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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello everyone, I am very very very sorry for not updating, but I finally took a little time to write a chapter. This chapter isnt very good, but it was necessary to write this stuff, no fun in this chapter and its quite boring, so sorry again.

The next chapter will be mainly about Premeer, until then make do with this.

And another thing, I am making a pm list, if anyone wants to be added to it, plz do let me know.

Chapter 6

The next day-

Lalit, Balraj and Chetan are sitting in the living room of Garewal house drinking tea and remembering their childhood, while the ladies are in the kitchen preparing dinner. Heer and Kulraj are both helping them and everyone else was busy doing their own things in their own rooms.

The whole day went by like this and Prem was looking for a chance to talk to Heer about their engagement. Every time they came face to face, someone would always come and take Heer away from him. After dinner, everyone made their way to the living room, while Heer went upto her room on request of Gayatri to get a little sleep:

*Flashback- Before Dinner- In the kitchen*

Heer is about to give something to Gayatri, but when Gayatri turns to take it from her, she sees the paleness of Heer's face.

'Heer beta, teri tabiyat to teekh hain.'

Heer who was finding it hard to even stand straight, lifted her eyelids to look at Gayatri.

'Ji Maa, mein to bilkul teekh hoo, mujhe kya hua hain.'

'Lagta hai tu kal raat soyi nahin hogi, isiliye. Tu aisa kar khana khane ke baad apne kamre main jaa kar so jana, mein sab ko keh du gi ke tujhe araam ki zaroorat hain.'

Heer is about to protest, but the look on Gayatri's face stops her from doing so.

'Ji Ma,' Heer mutters.

*Flashback Ends*

Heer is walking to her room, when she feels someone pull her back against their chest and a hand covers her mouth. But instead of screaming, she stays calm knowing fully well who it is. Prem and Heer stay in that position for a while savouring the moment, both hearts beating rapidly. As Preet makes his way past them, Heer places her hand on Prem's and pulls it away from her mouth.

'Prem, ab mujhe choro bhi.'

As Heer speaks, Prem finally comes out of the trance, but doesn't speak.

Heer still in Prem's grasp, turns herself around to face Prem.

'Heer-'

'Heer!'

Prem groans hearing someone else call Heer, but he lets go of her and Heer moves away from him.

Gayatri walks up to Heer and Prem.

'Arey Heer, tu abhi tak soyi nahin, maine tujhe kahan tha na ke tujhe araam ki zaroorat hai, ab chal mere saath,' Gayatri practically drags Heer to her room, unaware of her son's irritation. Heer turns to look at him before stepping into her room and gives him a slight grin.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
hii
it was nice part
aww poor prem
update sooooooooooon
add me to pm list
byee
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: premeer4rever

hii

it was nice part
aww poor prem
update sooooooooooon
add me to pm list
byee

thnx for commenting
you are added to my pm list
and i will try and update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
nice update...
waiting for the next..


Sarah
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
ya i wanna be added to the pm list and superb update
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
great update
poor prem
continue asap
pm me

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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
hey,,,,,,,,,awesome fanfic!....totally luv it!...
awwwwwww i absolutely love the premeer moments!!!
update soon.........
-luv Pari
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
that was great ..add me to ur pm list ........plz plz plz😊
hurry and update ...i cant wait
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
hey a nice one plz send me a pm wenever u update next
Edited by sanju_veni - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
i was a silent reader of your ff
the whole concept till now was awesome.
do continue sooon..
waiting for the next part

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