DIL NE JISE APNA KAHA(FF)updtd Pt 17 pg51 28/10

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DIL NE JISE APNA KAHA

Hello people....I have been a silent reader of your fan fics for quite sometime, and finally have thought to try a hand in writing one, on my own...This is my first effort, so hope you enjoy it....

The main lead of my story is ..Meet........All d characters in my story will b same as KDMHMD....

However I have slightly modified the storyline....

Let's say Ashlesha was not Meher..s cousin, instead, was an employee of Junejas and was dating Preet....She was not in India when ..Meet.. got married.....And has just returned the day before...

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CHAPTER

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1 n 2

1

3 n 4

2

5

3

6

6

7

7

8

10

9

15

10

19

11

22

12

27

13

31

14

36

15

44

16

48

17

51



PART 1:

It was noon time & Meher was busy in the kitchen preparing Preet's
favourite dishes..just to surprise him in office with the home cooked food.....


Meher: (mumbling to herself) Hai Ram!!! Ek baj gaya, aur main abhi tak tayaar nahi hui..Abhi toh roti bhi banni baaki hain..(frowns)..kahin mere pahonchne se pehle, Preet khana na khale...

She quickly packs the Tiffin and rushes to her room.....Picking one of Preet's favourite colour suit, that she had bought recently, she gets ready..Her heart beating fast in anticipation of how Preet will react.. and so, within 15 min she was in the car driving to Preet's office.....

The moment she reaches there, she rushes towards the reception, bumping into Ash, scattering all the files and papers to the floor.......


Meher: Im soooo, so sorry (while helping her pick up her files) , maine aap ko dekha nahi...I was in a rush and didn't see you coming.

Ashlesha: (smiling reassuringly) That's ok ...Happens...Waise, I haven't seen you around here before. Are you new here...Let me introduce myself to you..Hi! Im Ashlesha.

Meher: (perplexed)(timidly) Hello! I..m Meher.

Ashlesha: (Astounded) Meher??? Are you Mehar JUNEJA???

Meher: (sheepishly) Ya.... (confused as to hw does she knew her name)

Ashlesha: Oh my god!!!! Aap mujhe nahi jaante, par main aapko ache se janti

hun (excitedly)...Aap ke bare mein bahut suna hai... Mr. Juneja se....(smiling loudly)

Meher: (Nods her head) Ya..right..

Ashlesha: Toh aap yahan kaise? Wait, lemme guess, Mr. Juneja se milne aayi hain ..

Meher: Ji (blushin slightly)

Ashlesha: Aao main tumhe... Main aapko tum keh sakti hun na, actually bahut formal lagta hai..

Meher: Haan sure.....

Ashlesha: haan toh main yeh keh rahi thi ki main tumhen Mr. Juneja ke cabin mein lekar chalti hun.

Meher: Ok..Thanks...Waise, tum yahaan kaam karti ho..

Ashlesha: Haan I work here as a Marketing manager....Actually main 6 months ke liye US chali gayi thi aur kal hi lauti hun..so that's why..woh new employee wala confusion, u know..(chukkles)..Sorry for that ya...loh aa gaya tumhare husband ka cabin...chalo lets go..

Both enter the cabin....

Ashlesha: (Loudly) Helloes! Dekho tumse milne kaun aaya hai??? (teasingly)

He looked at Ashlesha, and stared at Meher standing at the doorstep....Meher couldn..t understand what was happening.. She stood there transfixed not able to comprehend the situation..trying to figure out why the hell had Ashlesha brought her here, in HARMAN JI'S OFFICE....


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Suhana Ahmed thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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when are you going to continue dear???
regards,
Suhana.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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poor meher so much confusion please continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey,
that was really nice yar...
although i m not a big fan of Meet but this story seems interesting...
so i will be following it...
waise i am also writting a FF its called Mohabbat Aap Se...
do read if you feel like...
takecare,
regards,
Suhana.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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superb and unique...start..vry interesting plzz continue asap..

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Posted: 16 years ago
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woww wonderful ff😃
the story seems veryy interesting
hehee...at the end ii was like....uh-0ohh, wrong room😲 lmao
hopeee u continueee so0nn
dieing to kno whts gonna happen noww....and ash seems so cute when she's all nice lol
luv rumsha😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you Jamune,suhana,pRinc3ssRZxJT, sugi77 for your comments...They are very encouraging...So presenting part 2....ENJOY......




Part-2

Harman: Meher tum…….

Ashlesha: Haan Harman, woh Meher hi hai.Aap sapna nahi dekh rahe!

Harman:(clears his throat)

Ashlesha:Arey tum itne shocked kyun lag rahe ho..Uska haq banta hai bhai…..Kabhi bhi tumse milne aa sakti hai…….

Meanwhile Preet wanting to discuss something with Harman enters the cabin without knocking………

Preet: Bhai,vo mujhe aapse puchna tha ki(he stops in the middle after seeing Meher and Ashlesha)….Meher tum yahaan??

But before Meher can say anything Ashlesha steps in between and says:

Ashlesha:Haan Preet, Meher yahaan Harman se milna aayi hai…How cute na!

Preet (surprised):Meher tum Harman bhai se kyun milne aayi ho?

Ashlesha(slapping her forehead):Uff oh Preet,yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai..Ab voh tumhari permission lekar thodi naa aaygi…….(n turning towards Meher says): Kyun BHABHI sahi keh rahi hun naa….Vaise main tumhe bhabhi toh bula sakti hun naa…..Preet ki bhabhi meri bhi bhabhi hi toh hui(shyly)Hai na Preet??

Preet:Ash tum……..??(but is interrupted by Ashlesha)

Ashlesha:Preet tumne abhi tak bhabhi ko bataya nahi humaare baare mein….Mujhe toh laga tha ki tum unke bahut close ho...Anyways ab bhabhi se kya chhupana……………..

( turns towards Meher)

Note:You know wat guys i have already written the next part...but i shall be continuing only if you guys give me your feedback so do comment if you want me to continue!

Edited by Rhea_401 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG serious seems like there is going to be a big shock for Ash
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interesting😛...plzz update soon....

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PART 3

RECAP:
Preet enters...Ash is about to tell Meher about her and Preet.....

Continuing......

Anyways,ab bhabhi se kya chhupana……

Ashlesha looks towards Meher and finds her staring at Preet..She follows her gaze and sees Preet go pale..Puzzled by seeing their reaction she asks:

Kya hua tum dono ko??Preet tum itna darr kyun rahe ho bhabhi hi to hai..Ek na ek din toh unhe batana hi hai…

Meher meanwhile is standing there trying to interpret Ashlesha's words…Her tears, threatening to spill any moment...

Deciding not to create a scene, she starts walking towards the door. Handing over the tiffin to Preet ,barges out into the corridor….

Preet grabs Meher's hand and stops her…He pulls her towards him,entwining his fingers into hers, turning towards Ashlesha and Harman says:

Ash, I think you haven't met her before,so let me introduce you..She's Meher,Meher Preet Juneja. My wife!

Ashlesha stares at them unable to believe what she has heard…She gasps and manages to utter:

Whispering….What????

Unable to bear the situation, Meher manages to free herself from Preet's grip and leaves, crying.

Ashlesha feels her legs weakening and Harman catches her, preventing her from falling..


Harman: Ash sambhalo apne aapko.. Its not Preet's fault….(and tells her the whole episode)..Aur is tarah meri ek galati ki wajah se yeh sab kuchh hua….

Preet: (proceeding towards Ash) Ash…

Ashlesha holds up her hand gesturing him to stop...Preet quietly retreats back and realizes Meher has left the office..

He runs outside to look for her…He had to sort out things with her before it gets too late………

The moment he reaches home he rushes to their room to talk to Meher…He finds her standing looking outside the window and is so lost that she doesn't even realise Preet's presence…By looking at her eyes he can tell that she had been crying all the while…..

He quietly goes near her and places his hand on her shoulder and softly whispers Meher….


Meher:(gets startled and turns to face him)

Preet:Meher, aaj jo kuchh bhi hua voh….

Meher cuts him in between n says: Preet its okay..mujhe abhi us baare mein koi baat nahi karni..Let me go,i have work(and starts walking towards the door)..

Preet: Meher ruko meri baat toh suno..(but she ignores him)

Preet:(to himself):Mujhe aaj Meher se baat karni hi hogi...Usse aaj main apne aur Ash ke baare mein sab kuchh bata dunga…

With that he goes to the kitchen to talk to her…Luckily he finds her alone……….

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