Hi Radz
Beautiful concept and you've told the story so well so far.
Though some chapters are short, they were very well written.
Veera Nihal and kids and their interaction with everyone was so much fun to read.
Enjoyed all of their scenes.
Prem Preet are awesome as bros and so are Heer Meher.
Their relationships really nicely portrayed through out the story.
I especially liked the way you described Juneja house in Ambala. So sweet.
It seemed so much fun to imagine Preet in a tree branch , Heer on swing and Meher chatting and enjoying their time.😆
The mystery lies in how PH will finally find each other as soul mates and this is very intriguing.
Thanks for the wonderful story.
On last chapter everything seem unrelated at the beginning but then finally made sense. Ashlesha, Harman and the older person who was a seer or the person who gave prophesy all were interesting.
I would like to see how you will proceed and end it. This is one of your best creations and really would like you to complete it. Hope you will.
All the best for everything 👍🏼
Mahadev And Sons
