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Posted: 16 years ago
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MADDY!!!!! NONEE IS GOING TO GO CRAZY!!!
If my reaction is anything to go by, hers is gonna be ten times worse. No, make that like, 700 times worse. Do you know I squealed and all but jumped out of my chair when I saw Nonee's name there?
Oh gosh, Maddy! This was one so sweet! Imagine, spoilt and pampered Preet wakes up early and takes the bus just for that one girl. That is just so sweet! It had elements of PR in it, like the bus thing, for one, and the donation thingie, which kinda parallels how Archana is so...d'you get what I mean? Because I honestly don't know how to explain it...Heh..
Maddy, thank you! I just had like the worst day possible (and it's still not over. WHY is it still not over? WHY???) and this shot just totally cheered me up. Thanks dear! 🤗
Loads of love,
Bhav :D
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
Oh! My! Goodness! Maddddddeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee *does a war cry and leaps around the breakfast table looking and behaving like a complete lunatic* 😆Oh! My! Gosh! I just love that song, did you know! I. Just. Adore.That.Song. If you only knew how much I dream of Preet actually waltzing with me *screams loudly and thanks God the parents are out and the house is empty* [Excuse me a moment while I just have the song on......creating the atmosphere....Ooooohhhhh! There, it comes on.....instant magic, Maddy, thank you, thank you, thank you, so so so so so so so much. I can't tell you how much this means to me.....This song and Preet (and me have a connection, I tell you!) I think, kabhi na kabhi, Preet ko mujhse milna hi hai (heart jumps out of body and dances on the table.....not horror movie like.....think animation, disney like) 🤣 🤣

You know, I'm supposed to be rushing off to class right now, but I can't make myself leave this table.....I have to in the next couple of minutes though......and I want to break something (wish my brother was here, I would have asked him to drop me off instead of having to take the bus!!!!!!)

And do you know something! Now everytime I am on the bus, I am so looking forward to who's gonna come sit next to me. Usually, I just plonk my stuff down on the seat next to me, picking it up only if the bus is full (read as if appropriately cute guys are standing around, eyeing the seat next to me 😳 ) Oh!My!God! I can't get over this Maddy! I am gonna be a shaking, quivering, trembling mass of lily livered jelly all the way to and in Class today.....thinking about this SS and waiting to come back online and comment! Awwwww, the Atlantic and Pacific cannot contain more hugs than I'm sending you right now....You're gonna be smothered in hugs from now until.....well, a very very long time....😆

The thought of dancing with Preet, in the rain, to that song, I mean it has to be slow right and even the thought of Preet putting his arm around me waist is enough to make me instantly comatose.....Oh!My!God!

I want to say loads of things.....and I will have to come back in a bit and say it....like once I get to the library....

Awwww, Maddy-Paddy, how utterly sweet it was for you to write out this SS for me, the moment your exams are done...(I'm all tearing up at the sweetness of it! No wonder Manav is latoo about you*wink*wink*wink*) 🤗
🤗

So, This is my Spot Maddy!

Catch ya in a bit! *goes off dancing, the smile actually threatening to split my face into a million parts (Goodness!!!!!I am totally crazeeeeeee!!!!!)😆😆😆

Okay, better go now or I'll miss my bus....

I just can't think of anything but being held in Preet's arms right now 😆

I'll be back!
Love you:-Nonee

Am backkkkkkkk😆😆 (Did you think I wouldn't be back?😆😆
Oh! Maddy, this is such a wonderful SS. I am so much in love with it. Thanks so much. Love you! Love you! Love you!

I loved the 'he was not a sissy' bit! How chweet. How totally adorable of Preet to forego his ride and take the bus! 😍

Just imagining me getting on to a bus and Preet coming and sitting next to me. I swear, I'd just not get off at all, I'd just follow him....to the ends of the earth😆 [Dunno if they have a bus service there as of now....but, anyway😆😆]

Oh! And the scene in the rain *dies thinking about it* Maddy, that whole setting is so out of a daydream 😍 And you've written it so beautifully, Oh! just loved it.

Oh! And I'm involved in welfare works! How Cool Is that! And Preet's giving me a donation....on a condition(How Preetly!)

And what a condition! Oh! I would dance forever with him. Ek dance ki kya baat hai!😆 And the dialogue about music "We don't need any" [Nonee has fainted in the meantime]

Okay, revived myself...😆😆 Like I was saying, yes, Preet and I (faints thinking about how right 'Preet and I' sounds. I should always be saying 'Preet and I'😆😆😆) yeah...sorry, Preet and I just create music together...Awesomeness!!!! Oh! Maddy, you cutie....Thanks*hugs*

Oh! I'm never sitting in a bus again without a smile, this SS will stay with me, forever, as a smile on my lips, every time I take a bus (and every time I dream*sigh*)

Oopsie, I've done it again.....let my fingers run away with me! But, I couldn't help it. This was such a wonderful SS. Thanks Maddy. Thanks so very very much.

Love you:)
Nonee 🤗 🤗
Edited by noneeM - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
Oh gosh, Maddy. You were right. No one else takes twenty words to reserve a spot. 😆 That too, when they're going to miss the bus.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
omg! this is an incredeble shot!! just amazing...i was feeling the tensoin between them! how cute!!
this is the 1st shot ive read on IF (belive ot or not...i dont really read FFs or one shots), and to my suprise, i was in it..lol.😆 jkjk
great job maddy!
Edited by *payal_15* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
O.o That was Nonee, reserving a spot?? Dude, that's about as long as a comment I'd give. If, you know, I could think of lots to say. At the moment, not so much. I shall be back.

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
Edited my "comment" on page 2.
Love:-Nonee
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
I loved your comment Nonee! 😆😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
Me, you mean 'my foot length essay' 🤣
🤣🤣🤣

Poor Maddy nah! Pehle SS likho, then sit and read some novel length comment written by severely afflicted and totally insane Nonee... 🤣

Awwww...big hugs:) I am on a Preet high thanks to this one...Yay*dances away*
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I think it's adorable! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
By god! Nonee Monee ye kya tha!?!? It's probably longer than the SS!!! 😆 Going shoping now, will comment in the evening! 😃 That goes for everyone actually! Thanks for commenting you guys!

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