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Posted: 15 years ago

Thanx punjabi_0926………..glad u liked this ne too dear…..next part asap………..hope u enjoy that one too dear…………….I am soooooooooo overwhelmed by ur response dear…………….😊

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Thanx bueocean787………..glad u liked this ne too dear…..next part asap………..hope u enjoy that one too dear…………….😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Thanx Mithalio………..glad u liked this ne too dear…..next part asap………..hope u enjoy that one too dear…………….😊

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Thanx Pooji………..glad u liked this ne too dear…..next part asap………..hope u enjoy that one too dear…………….😊

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Thanx Suhanaa………..glad u liked this ne too dear…..next part asap………..hope u enjoy that one too dear…………….😊Yaa dear the truth is out.........and sach mein i don't like the way the creatives have spoilt gaytri's charecter..........chalo anyways merii story me she is herself again...............

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Thanx Afreen………..glad u liked this ne too dear…..next part asap………..hope u enjoy that one too dear…………….😊.....I hope u enjoy to know how Prem manages it............

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Prem is back from office and he finds loud music playing in the hall and everyone dancing…………Prem smiles looking at everyone happy………..lekin jab his wandering eyes find the one woman whoo mattered the most to him……….Prem's smile broadens!................

He keeps on gazing at heer dancing gracefully to the punjaabi song alone with full enthusiasm………..the cool breeze blows across prem's gface as he keeps on staring at Heer lovingly finding it har to get his eyes off her………….no one notices Prem was back……………..

Just then Prem remembers Heer's words she had said earlier that day---Kuch dinon kii baat hai Prem…..PHIR TOH WAISEY BHI HUMAAREY RAASTEY ALAG ALAG HAIN!..............

Prem's smile vanishes and lowering his head he quietly moves from there making his way to his room………..

Its sometime later during the day when U see a scene in prem's room…………it was dark inside……….Prem sat in a corner on the floor his face hidden in his hands and u hear him sob………….

The knob of his door turns and u see the door open as gaytri who was back after shopping comes into prem's room saying---PREM?................

Prem doesn't reply…………..and quickly he gets up to wipe away his tears and goes to stand near the window his back towards the dorr…………the light in his room switches on and gayti walks upto Prem…………she puts a hand on his shoulder saying---Prem?.............Kya hua beta?...........Apnii maa se baat nahiin karnaa chahtey……….yaa phir ussey apney ansoon ko chupaana chahtey ho?............

Prem turns around and hugs his mom tight sobbing helplessly---

MAIN USSEY KHONAA NAHIIN CHAHTAA MAA…………NAHIIN KHONAA CHAHTA USSEY…………NAHIIN KHO SAKTA HEER KO MAA…………….NAHIIN KHO SAKTAA…………….

Gaytri makes Prem sit on the bed and gives him water to drink and says—jaantey ho prem aaj kya hua?..............

Gaytri then tells prem all that had happened in the Juneja house and abut her patch up with heer…………

Prem was elated and he manages a smile when gaytri says---Mujhey maaf kardey beta………….main toh teri bhi gunehgaar hoon……………

Prem says---NAHIIN maa aisaa matt kahiye………… Jo HUA WOH MERI KISMET MEN THA..........

Gaytri says to prem sternly---NAHIIN PREM...........JO HUA WOH TERI KISMET MEIN NAHIIN THA............WOH MERI GAlAT FEHMII KA NATEEJA THA...........JISSEY TUJHEY AUR HEER KO BHUGATNAA PADAA..........Teri Kismet toh heer hai..............

Prem who was all tears hugs gaytri tight cosoling her as she was crying too..........THAT MOMENT PREM GOT HIS BIGGEST STRENGTH BY HIS SIDE............and within him he felt a new enthusiasm to win his love all over again!..............

Lalit who was watching all this is all smiles as he too had got a new hope of having heer back in the Juneja house forever!...............

Prem looks at gaytri.............who brings forward her hand to give Prem two boxes saying---Yeh ley Prem...........yeh tere liye............

Prem looks at the boxes confused and taking them from her he says--- Yeh kya hai maa?

Lalit who was watching the two talk comes in to stand by gaytri............He says---Yeh teri maa laayi hai..........apney bete aur bahoo ke liye.............

Gaytri says---Prem aaj tak mainney tujhse kuch nahiin maanga sivaai ek baar ke..........Jab tere baujii ke khilaaf jaakar tumjhey apni Mamtaa kaa vaasta dey kar mainney tujhey heer ke saamney shaadi kaa prastaav rakhney k kahaa tha............

Prem remeber going down on his kness and bringing his hand forward asking Heer----SHAADI KAROGII MUJHSE?.................(Mast scene tha ...........I know we all can never ever forget that proposal scene at all!)................

Gaytri says---Aaj bhi main tujhse aisaa hii kuch chahtii hoon............Betaa mujhey meri bahu lautaa dey...........ussey iss ghar aur hum sab kii zindagii mein waapas ley aa humeshaa ke liye............kal mainney ghar mein ek pooja rakhii hai aur main chahtii hoon kii ussmein tu aur heer ek saath baitho........aur phir kal tumhaari engagement anniversary bhi hai.........toh TUJHEY YEH ANGOOTHII HEER KO PEHNAANI HOGI AUR YEH WAALII USSEY PEHNNI HOGI...............

Prem ke pairon taley zameen khisak jaati hai!..........he keeps on staring at the boxes and then at his mother...........

he then says finding his voice---LEKIN YEH KAISE HO SAKTAA HAI MAA?...........

Gaytri smiles and embracing Prem's face with her hand she teases him saying---main jaantii hoon meraa betaa mere liye kuch bhi kar saktaa hai..........

She goes away from there and lalit smiles too and putting a hand on Prem's shoulder empathising with hi he too leaves from there..........

Prem was taken aback and he sits on the bed confused!............

Maya and meher who were listening to gaytri giving Prem the rings enter the room..........They had come to call Prem downstairs for dance practice.........as Archana had been waiting for him for long............

They both r giggling............

Prem looks up at them with that innocent helpless look on his face..........(Plz guys imagine kar lo woh cuteeeeeeee expression on prem's face!)...............

He says---Bahot hassi aa rahii hai tum donon ko?.......... Pata nahiin maa kyun zidd kar rahii hain?...........Main.........HEER KO RING?!............AUR WOH MUJHEY?!..........HO HII NAHIIN SAKTAA!.............Heer mujhey dekhtey hii teekhi mirchi ban jaati hai.........ek dum se bhadakney lagtii hai............Angoothi pehnaana toh bahot durr kii baat hai...........ussey pehnaaney ke liye aggar mainney heer kaa haath pakad bhi liya toh PATA NAHIIN WH MERA KYA HAAL KAREGII?!...............

Prem is imagining the sequence............

He is holding Heer's hand.........heer is glaring hard at hima and then she says loudly--TUMHAARI ITII HIMMAt?!...........and slaps Prem hard!...........

The nightmare ends and u can see Prem sittig holding his hand to his cheek.........

Maya says---COME ON PREM BHAIYA..........yeh sab toh aapkey baayein haath ka khel hai!.........

Prem stares at Maya---Yeh Baayein Haat kaa khel main khel toh loon.........LEKIN ISSEY KHELTEY KHELTEY KAHIIN KISI KAA BAYAAN HAATH MERE GAAL PAR NAA PADD JAAYE!...........

Prem again holds his hand toh his cheek.............

Meher says---Come on Jeeju be a sport!............

Prem turns to look at Meher saying---SPORT?!..........HAAN MAA SE KAHO KOI BHI SPORT KHELNEY KO KEH DEIN LEKIN YEH BAAYEIN HAAtH KAA KHEL MAIN NAhIIN KHEL SAkTAA............Koi jaa kar plz unhein samjhaao.............kii iss Prem kii ajab Prem kahaanii par yun gazab naa dhaayein!?...........(Guys i am going to wach the movie tomorrow and i am soooooooooooooo excited!).................

Maya then says---Chalo bhaiyaa neechey sab aapka wait kar rahey hain........aapko aur bhabhi ko dance practice karnii hai....raat ko jab Heer bhabhi sow jaayeingii toh aap neechey hall mein aa jaana.........hum sab bhi aa jaayeinge......phir iss problem ko solve kar leinge...........Theek hai...........

Prem look gratefull at Maya and Meher who were smiling and the three get up to make their way to the hall downstairs..............

Kaisa laga?😊

Jaldi batao..........😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanx dear...........Glad u enjoyed this one too.............Next part asap............😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part
toooooooo good
waiting for the next part

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