I didn't know about this Avi!!!!!! Why wasn't I told? Why? Why? I should've known!!!!!*pouts*
Oh! you know how much I LOVED this one Avi. I have it copied onto my laptop and I used to read it in between studying and it always made me feel so good! Thanks Avi! You are an out and out darling. And I love you*hugs*
Well, at least something good happened with Simone spamming onto your thread....She's so zonked by the whole thing, she's scared out of her wits, poor thing.๐ I'll tell her this and she'll be glad. Glad that you're posting stuff. remember what I said๐
I've already told you how much I loved this. Since it is the Pacific that laps at your city shoreline, 35 something thousand feet of hugs for you.....may you never be without a hug lurking about somewhere to pounce and hug you....and make you smile... ๐ค
This has to be one of the sweetest things ever...Avi.....I was so stressed out with exams and reading this made me smile throughout...I loved it SO much. You have such an amusing, witty and quirky way of saying things, I already have a smile on my face when I see your name next to something.....in anticipation:)
Now getting to the shot.....Be back...
i is back!!!!
part 1
Somewhere beyond the sea: How cool! Did I tell you that once, sometime back, when we were out sailing with my Uncle and Dad, My Dad actually sang this song (he can't keep a tune to save his life)๐๐.....and it was such an awesome time....This just transported me back....*hugs*
Awww! B and I are so cute...How I wish this was actually happening!!!!!Sigh! I wish so much.....
I'm scared of a bunny...๐ That is so cute...๐๐ And the next line cracked me up: "You never know, it could have been an extraterrestrial, overly dangerous alien on a mission to destroy the world in the disguise of..." ๐คฃ I would so say that Avi......Awesome!!!!!
Oh! I adore most animals.....just last evening, I saw these cute little hares...playing in the park near my Oma's house. They are so adorable and they are not scared you know....of us....guess they are so used to it. But you should see how they turn tail and vanish into the bushes and hedges when they see a dog coming....It's so cute ๐๐ Random rambling.....but, returning to the topic, okay, I'm scared of a bunny rabbit....yay!!!!!
Yay, the big "hot" wolf is here....You know the first time I read this and came to this line, i giggled when I read this....Yay! jacob's here.....Lucky B!
Part 2: B's enchanted by the big brown eyes of the wolf! And I am not surprised! It's Jacob after all.....
And that was so funny "We're gonna be a dead dinner"!!!!๐๐ I loved it!!!
And then I faint (loved it! I should try that some day....and time it so I'll just faint away into the right person's arms coughPreetcough OR coughChuckcough OR....coughArthurcough.....๐
And I love how Bhav is all set to save us from the adorable (ummm..scary๐) wolf!!!!!!!
Yikes!!!!!!!!!! Preet picked me up....*into his arms* I love his arms, they are so swoonable, Oh! how much I'm dreamed of this moment*sigh*.....(No, No, let him take advantage!!!!!I DON'T mind...*Sigh*) *takes a moment to dream, faint and recover*
And OMEG! Preet pats my silky hair *swoons* and my head is resting on his chest *swoons again* Avi......I nearly lost consciousness for some moments right in the middle of studying......Hmmmmm......luckily, my exams went off very well, everything considered!!!!! *big hugs for Avi*
And he is waiting for me to open my eyes and say something to him!!! Awwwww...how adorable is Preet. Can I please keep him forever.....(and Chuck as well!!!! Surely, I can have both....!!!!I should be allowed to, anyway!)๐๐
"Hmm...is that you God? Have I finally reached heaven?..."Nonee mumbled, enchanted by the handsome face that was so close to her own. Avi, do you know how much I laughed when I read this.....I doubled over, laughing like an idiot until Mum came up to see what I was doing!!!!! Surely, no one laughed so much while they were studying*wink*wink*
Part 3:
I can't believe I said "Did you just push him?"๐คฃ ๐คฃ ๐คฃ to B! *rethinks....Or maybe I could say that!!!!๐ It's Preet after all...๐
"If you'd 'turn' already you wouldn't need to look like an idiot talking to yourself." Jacob said back casually from about 30 miles away yet Preet could hear him perfectly. This was written so well, I could see the smirk on Jake's face....oooh! B's in for a treat!๐
OMEG! Preet is a werewolf as well! OMEG! *swoons* Super hot described them pretty much correctly *swoons*
Ahem.....'bare' sounds delightfully sinful when used with Jacob (taylor) *resists a wild impulse to wolf whistle, pardon the pun*
Not commenting on the "another pair of jeans" *giggles crazily* boy it IS hot in here all of a sudden *fans herself, pure thoughts Nonee, pure thoughts....besides jacob is B's. remember the rules!!!!!)
"Those weird noises were them singing!" {LOL]๐ That was so funny!!!!! Preet*sigh* I'd sing for him any day....*sigh*
I love the way Jacob's fallen for B! And the way Preet describes her to J as perfect for him*Sigh* So well written Avi!
Hmmmm, B wants jacob to drive her home!!!!! Imagine that glorious chest B! Imagine snuggling up to him!!!!!Whoa!!!!! I'm just saying...how nice for B! And yes, I know I love Preet! (and Chuck!) but I'm not dead to the rest of the world! I have eyes!!!!!!!!!
Oh! Avi, I loved loved LOVED and loved this one. It's adorable. Sims has read it as well. I gave her a printout. She thought it was adorable. maybe, some day, when she's not so freaked, she'll come on and tell you that herself....
And just for the record, Avi, I LOVE the way you write. And you should totally CONTINUE to write......By not writing and by not posting, you are cheating us all of the delight of being able to read the wonderful things you write. So, continue to rock, continue to write, continue to post!!!!
I can't thank you enough for this Avi! I LOVED it. And I LOVE you!
Nonee
Edited by noneeM - 16 years ago