||Love Without Borders|| Pt. 27 Pg. 18 (8/21) - Page 14

meera and rushvi

I told you I would comment on this didn't I? Night before Ramadan - great start to the holy month. 🤔

But i just sat down and caught up on like 20 chapters and it's such a FUN filled fanfic! I love it - kinda reminds me of F.R.I.E.N.D.S. in a weird way. I love all the couples, specially Maya and Harshad. *innocent smile* This lucky duck Maya, don't you get jealous Meera while you write their scenes? *blinks at you wide eyed*

And you threw in so many of us! Makes it even MORE fun. 😆 I love it, all of us, so true to us in real life. But one thing is nagging me, when all of us entered, when Meer- I mean Maya saw me I guess, she's like "more to her than meets the eye." AM I GOING TO BE EVIL? MAKE ME EVIIIIL! THAT WOULD BE SO MUCH FUN!!!!

Yug should have proposed again. *pouts* Loved the whole shaadi of Rinki and Sushi, so cute, loved how he couldn't take his eyes off her! The whole wedding process, from the singing and dancing (the best one had to be the saagai song - I love that song!) and to the mendhi (the comment about the mendhi still coming out dark ☺️) to all the masti happening in the house from getting locked in closets and all of that!

You writeeeee so well Meera, I'm so jealous of your ability to make readers literally become part of the story, its like we are reading about people we know (ignoring the people we do know 😆 - I mean like Harshad, Sushi and all of that!) The way Maya (strange, i had a feeling that should be Meera :P) and Harshad are dancing around the possibilty is just flawlessly written! :)

Off course, my "aage aage" ke comments won't be this long, but I owed you this one. :) Keep writing, and NOO! MEERA! (I mean Maya. *preens*) Fix everything, make them run through fields of daises with the rest of us playing bagpipes in the background. ☺️

One thing, what the hell is barfi? 😳

--shabz

You ROCK Shabz 😆 you really didn't have to write comment so detailed! 😛 😊 But I do feel touched! 😃

*preens* Keep the compliments coming. 😆 I joke. 😆 aha I had time. My mom has me running around getting ready for stuff, but I've been reading this FF all day, coming back to the computer and all. 😆 You update frequently too. 😲 I love it.

Oh not really! 😆 That was cus I was trying to catch this link up to where I was writing! 😆😛

I just went searching for the other thread to be sneaky and speed up on parts and I find you stopped that one at pt 23. *hmph*

*runs to do dishes before her mother finds them - and yells at her*

Hey youuuuuuu. After getting a little sneak peak of this part, I decided to come and read this part. AND I LOVED IT. Although I haven't read the other 26 chapters, I can tell this is a really good FF already. Maya and Harshad are awesome. And wanna know what I'm gonna do nowwwwwwww? Go back and read the entire thing so it all makes sense. :) You are amazing, Meera.

Originally posted by: Dark Love

Main yahaan, hoon yahaan, hoon yahaan, hoon yahaan. I really love that song! 😳

*edited*

Sorry for the delay, there's so many goodies to read, I completely lose track of reserved spot! 😳 It's fine Maddz! *hugs*

Anyway, this was a long chapter! 😲 *dances* I know right? *sighs*

Wish Maya hadn't denied that talk with Radz...she needs some advice for herself too! And Radz is a goodddd friend! 👍🏼 I like how she's not pushy! 👍🏼 I know what you mean...who says Ravs or Radz won't have a talk with her after though?

Okay, so how the heck do you tie the string on the back of a dress yourself? 😒 NOT that I was thinking anything naughty, but really, you know how I bring myself into stuff like this, I just CANNOT do it. My mom always has to help me! 😒 I can do it sometimes, it depends how high the strings are! 😛

LOVE the mehndi line! 😉 That was some subtle flirting there 😎 Glad you liked it! 😆

LMAO I ALSO LOVE SHABO'S "Can we die when we see him?" 🤣 Aha I love you Shabzie! 🤗 She rocks! 😛

"That's not what I heard" 😲 Ah, Radz. *glares* She's smart! 😛

Bro-sis talk was cuuuuuute! 😎 Yay! 😃

Wish Maya would've gotten time to discuss her feelings for Harshad with Rinki. *adds Rinki to list of good friends of Maya* Yup yup! 😛

Aha I love insane Harshu who twirls Maya for the pose 😍 Sure you do...

SHABO, I WANT GULAAB JAMUN 😲😒 I want them too!

Maya's eating barfi? 😳 *giggles* That was ALL cus of you! 😉😳 Now whenever I'm going to eat it, I'm gonna burst out laughing! 😆

Mannnnnnnnnnn the ending was soooooooooooo barfilicious 😆 Absolutely delectable! 😍 Kiss, forehead-leaning. Ah, you know me, I don't even have to say it. Yes yes...I know you well enough by now to know why you loved the kiss! 😛

Like I've told you before, I totally understand where Maya is coming from, and as delicious as Harshad may be, I'd probably do the same if I were in his place. Yup! 😃Score one for me! Someone understands! 😛

I've seen long-distance relationships wear and tear, and break so easily, that it's just. Bleh. Heart-breaking to witness, don't even wanna imagine how it would feel to be a part of it. Exactly....I've seen it too! 😔

Go Maya for thinking about pros and cons! *cuts out a square of barfi and hands it over* *happily takes the barfi on Maya's behalf*

Fab part Meeeeeeeee! Thanks MADDZ! *hugs*

I love you but you already know that! 😎 Indeed I do now! 😳 The only problem is, I don't act like I shud to deserve it! 😳

- Madzz

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

*rolls eyes* Maya and Harshad just create problems for themselves. I want the friends to matchmake! And do weird things, like we would do. *cracks up*

I still loved it.

Love,
Radz

They do not! *hmph* Nature creates the problems and yes the friend...dheere dheere sab kuch hoga!😛

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

hey nice update.nw that things have gone to worse i hope it doesnt continue like this..............i hope nw all the things start gng back to normal............thanks for pm plz update soon

Thanks for liking it! 😳 We'll see how it continues until she leaves? 😛

@ lovely_lady: Thanks a lot! 😃

Originally posted by: Dark Love

arree hum to aisee hain bhaiyyaa, hum to aiseeeeeeee hain bhaiyyyya.

ek na ek din waapis ana hi hoga. i'llllllll be back 😎YAY! 😛

*back*

She felt her heart getting tight. I like that. 🤔 Like how it was put together. Hmmmmmmm. Thanks! 😳

Okay, I'm all with Maya, but her and Harshad, ah, they're incomparable with Arushi and Alekh, totallllllly different feelings. 🤔 It could be similar though? 😛

Aha I love Radzie's character, but I'm pretty sure I've said that enough times, too much barfi is dangerous so I shall stop. 😆 You DEF have said it enough, but I'm sure she enjoys it! 😛

"Maya giggles as she takes a small sip of water." > If hotel water wasn't as nasty as it is, I'd totally ask WHY she'd only take a small sip. I don't like ladylike stuff 😆 Small bits of water and all that 😆 Mann I remember hearing about people eating a chocolate bar with a fork and knife 🤣 Oh shush! She's taking a small sip so she doesn't burst it all out when she laughs! 😛 Eeewwww a chocolate bar? Like that? Insane!

Why would Maya be on the stage with Harshad? *hain emoticon from MSN* 🤔 Shall I go into detail....she was supposed to be on stage, where the head table was, cus she's rinkz friend, and rinki was attempting to do some more matchmaking, Harshad however...ruined it!

Aww, Maya is jealous of Kimz! Where's Akki? *hunts him down from various OS's* lmao! Akki's not here...😛 Kimz and Shabz were meant to be singletons! 😛

Harshad's right in asking what he's doing. I mean, I'm sure the guy's totally oblivious to his charm and hotness and amazingness and...😍 *cleverly avoids glare from Meera* You can try avoiding it all you want! 😛

STUPID TV CHARACTER? Oh dayumm. I'm seeing a bit too much of Meera in this. *narrows eyes* Shut up! 😛😳

HE'S PROPOSING. AHA. Ohh, Shabzie *sigh* *pats her head*Nice reaction! 😛

LOL I'm liking Alekh "I don't know if MY partner would like the dance with you" 🤣🤣🤣 Ohh trust me boys she's craving those comfy arms like heck :) I love their relationship! 😛

I love that song. And I loved how you fit it in. Thanks! 😃 All credit for it goes to Rinkz! 😳

And oye, he's NOT khadoos. If anyone's being khadoos right now, it's Maya 😲😆Oye! She's offended now! 😛

Ah, and the part comes to and end, along with my comment. YAY! 😛

Another great part, you've teased us yet another time. How about I try not to do it next time?😳

Perfect dose of Maya-Harshad though! 😍 Thanks! 😳

Lots of Barfi, 😲 YAY! 😃 *dances around*
- Madzz

@9rpatel: Thanks for commenting! 😃

@Maddz: commented back on both! 😛

@Shazu: thanks so much, I totally love this song! 😳

Originally posted by: shabo24

I told you I would comment on this didn't I? Night before Ramadan - great start to the holy month. 🤔 You did...I however, didn't believe you! 😛

But i just sat down and caught up on like 20 chapters and it's such a FUN filled fanfic! I love it - kinda reminds me of F.R.I.E.N.D.S. in a weird way. I love all the couples, specially Maya and Harshad. *innocent smile* This lucky duck Maya, don't you get jealous Meera while you write their scenes? *blinks at you wide eyed* Awww I'm glad it's kinda like friends, (Best show EVER! 😃) And ahh...me? jealous? na! 😳

And you threw in so many of us! Makes it even MORE fun. 😆 I love it, all of us, so true to us in real life. But one thing is nagging me, when all of us entered, when Meer- I mean Maya saw me I guess, she's like "more to her than meets the eye." AM I GOING TO BE EVIL? MAKE ME EVIIIIL! THAT WOULD BE SO MUCH FUN!!!! I know! 😃 Ahhh really? 😳 Evil? you? Evil? *shakes head* I don't see it! 😛 and you shud really stop with the Meer-Maya name problems, it's really not that hard to remember! 😛

Yug should have proposed again. *pouts* Loved the whole shaadi of Rinki and Sushi, so cute, loved how he couldn't take his eyes off her! The whole wedding process, from the singing and dancing (the best one had to be the saagai song - I love that song!) and to the mendhi (the comment about the mendhi still coming out dark ☺️) to all the masti happening in the house from getting locked in closets and all of that! It'd be amusing that's for sure! 😛 YAY! 😛I'm glad you liked it! 😳 And yes...I loved the mehndi comment, god knows where I came up with ! 😛 Locking in closets? not fun! *shakes head*

You writeeeee so well Meera, I'm so jealous of your ability to make readers literally become part of the story, its like we are reading about people we know (ignoring the people we do know 😆 - I mean like Harshad, Sushi and all of that!) The way Maya (strange, i had a feeling that should be Meera :P) and Harshad are dancing around the possibilty is just flawlessly written! :) lmao! I was like....YOU ARE in it! You shud feel like you're a part of the story! 😳 😆 I'm glad you liked it that way though! 😛 And omg yes we already know Meera and Maya is just the same thing, anyways *smoothes down hair* I'm glad you liked it! 😳

Off course, my "aage aage" ke comments won't be this long, but I owed you this one. :) Keep writing, and NOO! MEERA! (I mean Maya. *preens*) Fix everything, make them run through fields of daises with the rest of us playing bagpipes in the background. ☺️ Awww you didn't owe me anything, I'm just glad you read it! 😳 And omg....yes I shall attempt to fix it..and um...it's not a movie shabzie! *shakes head* Bagpipes? 😆

One thing, what the hell is barfi? 😳 😲 DO you actually not know? 😲 Here's a picture! 😃



--shabz

Originally posted by: SaNyA_21

Hey youuuuuuu. After getting a little sneak peak of this part, I decided to come and read this part. AND I LOVED IT. Although I haven't read the other 26 chapters, I can tell this is a really good FF already. Maya and Harshad are awesome. And wanna know what I'm gonna do nowwwwwwww? Go back and read the entire thing so it all makes sense. :) You are amazing, Meera.

Oh and please add me to the PM list :D

You are biased! 😳 But I hope you like the rest of it Sanya! 😃 And yes I shall add you! 😳

I don't see the picture. *pouts*

*drools all over her keyboard* You are so lucky I'm not fasting. 😆