FF || Milna Hi Tha (part 11, page 32) - Page 5

awesome!!! very well written!!!!!! Continue soon and Please Pm me!!!!!!!!!!!!

gret⭐️ start....cn't wait.....plzzzz continue asap...

Originally posted by: Suhana Ahmed

hey radz... that was awesome yar...

really loved that...

plz continue soon...
Thank you!

yar can i ask something...

are you the same Radz who is also a charecter in Deepikas FF Mannat??? plz dont mind me asking... it just came in mind thats why asked... plz dont mind...
Yup, that is me. Kinda. In written form. 😆

takecare,

regards,

Suhana.

Originally posted by: -Bee-

Radz! BEE!

That was a fantastic start. Of course, now you have me hooked, and I want to read the next 5 parts in one go *pouts*. So, Meher knows about the dreams. It was nice to see how she tried to comfort Heer. But, poor Heer, I don't think Meher would be able to fully comprehend the impact Heer's dream had on her.
Kinda a problem, considering I don't have that many parts written out. 😆 Yeah, Meher cannot understand, and she knows that, but she wants to try and help her sister anyway I can. I hope that will come across in the next few bits. 😉

Now, I'm eagerly awaiting the entry of Prem. Does he also have these kind of flashbacks. Fine, you don't have to answer that, I'll just wait and read. Ahh. I have no idea when he will enter. And thanks, I cannot answer that. 😆

Originally posted by: ash08

Hey Radz,

Great start👏. I am hooked. Thank you!

You know, I am a very impatient person when it comes to reading stories. I take a book, read the ending first and then start again from the beginning😆. Your story is so amazing and I don't know what the ending is going to be. 😭 Ok, for once I will follow the rule and be patient and read the story part by part😊. But please update soon. Ahh, I do the same! For some books anyways. 😆 My family and friends think it's so weird. 😆 But I'm gald you will follow the rule. 😉 Updating tomorrow.

Love, love you too!
Ash

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

bhangda!! =D I LOVE BHANGDA! 😆

Okay, once again, the nightmare gave me te chills!! *shudder* It was so graphically well written and it was just amazing!!! *thumbs up* 👏 Thank you! That's the part that's always iffy for me. 😆 Glad you liked it.

Awww, poor Heer!! She seems really drained by it!!! 😭 I hope Meher is able to help her feel better in such situations!!! Can't wait to see if Premeer know each other and if even he is plagued by dreams and stuff!!! So excited and curious for this one!!!! 😳 Yeah, she is. Oh, no comment. On anything about Prem, Heer, and PremHeer. 😆

Well Meher is really sweet!! Trying to help her di out even though there isn't much she can do!! *pinches cheeks* Can't wait for Preet and Meet!!!! 😳😆 You are so good at leaving poeple hanging!! *pouts* It's a gift. And who said anything about PreetMeher? I could go unconventional and write HarmanMeher. 😆

Great starting Radz and i can't wait till the next part!!! Thank you!

Love you!! *hug* love you too!

Originally posted by: purplestar22

Reserved

I first have to say your writing is amazing. Im wondering though what the dream is all about. It seems pretty scary. Im guessing something happened to Heer before. Thanks. Yeah, the dreams are a window to her past life. All will be revealed, sometime in the future!

Meher is such a caring sister! She is. 😉

Cant wait for next chapter!

Originally posted by: shabo24

So well written. You should teach people lessons on how to keep people in suspense. 😆 I loved it, and for some reason I think Meher is going to play a crucial part in this story.

--shabz

Originally posted by: noneeM

Radz, I loved it! Loved it so much! Like I said I adore reincarnation tales and I am sure you're gonna make magic with this one..... Thank you! And I surely hope so! 😉

Loved the way you've described the nightmare...loved the first sentence especially! Ahh, thanks. 😳

And I adore your Heer and Meher, the relationship they have, the love and affection that is so clearly visible and that's the magic of your writing, I can see rather than just read, they enact in front of my eyes...it's wonderful. 😳😳 You are sho soo sweet! Thank you!

One complaint.....It's too short*pouts* I wanna read the next part*stamps foot* Will a tantrum help???*guesses not and sneaks away hoping no one saw the tantrum* And I was wondering why the comment was so normal. 😆

Just kidding!!!! Will wait for the next part...After all, good things come to those who wait....and so on... True, true. Let's hope you like the next bit.

Have a great Sunday!

Big hug:) *hugs back*
Love:-Nonee