...KaSh Aap HaMaRe HOte... PH FF//Part 20- pg26 - Page 11

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Posted: 16 years ago

nice chapter😃

wonder when heer will tell prem and everyone the truth
update soon plz
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesum..continue soon..i hope prem gets to knw the truth soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeee too good part waitinggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
waitinggggggggggg.
pls update soon.
wonder when heer is gonna tell the truth to prem.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
awesome update
hope prem finds the truth sooon

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Posted: 16 years ago
Just wanted to say thank you for all the comments they mean alot =)... and am glad that u all like my fan fic =)... Heres the next part =) sorry for the late just was busiii =).. HOpe u all enjoy the part =)

Kash Aap Hamare Hote

Seventeenth Part

The night went by and morning had come... The sun raised into the room on Prems face... Prem awoke, he slowly got up wen he remembered wat happen last night between Him and Heer... Prem got up quickly and look on his left were Heer Laid... Prem quickly got off the bed...

Prem- wat have i doneee... o my god....
Heer slowly started getting up...
Heer opened her eyes and spotted Prem looking at her, she got up slowly...
Heer thinks of wat happen and sas to herself
Heer- u say something first Prem wat can i say...
She was about to smile wen Prem says
Prem- Heer am sorry am extremely sorry, wat happened shudn't have happened, i mean i shudn't have done wat happen am sorrie i lost control... am sorrie...
Heer- u think wat happened was wrong...
There was a pause. Heer was shocked that Prem regarded wat happened between them..
Prem- ur not my Heer any more ur my brother wife and i can't believe i forgot that... (prem started slapping his head)... Just forget everything and stay away from mee Heer Please, before i lose control again and commit another mistake....
Heer- why...?
Pause...
Heer- Why shud i do wat u said Prem Why...?
Prem- Dont take me wrong Heer...
Heer- ur taking me wrong Prem u... just listen to mee once on wat happened between me and Preet then everything will be cleared...
Prem- i already noe everything Heer i don't wanna Hear more, wat i heard and saw was enough...
Heer- okie fine forget that Prem don't Listen to mee (yelling)
Pause
Heer calmed herself down and spoke
Heer- but do u really feel wat happened between us was wrong..?
Pause
Prem just started at Heer
Prem- yes Heer... i made a mistake (saying this Prem lowered his head)
Heer was hurt, her tears rolled down...
Heer- Fine Prem then we shud make another mistake...
Prem- don't get me wrong Heer..
Heer- enough Prem i didn't ask for no clarification... i had it, if u feel whatever happened between us was wrong then fine it was wrong, i won't commit another mistake by standing here trying to prove me right wen ur not listening to me... think and doo whatever u want Prem...
Prem- Heer am extremely sorrie...
Heer- bus Prem u don't need to say anything else, i understood wat u wanted to convey
saying that Heer walked away in tears into her room... Prem was there in tears...

The day had come to return home... Meher left early that way no one would see..
Heer, Preet and Prem were left... Prem kept a distance from Heer and so did Heer.. they didn't speak to each other just stared.. Heer tried avoiding it but she couldn't
Heer- Preet lets go...
Preet ' lets wait for Prem...
Heer- Leave it he'll come..
Heer saw prem coming..
She wrapped her arm around Preet... Prem saw and felt bad..
Heer looked at Prem
Heer- chalo Preet..
she walked out with Preet leaving Prem behind.. Prem was hurt...
they were at the airport and walked towards their plane... they sat down as Heer sat in the middle between Preet and Prem... Heer wanted to move but couldn't... Heer and Prem felt uncomfortable throughout the whole ride back...
They finally arrived and got off...
Preet- Prem bhaya can u take Heer home with u coz i have to go somewhere then i'll head home...
Heer- i'll go my self..
Preet- Heer its nite u cant go alone...
Prem looked at Heer...
Preet- please Heer i really have to go but wont be able to leave u alone here...
Heer Looked at Prem.. Without saying anything she walked in Prems car..
Preet- thank you Heer.. Love u ... (smiling all happy)
Heer smiled... Prem felt bad and was hurt once again...
they both sat in the car..
There was silents throughout the ride wen Prem spoke
Prem- Heer voh...
Heer- nahi Prem, don't say anything. Keep the silent
Prem- But Heer..
Heer- thre nothing left too say Prem nothing...
There arrived...
Heer- there nothing left ...
saying that Heer got out of the car and headed inside leaving Prem in the car..
Prem- I love u heer bus itnaa... kash tum samajta am sorry... (crying)

Hey wen inside.. Heer meet everyone and went into her room..
Prem walked in and without saying anything he walked straight into his room..

days went by and Prem and Heer kept the distance and didn't speak...
1 to 2 weeks later...
Like everyone morning Heer was awake to serve everyone breakfast...
Heer was serving Breakfast as Prem came from the back..
Heer was serving everyoneee wen suddenly she felt abit dizzy...
Prem noticed..
Prem- Heer are u okie...
Heer- don't worry about me prem am fine...
Heer felt dizzy again
Prem- Heer are u okiee...
Heer- am fineee...
Heer suddenly collapsed...
Prem- Heerrrrr..
Prem quickly grabbed her...
Lalit- Preet call the doctor...
they called the doctor as Prem took her in the room...
Prem looked worried for Heer...

Hope u all liked it =)
K a s h ii s h <3

Edited by kyph05 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
update a big part asap
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg it was awesome
continue soon
i think heer is pregnant!!!!!!!!!
PM me!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh so now heer wil be pregnant...plz let prem and family knw dat heer is not married to preet

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