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hey people..i guess im on a roll..well from recieving all those beautiful comments i decided to write another one shot..hope u like it

Khane ka pyar

She was in the kitchen making his favourite dish bindi. An unknown blush crept up on her when she thought of him.

Bhabi said preet what are you making?...

Bindiya said heer

Wah..if we have wives then they should be like you not like meher

Preet…don't say anything about my sister she is nice

Kyan bhabi you are saying this because you don't know how she is

Heer was giving signals to preet to stop as meher was standing right behind him.

Ahem..preet… she said and kept on trying to stop him going on about meher

What happened bhabhi..y are u keeping on moving your head like that..is there something wrong with your neck?

Nahi preet...peeche…she said…while trying to get him to look back

Preet….preet looked back and was shocked to see meher…

Meher..you here?..i was just telling bhabi that you are not as bad as bhabi is saying

a shocked heer's face dropped what?!!, you were telling me or was it the other way round...meher you don't listen to him…he is lying

bhabhi… what are you saying I was just joking and you took is seriously haine meher he said while looking at meher

meher was jus staring at him and making him uncomfortable

ill just be back…said preet as he ran out of the room

meher looked at heer and then both of them started laughing

didi apne dekha ki who kaise…she said in between her laughing.

Yes meher he was so scared..you watch he is going to spend all his day trying to make up with you…..

I know didi..and I am not going to give up so easily afterall I am his wife

Heer made the bindi and turned the cooker off and went to her bedroom.. she went in her room and saw him on his laptop. She walked to the bed and started folding the washed clothes.. she saw that he was too engrossed in his work. She put the clothes in the cupboard and went and sat next to him on the bed..

Prem…

Haan heer

What are you doing?

Some work why?.he looked up from his laptop

Bas waise hi…

ok…he went back to his work

Heer got and started cleaning half of the bed where he wasn't sitting. She was bored and wanted to talk to him. She sat on the bed and put her arm into his and laid her head on his shoulder..he just looked down at her and smiled.

Kya huwa..boar ho..he asked

Haan , and look at you your busy with your laptop and meher is running away from preet and preet is trying to make up with meher and ma and bauji have gone out Harman and maya have gone shopping and kul di is busy with the kids so if im not bored then what else am I going to be she sed while playing with his arm

Teek hai…he said and looked for a space to put his laptop..

Here you go I have put my laptop away now lets talk..why is preet after meher for?...he asked with a confused expression on his face,heer looked up at his face and loved the cute face he made. She jumped up a bit and kissed his cute little nose and he smiled, and then she started to explain the reason of meher and preets little argument

By the time heer had finished telling prem they were both laughing their heads off..

Kyan..preet…put the blame on you….said prem

Yes and then he slyly went out…heer managed to say in between her laughs.

so..prem hows the office?......she asked once she managed to compose herself

boring..without you anyway remember you have to come tomorrow…

kyan…me come office

yes..you said prem remember what ma said she gave you the responsibilities remember..said prem while heer jus smiled

haan haan teek hai me aungi…khush…

prem went close to her and slightly touched her cheek and then brought his lips to her now red cheek and left a peck on her cheek and then went near her ear haan bohut khush

she hugged him tightly not wanting to let go…

once she was out of his hug she remembered about the bindi

1 minute ill be back

and before he could reply she was out of the room

she came back in 5 minutes with a plate in her hand.

She sat near prem and tore the roti and put some bindi on it and brought it near his mouth and he opened his mouth happily and ate and then he tore the roti and bout some bindi and bought it near her mouth..

do comment or critisize enjoy😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wah yaar...mujhe nahi pata ta ke tum itna acha likti ho...lol...gud gud...premeer was cute n romantic n meet was funny n cute....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thank u..i dont think i am very good writer
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww that was cute....good job 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwww!!..that was soo cuute!
the premeer scene was aweesome!..and the meet scene was funny!!
preet needs to watch his back!..lol
awweeesome one shot!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwww dat was so0 cuteee 😃
noww ii feel like eating some bhindi ...yumm😆 loll
but it was suchh a cute lil one shot hopee u write moreee thoughh
now im gonna go and ask my mom to cook some bhindi for mee loll althoughh ii wishh i were givin it to0 prem lollll😳
butt anywayss dat was so0o co0ll keepp it up 👏
luvv rumshaa<3
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nycly wrtn..........i must say very foody romantic😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: eternal.beauty

very nycly wrtn..........i must say very foody romantic😆

thnxx lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEY!!! That was really sweet....
Ur a good writer..

nikita...

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