My First Piece of Writing on PREMEER Part51 Pg149 - Page 8

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Note: Before moving on with Part13 let me tell you that from Part11 onwards Juneja family is in Panchgani, they are the Juneja's n its not difficult for them to arrange a house in Panchgani where they could live. The headings of Juneja family scenes are the same in all parts for eg Juneja house, Prem's room. Even though the places are different but headings for the scenes used in both places are the same, no changes made in headings. So dont get confused by headings that whether place is Ludhiana or Panchgani.

Some points regarding the story need to be cleared.

Q Why Prem Heer behaved normally at Oberoi's office?

Ans Prem Heer's 1^st meeting after the leap was at Oberoi's house, there they see each other n are lost in an eye session. There are no dialogues, they just feel each other's existence, after that Prem wanted to be with Heer, he wanted to know abt what happened with her in 5 years, he also wants Heer back in his life. He instantly decided to work with her n was normal with her at Oberoi's office because he eagerly wants to start their new project. Where as Heer after seeing Prem in party realizes that it was a business party so obviously Prem was there due to some business work. She hopes Prem to be the person who would work with her. In Oberoi office Heer was happy to see Prem but didnt showed her feelings. She then focuses on her project n behaves normally infront of Prem. Although Premeer were behaving normally but for all the time Prem was looking at Heer.

Q How can Meher n Kulraj be normal n not shocked to see Heer n Additi at mall?

Ans First of all the 1^st time when Meher saw heer after leap was at Oberoi house. In mall when they all see each other they are shocked as meeting was unexpected. The reason why they didnt reacted when they saw Additi is that Additi is a cute little girl n Kulraj, Meher were lost looking at her, they didnt got much time to be shocked. Maybe deep in their hearts they expected a child to be with Heer after many years. When they saw Additi with Heer they understood that she is Prem n Heer's child.

If you people have some questions or if something confusing plz do ask.

PART13

Juneja house

Meher, Kulraj with kids enter Juneja house, they run inside while Meher, Kulraj were walking slowly n talking with each other.

Kulraj: aaj hum ne itne saalon baad heer ko dekha.

Meher: kulraj dee maine aapko ek baat nahin bataayi, heer dee ko hum sab ne party mein dekha tha, lekin maa ki waja se ghar par kisi ne koi baat nahin ki.

Kulraj: hum maa se kuch nahin kahenge, lekin tu preet ko zaroor bata dena aaj ke baare mein.

Meher: kul dee, heer didi ki beti kitni cute thi na?

Kulraj: haan, bilkul heer jaisi! masoom aankhon se humein dekh rahi thi.

They both wished that cute little angel to be in this house.

Additi's mansion

Heer, Additi n Mitali were in playroom, Additi was playing with dolls, Mitali accompanied her n Heer was lost in thoughts she remembered mall scene. Heer remembered past scenes of her's with Kulraj n her kids. Then she remembered a past scene of her with Meher.

Heer- Meher past scene

Meher, Heer were looking at their pics when they were kids.

Meher: heer didi bache kitne pyaare hote hain, unki hasi se poore ghar mein khushiyaan cha jaati hain.

Heer: haan meher, jab bache ghar mein hon to insaan kabhi udaas na hon, bacho ke saath ghar ke buzurg bhi bache ban jaate hain.

Meher: mujhe to bete ache lagte hain, woh apne maa baap ki izzat karte hain, apne khandan ka naam roshan karte hain jaise ke prem jiju, preet. Heer didi aap kya chahti ho ke aapki pehli aulad kya ho.

Heer thinks n says beti! kyunki woh ghar ki laadli hoti hai, papa aur mama dono ki pyaari hoti hai.

Meher: heer didi bhagwan kare ke aapke aur mere sapne jald poore hon.

They both smile n hug each other.

Heer smiled when she remembered Meher with her two cute sons.

Additi calls her, "mama! ek problem hai

Heer: kya huwa beta?

Additi: meri doll ghar par bore ho rahi hai, uske koi bhai behen nahin hain na.

Heer thinks that even Additi is alone, she has cousin siblings but she's not with them.

Mitali interrupts: to kya huwa additi hum tumhari doll ko park mein lekar jaayenge n they continue playing.

Then Heer's cell rings n she goes to attend it.

Mr Oberoi's call.

Heer: hello

Oberoi: heer maine tumhein yeh batane ke liye phone kiya hai ke aaj thori dair mein tumhari juneja's ke board room mein meeting hai.

Heer: lekin itni jaldi!

Oberoi: Juneja hotels ke shareholders tumse is project par baat karna chahte hain, infact unhein kuch sawalon ke jawaab chahiye uske baad hi woh money invest karenge.

Prem ne apni taraf se bohot koshish ki ke woh bharosa karen tumhare project par lekin...

Heer: theek hai, main aajaaongi.

Heer to Mitali: main ja rahi hoon meeting mein, iska khayal rakhna

Heer to Additi: additi be good with masi, i'll be back soon, she kisses Additi n leaves.

Juneja's office board room

Heer enters, there are three shareholders: they invest money, buy shares n are part of Juneja's hotels. Apart from them there is Lalit, Prem, Preet n Harman.

Heer settles down n they start their questions

Shareholder: madam heer aapka yeh project bilkul anokha hai, is mein professional kuch bhi nahin to hum is mein invest kyun karen?

Prem: dekhiye aisi baat nahin hai yeh...

Heer interrupts: one second mr prem juneja!

Everyone looks at heer

Heer: mujhse pooche gae sawalon ke jawaab main khud dena pasand karti hoon.

Prem stays quiet, looks at Heer then she continues.

Heer: yeh project un professional maaon ke liye hai jo apne bache se door kaam ke liye bahar jaati hai, this is a new initiative to provide facilities to professional mothers n their child, whats unprofessional about it?

Shareholder: lekin agar ek maa ka bacha kaam par uske saath hoga to kya woh disturb nahin hogi?

Heer: ek maa disturb tab hoti hai jab uska bacha usse door hota hai, aise haalaat mein woh kaam par concentrate nahin kar sakti. Hamara yeh project ek maa ko satisfaction dega ke aapka bacha hamare hotel mein safe aur secure hai aur tab woh apne kaam ko mann laga kar poora kar sakegi.

Shareholder: lekin yeh itna alag hai, baaki kisi hotel ne yeh kyun nahin socha?

Heer: yeh ek bilkul alag aur naya hai, this is its highlight! hamare hotels mein yeh naya initiative hamare hotels ke liye success hoga.

All members seem to be convinced, satisfied n they were ready to invest. Finally meeting was a success n Junejas were happy to see this new avtar of Heer.

Meet scene

Preet in his room n Meher comes thinking that she'll tell Preet abt mall.

Meher: preet mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai

Preet: mujhe bhi

Meher: pehle main kahoon

Preet: theek hai

Meher: aaj maine mall mein heer didi ko dekha, aur unke saath ek bohot cute si pyaari bachi thi ayush aur avi ki umar ki.

Preet gets surprised!

Meher: preet woh heer didi ki beti hi hogi

Preet smiles n understands everything, he now clearly understands abt heer's dream project.

Preet then tells Meher abt the meeting.

Preet, Meher n Kulraj in garden

The next morning Preet, Meher n Kuraj are in garden talking abt Heer n Additi.

Kulraj: iska matlab saaf hai ke heer in paanch saalon mein panchgani mein thi aur woh cute si bachi heer aur prem ki hi hai.

Preet: heer bhabi ka dream project ek maa-bache ke rishte ka ehsaas hai.

Meher: heer didi aaj bhi prem jiju se pyar karti hai, kash woh teenon ek saath hon!

Preet: hum unhein ek saath lekar aayenge

Kulraj: lekin kaise preet, veera ki maut se inke rishte ki bhi maut hogai thi

Preet: nahin dee, balke tab inke rishte ka ehsaas, pyar heer bhabi ke saath pal raha tha.

Meher: bohot waqt guzar gaya hai preet

Preet: bhale waqt guzar jaae, lekin pyar to wahi hai na, unka bacha unhein phir milaaega

Kulraj: aur maa?

Preet: uske baare mein baad mein sochenge

They go inside, Ayush n Avi while playing switch on the tv. Suddenly Heer's interview starts.

Juneja family members were sitting on couch n table while Meher, Preet, Kulraj were standing at entrance of house n Prem at stairs

The three gather around tv like the rest, Prem comes n sits, Gaya3 sees his face expression as if he's dying to see Heer, she doesnt like it.

Reporter: friends today with us is madam heer, the most successful businesswoman of panchgani.

Lalit seems happy with this remark.

Reporter: pehla sawaal aapne apne naam ke aage koi surname nahin lagaya?

Heer: kyunki mujhe kisi ke naam ki zaroorat nahin, na apne pita ki aur na apne pati ki. Main apni pehchaan khud banaati hoon

At this Gaya3 feels happy whereas Prem feels sad

Reporter: aap ne ek hotel jo khatam hone wali thi usmein kaam kyun kiya?

Heer: maine apne career ki shuruwaat ek aise hotel se ki jo mushqil haalaat mein thi, ek bure waqt mein hi insaan ka rishta mazboot banta hai. Mere aur meri hotel ke saath bhi kuch aisa hi huwa.

Prem feels guilty that in difficult time he was rude with Heer

Reporter: aapki success ka raaz kya hai?

Heer: koi hai meri zindagi mein jiske ehsaas se, jiske wajood se meri zindagi mein success hai, khushiyaan hain. Uska saath mere liye bohot ehmiyat rakhta hai.

All Juneja members feels that there is someone in Heer's life n she might have moved ahead in life but only Kulraj, Preet n Meher know that Heer is talking abt her daughter. Prem feels sad n Meher looks at him knowing that he has misunderstood. Gaya3 is happy that Heer has moved ahead in life.

Kulraj, Meher n Preet think that it is Heer's daughter because they've seen her n told Preet abt it.They all know that when Heer has a sahara: daughter with which she can live her life then obviously nobody else can be in her life, she doesnt need anybody.

Note: Interview ka maqsad hai ke Prem ko apni galti (his fight n rudeness with Heer) ka ehsaas ho. This interview might be a start of a misunderstanding. They've misunderstood Heer that there is someone in her life but this might be cleared out in next update or mayb not! Read out precap below.

Precap: Mitali comes to give video cassette to Juneja family. Will they see it n will they believe in it? Kya hai aage Prem aur Heer ki kismat mein?

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