Soledad: One shot - Page 3

Originally posted by: -Anza-

Yayy

Such a tragic shot Rinkss. 🥺

I know Anzu. Meera wanted a tragic one, and then my mood was for one too. So i went all into it. 😆

You wrote such a beautiful one-shot. I love how you describes Prem and his feeling. So much pain in that guy. Bechara. The description was the best. First I thought that Meera left him and went to another city but then I read the whole accident part and it made me more sad.

Thanks! I love describing things...heh. Aww, am srry for makin u sad. *hugs*

The accident is so harsh. I fear of large trucks. I love the last paragraph, it was sad. 😔 Well, this one shot almost made me cry. Write more one-shots but happy ones. 😛

I know rite? Me too. 😆 Im sorry that it did. Ooh i will...but uhm, cant promise abt keeping them happy. 🤔😆

lovee

Anzaa
Luv
Rinkss

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

mine! 😳
Yes it is.
*edited*
yay
This time around you're lucky...there won't be much 'gushiness' in my comments! 😊😳
Yayy! =] 😆
Rinkz honestly when I asked you to write it I wasn't sure if you would, because the day I asked you we were both in extremely good moods...(I think?😊) But then for the past two days we've been totally blah and so it fit my situation perfectly, obviously not the whole dying and him committing suicide but you know what I mean! 😊 (I'm not totally coherent in the mornings)
Hm yah i think it was but it doesnt matter the mood, i try to write it whenever time lets me. Hah, i knw wht u mean...its okay, i understand. 😆
Just the first paragraph itself had me touched, that would could cause him THIS much pain that he'd do something like this, and then the second paragraph (I was kinda angry with myself at that point) Like Anzi pointed out I figured I must've left him for some reason, but then when I read about being pregnant and all of that, I realized there was no way in hell you'd do that in your one shot, and I was right! 😊
Ooh...why angry? No way jose, i dont make ladies who're preggers leave their hubbies....uhm actually i wud but not you...i think 😆
The little bit about him 'feeling' me in the room with him had me chilled to the core Rinkz, it was spooky in a way that it was also adorably sweet that that's how powerful you wrote the love between them to be! 😊😳 The way the lyrics worked with it...I can't praise you enough or thank you enough for making me listen to it! 😳 It's the sweetest song ever! 😳
Aww rlly? Hehe Aww thats so sweet Meera, thank you. =] i knw, love it.
I also liked how disoriented you showed him when he let the picture frame drop and proceeded to step on the broken glass just to find her and where the voice was coming from..😳😳😳
I wanted to show how helpless he feels without her...ya knw..
Then the accident part...I loved how anxious you showed him, and awww he bought liles *hugs Prem* That's adorably sweet, and a bracelet for their baby...😳 I have to tell Rinkz the way you showed how he was feeling each moment of the phone conversation was SUPERB!👏 Where he ran his hand through his hair to the feeling in his stomach...it was perfect! 😊
Yesh lilies like u wanted...heh Ooh thanks 😳
The accident I'll have to say had me covering my mouth, not for 'my' sake but for the baby, since the metal first plunged into her stomach.... 😭 Poor baby 😔
Aww i knw...im so evil and cruel. 😵
The last paragraph...Rinkz, honestly there are NO words for that paragraph, you described the moment perfectly where he was fighting with himself to keep his eyes open and the way you said his frame shock before taking a last breath...*standing ovation* Simply FANTASTIC! 👏👏👏
Yikes, yayyy! Hehe thanks tons Meeru! Am glad u liked it. 😳😳
I know people must think I'm wacko for actually asking for a tragic one shot, but firstly I really was in a mood like that for the past two weeks and secondly there are only a few people who can do justice to any amount of tragedy and Rinkz you know you're one of them!🤗
Ah not rlly, everyone has their moods, i want tragic shots top, oddly with me in them and something happening. 🤣And i understand...u wanted one, u got it. =] Aww Thank youu! *hugs back*
Thank you again for this, it's something I'm never gonna forget! 😳
Welcome, aww so sweet.
Love you,
ily2
Meera😳
Rinkz