|| Akele Hum Akele Tum || Prem & Chahat One Shot - Page 2

Originally posted by: fungrl

<sigh>...................was this shot good or what, may be fantastic, perhaps awesome.............I just loved Prem's and Chahat's conversation............question though why shouldn't Prem's hair look good? que senorita?? dads are allowed to be smoking hot..........this is not done yar; looking hot is Prem's job and in this economy he needs to be focused at work😆😆😆

~Arpita

Originally posted by: eternal.beauty

as ususal lyk all ur shots, very beautifully n cutely written

a perfect shot fr a perfect family..............just waiting fr such a get-2ghtr, also me dyng to see chaht wth both of them, calling thm mumma n papa but till tht ur shot is making up, so vontinue wrtng such sweet shots

luv

aqsa

Originally posted by: shabo24

*sighs*

*sighs deeply*

*shakes head at Meera*

That was gulabjamun-y to the max. The way he sat down really nervous, but immediately got into the role of the father. :) Awesomely written ! Specially the fact that you put in Heer coming "back into the picture" know what i mean? :) Great shot!

--shabz

Originally posted by: Dark Love

reserved

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sach main, yeh papa kahaan thay 6 saalon main? missed all those important years😲 *sniff sniff*

i love how he was fixing his hair and clothes...so nervous 😆 Really? I liked the part the most! 😃

*sigh* man. i love him. 😆 Who doesn't? *swoons*

guys that are so affectionate their kids are loooooooove. 😍 Exactly! 😃

and i really like that song...tho i wonder why you took out "oh i love you daddy"...it was my favorite part! 🤔🤣 *narrows eyes* Oh really? 😛

man. no one could've done justice to that whole thing as you did! but it was short there should've been a longer conversation 😆 Oh shush! I didn't do justice! 😛 And yes it shud've been longer! 😳 Sorry!

i'd ask if he was flirting with other aunties in this six years 🤣 jkjk 🤣 Nice!😆😆😆

or maybe...did youu not learn anything from angad and kripa in kyph? I never saw it! 😔 I've been DEPRIVED! *cries*

if momma didnt change her name why didnt you? 😕😆 okay im done.

it was fabulous!!

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

That was very sweet

Liked the way Prem thought his appearance should change because he was a dad now

Originally posted by: desichica

so cute....loved the nervousness prem had for his baby girl....she def will be a papi ki pari!!!! Keep it up with ur one shots...i so love em!!!!

Originally posted by: sweetness4eva

Oh my gosh!! I just read this after your comment on Papa ki pari!!! I had no idea i was missing out something so beautiful!!! I loved this song on the sbs segment, and believe me, i had wondered at that point if you would write a Prem and Chahat Oneshot using this song!!!! Awwww Thanks! 😳 I'm sorry I should've told you before? 😛 Yeah...Madz (Dark Love) wanted one! 😳

I cant tell you how sweet this was!!!! It showed every angle of the situation, be it Chahat's questioning about prem's whereabouts, Heer's guilt about not telling prem about chahat earlier, or Prem's nervousness about staying back with his daughter all by himself!!!! I LOVED IT!!!! You need to start writing books young lady!!! You are a SUPERB writer!!! You come up with such sweet stories!!! I love em!! Awww thanks! 😛 I'm glad you liked it so much...books? I'll wait a bit before I start! 😃😳

Once again, Awesome job!! Keep Writing...More on Premeer and Chahat!!! I'll try! 😛

Mahrukh

wow this was so cute and loving i just loved it