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Posted: 16 years ago
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Mine is always cute! 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow! that was really touching! excellent work! haii!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mylove_prem

that was awesome.................... relly touching...


Thanks, glad u liked.

Meera- will be waiting. =]
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabo24

aha Meera "requested" one with you as well? And tragic as well? aha I have one to write her as well, been listening to tragic songs to get in the mood :P
Yep, y-day was a sucky day for me and her i guess, so i wrote it when she asked for it. Ah tragic suited my mood. 😆 Ooh, well i cant wait for that. 😆 i have tons of tragic songs, one's playing rite now. 🥱
BUT THAT WAS AWESOME! Poor Prem, the pain he felt at having to deal with the loss of his wife, the flashback was described really well but my fave part had to be the ending (well DUH!) So good Rinki, so good!
Thanks, it means a lot. =] Glad u liked it.
--shabz
-rinkz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..kashish..

wow! that was really touching! excellent work! haii!


thanks kashish, glad u liked it. =]
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow...That was written PERFECTLY!! I had tears in my eyes!!!! Wonderful!!! And the song, was perfect with the situation...This is one of the best tragedies i have ever read!!! Excellent piece of writing!!👍🏼

Mahrukh

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey rinkz
wow that was amazing, awesum
sooo touching
loved the tragic ending
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetness4eva

Wow...That was written PERFECTLY!! I had tears in my eyes!!!! Wonderful!!! And the song, was perfect with the situation...This is one of the best tragedies i have ever read!!! Excellent piece of writing!!👍🏼
Thanks. Glad u think so. Aww, im sorry. Thanks once again, am happy that u enjoyed it. =]
Mahrukh
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Pooji-

hey rinkz
wow that was amazing, awesum
sooo touching
loved the tragic ending
Hey...ah, thanks. *twirls* glad u liked it, ah yah...went the whole tragic way 😆

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yayy

Such a tragic shot Rinkss. 🥺
You wrote such a beautiful one-shot. I love how you describes Prem and his feeling. So much pain in that guy. Bechara. The description was the best. First I thought that Meera left him and went to another city but then I read the whole accident part and it made me more sad.
The accident is so harsh. I fear of large trucks. I love the last paragraph, it was sad. 😔 Well, this one shot almost made me cry. Write more one-shots but happy ones. 😛
lovee
Anzaa

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