A Second Chance | PH One-Shot | - Page 3

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Mine! 😃

So I was going to edit this late at night after writing the sequel for you know what...but then I though wth let's do it now! 😃 Haha and you made my night you awesome, awesome girl! 🤗

I LOVED IT! 😃 And I LOVE YOU for posting it! 🤗

I can't tell you how much I loved it....it was just perfect, specially the emotions you write...they're awesome Maddz! 😳Thank you! ☺️ And oh yes the whole part between father and daughter had me squealing! 😳 I have a thing for guys with kids!😆😆 don't ask!😛OMG ME TOO! 😆 They're just too adorable 😳

I just love that Bauji had another heart attack, cus I'm evil like that! 😛me toooo! i was dancing 😆 and oh yes I love the convo between Meet...very cute! 😳 And Go Preet! *woot woot* His plan worked! 😃I just had to add Meet, especially cuz Sanya isnt a fan and she was tortuning me 😆

And the hug...literally the most anticipated thing in this one shot! 😳 *sighs* Eh, but I felt I didn't do justice to it.

I want more...oh and btw..sharrap about the whole 'my writing is done,' blah!😆 I loved it...and you're DEF writng more...😳 *angel eyes* nooooooo muahaha 😈
*sings* cuz the devil has ooohhh angell eyes 🤣

Love you Maddz,

Meera😳

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

I awesomely updated y comment too! 😉

Originally posted by: amu142

did i tell u that i Lu Yu???

but wat's this...u also left another potential story lurking in the mind.....u see its not my fault that u left so many things unexplained .....I DID NOT! It's a oneshot yaar not an FF 😆

this calls for another sequel!!! NO WAY 😆

last time i wanted a sequel..u gave it today...now b a good gal...and write a sequel for this one shot!!! Santa doesn't like your wish list 😆

lu Yu loads...thanks 🤗

Muaaaah!!

Prem Uncle!! make her call him daddy!! papa...what ever...but not uncle...Gungun can call him that!!😡 lmao yea should've added papa at the end 🤔😆

remember AG used to call HC Prem Uncle,,...and he was compaining that she has a bad habbit of calling evry1 on the sets Uncle n Aunty!!! ha hahahahah😛

Originally posted by: ..kashish..

omg...that was great want another squeal~please~...loved it~ to bits....

Originally posted by: SaNyA_21

You know my comments. I LOVED ITTTT. and I agree with EVERYTHING SINGLE THING Meera said :D love youuuuuuuu Madiha! :)

-sanyaaaa.

i shall be back to edit this btw... maybeee :P

Originally posted by: eternal.beauty

VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL SHOT........................JUST LUV EACH BIT OF IT, LUV U FR WRITING SUCH ADMIRABLE SHOT👍🏼👍🏼 Thank you soooooo much!

PREET ALWAYS RESCUED HIS BROTHER EVEN THS TYM ALSO, SCENES B/W PREM N CHAHAT WS SO SHWEET N CUTE, JUST LUV GUYS DEALING WTH KIDS LYK THIS haha me tooo, they're cuuute :D

N THN WHT 2 SAY BOUT CHAHAT BEAUTIFUL,ADORABLE, PROBABLY BESTEST KID JUST LYK HER PARENTS N CHACHU. their hug at correct tym gvng same warmth n comfort as 6 yrs ago. The way of ur expressing each n every emotion ws just wwwwwwooooooooowwwwwwww👏 Thank you so so much for all your kind words! n bauji hvng 1 more heart attack, i won't mind it if it would bring heer-prem 2ghtr😆.haha me neither 😆 waise bhi its fake 😆

Luv ur whole shot especially father-daughter bonding, so big hug fr tht🤗🤗 aha thanks againn! 🤗

luv

aqsa⭐️

Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!

awesome OS...loved it..

Originally posted by: angel82

oh madiha that was simply mindblowing....oh godd you guys and your compliments! ☺️

NO No No that was not at all Ekta-ish......are you suuure? 😆

OMgosh I wanna see chahat in the show now !! the prem-chahat scenes were soo cute..n also liked how preet forgives prem....i'm eager to see chahat too, and they better show lotsa prem-chahat scenes 😳

but why are u going to stop writing ...cuz i've lost it 😆 i really cant write anymore 😆 I would love to read how Heer too forgives Prem and he wins her trust back...you are amazing writer....

plz do continue thanks soo much! haha yet another sequel? 😆

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Why in the world is this the end of your writing career?! *glares* 😛Here we have another Meera 😆

Ekta-ish or not, this was totally adorable. Thank you 😳 I love Chahat! And I love how Plan A failed and Preet went to Plan B and can I ask for a sequel where Prem and Heer discover that Lalit is fine please? *puppydog eyes* lmao why do we have we a lalit fan here? 😆

but thanks bhav, your sweet comment means a lot! i'm a silent-reading fan of yours! *guilty* 😳

Love,

Bhav (:

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

You are not serious. You cannot end your writing career with this. Yess I cann, it's a free country 😆

You need a sequel to this! And this is all brilliant Madiha! All is brilliant. I love the way you write, it's so easy to imagine everything happening in front of me. Thank youuu! 😳

You'd better write more. Nahin toh - I'll think of something. Like plaguing you with PMs or something. Haha have funnn 😛😆

Ahem, another one of whom I'm a big fan 😳

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: ansh25

oh wowwwwwwwwwwwww cmddddd 👏
ill be backkkkkkkkkkk 👏

Originally posted by: *Shifali*

Did I tell you how much I love being called 'Shippo'? Its like my career started with that