DIL NE JISE APNA KAHA(FF)updtd Pt 17 pg51 28/10 - Page 5

amazing part

hey rhea...

Originally posted by: sabzz

veryyy amazing partt!!!

plz plz continue soon

hopeing to see meet romantic scenes

thnxx sabzz........i'l try n continue asap!!

Originally posted by: jamune

amazing part

hope to seee more scenes from monday on meet missing them so much

thank u jamune...............me too yaar missing them a lot!!

Originally posted by: sugi77

beautiful.. and cuteeeeee update..meet and premeer scenes r soooo cute and lovely...plzzzzz continue asap..

hey thank u sugi77........i knw even i liked d premeer bit a lot 😊 😊............I'l PM u whenever i rite d next prt...........

Originally posted by: Suhana Ahmed

hey rhea...

nice update...

really loved the Premeer scene...

and Preet is such a darling... just love him...

continue soon...

takecare,

regards,

Suhana.

hey thnx suhana............even i liked it........u'll get 2 read more of dem i assure u 😉 😉......n yah Preet is a sweetheart 😳 😳

Originally posted by: zaibun

hey great update keep it up

thanks zaibun..... 😊

Part 7:

Lonavala:

Kulraj:Kya aap sab log itna chup-chap baithe ho……….Hum yahaan enjoy karne aaye hai naaki aise maun vrat rakhne………

Bauji:Achha toh tu hi bata ab hum kya karein……..

Kulraj:Baithe baithe bore hue karna hai kuchh kaam shuru karo antakshiri leke prabhu ka naam…………Boys vs girls…….

Everyone:Oh no………

Kulraj:Arrey yeh koi aisi vaisi antakshari nahi hai isme ek team mein se ek banda ek sher arz karega aur phir dusri team ke kisi bande ko usse jawaab dena hoga woh bhi sher arz karke……….Main bol rahi hun bada mazaa aayega(while excitedly rubbing her hands)………Chaliye main shuru karti hun….arz kiya hai:

Chandni chand se hoti hai sitaaron se nahi…….
Chandni chand se hoti hai sitaaron se nahi……
Mohabbat ek se hoti hai hazaaron se nahi……

Everyone:Waah waah!!

Bauji:Kiran beta iska jawaab toh de…

Kiran(while holding her hand n gazing into her eyes):

Chandni chand se hogi toh sitaaron ka kya hoga
Chandni chand se hogi toh sitaaron ka kya hoga
Mohabbat ek se hogi toh hazaaron ka kya hoga….

(leaving kulraj dumbstruck n shocked)

Prem:Kya jawaab diya hai jiju,maan gaye…..


Gayatri(shyly):

Dil ke rishton ka koi naam nahi hota..
Mana iska koi anjaam nahi hota..
Agar chahat ho dono taraf..
Toh umar bhar koi rishta nakaam nahi hota…




Bauji(clearing his throat):

Duniya se jo darre usse kayar kehte ha
Duniya jisse darre usse shayar kehte hai
Biwi se jo darre usse shauhar kehte hai

(leaving gayatri red with embarrassment)


Kulraj:Chalo ab love birds ki baari…….Heer chal kehde jo kehna hai Prem se…..

Heer(staring at her feet,fiddling with her dupatta):

Aapko dekha toh yeh jaana,
Ke kitna badal gaya hai zamaana,
Pehle toh sitare bhi thoda sa katrate the,
Aajkal toh bandaron ko bhi aa gaya hai apni surat par itraana

(And she bursts out laughing,making Prem go crimson red,and everyone was surprised at how could there bholi bhali bahu Heer come up with something like this)

Kiran:Beta Prem ab tu bhi batade ki tu kya cheez hai……….

Prem:

Aapne jo humein yun badnaam kardiya,
Humaari surat ko yun sare aam nilaam kardiya,
Bhul gayi shayad aap yeh madam,
Ki is hi bandar pe aapne apna dil kurbaan kar diya..



Back to Juneja mansion:

Meher:Preet thanks….

Preet:Kis liye……..

Meher:Yahaan aane ke liye…..tumhaare bagair yeh ghar suna-suna sa lagta hai……(saying this she looks at his face,and is surprised to see his eyebrows shot up questioningly and a naughty smile playing on his lips,making her suddenly aware of what she had said,shyly she gets up and goes to the kitchen)

She stands there holding on to the slab,trying to calm down her heart,which was beating like a hundred beats a second……..

She did not know for how long did she stand there but she soon felt a warm yet familiar breath on her shoulder and felt herself go numb……She could feel blood rushing upto her cheeks…….

"Meher",Preet said huskily

"Hmmm"was all she could manage to utter

"Yeh lo"

She was not able to bring herself to comprehend what he was saying mumbled"Hmmm"

"Yeh le lo" he repeated

"Kya",finally facing him

"Yeh bowl"

"Oh",her voice clearly conveying how disoriented she was……

She had her eyelids cast downwards…She couldn't look into his eyes as she felt that her own might betray her and tell him something he wasn't supposed to know..


P.S.:Okie so this part is the closest to my heart as I put in a lot of efforts to write this one..and it gave me many headaches n sleepless nights……

Thank you all the people who have liked and commented on my fic,its only because of you guys that motivates me to write more……

But now on a serious note please tell me honestly if I should continue or not………….

Sorry 4 replyin late,actually i was out of town:

On prt 5:-

"Mission AshPreet" 😆 😆 😆...tht was kinda funny......wat made u cum up wid dat idea......

Preet is such a sweetheart,man he seriously can't live a second widout her...........