable. Sims has read it as well. I gave her a printout. She thought it was adorable. maybe, some day, when she's not so freaked, she'll come on and tell you that herself....

And just for the record, Avi, I LOVE the way you write. And you should totally CONTINUE to write......By not writing and by not posting, you are cheating us all of the delight of being able to read the wonderful things you write. So, continue to rock, continue to write, continue to post!!!!

I can't thank you enough for this Avi! I LOVED it. And I LOVE you!
Nonee



Edited by noneeM - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: noneeM

I didn't know about this Avi!!!!!! Why wasn't I told? Why? Why? I should've known!!!!!*pouts*
WOAH! ๐Ÿ˜ฒI didn't see this!๐Ÿ˜† I did tell you didn't I? It was after I sent it to you though, and it was during the time you were having your exams. Didn't want to bother you obviously!๐Ÿ˜ƒ HUGS!
Oh! you know how much I LOVED this one Avi. I have it copied onto my laptop and I used to read it in between studying and it always made me feel so good! Thanks Avi! You are an out and out darling. And I love you*hugs*Oh Nun's you didn't have to leave such a long comment; it must have been so time comsuming for you๐Ÿ˜† But got to say, I LOVE it! ๐Ÿ˜ณ Me loves you tooo!!!!!! But you know that *giggles*

Well, at least something good happened with Simone spamming onto your thread....She's so zonked by the whole thing, she's scared out of her wits, poor thing.๐Ÿ˜† I'll tell her this and she'll be glad. Glad that you're posting stuff. remember what I said๐Ÿ˜ŠI have got to PM Simone and apologize! Poor thing, I AM a scary person at times...rawrrr!!!๐Ÿ˜† And yes, I remember. Could I ever forget anything you told me? NEVER! ๐Ÿ˜†

I've already told you how much I loved this. Since it is the Pacific that laps at your city shoreline, 35 something thousand feet of hugs for you.....may you never be without a hug lurking about somewhere to pounce and hug you....and make you smile... ๐Ÿค—
Gets overwhelmed with the hugs...I can't...breathe! Too many!!!!! Sends tons of bear hugs over to your place, over the mountain tracks through Venice, through the city your dream guy is in and to you! ๐Ÿ˜† That made no sense eh? Well, I lose track very easily....*sigh
This has to be one of the sweetest things ever...Avi.....I was so stressed out with exams and reading this made me smile throughout...I loved it SO much. You have such an amusing, witty and quirky way of saying things, I already have a smile on my face when I see your name next to something.....in anticipation:)
LOL! Thanks I guess. But I should be the one saying that! You seem to always bring a smile to everyone's face, you full of awesomeness Nun's! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Now getting to the shot.....Be back...

i is back!!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
part 1
Somewhere beyond the sea: How cool! Did I tell you that once, sometime back, when we were out sailing with my Uncle and Dad, My Dad actually sang this song (he can't keep a tune to save his life)๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.....and it was such an awesome time....This just transported me back....*hugs*For real? I thought your whole family is extremely talented in music...wait, no that was Adi and your mom only eh? ๐Ÿ˜† Oh well, I think out of tune singing is hilariously awesome! It is seriously the most amusing thing in the world!

Awww! B and I are so cute...How I wish this was actually happening!!!!!Sigh! I wish so much.....
All I have to say to that is....HAHAHAHAHAHAH๐Ÿคฃ I can just imagine it, and it cracks me up!
I'm scared of a bunny...๐Ÿ˜† That is so cute...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† And the next line cracked me up: "You never know, it could have been an extraterrestrial, overly dangerous alien on a mission to destroy the world in the disguise of..." ๐Ÿคฃ I would so say that Avi......Awesome!!!!!You have no clue how much fun I had imagining this part...I was literally laughing out loud. LOL>
Oh! I adore most animals.....just last evening, I saw these cute little hares...playing in the park near my Oma's house. They are so adorable and they are not scared you know....of us....guess they are so used to it. But you should see how they turn tail and vanish into the bushes and hedges when they see a dog coming....It's so cute ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Random rambling.....but, returning to the topic, okay, I'm scared of a bunny rabbit....yay!!!!!I love random rambling!!!! *pouts! That sounds adorable! All animals are scared out of their wits around here! ๐Ÿ˜† But it is justified, you should just see my cousins go if they see an animal...god save them if their anywhere near the garden...oh dear lord, poor squirrel *imagines the last time an incident took place *giggles.๐Ÿ˜†

Yay, the big "hot" wolf is here....You know the first time I read this and came to this line, i giggled when I read this....Yay! jacob's here.....Lucky B!
You like jacob too I'm guessing? *oh gosh...twilight fans *shakes head.
Part 2: B's enchanted by the big brown eyes of the wolf! And I am not surprised! It's Jacob after all.....
LOL! Thats all I have to say....LOL!
And that was so funny "We're gonna be a dead dinner"!!!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† I loved it!!!
Glad you did. I thought it may have sounded a bit off, alliteration and all out of no where! ๐Ÿ˜†
And then I faint (loved it! I should try that some day....and time it so I'll just faint away into the right person's arms coughPreetcough OR coughChuckcough OR....coughArthurcough.....๐Ÿ˜†It never works out in real life though! I mean just last month my friend 'fell' *coughpretendedcough* when her boyfriend was standing right next to her, and he did absolutely nothing. He just looked at her, laughed and put his hand forward to help her up....I secretly think that even if he did try, no eyelock was gonna happen and he would've fallen down himself.๐Ÿคฃ *grumbles* weaklings! There are seriously no decent chivilrous men out there no more! And oh man, don't even get me started on their sense of style these days...*shudders.* ๐Ÿคฃ

And I love how Bhav is all set to save us from the adorable (ummm..scary๐Ÿ˜†) wolf!!!!!!! That's BM for you alright..thats BM for you๐Ÿ˜†

Yikes!!!!!!!!!! Preet picked me up....*into his arms* I love his arms, they are so swoonable, Oh! how much I'm dreamed of this moment*sigh*.....(No, No, let him take advantage!!!!!I DON'T mind...*Sigh*) *takes a moment to dream, faint and recover* You know....I couldn't imagine his arms; never seen them in the show. ๐Ÿ˜• Glad you could though! And bet their pretty swoonable!๐Ÿ˜†

And OMEG! Preet pats my silky hair *swoons* and my head is resting on his chest *swoons again* Avi......I nearly lost consciousness for some moments right in the middle of studying......Hmmmmm......luckily, my exams went off very well, everything considered!!!!! *big hugs for Avi*YAY! for the exams going well part! Not to show off or anything *innocent muh* but I told you ur exams would go off well! TOLD YOU!
๐Ÿคฃ *takes all the credit for herself...sheesh, listen to me next time Nun's, listen!
And he is waiting for me to open my eyes and say something to him!!! Awwwww...how adorable is Preet. Can I please keep him forever.....(and Chuck as well!!!! Surely, I can have both....!!!!I should be allowed to, anyway!)๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Hands over Chuck and Preet, who run for their lives as they are released from my firm grip and into Nun's arms....aww how sweet! Scardy cats! ๐Ÿ˜›

"Hmm...is that you God? Have I finally reached heaven?..."Nonee mumbled, enchanted by the handsome face that was so close to her own. Avi, do you know how much I laughed when I read this.....I doubled over, laughing like an idiot until Mum came up to see what I was doing!!!!! Surely, no one laughed so much while they were studying*wink*wink*Oh wow! ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

Part 3:
I can't believe I said "Did you just push him?"๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ to B! *rethinks....Or maybe I could say that!!!!๐Ÿ˜† It's Preet after all...๐Ÿ˜†Had to start the convo somehow didn't I? And ohh, I can imagine you saying that...I didn't anything in here that I couldn't imagine except for the Preet's arms bit.๐Ÿ˜ƒ

"If you'd 'turn' already you wouldn't need to look like an idiot talking to yourself." Jacob said back casually from about 30 miles away yet Preet could hear him perfectly. This was written so well, I could see the smirk on Jake's face....oooh! B's in for a treat!๐Ÿ˜†
See, the fact that the guys wouldn't 'turn' to deliver important messages, really ticked me off while reading the Twilight series...so I kind of vented out that in here ๐Ÿคฃ Sorry? ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†
OMEG! Preet is a werewolf as well! OMEG! *swoons* Super hot described them pretty much correctly *swoons*Liked that addition? It wouldn't be fair that Jacob got to look great and be abnoramally fitter longer than Preet did. He deserved it too, at least for you Nun's!๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿ˜‰

Ahem.....'bare' sounds delightfully sinful when used with Jacob (taylor) *resists a wild impulse to wolf whistle, pardon the pun*Oh gosh. *covers hears. Pun Pardoned๐Ÿ˜†

Not commenting on the "another pair of jeans" *giggles crazily* boy it IS hot in here all of a sudden *fans herself, pure thoughts Nonee, pure thoughts....besides jacob is B's. remember the rules!!!!!)
Imagine Jacob being Preet or Chuck and...wait what am I saying. Don't give Nun's impure thoughts, do NOT! ๐Ÿคฃ
"Those weird noises were them singing!" {LOL]๐Ÿ˜† That was so funny!!!!! Preet*sigh* I'd sing for him any day....*sigh*
The way I imagined your singing in this particular shot...don't think he'd...erhmm... like that much๐Ÿคฃ .
I love the way Jacob's fallen for B! And the way Preet describes her to J as perfect for him*Sigh* So well written Avi!๐Ÿ˜ŠThanks Nun's!

Hmmmm, B wants jacob to drive her home!!!!! Imagine that glorious chest B! Imagine snuggling up to him!!!!!Whoa!!!!! I'm just saying...how nice for B! And yes, I know I love Preet! (and Chuck!) but I'm not dead to the rest of the world! I have eyes!!!!!!!!! I was gonna make J accidently spill water on P's shirt and then Preet having to have to take it off. But then I thought that would be a bit too much. ๐Ÿคฃ I was obviously wrong.

Oh! Avi, I loved loved LOVED and loved this one. It's adorable. Sims has read it as well. I gave her a printout. She thought it was adorable. maybe, some day, when she's not so freaked, she'll come on and tell you that herself....I shall wait just for her then! ๐Ÿ˜› And omg, you gave her a printout? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Erhmm, i'm shocked (obviously) and glad you liked it! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

And just for the record, Avi, I LOVE the way you write. And you should totally CONTINUE to write......By not writing and by not posting, you are cheating us all of the delight of being able to read the wonderful things you write. So, continue to rock, continue to write, continue to post!!!!
*grumbles* your just like everyone else on that aspect.
I can't thank you enough for this Avi! I LOVED it. And I LOVE you! Awww, I love you too Nun's. MSoPL & BFFoTL. ๐Ÿ˜†
Nonee
Thank you soo much for the comment Nun's! You have no idea how much it means to me! *hugs*

-Avi๐Ÿ˜›


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