||What I Wanted, I Got|| one shot of ph

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys..hw r u all?...hopefully well....this is my first one shot and i hope its good....and readable...
here it is

What I Want Is What I Got

She didn't know what she wanted when she was small. She was never sure. Everyone kept and asking her what the reason was and she kept on giving the same answer I don't know I feel like someone else knows the answer to that and soon I will find him. She was standing near the window looking at the wonderful view from the bedroom. She was so happy that she could not digest what had happened in these last few months. She was looking at the stars and moon and was trying to find her mum. You were right mum,he came and made my life much more enjoyable,I never thought id be this happy again when I lost you but he came and changed my thinking.

He was looking at how much traffic there was, as he was wanted to rush off home, to see her. Ever since she came into his life there was nothing but happiness he didn't think he would be this happy ever since the sanjana incident but it just turned out that his mum was right. Thank you mum. He grinned to himself while remembering those precious moments he spent.

She tore her eyes away from the view to the clock. The clock was just 5 minutes away from 7. he should be home soon she thought with a smile on her face. She closed her eyes and quickly opened them how is it that I see you everywhere she said to herself. Suddenly she heard a car pulling up and ran to the window to see if it was him.

He was glad that he took the shortcut or he too would be stuck in the traffic for hours just like the others, and he couldn't afford that, as that would mean less time with her. He slowly drove on the road and pulled up in the driveway to his house. He looked up at his bedroom and saw a figure looking down and soon as she saw him she quickly went back. He smiled to himself thinking about how she must have been waiting to see a glimpse of him.

She quickly retreated from her place as she saw him look up. She didn't want him to think that she was desperate to see him. She went back in the room and thought if she goes in the bathroom and by the time she gets out he'll be there. So she took her clothes and went to the bathroom to freshen up.

He opened his bedroom door hoping to see her but was disappointed when she was not there then he looked at the bathroom and was happy to see that the light was on and was hoping that she was inside. He went to his bed and grinned when he saw that she had put out his clothes for him. He heard the door open and quickly went to hide from her.

She heard the door open and hoped he came in. she opened the door ready to come out and when she did she felt two strong hands come around her waist.

Mera intazaar karahi thi? He said while putting his head on her right shoulder.

Nahi tho..me kyun thumara intazaar karu?...she said with a smile on her face.

Acha?..tho phir thum waha kyun karahi thi jab me aya tha?...he said while pointing to the window sill'

bas yuhi mera dil ta'.she replied while playing with his fingers

acha?....he sed while nuzzling in her neck'

hmm she moaned'then he turned her and made her face him. She had her eyes closed and he was just smiling at her innocence.

Heer'he said..

haah?....she replied while looking in his eyes'.he came closer while she went back he grabbed her waist not letting her go anywhere soon they were only 2 inches apart and then he went near her ear and said'bee'.

BEE?...said a confused heer'.

yes bee there behind you he pointed'she quickly without looking screamed and hugged prem'prem just smiled and laughed happily..then after a while she didn't see any bee and looked at prem laughing she was just about to yell at him when he quickly said the three words while looking into her eyes I love you..

then she smiled and replied I love you to and then they hugged each other.

hope u all liked it ...an please comment and critisize...or if u dont want to write a comment please jus press the like button
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very beautifully wrtn...................hope u'll continue wth 1 shots n keep on making us happy as frm 2day's episode i don't thnk tht thr will be any good scenes fr atleast 1 month
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow!It's seriously good!You're an expert and you should write more one-shots!Waiting for more!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thnx Jasmine this is my first one shot that was inspired by all the ff writers including u thats y i wanted u to read it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww dat was so0o beutifully written
i luve it
thnxx for such wonderful oneshotss
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was sooooo good. It gave us a relief and a breif break from the horrible track going on right now. You made my day a bit brighter. Keep it up :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thank u so much guys..im really glad u lot enjoyed it....

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