Hi all. I have been a pretty silent member, however have enjoyed reading the different stories on the forum. I decided to try my hand at writing a short story, which should be completed in a couple of parts. It is my first fan fiction, so I hope you all enjoy it.
Part 1
As Prem walked into his room, he saw the love of his life standing by the balcony, looking at her friend, the moon. He walked up and slid his arms around her waist and started nibbling on her neck. He turned her around and placed his lips over hers. After a few minutes of an intensifying kiss, she pulled away. She started walking backwards away from him. He kept calling her name, but she wouldn't stop. She just kept backing up, until?.
"HEER!" Prem woke up screaming. All he could think of was that fateful night two years ago that changed everything.
September 6, 2007
"How dare you call my sister a murderer??" shouted Prem.
"Prem, listen to me. I heard Veera with my own ears. She said she aborted her own baby."
"Oh shut up, Veera would never do that. Why would a mother ever kill her child?"
"I don't know, why don't you just ask that murderer over there. She killed her child and ruined my brother's life."
"What brother, the brother that hit my sister? HE is the cause of her miscarriage, not Veera!"
"Oh enough! Only you and your family are right. Why don't you ever believe me? I gave my all to you. You are the reason my heart beats, yet you don't believe me?"
"No, in this case, I don't. Veera would never lie to me. I don't know why you and your brother are after my family. And this is not the Heer I fell in love with. Maybe I made a mistake in..."
The next morning, as Prem awoke, he realized the date. "CRAP", he thought. "It's Heer's birthday today. Damn, I got so mad at her yesterday, that I completely forgot." He went downstairs to his room, which was wide open. As he walked in, he didn't see Heer there. He went to the bed, which was neatly made and saw a note. He picked up the note and it read:
Prem,
I always thought that the first birthday I'd spend after marriage would be with you. I have loved you with all my heart and I thought today would be a special day. But today, my heart aches. A husband and wife relationship is based upon trust, something it seems you don't have for me. I am sorry for accusing your sister of being a murderer, but I was only telling you want I heard. Typically, people receive gifts on their birthday, however today, I want to give a gift to you. I am leaving today. But if you have ever loved me, even a little bit, please go to Veera's doctor and ask her to tell you the truth. I have faith in my God that eventually you will find out what the truth really is, and then, if you look inside you're heart, you will find me. I will always be with you.
Love always,
Tumari Heer
Pretty bad, I know, but please do leave your comments.
Tina
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